大学英语四级写作

大学英语四级写作续智贤四级考试题型比例听力（35%）阅读（35%）、完型填空或改错（10%）、作文和翻译（20%）。四级考试各题型分值听力249分，阅读249分，完型填空或改错70分，作文142分。2008年6月四级范文Recreationalactivities 1娱乐活动多种多样2娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性3作为大学生，我的看法。Recreationalactivitiesneverfailtofascinatehumanbeings,wealwaysconsiderrecreationalactivitiesassomethingtorelaxourselvesorsomethingthatcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.Mostofus,however,haveformedadifferentpictureofrecreationalactivities.Somepeoplethinkthattheyareusefulandcanofferussomethingofvalueorkeepusfit.Youwillneverfeelbored.Yourlifewillalwaysbecolorful.Theothersideofthepictureisquitetheopposite.Othersholdtheopinionthatrecreationalactivitiestakeuplimitedpreciousstudents’timewhichcanotherwisebeusedforstudy.Therefore,resultsinpooracademicperformanceandself-humiliation.Perhapsthereisanelementoftruthinboththesepictures.Afterathoroughconsideration,formypart,Iaminfavoroftheformerview.Oneofthethingsthatfascinatesmemostaboutrecreationalactivitiesisthepopularbeliefthatthey,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom!LimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBags1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2.造成的问题3.限制使用的意义TherewasatimewhendisposableplasticbagswerewidelyusedinChina.Whereveryouwantedtobuysomething,thiskindofbagswereofferedforfreeforthesakeofyourconvenience.Andrecentlytheproblemsofusingdisposableplasticbagshavebeenbroughtintopublicfocus.Forastart,ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlypollutedbyso-called“whitepollution”,thetruthisbeyondquestion.Andthereasonisnotfartoseek,thesebagsarethrownawayafterthefirstuse,andweoftenseethebagsflyingintheskyinwindydays.What’smore,plasticbagsmaydogreatharmtoourhealth,formostofthemaremadeofsomecertainchemicalmaterialsthatmaycauseseriousdisease.Andsuchcasesoftenappearinnewsbroadcastorinnewspapers.Inthelightoftheseriousness,somepropermeasureshavebeentakeninourcountry.Astrictlimitontheusingofdisposableplasticbagshasbeentakenofficially,notonlyinbigsupermarketsbutinsmallshopsaswell.Admittedly,thislimithasmadeitpossibleforthepublictorealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionandenableweChinesepeopletocherishthebeautyofourcommunities.Meanwhile,tosomedegree,thechancesthatwewillbeknockeddownbysomecertainillnessesareremote.结构合理三段式;中心突出主题句；层次清晰导航语；词汇闪光亮点句。写作常用角度生活角度wealwaysconsiderrecreationalactivitiesassomethingtorelaxourselvesorsomethingthatcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.排列组合Sthwillmakeourlifemoreenjoyable,thatistosay,sthcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.生活的乐趣Forthemajorityofpeople,readingorlearninganewskillhasbecomethesourceoftheirhappinessandcontentment对大多数人来讲，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们快乐的来源Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeandhavemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebeneficialimpactondevelopmentoftheirpersonalcharacter.而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。时间角度Collecting,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom.Itprovidesrelaxationforleisurehours,asjustlookingatone'streasuresisalwaysajoy.Aproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudents’toomuchtime.Infact,itisunhealthyforthemtospendalloftimeontheirstudy.Asanoldsayinggoes:AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.What‘smore,livinginschoolcansavethemagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandschooleveryday,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.而且，生活在学校里能节省大量每天往返于学校和家的路上的时间，这会使他们有更多的时间和精力放在学习上。Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeandhavemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebeneficialimpactondevelopmentoftheirpersonalcharacter.

而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。知识角度Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Forpeoplewhowanttoadoptahealthyandmeaningfullifestyle,itisimportanttofindtimetolearncertainnewknowledge.Justasanoldsayinggoes:itisnevertoolatetolearn.对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老Themajorityofstudentsbelievethatpart-timejobwillprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiestodeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。Manyparentsbelievethatadditionaleducationalactivitiesenjoyobviousadvantage.Byextrastudies,theymaintain,theirchildrenareabletoobtainmanykindsofpracticalskillsandusefulknowledge,whichwillputtheminabeneficialpositioninthefuturejobmarketswhentheygrowup.许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。E角度Bytakingamajor-relatedpart-job,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,butgainmuchexperience,experiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatlearningnewskillsandknowledgecontributesdirectlytoenhancingtheirjobopportunitiesorpromotionopportunities.现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。健康角度Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatsomecertainsportscontributedirectlytoourbodyhealthbygivingussomephysicalexercises.主题句的写法Manypeoplebelievethatinternationaltourismproducepositiveeffectsoneconomicgrowthandlocalgovernmentshouldbeencouragedtopromoteinternationaltourism.许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。主题句一Sthisveryimportant.Sthisofgreatimportance.Sthplaysanimportantroleinpeople’slife/study主题句二Sthcanproducepositiveeffectson…inmorethanoneway.Sthmaybringaboutnegativeimpactson…万能理由之坏处TVtakesuplimitedpreciouschildren’stimewhichcanotherwisebeusedformorevaluableactivitiessuchassportsorhomework.Therefore,resultsinpooracademicperformanceandself-humiliation.如今，很多年轻人沉浸在电脑游戏中，以至于废寝忘食，产生了许多消极结果。使自己适应…的发展面临困难tobeconfrontedwiththedifficulty克服困难toovercomethedifficulty注意卫生toemphasizetheimportanceofhygiene重视：attachmuchimportance/significanceto对．．．有益tobebeneficialto对．．．有害tobeharmfulto采取步骤totakestepstotakemeasures有很深的了解tohaveadeepunderstandingof有广泛的知识tohaveawiderangeofknowledgegiveabigpushtothedevelopmentofeducation给予教育极大的推动扮演重要角色toplayanimportantrolein强烈愿望expressastrongdesiretoAccordingtoarecentsurvey,agrowingnumberofpeopleexpressastrongdesiretotakeanotherjoborspendmoretimeontheirjobinordertogetmoremoneytosupporttheirfamily.根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。不遗余力tosparenoeffortsto不辞辛劳totakethepainsto竞争与合作精神senseofcompetitionandcooperation经不起推敲cannotbearcloseranalysiscannotholdwater社会进步的反映mirrorofsocialprogress提高大众的环保意识promotethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalprotection;arousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection考虑到诸多因素takemanyfactorsintoaccount/consideration从另一个角度fromanotherperspective在人类生活的方方面面inallaspectsofhumanlife社会进步的体现asymbolofsocietyprogress社会进步的反映mirrorofsocialprogress科技的飞速更新theever-acceleratedupdatingofscienceandtechnology日益激烈的社会竞争theincreasinglyfiercesocialcompetition有其自身的优缺点…hasitsmeritsanddemeritsadvantagesanddisadvantages把时间和精力放在…上focustimeandenergyon…许多问题：ahostofproblems接触社会：comeintofrequentcontactwiththesociety万能模板对立观点型背景句展现问题问题的常用词：question,problem,issue

第一段1.Recently,theissueof......hasbeenbroughtintopublicfocus.

近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。Recentlytheissueof(whether…ornot)hasbeeninthelimelight（成为引人注目的中心）andhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.

近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。Alongwiththeadvanceofthesocietymoreandmoreproblemsarebroughttoourattention,oneofwhichis....

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。Nowweareenteringabrandnewerafullofopportunitiesandinnovations,andgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople'sattitudetowardssometraditionalpractice.

现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。______已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。______hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople，especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.改写题目“花开两朵”句型Mostofus，however，haveformedanunrealisticpictureoflifeonadesertisland.Mostofus，however，haveformedadifferentpictureof…somepeoplethinktheyarebeneficial,whileothersholdtheoppositeview.第三句Andwerarelyreachanabsoluteconsensusonsuchacontroversialissue.

对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。Peoplefromdifferentbackgroundswouldputdifferentinterpretationsonthesamecase.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。第二段Somepeopletaketheattitudethat…canproducepositiveeffectsonusThosewhohavealreadybenefitedfrompracticingitsinghighpraiseofit.Firstofall…Furthermore…What’smore…第三段Theothersideofthepictureisquitetheopposite.Othersharbortheideathat,…maybringaboutnegativeimpactsonus.Thosewhostronglydisapproveof...havecogentreasonsforit.Foronething,Foranother,第四段第四段Perhapsthereisanelementoftruthinboththesepictures.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtobeonthesideoftheformerview.

在我看来，我较同意前一种观点。Afterathoroughconsideration,formypart,Iaminfavoroftheformerview.经过深思熟虑，我较支持前一种看法，Oneofthethingsthatfascinatesusmostaboutcatsisthepopularbeliefthattheyhaveninelives.处理方式二Frommyownperspective,computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople’lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould，therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.Whatwemustdoistoencouragethestrengthanddiminishtheweaknessestotheleastextent.问题解决型注意：该题目不是针对问题的争议性，针对问题产生的原因和解决办法背景句相似，二三句不同Whatarethecausesandsolutionsoftheproblemofthescarcityofwaterresource?背景句：Recentlytheissueof(whether…ornot)hasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.改写题目：关注原因：Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.或者交待讨论内容：Therearesomefactorsleadingtothisproblem.Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthisproblem.Someofthemostcommonfactorswillbediscussedbelow,followedbysomeresponsible/reasonablesolutions.Firstofall….Furthermore…What’smore….法律，意识Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Foronething,itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoban/reduce…Foranother,thepublicshouldenhancetheirawarenessoftheimportanceof….Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethattheproblemcausedby…willbesolvedinthenearfuture.给定观点型一种看法或者观点一Nowadays,with现象，peoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareofthesignificanceof主题词.Inmypointofview,改写题目.Therearenumerousreasonstosupportmypointofview,andIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemostimportantoneshere.Oneoftheprimarycausesisthat支持论点的理由Anotherreasonthatcanbeseenbyeverypersonisthat支持论点的理由，阐述理由Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat重述标题.Therefore,提出意见或建议TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMoodNowadays,withthesurgingcasesofmentalproblem,committingsuicide,orkillingreported.Peoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareofthesignificanceofkeepingagoodmood.Inmypointofview,itisreallyimportanttokeepanoptimisticattitudetowardpressure.Therearenumerousreasonstosupportmypointofview,andIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemostimportantoneshere.Oneoftheprimarycausesisthatkeepingagoodmoodhelpsyoutogetalongwellwithothers.Nobodywouldliketomakefriendswithonewhoalwayscomplains.Asthesayinggoes“Abadworkmanalwaysblameshistools.”Anotherreasonthatcanbeseenbyeverypersonisthatgoodmoodbenefitsyourhealth.Lifeisalwaysfullofupsanddowns.Whenyouareintroubleoffrustration,youshouldtakeitinareasonablewayandovercomeitassoonaspossible.Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatkeepingagoodmoodbr