2024年英语中考二轮复习之书面表达课件

书面表达什么是好作文？要求

此题主要考查学生直接用英语进行比较简单的书面表达的能力。 具体要求为： 1.切中题意，文理通顺 2.上下文连贯，逻辑正确 3.要素完整，语言准确，得当 4.无大小写和拼写错误，书写规范、整洁，标点符号使用正确 5.达到一定的词数要求（不少于70词）连贯切题规范完整正确第一档(13～15分)：符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清楚，语句通顺，语言正确无误。词汇运用准确，句型运用恰当。全文结构严密，完整，语言流畅。无任何标点或语法错误。第二档(10～12分)：符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清楚，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。第三档

(7～

9分)：基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清楚，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。语法或标点错误较多。句子不够顺畅，文章结构不严密，但表达意义清晰。第四档(4～

6分)：不符合题意要求，表达不清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语法或标点错误过多。字数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑关系混乱。第五档(0～

3分)：未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。中考英语书面表达评分规则如何写好作文？要求1.切题3.连贯4.正确5.规范审题切题完整

正确连贯规范人称字数时态：第三人称：多为一般现在时每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“MyfavoriteXXX”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。人称：第一、三人称时态：描述部分用现在时；记叙部分用过去时是否需要补充内容审题要点正确看待作文要求的“正确”切题完整

正确连贯规范Ihaveagoodfriend.SheisMary.Sheisgoodforme.ShelikestudyEnglish,herEnglishisverygood.Andsheisgoodatmath.Sheverylikemath.Shelikeplaybasketballverymuch.Shealsolikegototheparkinweekend.Theparkhavemanygoodthings.Thisismyfriend.Ihaveagoodfriend.SheisMary.Sheisverygoodtome.ShelikesstudyingEnglishandherEnglishisverygood.Andsheisgoodatmath.Shelikesmathverymuch.Shealsolikesgoingtotheparkonweekends.Theparkhasmanygoodthings.Thisismyfriend.正确简单内容准确无误高级词汇刻意使用1.简单内容准确无误学生范文：MyWatchSisterIhaveawatchsister.Sheiscute.HisnameisLiJingyi.HerEnglishnameisStar.Shelikesdraw,singandplaygames…Shehavearoundface,asmallmouthandtwobigeye.ShestudiesatNo.5ChangingRoadPrimarySchool.Shelookslikeme,andwearedifferent.Weoftenplaytogetherandhavefun.简单内容准确无误1.避免中式英语2.人称代词的一致性3.动词的形式变化5连词的正确使用4.名词的单复数变化简单内容准确无误1.避免中式英语2.人称代词保持一致3.动词的形式变化5.连词的正确使用4.名词的单复数变化……练习Hehastwowateryeye.Tom’sfatherisinterestedtoswimming.Deanalwayswinthesecondplaceinthematch.Theyverylikeeatingjunkfood.Hewenttotheparkandhaveapicnicintheweekend.练习学生作文Mydeskmateisaboy.HisnameisZhaoQuanShun.Weareliveaboardingschoollife.HewasoneofthemostgoodplaybasketballthatIhaveeverseen.Hegetupverylateeveryday.Buthegetstoclassjustintime.Why?Becausehenevercleanshisface.Helikespoet.Heoftenwritealotofpoemsgiveothergirls.Andhearereallyexcitedaboutplayingbasketball.Hewasonhisschoolteam.Heoftenmakemehappy.Heisveryfunny.Ireallylikehe.2.高级词汇刻意使用以写人类作文为例高级词汇刻意使用HeisJack.Heis15yearsold.HeisJack.Heisa15-year-oldboy.高级词汇刻意使用a.后学优于先学高级词汇刻意使用Heisaniceboy.Heisahandsomeboy.charming；pretty;lovelyandlively始于颜值高级词汇刻意使用Heisahandsomeboywithbigeyes.wateryeyesbushyeyebrowshigh-bridgednoselongcurlyhairHeisaniceboy.Hehasbigeyes.高级词汇刻意使用Heisoutgoingandfriendly.notonly…butalso陷于性格Heisnotonlyoutgoingbutalsofriendly.aswellasHeisoutgoingaswellasfriendly.both…and…smart

hard-workingwarm-heartedfriendlyselflesstalentedoutgoingknowledgeablekind-hearted高级词汇刻意使用HeisJack.Heis15yearsold.Heisaniceboy.Heisa15-year-oldboynamedJackwhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohandsome.Heisa15-year-oldboynamedJackwhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohandsome.总结：Mary是一个漂亮且友好的13岁的小姑娘。小明是一个12岁的男孩，聪明又勤奋。XiaoMingisa12-year-oldboywhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohard-working.Maryisa13-year-oldgirlwhoisbeautifulandfriendly.练习Heisa15-year-oldboynamedJackwhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohandsome.忠于人品高级词汇刻意使用Shelikesreadingbooks.enjoyisinterestedinisfondof对象明确细节详细b.事件描述详细时间结果地点原因忠于人品Shelikesreadingbooks.高级词汇刻意使用Shealwaysreadsbooks.忠于人品Shealwaysreadsbooksinthelibrary.Shealwaysreadsbooksinthelibraryaftershefinishesthehomework.高级词汇刻意使用Shealwaysreadsdifferentkindsofbooksinthelibraryaftershefinishesthehomework.忠于人品Sheenjoyshelpingothers.Sheiswilling

to

helpothers.Sheiswilling

to

helppeopleinneed.高级词汇刻意使用Sheiswilling

to

helppeoplewhentheyhavetrouble.忠于人品Shelikesplayingbasketball.Sheisinterestedinplayingbasketball高级词汇刻意使用忠于人品Sheissointerestedinplayingbasketballthatsheplaysiteveryday.Sheissointerestedinplayingbasketballthatshewinsmanyprizes.高级词汇刻意使用练习Shelikesanimals.Shelikesdifferentkindsofanimals,because

shethinksanimalsareourbestfriends.Shelikesdifferentkindsofanimals,sosheaskseveryoneofustoprotecttheanimals.b.事件描述详细a.后学词汇优于先学词汇高级词汇刻意使用c.结尾总结提升（注意落笔自身）高级词汇刻意使用结尾一：感叹句高级词汇刻意使用Whatawonderfulgirlsheis!I'mreallyproudofher.Whatawonderfulgirlsheis!I'mreallyproudofbeingherfriend.结尾二：so/such...that...高级词汇刻意使用Jackissuchahard-workingboythatweshouldlearnfromhim.结尾三：特定场景高级词汇刻意使用Myfatherissuchagreat职业thatIwanttobeapersonlikehimwhenIgrowup.切题完整正确连贯切题完整正确连贯规范行文逻辑切题完整正确连贯规范“外显性”逻辑“内隐性”逻辑切题完整正确连贯规范“外显性”逻辑连词ontheonehand,ontheotherhand而且：besides，what’smore,moreover,举例：forexample,and,but,so,however,luckily总之：inaword,aboveall,allinall，切题完整正确连贯规范练习:选词填空moreover,so,but,and,forexampleJackisalovely

friendlyboy.Heisinterestedinreadingnovels.

,heenjoysgoingfishingwithhisfriendsonweekends.

henevereatsfish.

hegivest