初中九年级英语课件Section Ba-3b Self check 一等奖

2024/1/27Unit14IremembermeetingallofyouinGrade7.writing

初中生活即将结束,在过去的三年里,校园生活的点点滴滴一定给你留下了许多回忆,请以

My

MemoriesinJuniorHigh为题和我们分享你初中生活中的难忘记忆。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文。参考要点:1.在实验室里……

2.学校运动会上……

3.……

要求:1.要点充分,内容完整。

2.词数:80-120词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。My

MemoriesinJuniorHigh

Howtimeflies!Ican’tbelieveit’sbeenthreeyears

sinceIwenttojuniorhigh.Ihavemanyunforgettablememories.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WritingTask审题小贴士1.体裁____________2.话题____________3.人称____________4.时态____________5.要点____________6.词数____________

Tip:认真审题。

Howtimeflies!Ican’tbelieveit’sbeenthreeyears

sinceIwenttojuniorhigh.Ihavemanyunforgettablememories.

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Tip:列提纲。

Beginning

introduction

memoriesBody

Ending

23Outline

memories

Tip1:词汇准备。

wonderfulperformance

walkingintoyourclassroomforthefirsttime

Completethemindmapaccordingtothevideo.theexcitementoftheschoolsportsday

lovelysmilescheeringforyourbasketballgamediscussingthequestionstogether

singingEnglishsongsgoodhandwritingReadandThink

Iremember

cheeringforyourbasketballgame.Iremembertheexcitementoftheschoolsportsday.Weusedtodiscussthequestionstogether.YouhaveimprovedyourEnglishlevelsinceyoucamehere.1234观察思考rememberdoingsth.remembersth.usedtodosth.havedonesth.since+从句(过去时)

since+过去的时间点for+时间段in

thepast/last+时间段

Tip2:句型准备。

GroupWorkDescribethepictureinagroup.(Onepicture,onesentence.)

Tip3:把握要点,写句子。

21354ShowandShare

评价小贴士1.Right2.Creative3.Moving4.Handwriting

Total__________

Showyoursentenceandmakeitcorrect.

Tip4:句子语法结构和词汇运用准确。

SinceIwasinGrade9,Ihavemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab.2.Iremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago.3.IrememberperformingwellinthenewyearperformanceinGrade7.4.InGrade8,Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.5.Istillrememberthebirthdaycakeonmyfifteenthbirthdaylastterm.

SinceIwasinGrade9,Ihavemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab.2.Iremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago.3.IrememberperformingwellinthenewyearperformanceinGrade7.4.InGrade8,Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.5.Istillrememberthebirthdaycakeonmyfifteenthbirthdaylastterm.12345

Tip5:注意句子的逻辑顺序.

Putthesentencesinthecorrectorder.

IrememberperformingwellinthenewyearperformanceinGrade7.Iremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago.In

Grade

8,

Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.SinceIwasinGrade9,Ihavemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab.I

stillrememberthebirthdaycakeonmyfifteenthbirthdaylastterm.

Putthesentencesintoaparagraph.

Tip6:连句成段。

Isitgood?

Makethesentencesbetter.(添加连接词)

SinceIwasinGrade9,I_______havemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab,_______havelearnedalotfromthem.

butalso

Tip7:有效使用语句间的连接成分,结构紧凑。

notonlyBeautifytheSentences

SinceIwasinGrade9,Ihavemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab.Ihavelearnedalotfromthem.

BeautifytheSentences

Makethesentencesbetter.(把两句合并成一句)

Iremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago__________________Iwastired.

eventhough/evenif/though/althoughIremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago.Iwastired.(改为让步状语从句)

Tip8:适当运用复合句。

BeautifytheSentences

Makethesentencesbetter.(把两句合并成一句)

Irememberperforming____wellinthenewyearperformanceinGrade7____wewonthefirstprize.IrememberperformingwellinthenewyearperformanceinGrade7.Wewonthefirstprize.(改为结果状语从句)so

Tip8:适当运用复合句。

that

BeautifytheSentences

Makethesentencesbetter.(把两句合并成一句)

InGrade8,Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.________it’sagoodwaytodevelopourteamspirit.

IthinkInGrade8,Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.

It’sagoodwaytodevelopourteamspirit.

(改为宾语从句)

Tip8:适当运用复合句。

BeautifytheSentences

Makethesentencesbetter.(把两句合并成一句)

Istillrememberthebirthdaycakeonmyfifteenthbirthday.Thebirthdaycakewasdelicious.(改为定语从句)

Istillrememberthebirthdaycake__________wasdelicious

onmyfifteenthbirthdaylastterm.

that/which

Tip8:适当运用复合句。

IrememberperformingwellinthenewyearperformanceinGrade7.Iremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago.In

Grade

8,

Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.SinceIwasinGrade9,Ihavemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab.I

stillrememberthebirthdaycakeonmyfifteenthbirthdaylastterm.

Irememberperformingso

wellinthenewyearperformancethatwewonthefirstprizeinGrade7.Iremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago

eventhough/ifIwastired.InGrade8,Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.Ithinkit’sagoodwaytodevelopourteamspirit.SinceIwasinGrade9,Inotonlyhavemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab,butalsohavelearnedalotfromthem.Istillrememberthebirthdaycakewhich/thatwasdeliciousonmyfifteenthbirthdaylastterm.

Better

Comparethetwoparts.

Howtimeflies!Ican’tbelieveit’sbeenthreeyears

sinceIwenttojuniorhigh.Ihavemanyunforgettablememories.

Irememberperformingso

wellinthenewyearperformancethatwewonthefirstprizeinGrade7.Iremembertryingtorunforthehonorofourclassintheschoolsportsmeetingtwoyearsago

eventhoughIwastired.InGrade8,Iusedtopracticeplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.Ithinkit’sagoodwaytodevelopourteamspirit.SinceIwasinGrade9,Inotonlyhavemadesomesuccessfulexperimentswithmyclassmatesinthelab,butalsohavelearnedalotfromthem.Istillrememberthebirthdaycakewhich/thatwasdeliciousonmyfifteenthbirthdaylastterm.

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Tip9:组段成篇。

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