初中九年级英语课件TaskThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost

Task:ThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostWhocan“you”referto?thepersonwhohasinfluencedusmostfriendlyconfidentgenerouspatientcarefulpolitecreativekindhard-working…Whatqualitiesmaytheyhave?Name:Age:Birthplace:SpudWebbinhisfiftiesTexasinjuniorhighinseniorhighatajuniorcollegetryoutfor...berefusednotlostheartscore20pointsbecomethestarof...sitinthestandspracticeevenharderbecometheleaderof...benamedPlayeroftheYearnouniversityinvite...decideto...lead...to...bringsb.totheattentionof...succeedingettingascholarhipbenotinterestedin...beforcedto...remaintherefor...wintheSlamDunkContestafterhegraduatedQualities:hard-workingnevergiveupExamples:Sizeandbodytypedonotmatterandyoucandoalomostanythingifyounevergiveup.Workingroupsoffourandgivesomeexamplestosupportyourideas.Readthepassageandfillintheblankspara.1ageInhis_________workplaceA_______factory

para.2¶.31.Myfatherhasalwaysbeen__________________________.2.HegaveourTVtoafamily_______________________one.3.He_____________thechildrenwhohavelosttheirparents.4.____________hehassomemoneyleft,hegivesittosomeone___________.5.Hehas__________________manytimessince1990.6.Hehasdonated______________topeoplewith_______________.7.Tomy____________,hehasdecidedtodonatehis_______for________________________afterdeath.para.4Hehasaheartfullof________.bloodcellsbloodcancerbodysurpriselovemedicalresearchWheneverinneeddonatedbloodkindandhelpfulwhocouldnotaffordcaresforfiftieslocalinone’stwenties/thirties/forties/…Readthepassageandfillintheblankspara.1ageInhis_________workplaceA_______factorypara.2¶.31.Myfatherhasalwaysbeen__________________________.2.HegaveourTVtoafamily_______________________one.3.He_____________thechildrenwhohavelosttheirparents.4.____________hehassomemoneyleft,hegivesittosomeone___________.5.Hehas__________________manytimessince1990.6.Hehasdonated______________topeoplewith_______________.7.Tomy____________,hehasdecidedtodonatehis_______for________________________afterdeath.para.4Hehasaheartfullof________.bloodcellsbloodcancerbodysurpriselovemedicalresearchWheneverinneeddonatedbloodkindandhelpfulwhocouldnotaffordcaresforfiftieslocalGeneralinformationQualities&ExamplesYouropinionMyfatherisinhisfifties.Hehasworkedinalocalfactoryforyears.B.Youwillnotfindanythingunusualabouthimuntilyoulearnmore.Part1

(para.1)GeneralinformationA.Heisveryspecial.Appreciatewritingskills1:Tocatchreaders’eyesHowtowriteagoodstart?

———&———giveourTVto…carefor...3.givemoneyto...4.donateblood,bloodcells,evenhisbodyPart2

(para.2¶.3)kindhelpfulQualitiesExamplesrelated

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Userelatedandunusualexamplestosupportthetopicsentence!

writingskills2：unusualAppreciateWhatkindofexamplesshouldbeused?HegaveourTVtoafamily;hecaresforthechildren;whenhehassomemoneyleft,hegivesittosomeoneinneed.whocouldnotaffordone;whohavelosttheirparents;.para.2What'smissing?para.3Myfatherhasdonatedbloodmanytimessince1990.Hehasalsodonatedbloodcellstopeoplewithbloodcancer.Tomysurprise,hehasdecidedtodonatehisbodyformedicalresearchafterhisdeath.

Thebloodhehasdonatedisenoughtosaveover70lives.AppreciateHowtowriteaperfectexample?It’sbettertomakeexamplesmorebelievableandvivid.1.HegaveourTVtoafamilywhocouldn'taffordone.2.Hecaresforthechildrenwhohavelosttheirparents.3.Thebloodhehasdonatedisenoughtosaveover70lives.definingrelativeclausesAppreciatewritingskills3：over70Howtowriteaperfectexample?PairworkWhohasinfluencedyoumostinyourlife?Whatisspecialabouthim/her?Whathashe/shedone?Canyougiveussomeexamples?Whatdoyouthinkofhim/her?Askandanswerthefollowingquestionsandtalkaboutthepeosonwhohasinfluenedyoumost.choice1choice2WritingUsefulexpressions...isthepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost....isinhishertwenties/thirties/forties/...Youwillnotfindanythingunusualabouthim/heruntil......hasalwaysbeenkind/helpful...Tomysurprise,...WhenIwasalittlegirl/boy,Icouldnotunderstand...NowIrealizethat...评估方面

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内容1.文章开头是否吸引读者？2.所举事例是否相关且典型？5

语言1.是否运用所学词汇，表达清晰，有关联词的运用？2.在列举事例时是否运用定语从句或数词等使内容生动可信？5

细节是否有人称、时态、语态、单复数的错误？3

卷面是否书写工整，无单词错误？2AssessmentExchange&Assessment1.Exchangeyourwritingwithyourgroupmembersandgiveeachother'sproperassessment.2.Choosethebestoneamongyourgroupmembers'andshowushowgooditis!Homework1.Makeyourarticlebetter.2.Putthebestarticlesontothewallandenjoytogether.Post-writing:SampleMyuncleisinhisforties.Hehasworkedinalocalhospitalforyears.Youwillnotfindanythingunusualuntilyoulearnmore.

Myunclehasalwaysbeenkindandpatient.Besides,heissocarefulthathehasnevermadeanymistakes.Hesays，“Asadoctor,Wecan’tbetoocareful.”What’smore,heoftenhelpsthepeopleinneed