人教版八年级下册 What's the matter-写作能力提升练课件

UNIT1What’sthematter？UNIT1写作能力提升练

孩子们的健康成长是每个家庭最大的愿望和期盼，也关乎国家和民族的未来。健康的生活是成长、成才的前提和保障。请根据内容提示，以“HealthyLiving”为题写一篇80词左右的英语作文，谈谈你的看法。3.保证睡眠；4.保持乐观心态。参考词汇：乐观的optimistic————————————————————————————————————————————————————内容提示：

1.加强锻炼；2.健康饮食；

［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.健康的生活对于我们每个人来说都很重要。Healthylivingisvery

importantto

⁠everyoneofus.2.尽可能经常做运动对我们的身体有好处。Doingexercise

asoftenaspossible

⁠isgoodforourbody.importanttoasoftenaspossible3.我们必须确保每天有充足的睡眠。Wemust

makesure

⁠thatwehaveenoughsleepeveryday.makesure4.每天保持乐观和高兴是好的。It’sgood

tokeep

⁠optimisticandhappyeveryday.tokeep［巧妙衔接］

文章中使用表示顺序的first，second等词从几个方面介绍如何保持健康，使文章显得层次分明。［连句成篇］HealthyLivingHealthylivingisimportanttoeveryoneofus.Thefollowingcanhelpustoliveahealthylife.Therearemanythingswecandotokeephealthy.First，wemustdomuchexercise.Doingexerciseasoftenaspossibleisgoodforourbody.Second，wemusteathealthyfood，suchasgreenvegetablesandfruits.Eatinghealthilyisgoodforourhealth.Third，haveagoodsleep.Sleepingwellcanhelpustostudywell.Afteragoodsleepwewillfindwe’refullofenergy.Finally，it’sgoodtokeepoptimisticandhappyeveryday.Whenweareinthefaceofdifficulties，wecanworkthemouteasily.Ifwecanfollowtheways，wewillliveahappyandhealthylife.

你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛，眼睛不舒服，背痛，睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你的建议。要求：

1.内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；2.词数：80左右。

Jackismyfriend.Helikesplayingcomputergamesverymuch.Heoftensitsinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Nowhehasaheadache，soreeyesandasoreback.Hedoesn’tsleepwellatnight，sohefeelstiredeveryday.

Jackismyfriend.Helikesplayingcomputergamesverymuch.Heoftensitsinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Nowhehasaheadache，soreeyesandasoreback.Hedoesn’tsleepwellatnight，sohefeelstiredeveryday.

Ithinkit’sveryimportantforstudentstostayawayfromcomputergames.Heshouldtakebreaksawayfromthecomputer.Andheshoulddoeyeexercisestorelaxhiseyesandgotobedearlyatnight.Ithinkifhehasagoodrest，hewillfeelwellsoon.

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Ithinkit’sveryimportantforstudentstostayawayfromcomputergames.Heshouldtakebreaksawayfromthecomputer.Andheshoulddoeyeexercisestorelaxhiseyesandgotobedearlyatnight.Ithinkifhehasagoodrest，hewillfeelwellsoon.

⁠一、话题分析本单元以谈论“健康与急救(Healthandfirstaid)”为话题,针对健康与安全等问题,利用本单元学习的情态动词should等提出简单的建议。二、素材积累(一)“健康与急救”类话题常用词汇:healthy//important//necessary//doctor//keep//fruit//strong//exercise//sleep//stayup//feelsick//liedown//haveagoodrest//gotohospital//takebreaks//giveup//beincontrolof(二)“健康与急救”类话题常用句型:开头句1.Itisnecessaryforustokeephealthy.2.Itistruethathealthisthefirststeptosuccess.中间句1.Weshouldhaveahealthydiet.2.Remembertohavemealsontimeandeatmorevegetablesandfruit.3.Andyoushouldalsosay“No”tojunkfood.4.Itisnecessarytotakesomeexerciseeveryday.5.Giveupbadhabitslikestayinguptoolate.结尾句1.Keepinghealthyisthemostimportantthingintheworld.2.It’seasytohaveahealthylifestyle,andit’simportanttokeepahealthydiet.(三)名言警句1.Healthiswealth.健康就是财富。2.Happinesslies,firstofall,inhealth.幸福首先在于健康。(四)句子升格1.Wemustknowthewaystokeephealthy.(用Itis...todo...句式表达)→Itisnecessaryforustoknowthewaystokeephealthy.2.Soweshouldexercisealoteveryday.(增加目的,扩写句子)→Soweshouldexercisealoteverydaytokeephealthyandstrong.三、写作任务请结合你了解的健康知识,写一篇题目为“TheWaystoKeepHealthy”的短文。注意:(1)语言表达要准确,内容要客观；(2)80词左右。参考词汇:balanceddiet均衡的饮食；stayup熬夜【写作方法及写作模板】“总—分—总”法对健康与急救提建议总(引出话题)Importance:Healthisveryimportanttous.Soitisnecessaryto...分(具体建议)Eating:haveabalanceddiet/eatlotsoffruitandvegetablesExercise:playsportseverydaySleeping:neverworktoohard/neverstayuptoolate总(总结观点)Doasthese.Iamsure...【高分作文】TheWaystoKeepHealthyHealthisveryimportanttous._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Soitisnecessarytoknowthewaystokeephealthy.Weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Weshouldeatlotsoffruitandvegetables.Theyaregoodforhealth.Don’teattoomuchmeat._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________