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专四-写作辅导1英语专四作文写作辅导1主要内容评分标准&写作问题自我剖析&互评题型分析&应对模板英语专四作文写作辅导1一、评分标准&写作问题剖析英语专四作文写作辅导1What’swrongwithyourcomposition?知己knowaboutyourself英语专四作文写作辅导1Finishthecompositioninthe2016TEM4.Andreflectontheproblemsaboutyourcomposition.英语专四作文写作辅导1英语专四作文写作辅导1内容结构语言得体词汇句子切题；论证充分。有条理；层次清晰。无拼写问题；恰当、准确、地道。无语法错误；无标点问题；句式多样。语气恰当英语专四作文写作辅导11.内容&结构：面对新题型————材料作文，无所适从，容易跑题，不知道怎么展开？是否条理、层次清晰？2.词汇：拼写错误？用词简单，不地道，显得low?Thispolicycanmakethefarmer’sfinancialburdenlessandless.Thispolicycanrelievethefarmer’sfinancialburden.Tobecontinued…英语专四作文写作辅导13.句子：语法错误：主谓一致，虚拟语气…句式单一不高级无新意（是否是模板的锅？）英语专四作文写作辅导1模板可以借鉴，但要用有新意的！英语专四作文写作辅导1Switchyourcompositionwithyourpartner,andexchangeconstructiveremarksoneachother’scomposition.What’swrongwithyourcomposition?英语专四作文写作辅导1二、题型分析&应对英语专四作文写作辅导1分值：20大于200词45分钟题型：材料作文、命题作文、图表图画作文英语专四作文写作辅导1材料作文2016&2017：材料作文Readcarefullythefollowingexcerpt(about…)andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words,inwhichyoushould:Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthenCommentonwhether…Youshould(can)supportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.英语专四作文写作辅导1材料作文三段式开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点英语专四作文写作辅导1命题作文三段式开头：引出主题→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点图表图画作文三段式开头：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结&重申自己观点英语专四作文写作辅导1三种题型的实质不同材料作文开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点命题作文：引出主题→提出个人观点图表图画作文：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点英语专四作文写作辅导1材料作文的开头如何缩写/总结材料1.抓取关键信息&关键句2.如何缩写提取出来的关键句：同义单词/短语替换;去掉修饰成分；用几个抽象概括词取代一堆具体词（比如头衔etc）；如果是引言，用概括后的间接引语代替直接引语英语专四作文写作辅导1缩写/总结材料的注意事项：1.不要篇幅太长，2.切不可一字不差地照抄原文。英语专四作文写作辅导1Exercise:Thebeginningpartofthe2017TEM4Writing英语专四作文写作辅导1参考Withthewideuseofintelligentmachines,peoplebegantoworryabouttheirthreattohumanintelligence.Theyholdtheideathateveniftheartificialintelligenceisofgreathelptohumanjobsandfacilitateshumanlife,thedevelopmentoftheartificialintelligencewillunavoidablydeprivehumanofmentaleffortandcausetheregressofbrain.Frommyperspective,…英语专四作文写作辅导1命题作文的开头引出话题的方法1.背景介绍——改写题干中背景/摆出两种对立的观点/简单分析现象原因或结果Nowadays,therefollowsacrazefor…Withthedevelopmentof…,…isbecomingamoreandmoreseriousproblem.Theearly1990ssawanunprecedentedtideof…Inthepastthreedecades,Chinahaswitnesseddramaticimprovementin…Recently,thephenomenonthat…

hascausedwideattention/becomeasubjectofwidespreadcontroversy.英语专四作文写作辅导1Otherpeopleareinclinedtothinkthat…Opposedtothisopinion,thereisanotherviewthat…英语专四作文写作辅导12.提问题3.引用英语专四作文写作辅导1图表图画作文的开头描述图表图画的方法Asisindictedinthechartabove,….Ascanbeseeninthepicture,…Thispictureintendsto…英语专四作文写作辅导1三、模板英语专四作文写作辅导1（一）通用模板题型材料作文命题作文图画图表作文共性：除了开头略有不同，开头：…+提出自己观点主体：论证自己观点结尾：总结、重申自己观点英语专四作文写作辅导11.开头：提出自己观点的模板Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iprefertheformer/latterone.Inmyview/opinion,…Asforme,I’minfavorof…AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithink..Frommypointofview,…Personally,..英语专四作文写作辅导12.主体：论证自己观点的模板1）引出理由Therearemanyreasonsexplaining/accountingfor/contributingtomyview.Therearemanyreasonswhichmayaccountfor..Therearemanyfactorsdeciding/influencing..Thefollowingreasonscanaccountfor/support/prove….Thereasonsfor..mainlylieinthefollowing..aspects.Thisargumentcanbeprovedbythefollowingfacts.英语专四作文写作辅导12)举例论证Therearenumerousexamplessupportingthisargument.Therearemanyexampleswhichcansupportthisargument.Let’stake…asan/anotherexample.Acaseinpointis…Agoodexampletoillustrateis…Forinstance，…英语专四作文写作辅导13.结尾：总结、重申自己观点1)总结：Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithink..Alltheabove-mentionedtellsusthat..Therefore,…Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthat..Toconclude/Inaword/Insum/Ingeneral..Therefore,itissafetodrawtheconclusionthat…2)强调重申(强调句/倒装句/虚拟语气)Onlyinthiswaycanpeople…Itishightimethatwe…Itis…that…英语专四作文写作辅导1常见作文内容类型立场选择型既定观点型建议方法型利弊分析型题型（3）材料作文命题作文图画图表作文∽英语专四作文写作辅导1建议方法型模板Itishightimeforustotakesomeeffectivemeasuresto..Itishightimethatwetooksomeeffectivemeasuresto..Itisnecessary/imperativetotakesomemeasuresto…Thefollowingmeasurescanbetakento…Effectivemeasures…..shouldbetakento….英语专四作文写作辅导1利弊分析型模板benefitfr