-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 警察给小男孩过生日 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Whenwearelittlekids,birthdaypartiesaremomentousoccasions.Theyareourtimetoshine,andweloveeverythingaboutthem:theballoons,thegames,thecake,thegifts,andsoon.当我们还是小孩子的时候，生日聚会是重要的场合。它们是我们发光的时刻，我们喜欢它们的一切：气球、游戏、蛋糕、礼物等等。Afterreadingcoolstoriesaboutpoliceofficerssolvingmysteries,AllenMillerthoughtthepolicewereawesome,hopingtobecomeoneofthem!So,whenhehadtochooseathemeforhisseventhbirthdayparty—hewentwithhisfavorite:thepolice!Andallhewantedforhisbirthdaypartywasamodelpolicecar.Heexcitedlyinvitedsomeofhisfriendsandanxiouslyawaitedtheday.Unfortunately,noneofthemcouldmakeittothepartyduetovariousreasons.在阅读了关于警察解谜的酷故事后，艾伦·米勒认为警察太棒了，希望能成为其中之一！所以，当他不得不为自己的七岁生日派对选择一个主题时——他选择了他最喜欢的：警察！他想要的生日派对只有一辆警车模型。他兴奋地邀请了一些朋友，焦急地等待着这一天的到来。不幸的是，由于各种原因，他们都没能参加聚会。Allen’smomRachelwrestledwiththechallengingdecision:shouldshecancelthepartyandsaveAllentheembarrassmentofanemptypartyroom?Hehadbeenlookingforwardtothepartyandtalkingaboutitdaily,soitwouldbreakhishearttocancelit.艾伦的妈妈Rachel艰难地做出了一个具有挑战性的决定：她应该取消派对，让艾伦免于派对室空无一人的尴尬吗？他一直期待着聚会，每天都在谈论，所以取消聚会会让他心碎。OfficerFrankSmith,whohadalreadyplannedwithRachelandagreedtoshowupattheparty,heardfromRachelthatitmightbecanceledduetolowattendance.That’swhenhedecidedtosavetheday—heisapoliceofficerafterall!Hisdutyistoserveandprotect,andhedecidedtoprotectAllenfromhavingabadday,andservehimthemostamazingseventhbirthdayparty!OfficerSmithgotthewholelocalpolicetojoinin.“Weliketobeinvolvedinourcommunity.It’snotjustaboutenforcing(执行)thelaw.Weliketobethereinthegoodtimesaswell,”heexplainedtoRachel.弗兰克·史密斯警官已经和瑞秋计划好了，并同意参加派对，他从瑞秋那里听说，由于出席人数少，派对可能会取消。就在那时，他决定化险为夷——毕竟他是一名警察！他的职责是服务和保护，他决定保护艾伦免受糟糕的一天，并为他举办最令人惊叹的七岁生日派对！史密斯警官让当地的警察都加入进来。“我们喜欢参与我们的社区。这不仅仅是执法(执行)法律。我们也喜欢在好的时候去那里，”他向瑞秋解释道。OnthedayofAllen’sparty,OfficerSmithpickedupRachelandAlleninhispolicecar.Theboydidn’tknowwheretheyweregoing,butwasexcited.TheystoppedatTownHall,andofficerSmithledthemintothemeetingroomwhereagroupofpolicemenwerewaitingtowishAllenahappybirthday.在艾伦聚会的那天，史密斯警官用他的警车接走了瑞秋和艾伦。男孩不知道他们要去哪里，但很兴奋。他们在市政厅停了下来，史密斯警官领他们进入会议室，一群警察正在那里等着祝艾伦生日快乐。注意;1.续写词数应为150个左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。There,apartywaswaitingforhim.Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.Mainidea：ThisshortarticletellsthestoryofalittleboynamedAllenMiller'sexpectationsforapolicethemedbirthdayparty,aswellastheproblemhefaces-invitedfriendscannotcometohisbirthdayparty.Allen'smother,Rachel,andapoliceofficernamedFrankSmithplannedaspecialbirthdayparty,butasnofriendscouldcome,shewasconsideringcancelingtheparty.Afterlearningaboutthissituation,OfficerSmithdecidedtotakeactionandhavetheentirelocalpolicestationjoinintoholdanunforgettablebirthdaypartyforAllen.Intheend,Allenwastakentotheconferenceroomofthecityhall,whereagroupofpoliceofficerswerewaitingtocelebratehisbirthday.续写情节发展：续写第一段：艾伦走进去会议室里---响起了“生日快乐”的合唱---被许多拿着气球的警察包围了---把他介绍给所有的警官---艾伦非常激动---在妈妈的帮助下切蛋糕----爆发出欢呼和笑声续写第二段：包装精美的包裹递给艾伦---被这个惊喜惊呆了--一辆警车模型---艾伦拥抱了史密斯警官---再次感谢--主旨升华过生日语言素材积累：1.房间里布满了装饰，蓝色和白色的气球在空中飘浮，一条悬挂着的横幅上写着“Allen7岁生日快乐”。Theroomwas

filledwithdecorations,blueandwhiteballoons

floating

intheair,andabannerthatread“Happy7thBirthdayAllen”

hungonthewall.2.

警察们都面带微笑，当Allen进入时鼓掌，让他感觉像那天的英雄。Thepolicemen,allsmiles,

clappedasAllenentered,makinghimfeelliketheherooftheday.

当他切蛋糕时，房间里爆发出一阵掌声，将这一刻被定格为他生命中最幸福的瞬间之一。Ashecutthecake,theroom

eruptedinapplause,

sealingthismoment

asoneofthehappiestinhisyounglife.当Allen吹灭蜡烛时，他的眼睛因喜悦而闪光，他梦寐以求的生日派对以最不同寻常的方式展开。AsAllenblewoutthecandles,

hiseyessparkledwithjoy,hisdreambirthdayparty

unfolding

inthemostextraordinaryway.5.

Allen的心不仅仅因为生日礼物而充满了满足，更因为房间里每个人给予他的爱和接纳而感到极为温暖。Allen’sheartwasfull,notjustfromthebirthdaygift,butfrom

theoverwhelmingsenseofloveandacceptance

hefeltfromeveryoneintheroom.官方范文There,apartywaswaitingforhim.

ThemomentAllensteppedinside,achorusof“HappyBirthday”filledthemeetingroom,andhefoundhimselfsurroundedbylotsofpoliceofficersholdingballoons.OfficerSmithintroducedhimtoalltheofficers,whogavehimhighfives.Allenwasthrilled,andhiseyessparkledwithexcitementashelookedatthegrandpolice-themedcake.AsAllencutintothecakewiththehelpofhismom,theroomeruptedintocheersandlaughter,addingtothejoyfulatmosphere.(80words)Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,officerSmithtookoutagiftbag.

“It’sforyou.”HepresentedthedelicatelywrappedparceltoAllen,whowasstunnedbythesurprise.“Wow,amodelpolicecar!Itlooksexactlyliketheonewecameherein!Thankyou!”OfficerSmithsmiled,“Anytime,Allen.”

AllenhuggedOfficerSmithandthankedhimagainformakingtheotherwisecrushingdisappointmenthistimetoshine.Itwasthelocalheroeswhohelpedbybeingpartofthecommunityandinspiringtheyoungsoulinsmallbuteffectiveways.(80words)参考范文一，There,apartywaswaitingforhim.

TheinstantAllenopenedthedoor,withaloudpop,ashowerofcolorfulconfettienvelopedhim.Thencameawaveofloudhornsandsomecheering,“HappyBirthday!”Allencouldn’tbelievehiseyes,andallhecouldreactwastostandstill,smilingsillyandshyly.Whatsurprisedhimmorewasthathisnamewasspelledoutinballoons.“Happybirthdaytoyou!”Thepolicemenbegantosingthesong,clappingandhandinghimabirthdaycake.Takingadeepbreath,Allenblewoutthecandle,echoedwithanotherroundofapplause.ThenAllencutupthecakeandeveryonebegantoenjoythecake.

Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.

Shyly,Allentookthegiftandopenedit,onlytofindthatitwasamodelpolicecarhehaddreamedof.Anotherbigsurprise!Allenfeltlikesittingoncloudnine.Todaywaslikeadreamforhim.Allenhuggedthetoyinhischestandcouldn’tstandasecondofseparation.Rachelstoodthere,withtearsofgratitudewellingupinhereyes.Shehadbeenworriedthattodaycouldbeamiserableday,whichnowturnedtoablessedandhappyday.ShethankedOfficerSmithforhisgenerosityandkindness.Thepolicenotonlyfoughtagainstcrimes,butalsobroughthappinessandsolidityfortheircommunity.Whatablesstoliveinsuchanaffectionatecommunity.

参考范文二，There,apartywaswaitingforhim.

Balloonsadornedtheroom,andatablewasfilledwithsnacksanddrinks.Allen'seyeswidenedinsurpriseanddelightasherealizedwhatOfficerSmithhaddoneforhim.Thepoliceofficersgreetedhimwarmly,sharingstoriesandjokesthatmadeAllenfeellikethecenterofattention.Amidstthelaughterandchatter,abirthdaycakewaswheeledin.Alleneagerlygrabbedaknifeandcutintothebirthdaycake,andthenshar