使用定语从句和同位语提升写作

ImproveWritingwithAttributiveClauseandAppositive

使用定语从句和同位语提升写作2018.10.14Recall用恰当的关系词填空1．IborrowedthebookSherlockHolmesfromthelibrarylastweek,________myclassmatesrecommendedtome.2．Acompany________profits(利润)fromhomemarketsaredecliningmayseekopportunitiesabroad.3．We'llreachthesalestargetsinamonth___________wesetatthebeginningoftheyear.4．Amongthemanydangers_________sailorshavetoface,probablythegreatestofallisfog.whichwhose(Which/that)(Which/that)Recall5．Manycountriesarenowsettingupnationalparks______animalsandplantscanbeprotected.6．Wehavelaunchedanotherman­madesatellite,______isannouncedintoday'snewspaper.7．Finallyhereachedalonelyisland___________wascompletelycutofffromtheoutsideworld.8．Thatevening,______Iwilltellyoumoreaboutlater,Iendedupworkingverylate.whichWhich/thatwhichwhereRecall用定语从句合并下列简单句Mr.

Smith

is

a

teacher.

He

is

very

strict.

2.ThegirliscalledMary.Isawheryesterday.3.Thisisthefactory.Ivisiteditlastyear.4.ThehouseisTom’s.Itsdoorfacessouth.Mr.Smithisateacherwhoisverystrict.ThegirlwhomIsawyesterdayiscalledMary.Thisisthefactorywhich/thatIvisitedlastyear.ThehousewhosedoorfacessouthisTom’sWritingpractice根据提示，完成下面的小作文。1．珍妮(Jenny)，是一个著名的小说家(novelist)，上周出版了一部新的小说。(publish)2．它描绘了一次不同寻常的冒险经历。(extraordinaryadventure)3．主人公(hero)骑骆驼来到一个废弃的城堡。(camel，desert)4．在城堡里他遇到了一位美人(beauty)。5．他们相爱了并一起出发去探索神秘的沙漠。(explore)Onepossibleedition:Jennyisafamousnovelist，andshepublishedanewnovellastweek.Itdescribesanextraordinaryadventure.Theherorodeacameltoadesertedcastle，andhemetabeautythere.Theyfellinlovewitheachotherandtheytogethersetofftoexplorethemysteriousdesert.Oneadvancededition:Jenny，whoisafamousnovelist，publishedanewnovellastweek，whichdescribesanextraordinaryadventure.Theherorodeacameltoadesertedcastle，wherehemetabeauty.Theyfellinlovewitheachotherandtheytogethersetofftoexplorethemysteriousdesert.Appositive同位语Appositive同位语表示与前面的名词处于同一关系，在语法上是“名词+名词”结构，在意义上，后一个名词解释前一个名词。例如，在句子“我们的语文老师，陈老师，教书非常出色”中，划线部分就是同位语。英文“Mr.Chen,

ourteacherofChinese,teachesusexcellently”，划线部分就是同位语。Appositive1．

China,

whichisacountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,isnowdevelopingveryfast.

（定语从句）改为：China,

acountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,

isnowdevelopingveryfast.Appositive

2．

Finally,SuDongpo,

whowasagreatpoet,arrivedinHuizhou,

whichwasthenacityfamousforitsbeautifullakes.改为：Finally,SuDongpo,

agreatpoet,

arrivedinHuizhou,

thenacityfamousforitsbeautifullakes.Appositive3．

Egypt,

whichisacountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,attractsmanytouristsfromallovertheworld.

（定语从句）改为：Egypt,

acountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,attractsmanytouristsfromallovertheworld.Practice1.Iamlookingtovisiting

Beijing.Itisacity

withmanyfamousplacesofinterest.2.Iamlookingforwardtovisiting

Beijing.Itisthecapitalofchina.

3.Hepaidavisitto

Mr.Bush.HewaspresidentoftheUnitedStatesofAmerica.

4.Mr.Bushsaw

apairoflittlepandas

inthezoo.TheywereakindofanimalonlyaliveinChina.

Oneadvancededition:Jenny，whoisafamousnovelist，publishedanewnovellastweek，whichdescribe