2018高考英语-写作过渡课

BeautifyyourComposition遇难心不慌，遇易心更细。discussingroupYesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.I

sawaforeignerbuyingclothes.HespokeEnglish.Theshopassistantcouldn'tunderstandhim.Itranslatedforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguage.

YesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.

Isawa

foreignerbuyingclothes.HespokeEnglish.Theshopassistantcouldn'tunderstandhim.Itranslatedforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguage.IwasdoingsomeshoppingwhenIhappenedtoseethataforeignerwastryingtobuysomeclothes.Hetriedwhathecouldtomakehimselfunderstood.ButSeeingthis,IwentuptothemandwhattheforeignguestsaidintoChinese.orhowtheycouldinsuchabigstorewithoutknowinganyforeignlanguage.

YesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.IwasdoingsomeshoppingwhenIhappenedtoseethataforeignerwhospokeEnglishwastryingtobuysomeclothes.Hetriedwhathecouldtomakehimselfunderstood.Buttheshopassistantcouldn'tcatchhim.Seeingthis,IwentuptothemandtranslatedwhattheforeignguestsaidintoChineseforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguageorhowtheycouldinsuchabigstorewithoutknowinganyforeignlanguage.

书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则语言第一位（语言高级）内容第二位（要点齐全）结构第三位（文章分段）一、高级词汇和句式二、修辞手法三、有效的连词四、名人名言或谚语语言第一位（语言高级）漂亮、地道词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装

1、词组优先原则2、地道原则。3、避免重复原则

4、后、高、长原则—

后学到、较高级、较长词汇。四项原则

1、词组优先原则［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.

2、地道原则［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.

4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇hardvery

payattentionto

happy

moreandmore3、避免重复原则［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.替换词

diligently

ratherextremelyattachimportanceto;focusondelightedenjoyabletheincreasingnumberofAdj.聪明的、脑筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife. EX、运用高级词汇：1.Asaresult,theplanfailed.(一般)2.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.(一般)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高级)ShewenttoAustriawiththepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高级)Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruck/hitme(高级)Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent

palewithsorrow(高级)Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.(高级)1.Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般)2.Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)运用高级词汇：思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文

地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组无遗漏信息点（审题）篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式多样思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？

强调句倒装句

with复合结构advancedsentences定语从句名词性从句非谓语动词常用谚语被动句…一、肯定不如双否好二、陈述不如倒装妙三、主动不如被动巧四、从句不如分词傲高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀四“不如”誊写规范不要少

修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。一、肯定不如双否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime

倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。二、陈述不如倒装妙1.Wecansolvetheproblemofpollutionwhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection2.Timeissopreciousthatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Ashewasdiligent,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.每次可以借五本书最多借十天Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪种表达法分数会更高？三、主动不如被动巧[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.四、从句不如分词傲1.我们学校周围种了很多花和树，吸引了大量的学生来参观。（with的复合结构）______________________________________,itattractsalargenumberofpeople.2.Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.（定语从句）Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,

___________________________3.Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.（主语从句）______________mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.Whereweboughtalotofclothes.WhatimpressedmeEX、改写句子

Withsomanytreesandflowerssurroundingourschool

.

4.Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob,hesaidnothingtothepolice.（使用分词结构）__________________,myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice.5.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.6.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Frightenedoflosinghisjob

7．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijin