复合句在写作中的运用市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件

复合句在写作中利用：

定语从句名词性从句状语从句1/27定语从句在写作中利用2/27Tomwentshopping.Hewasgivenextrachangebymistake.Hereturnedit.Honestyisthebestpolicy.ThestoryisaboutTom,_____wasgivenextrachangebymistakeandreturnedithonestly.Andittellsusthathonestyisthebestpolicy.TellastoryMainpoints:Inthearticle,Tomwasgivenextramoneybymistakewhenshopping,buthereturnedithonestly,________tellsushonestyisthebestpolicy.whowhich3/27定语从句在基础写作中利用内容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：1月1日起实施范围：全国目标：全部室内公共场所无烟措施：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超出10万/年4/27实施时间：1月1日起实施范围：全国目标：全部室内公共场所无烟Thisban,_____aimstomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-free,willcomeintoeffectfromthefirstdayof.（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分布：男性75％;女性：25％CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,among_____75%aremenand25%arewomen.whichwhom5/27（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超出10万/年Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,_____causes100,000deathsperyear.定语从句在写作中作用:1.整合信息,使意思更为明确2.使句子结构更为紧凑which6/27名词性从句在写作中利用7/27playmusicmakehappy

theyplaymusicmakesthemhappy.That8/27

Themanwindowsbrokebroughttrouble

themanbrokethewindowsbroughthimtrouble.That9/27gounknownhe

heisgoingisunknown.WhereWhere10/27talkabouttheuseofcellphone

theyaretalkingaboutistheuseofcellphone.WhatWhat11/27overturn打翻

thecatoverturnedthepaintmadecry

thecatoverturnedthepaint

madethebabycry.Thatdid

What12/27Thechilddoesn’tknowtheanswer.Itmakestheteacherangry.

Thatt13/27瘦身俱乐部Whereisthewoman?Itisknowntoeverybody.

is14/27【拓展训练】尝试用以下句型翻译：Tom已被北京大学录用，这使我们大家很兴奋。1.主语从句_____________________________________________2.定语从句_____________________________________________3.主语从句+表语从句_____________________________________________4.同位语从句_____________________________________________ThatTomhasbeenadmittedtoBUmakesusexcited.TomhasbeenadmittedtoBU,whichmakesusexcited.WhatmakesusexcitedisthatTomhasbeenadmittedtoBU.ThenewsthatTomhasbeenadmittedtoBUmakesusexcited.15/27

Westudyinthenewteachingbuilding.Itmakeseveryoneexcited.Wewalkinthebuilding.Wearehappy.Wecanenjoymanypaintingsandhandwritings.Weuseourownworkstodecorateit.Itiscool.Ourschoolprovidesusconvenience.Itisthegoalofourschool.Thecabinetisanexample.Webringmanythingstoschool.Wecanputtheminthecabinet.Thereishotwatertoo.Howcanwekeeptheteachingbuildingcleanandbeautiful?Wearediscussingit.16/27

Thatwearestudyinginthenewteachingbuilding

makeseveryoneexcited.

Evenwalkinginthebuildingbringsushappinessforwecanenjoymanypaintingsandhandwritings.

Itiscool

thatweuseourownworkstodecorateit.Toprovideusconvenience

isthegoalofourschool.Thecabinetisanexample.Whatwebringtoschool

canbekeptinit.Besides,wheneverwearethirsty

thereishotwater.Now,

howwecankeeptheteachingbuildingcleanandbeautifulisbeingdiscussed.17/27状语从句在写作中利用18/27Task1:StudytheproverbsActionsspeaklouderthanwords.

(adverbialclauseofcomparison)事实胜于雄辩。WheninRomedoastheRomansdo.

(adverbialclauseoftime,adverbialclauseofmanner)入乡随俗。19/273.Ifathingisworthdoing,it’sworthdoingwell.

(adverbialclauseofcondition)凡值得一做事都值得做好。20/274.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.

(adverbialclauseofplace)有志者，事竟成。21/27Task2:Translatethefollowingsentencesusingadverbialclause.1.我正在街上走着，突然我碰到了一个老朋友。2.就算我可能失败一百次，我也不会放弃。3.只有当战争结束了，人们才能过上幸福生活。IwaswalkinginthestreetwhenIcameacrossanoldfriendofmine.AlthoughImayfailahundredtimes,Iwon’tgiveup.Onlywhenthewarwasovercouldpeopleliveahappylife.22/274.不论发生什么事，他也不会改变主意。5.这些问题这么难，以致没有一个学生能解答出来。Nomatterwhathappens,hewon’tchangehismind.Theproblemsweresodifficultthatnoneofthestudentscouldworkthemout.Sodifficultweretheproblemsthatnoneofthestudentscouldworkthemout.23/276.我刚出门，天就下起雨来了。7.直到老师告诉他答案，他才意识到自己错误。Ihadhardlygoneoutwhenitbegantorain.HardlyhadIgoneoutwhenitbegantorain.Hedidn’trealizehismistakeuntiltheteachertoldhimtheanswer.Notuntiltheteachertoldhimtheanswerdidherealizehismistake.24/27Task3:writeacompositionwith5sentencesaccordingtothegivensituation:

昨天早晨，你惊悉你朋友李华被一辆汽车撞伤住了院，事情经过是：那天李华正要穿过大街，他很小心，直到看到绿灯亮时才开始过街。可当他刚要走到街心时，右侧突然出现了一辆轿车，径直朝他开来。他躲闪不及被撞出了几米远。他马上被送进医院并动了手术。昨晚你去看他时，他虽已脱险，但依然脸色苍白。参考词汇：躲闪：dodge右侧：right-handside25/27体裁类别时态内容及写作提议信息点:（1）穿过大街时他很小心，直到看到绿灯亮时才开始过街（2）刚要走到街心时，右侧突然出现了一辆轿车，径直朝他开来。

（3）躲闪不及被撞出了几米远（5）虽已脱险，但依然脸色苍白

。记叙文记事文章过去时（4）马上被送进医院并动了手术26/27（1）Theotherdayhewasgoingtocrossastreet.Hewasverycautiousanddidn’tgountilhesawthetrafficlightturngreen.

（2）

Buthardlyhadhegottothemiddleofthestreetwhenacarsuddenlyappearedonhisright-handsidean