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Afewyearsago,asateenager,Iexperienceddailymigraines（偏头痛）thatmademewanttohitmyheadagainstabrickwall.Iwasdesperatetofindacure.Forthoseofyouwhohaveexperiencedthispain,Icansenseyousilentlynoddinginagreement,whileforthoseofyouwhohavenotexperiencedit,itisbynomeansanoverstatementtosaythattheexperienceissuffering.

ReadforinformationQ1：Whatmademesufferalot?Ihadtriedeverything.Unfortunately,nothingworkedasacontinuouscureformyunfortunatepainfulcondition.Inmyhopelessness,myfathertoldmetotryacupuncture（针灸）,whichhehadexperiencedonceinHongKong.Ithadhelpedcurehislowerbackwhennootherformsoftherapyormedicinehadworked.

ReadforinformationQ2：Whatdidmyfathersuggest?

IhadnoideaaboutacupunctureandhadneverexperiencedtraditionalChinesemedicinebefore.Withnoexpectationsduetomypreviousdisappointmentsinmysearchforatreatment,Iwentonmyjourneyofacupuncture,andsoonfoundmyselfinamiddle-agedwoman’sofficewhichwassurroundedbyChineseherbalmedicines.

ReadforinformationQ3：WhatattitudedidIhavetowardChinesemedicine?

ReadforinformationQ4：HowdidIfeelwhenseeingtheneedles?

Theinitialprocedureofreceivingacupunctureprovedtobequitesurprising.Toaddressmymigraines,acupuncturewasfirstadministeredtothebackofmyhand,whichisnowherenearmyhead.Thefeelingwasquiteunexpectedtoo:asthedoctorcarefullytappedandtwistedtheneedlein,Ididnotsensetheneedleitself,butratheraneffectthatrippled(起伏)throughoutmyentirebody.Thedoctorthencontinuedtotapandtwistmoreneedlesthroughoutmyentirebody:head,face,stomach,legs,arms,andtoes.Theentireprocesswasoverin20minutes.Shethengavesomeherbalmedicinetometodrinkeverydayforfivedays.

ReadforinformationQ5：HowdidIfeelintheprocedure?

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Afewyearsago,asateenager,Iexperienceddailymigraines（偏头痛）thatmademewanttohitmyheadagainstabrickwall.Iwasdesperatetofindacure.Forthoseofyouwhohaveexperiencedthispain,Icansenseyousilentlynoddinginagreement,whileforthoseofyouwhohavenotexperiencedit,itisbynomeansanoverstatementtosaythattheexperienceissuffering.照应1：Thepainfulsymptomofmydailymigraineslessenedastimetickedby.“Youdon’thavetohityourheadagainstabrickwallnow!”Myfathersaidjokingly.

ReadforhiddencluesIhadtriedeverything.Unfortunately,nothingworkedasacontinuouscureformyunfortunatepainfulcondition.Inmyhopelessness,myfathertoldmetotryacupuncture（针灸）,whichhehadexperiencedonceinHongKong.Ithadhelpedcurehislowerbackwhennootherformsoftherapyormedicinehadworked.照应2：Theamazingacupuncturedidwondersformymigrainesjustasitdidformyfather’slowerback.

IhadnoideaaboutacupunctureandhadneverexperiencedtraditionalChinesemedicinebefore.Withnoexpectationsduetomypreviousdisappointmentsinmysearchforatreatment,Iwentonmyjourneyofacupuncture,andsoonfoundmyselfinamiddle-agedwoman’sofficewhichwassurroundedbyChineseherbalmedicines.照应3：MyjourneyofbeingtreatedwithacupuncturesparkedmycuriosityforChineseherbalmedicinesaswellasacupuncture.Inmysparetime,IspentlotsoftimereadingbooksaboutChinesemedicine,whichenrichedmyknowledge.

Readforhiddenclues照应4：Graduallythecoldlyshiningsilverneedlesthatfrightenedmetodeathseemedwarmandfriendly.Theinitialprocedureofreceivingacupunctureprovedtobequitesurprising.Toaddressmymigraines,acupuncturewasfirstadministeredtothebackofmyhand,whichisnowherenearmyhead.Thefeelingwasquiteunexpectedtoo:asthedoctorcarefullytappedandtwistedtheneedlein,Ididnotsensetheneedleitself,butratheraneffectthatrippled(起伏)throughoutmyentirebody.Thedoctorthencontinuedtotapandtwistmoreneedlesthroughoutmyentirebody:head,face,stomach,legs,arms,andtoes.Theentireprocesswasoverin20minutes.Shethengavesomeherbalmedicinetometodrinkeverydayforfivedays.照应5：Thefollow-uptreatmentprocesswentsmoothandgraduallyIfeltlesspainfrommigraines.两段的情节构建Para1:Ireturnedtothedoctorforatotalof10times.

Para2:Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

首段内容：10此针灸过程中，病情的变化，病人我的心理感受等；病情好转，父亲有没有情感表现的？医生会是怎样与我互动的？二段内容：

重在变化。病情变好，我的改变。我对针灸的看法改变等等。要有升华，则可以表现一下我治愈后对中医的痴迷，希望用中医治愈更多的像我一样的病人，缓解他们的痛苦。首句1：（以I主位推进叙述手法)

WhenIenteredtheclinic,thesilverneedlesneverfearedagain.Instead,theyweresomagicandpowerfulthatIbecamefascinatedwiththem.1.定首段首句(结合原文本最后一段以及所给的段首句）

Para1:Ireturnedtothedoctorforatotalof10times.

Theinitialprocedureofreceivingacupunctureprovedtobequitesurprising.Toaddressmymigraines,acupuncturewasfirstadministeredtothebackofmyhand,whichisnowherenearmyhead.Thefeelingwasquiteunexpectedtoo:asthedoctorcarefullytappedandtwistedtheneedlein,Ididnotsensetheneedleitself,butratheraneffectthatrippled(起伏)throughoutmyentirebody.Thedoctorthencontinuedtotapandtwistmoreneedlesthroughoutmyentirebody:head,face,stomach,legs,arms,andtoes.Theentireprocesswasoverin20minutes.Shethengavesomeherbalmedicinetometodrinkeverydayforfivedays.首句2：（以doctor主位推进叙述手法)

Thedoctortappedandtwistedneedlesthroughoutmybodyasseriouslyasshedidinitially.AsIcouldsee,shehadgreatenthusiasmforherdreamgoal---torelieveherpatientsoftheirsufferingsandpains.1.定首段首句(结合原文本最后一段以及所给的段首句）

Para1:Ireturnedtothedoctorforatotalof10times.

Theinitialprocedureofreceivingacupunctureprovedtobequitesurprising.Toaddressmymigraines,acupuncturewasfirstadministeredtothebackofmyhand,whichisnowherenearmyhead.Thefeelingwasquiteunexpectedtoo:asthedoctorcarefullytappedandtwistedtheneedlein,Ididnotsensetheneedleitself,butratheraneffectthatrippled(起伏)throughoutmyentirebody.Thedoctorthencontinuedtotapandtwistmoreneedlesthroughoutmyentirebody:head,face,stomach,legs,arms,andtoes.Theentireprocesswasoverin20minutes.Shethengavesomeherbalmedicinetometodrinkeverydayforfivedays.Para1:Ireturnedtothedoctorforatotalof10times.

Para2:Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

2.定首段尾句：尾句1：（以doctor主位推进叙述手法)Attheendofthetenthsession,

afterremovingalltheneedlesfrommybody,thedoctortoldmegentlythatitwouldbeunnecessaryformetovisitherclinic.Whatarelief!Theterribleandpainfulmigraineswouldneverhaveanychancetotortureme.Para1:Ireturnedtothedoctorforatotalof10times.

Para2:Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

2.定首段尾句：尾句2：（以I主位推进叙述手法)Attheendofthetenthsession,withbutterfliesinmystomach,

IaskedthedoctorifIneededfurthermymigrainesforanothersession.Whatdelightedmewasthatthewordsfromhermouth---“Youwillbefreeofyourmigraines.”Para2:

Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

首句1：(以Acupuncure为叙事对象）Acupunctureprovedtobemorethanjustatreatment—ithadaprofoundinfluenceonmyattitudetowardsChinesemedicine.3.定二段首句：Para2:Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

首句2：(以Acupuncure为叙事对象）Notonlydiditalleviatemyphysicalsuffering,butitalsointroducedmetotheprofoundwisdomoftraditionalChinesemedicine.3.定二段首句：Para2:Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

首句2：(以Acupuncure为叙事对象）Notonlydiditalleviatemyphysicalsuffering,butitalsointroducedmetotheprofoundwisdomoftraditionalChinesemedicine.3.定二段首句：Para2:Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

尾句1：(以I为叙事对象）IlearntalotfromtheexperienceofbeingtreatedwithChineseAcupuncture,whichhadadeepinfluenceonmyattitudetowardsChinesemedicine.Fromthenon,Imadeupmymindtodevotemyselftomedicine,hopingthatinthefutureIcouldhelprelievepatients’sufferingandpains.4.定二段尾句：Para2:Acupuncturedidchangemylife.

尾句2：(以Acupuncure为叙事对象）Notonlydiditalleviatemyphysicalsuffering,butitalsointroducedmetotheprofoundwisdomoftraditionalChinesemedicine.4.定二段尾句：下水作文Para1:Ireturnedtothedoctorforatotalof10times.WhenIenteredtheclinic,thesilverneedlesfearedmenomore.Instead,theyweresomagicandpowerfulthatIbecamefascinatedwiththem.Theamazingacupuncturedidwondersformymigrainesjustasitdidformyfather’slow