高考二轮复习英语课件满分练14短文改错书面表达

满分练(十四)短文改错+书面表达ⅠⅡ短文改错(2023四川广安二诊)Ilikekeepingadiary.Ithinkkeepingdiariesareagoodhabit.Itinterestspeopleofallage.Olderpeoplewanttolookbackonthepastandseewhichthey’vedoneandlike.Theyalsohopetoleavesomethingusefullyfortheirgrandchildren.Middle-agedpeopleexploretheirlivesbykeepdiaries.Whydoyoungpeopleenjoykeepingdiaries?Withmyopinion,theywishtofindoutwhotheyare,andwherethey’regoing.Ifyouwanttorememberyourpastlife,andyouneedtokeepapersonaldiarythroughouttheirlife.That’sbecauseitisimpossibleforyouremembereverythingyou’veexperienced.ⅠⅡ[语篇解读]本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍人们都喜欢写日记的原因和写日记的好处。1.第二句:are→is

考查主谓一致。主语是动词-ing形式短语keeping

diaries,谓语要用单数形式。故将are改为is。2.第三句:age→ages

考查名词的数。可数名词age前面有all,名词要用复数形式。故将age改为ages。3.第四句:which→what

考查连词。see后是宾语从句,从句中缺少动词done和like的宾语,意为“什么”,用连接代词what引导。故将which改为what。4.第四句:like→liked

考查谓语动词。分析句子结构和意思可知,这里like和前面have

done是并列的谓语动词,都用现在完成时,因此like用过去分词。故将like改为liked。ⅠⅡ5.第五句:usefully→useful

考查形容词。修饰前面的不定代词something,应用形容词。故将usefully改为useful。6.第六句:keep→keeping

考查非谓语动词。介词by的宾语应用keep的动词-ing形式。故将keep改为keeping。7.第八句:With→In

考查介词短语。这里考查介词短语in

my

opinion,意为“在我看来”。故将With改为In。ⅠⅡ8.第九句:删除and

考查连词。这句话是if引导的条件状语从句,后面的连词and多余。故将and删除。9.第九句:their→your

考查代词。从句提到的人称代词是you,所以用you的形容词性物主代词。故将their改为your。10.第十句:在remember前面加to

考查非谓语动词。此处为固定句型:it

be+adj.+for

sb.to

do

sth.,it作形式主语,后面用动词不定式作真正的主语。故在remember前面加to。ⅠⅡⅠⅡDearPrincipalWang,

Yourssincerely,LiHuaⅠⅡDearPrincipalWang,

It’ssuchagreatprivilegeformetobeinvitedtosharemyexperiencewiththerobotloversinyourschool.Withthedeepestgratitude,I’msopleasedtoacceptyourinvitation.Asisscheduled,thetrainingcoursewillbedividedinto3parts.Themostadvancedtechnologyandapplicationwillbedeliveredinthefirstplace.Toenhancetheirfurthermotivation,aninteractivepartwillbeprovided,throughwhichtheycansharetheirperspectivesonthegivensamplerobotenthusiasticallyaswellasbeinspiredmutually.Intheend,apracticalrobotdesigningontheirownwillberequired.ⅠⅡI’mlookingforwardtomeetingwithyounextweekandIdohopethecoursecanbeofgreatbenefittoyouall.Yourssincerely,

LiHua

ⅠⅡ1.词汇积累

荣幸:privilege→honour 高兴的:pleased→delighted观点:perspective→opinion 有益的:beofbenefit→bebeneficial2.高分句型(1)Asisscheduled,thetrainingcoursewillbedividedinto3parts.(as引导非限制性定语从句)(2)Toenhancetheirfurthermotivation,aninteractivepartwillbeprov