读后续写之微写作-学案-高三英语二轮复习

综合练习：微写作1.请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个等待和老友重逢及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。（词数80左右）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.请根据所给情节，尝试续写人物惊讶的情节。利用动作、神态和语言描写等表现人物的惊讶。（词数80左右）Johnhadalwaystoldhimthatoutsidethewindow,therewasanamazingpark.Mikestruggledtowalktothewindow.Surprisingly,itfacedablankwall.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________请根据所给情节，尝试续写人物的情节。侧重肢体动作和神态描写。（词数80左右）Hedidn'tgetanAintheexamasexpected.Heshookhisheadandlookedupset.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________请根据所给情节，尝试续写Jenny摔在地上后的情感。利用动作，神态和语言描写表现人物的尴尬，羞愧，失望，绝望等。（词数80左右）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个父亲发怒的情节。利用动作神态和语言描写表现人物的愤怒。描写中可适当添加对“我”的紧张害怕的描写。（词数80左右）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个王华考试失利之后难过的片段。通过动作、神态和氛围描写等表现人物的难过。描写中可适当添加对情感的描写。（80词）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________综合练习：微作文1.请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个等待和老友重逢及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。（词数80左右）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching.Goldensunlightdancedinherlonghairandthechildren'slaughterfloatedintheair.Shestaredattheendoftheroad,hopingherclosefriendwouldcomeearlier.Itseemedasifshehadbeenstandingthereforacentury.Suddenlyawaveofhappinessandexcitementseized/tookholdof/sweptover/cameoverherwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.Herheartleapedwithjoy,andashiningsmilelitupherface.Sherantoherfriendandthrewherselfintoherfriend'sarms.Tearsofjoy/happiness/excitementwelledupintheireyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether.她站在窗边，快乐而耐心地看着。金色的阳光在她的长发上舞动，孩子们的笑声在空气中飘荡。她盯着路的尽头，希望她的好朋友能早点来。似乎她已经站在那里一个世纪了。当她看见一个熟悉的身影时，一种幸福和兴奋的情绪突然袭上她的心头。她的心高兴得跳了起来，一个灿烂的笑容照亮了她的脸。她跑向她的朋友，投入她朋友的怀抱。当他们紧紧地拥抱在一起时，喜悦/幸福/激动的泪水涌上了他们的眼眶。2.请根据所给情节，尝试续写人物惊讶的情节。利用动作、神态和语言描写等表现人物的惊讶。（词数80左右）Johnhadalwaystoldhimthatoutsidethewindow,therewasanamazingpark.Mikestruggledtowalktothewindow.Surprisingly,itfacedablankwall.Mikereceivedasevereshock,asifbyablowontheheadfromawell-directedmallet(球棒).Herubbedhiseyeshard,stared.Hismouthdropped/hungopeninsurprise.Hefrozethereforawhile,wide-eyed,asifrootedtotheground.HewasspeechlesswithshockwhenhethoughtofthebeautifulsceneJohnhaddescribedtohimeveryday.Confusedandastonished,hegapedatthewall.“Whyisitawall?”hemurmured.Shakinghisheadindisbelief,hestillcouldn’tbelievehiseyes.约翰总是告诉他，在窗外，有一个很棒的公园。Mike挣扎着走向窗户。令人惊讶的是，它面对的是一面空白的墙。迈克受到了严重的打击，就像是被一个导向正确的木槌击中头部。他用力揉眼睛，盯着我。他惊讶地张大了嘴。他在那儿呆了一会儿，睁大了眼睛，好像呆在地上。当他想到约翰每天向他描述的美丽景色时，他震惊得说不出话来。他感到困惑和惊讶，目瞪口呆地看着墙。”为什么是一堵墙?”他低声说。他难以置信地摇着头，仍然不敢相信自己的眼睛。3.请根据所给情节，尝试续写人物的情节。侧重肢体动作和神态描写。（词数80左右）Hedidn'tgetanAintheexamasexpected.Heshookhisheadandlookedupset.Hisfriendpattedhisshoulder,andwhisperedtocomforthim.Hedropped/loweredhisheadtohidehissadnessandmanagedasmile.Thenheheadedslowlyhome,hisheaddown,tearsineyes.Onthestep,hetookadeepbreath,pushedopenthedoorandsteppedinside.Noticinghimcomein,hismotherstoppedherhousework,raisingherheadwithsurpriseinhereyes.Hethrewhimselfintohismother'sarmsandburiedhisheadinherskirt,weeping.他考试没有像预期的那样得a。他摇摇头，看起来很沮丧。他的朋友拍拍他的肩膀，轻声安慰他。他低下头来掩饰悲伤，勉强笑了笑。然后他慢慢地走回家，低着头，眼里含着泪水。在台阶上，他深吸了一口气，推开门走了进去。看到他进来，他的母亲停止了她的家务，抬起她的头，惊讶地在她的眼睛。他投入母亲的怀抱，把头埋进母亲的裙子里，哭泣着。4.请根据所给情节，尝试续写Jenny摔在地上后的情感。利用动作，神态和语言描写表现人物的尴尬，羞愧，失望，绝望等。（词数80左右）Jennywalkednervously,andbentdowntostartasomersault.Whensherolled,shefellheavilyontheblanket.Kidslaughedinsurpriseatthenoise.Standinguncomfortablyandhopelesslyandfeelingasifthewholeworldwaslaughingather,Jennywassoashamedthatthecolorfloodedhercheeks.Shemustbereallystupidtofalldowninthegame!Disappointmentandembarrassmentwritteninherburningface,shefelttearsbegantowellupinhereyes.Inbitterdisappointmentanddesperation,sheranswiftlytoherroomandlockedherselfin.Embarrassmentandthefeelingoffailurefloodingtoher,shethrewherselfintothebed,weepingwildly.珍妮紧张地走着，弯下腰开始翻筋斗。她翻身的时候，重重地摔在了毯子上。孩子们听到这声音都惊讶地笑了。詹妮站在那里感到不自在，无助，仿佛整个世界都在嘲笑她，她羞愧得满脸通红。她一定很蠢才会在游戏中摔倒！她火辣辣的脸上写满了失望和尴尬，她感到眼里开始涌出泪水。带着极度的失望和绝望，她迅速跑回自己的房间，把自己锁在里面。尴尬和失败的感觉淹没了她，她扑倒在床上，疯狂地哭泣。请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个父亲发怒的情节。利用动作神态和语言描写表现人物的愤怒。描写中可适当添加对“我”的紧张害怕的描写。（词数80左右）Neverhadmyfatherbeensofuriousinallhislifeaboutmybehaviorattheparty.Histeethwerechattering,andwithunstoppablerageinhiseyes,hewaslikeanangrylion.Hewentpurplewithanger,buthedidn'tscreaminangerasusual.Hejustglaredatmesilently.Hisstaringeyesreallyfrightenedme.Iswallowednervously,lickedmylipsandlookedaway.Afterafewmoments'silence,hethrewhiscoatonthesofawithannoyance,collapsedintoit,andmurmured,“WhatshouldIdowithyou?”我父亲从来没有对我在派对上的行为如此愤怒过。他的牙齿格格作响，眼中充满无法抑制的愤怒，他就像一头愤怒的狮子。他气得脸色发紫，但没有像往常一样愤怒地尖叫。他只是默默地瞪着我。他瞪着的眼睛真的吓到我了。我紧张地咽了口唾沫，舔了舔嘴唇，然后看向别处。沉默了几分钟后，他恼怒地把外套扔在沙发上，倒在沙发上，喃喃地说，“我该拿你怎么办?”6.请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个王华考试失利之后难过的片段。通过动作、神态和氛围描写等表现人物的难过。描写中可适当添加对情感的描写。（80词）WangHuafailedtoworkoutthetwoquestionsonthemathpaper,andthebellrang,signalingtheendingoftheexam.WangHuadraggedherheavylegswithasinkingheartandmovedoutoftheclassroom.Shedropped/hungherheadinsadness,greatsorrow/sadnesscloudinghereyes.Anairofsadnesscouldbesensedtenmetersaway.Soon,hereyesbegantowater.Definitely,shewouldfailthemathexam!Disappointmentandsadnesscameinwaves,andtearsstreameddownhercheeks.Theonlythingshewasdesperatetodowasrushbackhomeandthrowherselfintoherlittlebedandweep,wildly!王华答不出数学试卷上的两道题，于是上课铃响了，标志着考试结束了。王华心情沉重地拖着沉重的腿走出了教室。她悲伤地垂下头，极大的悲伤笼罩着她的眼睛。十米外都能感觉到悲伤的气氛。很快，她的眼睛开始流泪。当然，她会数学考试不及格的！失望和悲伤接踵而至，泪水顺着她的脸颊