高考英语一轮复习应用文写作新闻报道课件

高分应用文突破系列:

新闻报道

1.明确新闻报道六要素：(五个W一个H)

“五个W”:

who,when,where,what,

why

一个H:how

（即:时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果)2.新闻报道写作框架①首段：

时间，地点，人物，事件简单概括②详细叙述事件的起因，经过和结果③主题升华，对事件进行感悟和评价应用文报道：越野赛跑（2020年新高考卷）假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:参加人员:跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:活动反响。首段：时间：LastSunday地点：fromschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain人物：students事件：aracematch

LastSunday,ourschoollaunchedaracematchfromschoolgatetothefootofNanshanmountain，inwhichmanystudentsandteachersparticipated.Exhustedaswewere,wefeltdelightedandsatisfied.中间段：逻辑清晰+语言简练+句式多样越野赛详情介绍，出发时间之类：setoff/asscheduled经过遇到的挫折困难:difficulty/giveup结果成功完赛:managetofinishtherace

At9am,weparticipantsmetattheschoolgateasscheduled,eachofwhom（非限制定语从句）

hadagreatpassionforfitnessprograms.Thenwesetoffat10am,（非谓语）enjoyingbeingclosetonature.Afterhavingrunforawhile,sotiredwerewethatsomeofuswouldliketogiveup.（强调句）

Itwasourteachersthatencouragedustogoonandboostedourconfidence.Finally,allofusmanagedtofinishtherace.尾段：主题升华升华：意识到体育锻炼的重要性/身心都得到了好处/释放压力热爱大自然

Throughthisactivity,notonly(倒装)didwedosomephycicalexercisebutalsowerealizedtheimportanceofpersistence./Haditnotbeenforthisrace（虚拟）,Iwouldhavenotrealizedthesignificanceofwillpower/regularexercise.

LastSunday,ourschoollaunchedaracematchfromschoolgatetothefootofNanshanmountain，inwhichmanystudentsandteachersparticipated.Exhustedaswewere,wefeltdelightedandsatisfied.At9am,weparticipantsmetattheschoolgateasscheduled,eachofwhomhadagreatpassionforfitnessprograms.Thenwesetoffat10am,enjoyingbeingclosetonature.Afterhavingrunforawhile,sotiredwerewethatsomeofuswouldliketogiveup.Itwasourteachersthatencouragedustogoonandboostedourconfidence.Finally,allofusmanagedtofinishtherace.Throughthisactivity,notonlydidwedosomephycicalexercisebutalsowerealizedtheimportanceofpersistence./Haditnotbeenforthisrace,Iwouldhavenotrealizedthesignificanceofwillpower/regularexercise.结尾升华：1.Fromthisactivity,welearnedhowtocooperatewitheachotherandcametorealizetheimportanceofteamwork.通过这次活动，我们学会了如何相互合作，并逐渐意识到团队合作的重要性。2.Theexhibitionturnedouttobeagreathit.Notonlyhasitbroughtjoytousbutalsobroadenedourhorizons.Everyparticipantexpectsanotherone.展览取得了巨大的成功。它不仅给我们带来了欢乐，也开阔了我们的视野。每个参与者都期望有另一个。潍坊市高考模拟考试（2023）.上周日，你校组织了纪念高中毕业的植树活动。请你为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1．活动介绍；2．个人感受。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ATree—plantingActivity1.词汇积累参加：takepartin→participatein旨在：beaimedat→withthepurposeof庆祝：celebrate→congratulate合作：cooperate→collaborate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Weenjoyedtreesstandingstraightinthesoil,givingusastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.拓展句：Weenjoyedtreesstandingstraightinthesoil,whichgaveusastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.【点睛】【高分句型1】LastSunday,allthestudentsinSenior3tookpartinatree-plantingactivityorganizedbyourStudentUnioninRenminPark,whichwasaimedatcelebratingourgraduation.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Howtiredbuthappywewere!

(使用了how引导的感叹句)

LastSunday,allthestudentsinSenior3tookpartinatree-plantingactivityorganizedbyourStudentUnioninRenminPark,whichwasaimedatcelebratingourgraduation.

Whileenjoyingbeingclosetonature,wecooperatedwitheachother,somediggingholes,someplantingsmalltrees,andsomewateringthem.Howtiredbuthappywewere!Weenjoyedtreesstandingstraightinthesoil,givingusastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.

Weplantedtreesandinthemeantime,plantedseedsofhopeforthefuture!Webelievedtheyoungtreeswouldgrowup,healthyandstrong,justlikeus.参考范文：关于运动的名言“Sportsdonotbuildcharacter.Theyrevealit.”–HeywoodBroun“体育不能建立人格，但能展示出你的人格