Unit9写作能力提升练课件人教版英语七年级下册

UNIT9Whatdoeshelooklike？UNIT9写作能力提升练

假设陈芳是你的英语老师,你们班同学都喜欢她。请你根据图片中提供的信息,以“MyEnglishteacher”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你的英语老师。

［谋篇布局］理清文章要素,构建文章结构。

［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.

她既不高也不矮。她中等身高,不胖。Sheisn’t

tall

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or

⁠

short

⁠.She’s

of

medium

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height

⁠andsheisnotfat.2.

她的头发是棕色的。她戴着眼镜。Herhairisbrown.Andshe

wears

⁠

glasses

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.tall

or

short

medium

height

wears

glasses

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3.她的眼睛大,嘴巴和鼻子小。She

has

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big

⁠

eyes.Hermouthandnose

are

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small

⁠.4.她喜欢穿漂亮的衣服。现在她穿着一件绿色的Ｔ恤衫,黑色的短裙。Shelikes

wearing

⁠

beautiful

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clothes.NowsheisinagreenT-shirtanda

black

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skirt

⁠.has

big

⁠

are

small

wearing

beautiful

⁠

black

skirt

5.她真的很有趣,并且对我们很友好。Sheisreallyfunnyandsheisvery

friendly

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to

⁠

us

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.6.她的课非常有趣,并且她经常在课后帮助我们学习。Herclassesareveryinteresting,andsheoften

helps

⁠

us

⁠

with

⁠ourstudyafterclass.friendly

to

us

helps

us

with

7.她喜欢唱歌。有时候她在课堂上教我们唱英语歌。Shelikessinging.Sometimesshe

teaches

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us

⁠

to

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sing

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Englishsongsinclass.teaches

us

to

sing

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［巧妙衔接］在介绍英语老师时,应重点介绍其外貌、穿着及性格、喜好等相关内容。通过语意相关联的方式使全文前后语意具有明显的统一性和连贯性。MyEnglishteacherisMrs.Chen.Sheisabout30yearsold.Sheisn’ttallorshort.She’sofmediumheightandshe’snotfat.Herhairisbrown.Andshewearsglasses.Shehasbigeyes.Hermouthandnosearesmall.Shelikeswearingbeautifulclothes.NowsheisinagreenT-shirtandablackskirt.Sheisreallyfunnyandsheisveryfriendlytous.Herclassesareveryinteresting,andsheoftenhelpsuswithourstudyafterclass.ShelikessingingandsometimessheteachesustosingEnglishsongsinclass.

Wealllikeherverymuch.MyEnglishteacher［连句成篇］

请根据表格中的提示,用英文介绍你的一位笔友,词数：60左右。姓名Steve性别男年龄13国家澳大利亚外貌个子高,金色卷发,酷爱好及原因1.喜欢的动物：熊猫、考拉—可爱2.喜欢的运动：打篮球—令人放松3.喜欢的食物：中国菜—美味梦想及原因当一名演员—有趣、令人兴奋

Mypenpal

IhaveapenpalfromAustralia.HisnameisSteve.He’sa13-year-oldboy.Heistall.Hehascurlyblondhair.He’sverycool.Helovespandasandkoalasbest,becausetheyareverycute.Helikesplayingbasketball,becauseitisrelaxing.HelikesChinesefoodverymuch,becauseitisdelicious.Hewantstobeanactor,becauseitisaninterestingandexcitingjob.

⁠Mypenpal

IhaveapenpalfromAustralia.HisnameisSteve.He’sa13-year-oldboy.Heistall.Hehascurlyblondhair.He’sverycool.Helovespandasandkoalasbest,becausetheyareverycute.Helikesplayingbasketball,becauseitisrelaxing.HelikesChinesefoodverymuch,becauseitisdelicious.Hewantstobeanactor,becauseitisaninterestingandexcitingjob.

⁠一、话题分析本单元话题为描述人的“外貌特征”，用本单元重点句型介绍人的身高、胖瘦、发型等典型特征。二、素材积累(一)“描述人物外貌”类作文的常用词汇:curly//straight//long//short//black//blonde//tall//ofmediumheight//big//small//wear//notwear//handsome//beautiful//cool//funny//friendly(二)“描述人物外貌”类作文的常用句型:开头句1.DoyouwanttoknowmyEnglishteacher?2.IhaveabestfriendandhernameisMary.3.Thisismyfatherandheisadoctor.4.Letmedescribemygoodfriendhere.中间句1.Sheisverytallandalittlebitheavy.2.Heisgoodatsports,sohealwayswearssportsshoes.3.Wearegoodfriendsandwegetonwellwitheachother.4.ShelooksyoungbutIdon’tknowherage.5.Sheisfriendlyandlikestohelpothers.6.Hisdreamistotravelaroundtheworld.7.Heplaystheviolinwell.Hewantstobeaviolinistinthefuture.8.Heoftenwatchesamoviewithfriendsandplayssocceronweekends.结尾句1.Sheiskindandfriendlytothestudents.Wealllikeher.2.Ilovemyparents.Ilovemyfamily.3.Ihopeyoucanmakefriendswithhimassoonasyoucan.4.Hisjobisveryinteresting,isn’tit?三、写作任务请以“Mybestfriend”为题,根据下面所给的提示内容,写一篇80词左右的短文。①名字:Mary; ②生日:June10th;③年龄:13岁; ④高而且瘦;⑤有长而且黑的头发; ⑥友好,外向;⑦喜欢唱歌,打篮球。【写作方法及写作模板】引入话题(who)人物介绍(looklike)人物评价(belike)Ihaveabestfriend.Hernameis...Marylooks...andshehas...hair...Marywears...Maryisfriendlyandoutgoing.Doyouwantto...“1W2L法”介绍人物【高分作文】Mybestfriend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihaveabestfriend.HernameisMary.MaryisthirteenyearsoldandherbirthdayisonJune10th.Marylookstallandthin,andshehaslongandblackhairwitharoundface.Sheal