新高考英语读后续写技巧与训练：助人类20篇

读后续写：助人型20篇

第1篇最后的心愿.............................................:

第2篇求职经验...............................................、

第3篇避难所..................................................7

第4篇夜遇老人...............................................10

第5篇丢失的戒指.............................................13

第6篇救出小孩...............................................15

第7篇一封信和七美元.........................................17

第8篇遇到好人...............................................20

第9篇简单的感谢.............................................22

第10篇创造爱，传递爱.......................................24

第11篇圣诞老人..............................................26

第12篇外科医生的信仰.......................................28

第13篇拍照..................................................32

第14篇五十个金币...........................................35

第15篇披萨店员工救人.......................................39

第16篇捐赠..................................................42

第17篇陌生人帮我修车.......................................45

第18篇特殊的驾车旅行........................................46

第19篇归还雨伞.............................................50

第20篇善意的力量...........................................51

第1篇最后的心愿

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasrespondingtoacallfromasmallbrickflatinaquietpartoftown.IassumedIwas

beingsenttopickupsomeparty-goers,orsomeonewhohadjusthadafightwithalover,ora

workerheadingtoanearlyshiftatsomefactoryfortheindustrialpartoftown.

WhenIarrivedat2：30a.m”thebuildingwasdarkexceptforasinglelightinagroundfloor

window.Undersuchcircumstances,manydriversjusthonk（按球!］歹I）onceortwice,waita

minute,thendriveaway.ButIhadseentoomanyweakpeoplewhodependedontaxisastheironly

meansoftransportation.

Unlessasituationsmelledofdanger,Ialwayswenttothedoor.

Thispassengermightbesomeonewhoneedsmyassistance,!reasonedtomyself.SoIwalked

tothedoorandknocked.nJustaminute,"answeredafrail,elderlyvoice.Icouldhearsomething

beingdraggedacrossthefloor.Afteralongpause,thedooropened.Asmallwomaninher80s

stoodbeforeme.Shewaswearingaprintdressandapillboxhat,likesomebodyoutofa1940s

movie.Byhersidewasasmallnylonsuitcase.

Theapartmentlookedasifnoonehadlivedinitforyears.Allthefurniturewascovered_with

sheets.Therewerenoclocksonthewalls,noequipmentonthecounters.Inthecomerwasa

cardboardboxfilledwithphotosandglassware.

''Wouldyoucarrymybagouttothecar?”shesaid.Itookthesuitcasetothecab,then

returnedtoassistthewoman.Shetookmyarm,andwewalkedslowlytowardthecab.

Shekeptthankingmeformykindness."It'snothing/1Itoldher."Ijusttrytotreatmy

passengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.'1

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked."Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?

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Wedroveinsilencetotheaddressshehadgivenme,andit...

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Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.nCouldyoudrivethroughdowntown?"

Askedwhywedidn'ttaketheshortestway,thesmallwomantoldmeitwasthelastchanceforher

tovisitthecity.Wedrovethroughtheneighborhoodwheresheandherhusbandhadlived.Besides,

sheaskedmetoslowinfrontofaparticularbuildingorcornerandwouldsitstaringintothe

darkness,sayingnothing.Atlast,shesaidshewastiredandwantedtogotothehospice.

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wedroveinsilencetotheaddressshehadgivenme,anditwasalowbuilding,wheretheold

ladywouldlivetherestofherlife.Twonurseswhomusthavebeenexpectinghercameouttothe

cabassoonaswepulledup.Iopenedthetrunkandtookthesuitcasetothedoorandthewoman

wasalreadyseatedinawheelchair.Whensheaskedhowmuchsheowedme,withoutthinking,I

saidnothingandbenttogiveherabug.Itwasmyassistancethathelpedoneofweakpeople

realizeherwish.

第1段:

她给了我一个地址，一个收容所，她问。“你能开车穿过市中心吗？'‘当被问及为什么我们不

走最短的路时，那个小女人告诉我，这是她去这个城市的最后一次机会。我们开车穿过她和

她丈夫住过的社区。此外，她请我在某幢大楼或角落前放慢脚步，坐在那里盯着黑暗，什么

也没说。最后，她说她累了，想去临终关怀医院。

第2段：

我们默默地驱车前往她给我的地址，那是一幢低矮的建筑，老太太将在那里度过余生。我们

一停下车，一定在等着她，两名护士就上了驾驶室。我打开后备箱，把手提箱拿到门口，那

个女人已经坐在轮椅了。当她问她欠我多少钱时，我什么也没说，心想给她一个虫子。是我

的帮助，帮助一个弱者实现了她的愿望。

第2篇求职经验

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

OnasunnySaturdayafternoon,Mattwentshoppingwithhisfamily.Theyfilledtwo

shoppingcartswithlotsofgroceriesthatwereenoughforawholeweek.Immersedin

warmsunlight,theyheadedtotheparkinglot.

Suddenly,Mattcaughtsightofastrangeman.Usually,itwascommontofind

somehomelesspeopleoutsideasupermarket.Atfirstsight,Mattthoughthewasjusta

homelessguy,buttherewassomethingdifferentwithhim.Hewassittingonasleeping

bagwithmultipleresumesneatlylaidout,alongwithasignthatread"needworkand

fbod.,,Theoldandpoorclothescouldnothidehisoptimismandeagerness.Thesign

arousedMatt'scuriosity.Mattaskedifhecouldseehisresume.Thestrangemanhopped

rightup,handedonetoMattpolitely,andthenstartedintroducingallabout

hisexperienceasifitwereaninterview.HisnamewasShawn.Infact,Shawnwasa

52-year-oldformercook.Matt,inhisthirties,alsoacook,foundShawnwasa

well-spoken,coolandfriendlyguywhoknewexactlywhathewantedandwasgoingafter

it.Shawn'seagernessdeeplyimpressedMatt.

Accustomedtoseeinghomelesspeopleaskforfoodandormoney,Mattfoundit

surprisingtowitnessahomelessguymakingeffortstofindajobdespitedifficult

circumstances.Themaninfrontofhimlookednothinglikeabeggarindepression.There

wasnotevenatraceofself-pityinhiseyes.Shawn'seffortsremindedMatthissituations

wherehehadnothingandhadtobusthisbutt（努力）togetworkandearnmoney.Right

nowandhere,Shawnwasdoingwhathehadexperienced,soMatthadalotofrespectfor

Shawn.Mattboughthimabottleofwaterandsomesandwiches.Shawntookwithshyness.

Then,MatttookapictureofhisresumetopostonFacebook,notknowingifanything

wouldcomeofit.

Soon,someonecameacrossShawn'spostandofferedhimajobasacookatasmall

downtownrestaurant.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Shawnwasveryexcitedandgratefulforlandinganewjob.

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TogetherwithMatt,Shawndecidedtohelpmorepeoplelikehim.

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Shawnwasveryexcitedandgratefulforlandinganewjob.SomuchdidShawncherishthis

hardwonopportunitythatallhisenthusiasmwasclearlyshowninhisdailywork.Carefullyand

professionally,theenergeticcookstudiedandimprovedthemenu,makinggreateffortstohelpthe

restaurantretainregularconsumersthroughdeliciouscuisine.Withhislifeseeingatraceof

sunlight,Shawnincreasinglythankful,butthepoordaysconstantlyremindedhimhomeless

peoplelivinginmiseryandwantingforfoodlikehim.So,hecontactedMattandwantedtodo

more.

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TogetherwithMatt,Shawndecidedtohelporepeoplelikehim.Inspiredbythisspecialwayof

job-hunting,theycameupwiththeideaofhelpingmorehomelesspeoplewithskillstofindajob

throughpreparingresumesandpracticinginterviews.Drivingfromstreettostreet,whereverthey

wentandwhomevertheymet,theysharedtheirexperienceandplantedseedsofdreams.Forthem,

whatbroughtthemsenseofachievementwasnotjustgainingappreciation,butallthemoreso

helpinghomelesspeoplerebuildself-respect.

肖恩非常兴奋和感激找到了一份新工作。肖恩非常珍惜这个来之不易的机会，他所有的热

情都清楚地体现在他的日常工作中。这位精力充沛的厨师仔细而专业地研究和改进了菜单，

努力帮助餐厅通过美味的菜肴留住普通消费者。随着他的生活看到一丝阳光，肖恩越来越

感激，但贫穷的日子不断提醒他无家可归的人生活在痛苦和想要食物像他。所以，他联系

了马特，想做更多。

肖恩和马特一起决定帮助像他这样的人。在这种特殊的求职方式的启发下，他们想出了一

个想法，通过准备简历和实践面试，帮助更多有技能的无家可归者找到工作。从一条街到

一条街，无论他们去哪里，无论他们遇到谁，他们都分享他们的经验，播下梦想的种子。对

他们来说，给他们带来成就感的不仅仅是获得赞赏，更重要的是帮助无家可归的人重建自尊。

第3篇避难所

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Igotupat4amtoreceiveacallfrommydaughterwhoneededmyhelptogethomefromthe

snowymountain.AfterIhelpedhergetataxi,InoticedIwasoutofcigarettes,soIwenttothegas

stationupthestreettopurchasesome.ThereIsawayoungmanwrappedinathinblanket,trying

tokeepoutofthesnow.Iwentinandboughtmycigarettes.

AsIwalkedoutofthestation,thisyoungmanaskedmeforacigarette.Ipulledoutone,gave

himandleft.IjustwentforwardafewstepsandsuddenlyIrealizedthatIshoulddosomethingfor

him.Ireturnedandaskedhimifhewantedahotcoffee.Obviouslyhecouldn'thidehiseagerness

togetoneandsaid"yes,please^^.AgainIwentinthestationandboughthimanextralargecup.

WhenIwentbackhome,thepitifullookofthepoorguybeingoutinthecoldflashedbefore

myeyes.WithouthesitationIgrabbedmywarmcoatandhurriedtotheguy.Helpinghimputon

thecoat,Itoldhimtherewasashelternearbywherehecouldaskfbrhelp.Iaskedhimtopromise

mehewoulddoit.

Atabout6o'clock,Igothome.Seeingmydaughterarrivesafelyandgetreadyfbrbed,I

restedmyheavybodyonthesofawonderingabouttheguyatthegasstation.SoImadeacallto

theshelterandtoldthenicegirlonthephonethattherewasaguyoutinthecold.Toldthatthey

hadoneortwobedsleft,Iquicklygotintomycaranddrovetothegasstation.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

AfterIfinallydrovetheguytotheshelter,hewasverygrateful.

Tenyearslater,Ireceivedastrangecall.

【答案】AfterIfinallydrovetheguytotheshelter,hewasverygrateful.Ihelpedhimgetsettled

inashelter,boughthimsomefoodandnecessities,andkeptsomemoney.Aftermakingsurehe

wouldmakeitthroughthewinter,Idroveaway.Iwassohappyonthewaybecausethepoorguy

waswarmandcaredfor.Wishhimagoodlifeinthefuture.Ididn'twanthimtorepaymebecause

itwasjustapieceofcaketome.

在我终于开车把那个人送到避难所后，他非常感激。我帮他在一个收容所定居下来，给他买

了一些食物和必需品，还存了一些钱。在确保他能度过整个冬天后，我开车走了。我在路上

很高兴，因为这个可怜的家伙很暖和，很受照顾。祝他未来生活得很好。我不想让他偿还我,

因为这对我来说只是一块蛋糕。

Tenyearslater,Ireceivedastrangecall.Ididn'tknowthenumber,andIdidn'trecognizethe

sound.Themanoppositesaid,"Doyourememberme?”IwasembarrassedbecauseIcouldn't

rememberanything.'*Youhelpedmethroughacoldwintertenyearsago."Hesaid.Ihadalight.

“It'syou.Howhaveyoubeen?'11enthused."I'mlivingagoodlifenowandIdon*thavetobe

hungryandcoldanymore."It'swarmtothinkofthatwinter,'*hesaid,“Thankyouforhelpingme

andgivingmehope.Ihavesetupseveralshelterstohelpmorepeoplelikemethatwinter,whichI

thinkisthebesttorepayyourkindness.n

十年后，我接到了一个奇怪的电话。我不知道号码，也认不出声音。对面的人说，“你还记

得我吗？"我很尴尬，因为我什么都不记得了。“十年前你帮我度过了一个寒冷的冬天。''他

说。我有一盏灯。“这是你的意思.你现在怎么样了？"我很热情。“我现在过得很好，我不

用再又饿又冷了。“想到那个冬天就很暖和，''他说，“谢谢你帮助我，给了我希望0那年冬

天，我建立了几个避难所来帮助更多像我这样的人，我认为这是最好的办法来报答你的好

意。”

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开。“我”在十年前的一个冬天遇到了一个饥寒交迫的人，感到非常同情,

所以给了他很多帮助，帮他度过了那个寒冷的冬天。十年后“我”接到这个人的电话，了解到

他现在过得很好.

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“在我最终开车送他去了收容所后，他非常感激我。”可知，第一段可描

写作者帮他在收容所安置好，他非常感激。

②由第二段首句内容“十年后，我接到了一个奇怪的电话“可知，第二段可描写作者和这个人

相谈甚欢，了解到这个人的近况并得知这个人建立了几个收容所来帮助更多的人。

2.续写线索：帮助安顿——回家——开心——接电话——相认——感谢——回报

3.词汇激活

行为类

①安顿好：getsettled/settledown

②建立：setup/build

情绪类

①感谢：showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful

②在意：minddoing/careabout

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Aftermakingsurehewouldmakeitthroughthewinter,Idroveaway.（动名词作宾

语）

[高分句型2]Ihavesetupseveralshelterstohelpmorepeoplelikemethatwinter,whichIthink

isthebesttorepayyourkindness.（which引导的定语从句）

第4篇夜遇老人

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的

词数应为150左右。

Kentwasamanagerofafurnitureagency.Hisestablishmentnearlywentbankrupt（彳到闭）

becauseofthewrongdecisionhehadmade.Hewassoregretfulanddepressedthatheplannedto

drivetoabaralonetoreleasehisemotions.

Itwasnearmidnightinanextremelycoldwinter,andthetemperaturewasminus9degrees

centigrade.Therewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Suddenly,afigureofanoldmadamenteredhis

lineofsight.Shewasstandingsidewaysnearaplatform,dressedinaplaincoat,dragginga

suitcase,andholdingaplasticbagintheotherhand.Theslightoldladywasseeminglymorethan

80.Shewastremblingincuttingwind.NowshekeptmotioningKentforaride.AlthoughKent

wassomewhatangryabouttheoldmadam'sdisturbing,hewouldn'tliketoleaveherinthecold

night.Henoticedshecoughedviolentlyandthoughtthatshemightbeillandreallyneededhelp.

Sohebrakednearher.

Themadamsaid,"Wouldyoupleasetakemeforaride?Icanofferdoublefare...nKent

inten-uptedher,"Iwillchargeyounothing!Comeon!”Themadampointedtoherluggageand

said,"Couldyouputmysuitcaseintothecar?uKentsteppedoutandputitinthetrunk.

Kentproceededtodrive.Hestoppedatapetrolstationwherehewantedtopurchasegallons

ofgasoline（汽油）.Duringtheintervaltheywaitedinaqueue,themadambeganhernarration,

"Couldyoupleasesendmetothecharityhouseinthesuburbs?Iwanttosendthemsomething.I

hadbeengivenhelpthere50yearsago.Thepresidentandworkerswereallgoodguys."Sheburst

intotears,"Nowthey'veallpassedaway.Thelifewastoughatthattime,butwealllovedand

caredabouteachother.Fveheldadesiretobebackthereagainforlong."Kentrealizedthe

madamwasrecallingasectionofthegoodmissingdays.Acomplicatedfeelingsurroundedhim,

andhedecidedtocancelhisplanandstaywiththeoldmadam.

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Afteratwo-hourdrive,theycametothegateoftheirdestination.

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Hearingthis,Kentlapsedintosilence,becauseheknewtheresthomewasforpatientswith

incurablediseases.

【范文】

Paragraph1：

Afteratwo-hourdrive,theycametothegateoftheirdestination.Itwasquietanddark.The

doorofthecharityhousewasclosedandaweaklightwentthroughtheguardroom.Kentgotoff

thecarandrangthebell.Anolddoorkeepercameout.Makingclearwhytheycame,theywere

invitedin.Theoldmadamhandedhersuitcaseovertothedoorkeeper,insideitbeingclothesarid

toysshecollected.Thentheylookedroundthehouseandleft.Onthewayback,theoldmadam

askedforanotherride,"Pleasesendmetotheresthomeinthetown,sir."

开车两小时后，他们来到了目的地门口。那里安静而黑暗。慈善机构的门关着，一盏微

弱的光线穿过警卫室。肯特下了车，按响了门铃。一个老守门员走了出来。弄清楚他们为什

么要来，他们就被邀请进来了。老夫人把她的手提箱交给了看门人，里面是她收集的衣服和

玩具。然后他们环顾四周的房子，离开了。在回来的路上，老太太要求再骑一次，“请把我

送到城里其余的家里。先生。”

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Hearingthis,Kentlapsedintosilence,becauseheknewtheresthomewasforpatientswith

incurablediseases."Ihavebeenseriouslyillforalongtimeandwillsoondieoflungcancer.I

comeouttosaygoodbyetomylife.NowIwillhavenoregretsbeforedeath.Thanksforyour

help!'1Themadammadeanexplanationcalmly,withabrightsmileonherface.Kentremained

silentforawhile.Hewaschewingoverwhatthemadamsaid,andgladthathecouldhelpher

realizethelastdesire.

听到这话，肯特就沉默了，因为他知道养老院是给不治之症患者准备的。“我已经得了

重病很长一段时间了，很快就会死于肺癌。我走出来是要和我的生活说再见了。现在我在死

前就不会后悔了。谢谢你的帮助！“夫人平静地解释道，脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。肯特郡沉默

了一会儿。他在嚼着夫人说的话，很高兴能帮助她实现最后的愿望。

【解析】

文章主要讲述了Kent在寒冷的夜晚遇到了一个老人，并同意带她郊区慈善机构的故事。

续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：两小时车程后，他们到达了目的地的大门。所以可以接着

写：天色很暗，到处都很安静，大门里的建筑里透出了微弱的光。Kent下车给门卫说明情

况后，门卫让他们进去。老人把装满衣服和玩具的箱子交给门卫。他们围着建筑四处转了一

下，然后离开了。路上，女士要求Kent把她送到市里的疗养院。

第二段的开头是：听了女士的话Kent陷入了沉思，因为他知道疗养院是专门为那些有不治

之症的病人准备的。看到Kent的样子，女士说:“我生了很严重病，已近是癌症晚期，很快

就到生命的尽头了。今天我是去和从前的生活说再见的，现在，我没有遗憾了。非常感谢你。”

女士说话的时候面带笑容，丝毫看不出悲伤。Kent此刻觉得很感激，感激他能有机会帮助

这位女士实现最后的愿望。

续写时需注意情节要符合逻辑，基础时态为一般过去时。

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关

系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Theoldmadamhandedhersuitcaseovertothe

doorkeeper,insideitbeingclothesaridtoysshecollected.中使用了独立主格；Themadammade

anexplanationcalmly,withabrightsmileonherface.中使用了with复合结构；Hewaschewing

overwhatthemadamsaid,andgladthathecouldhelpherrealizethelastdesire.中what弓I导宾语

从句。这些表达的使用使文章色彩纷呈。

第5篇丢失的戒指

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的

词数应为150左右。

ThefirstthingEileenKoreynoticedwhenshegotintothecarthatWednesdayafternoonin

earlyMaywasasmalldiamondringinthetray（托盘）betweenthefrontseats.Ithadn'tbeenthere

before.Weeksearlier,shehadtakenthecarintohavetheairbagreplaced.Thecarbelongedtoher

daughterandson-in-lawandshewashelpingthemout.Nowshewaspickingitup.That'swhen

shesawthering.Korey,64,ofLakeOswegoquicklycontactedherdaughterandson-in-lawtoask

iftheyweremissingadiamondringorifanyoftheirfriendshadreportedlosingaring.Theyboth

wroteback,sayingtheyhadnoideawhatshewastalkingabout.

Koreytooktheringtotheservicedeskatthegaragetoaskifanywomentechniciansmight

haveleftaringinthecarwhiletheywereworkingonit.Thewomanbehindthecountersaidonly

menworkedonthecars.

Koreyaskedifthedeskclerkcouldgetinformationfromtheguywhohadreplacedtheairbag.

Overatwo-wayradio（对讲机），Helbtsaidhe'dplacedtheringinthetraywhenitdroppedtothe

car'sfloorafterheopenedupthesteeringcolumntoreplacetheairbag.Hewasnotsurehowitgot

there.

Sheknewafriendwhowasajewelerandstoppedbytohaveherlookattheringtoseeifit

wasreal.Herfriendsaidthediamond,setinawhitegoldhand,wasworth$1,200andKorey

couldeasilysellitfor$500.Butshewouldn*tsellit.Aftermakingsuretheringdidn'tbelongto

anyoneinherfamily-oranyoneattheautoshopKoreytrackeddownthefirstownerofthecar

usingpaperworkshefoundintheglovebox.Herdetectiveworkledhertoadealershipin

Beaverton,andthecar'sfirstowners：DanielandAshleighHannah.TheHannahshadpurchased

thesmallringwhentheygotengagedandweresavingmoneytobuyahouse.

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OneSundayafternoon,theyweredrivingtoaneventintheircarbuthadtostopatthebank

andusetheATMmachine.

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Thecouplesearchedtheparkinglotandthecarforhours.Nothing.

【范文】

Paragraph1：

OneSundayafternoon,theyweredrivingtoaneventintheircarbuthadtostopatthebank

andusetheATMmachine.Ashleigh,showingherhusbandwheretoturn,gesturedwildlywithher

lefthandandfelttheringslipoff.However,whensearchingthecarcarefully,theyweren'tableto

findit.Theyfigureditfelloutoftheopendriver'ssidewindow.

一个星期天日下午，他们当时开车去参加活动，但不得不在银行停下来使用自动取款机。

阿什莉告诉丈夫去哪里转，用左手疯狂地做了个手势，感觉戒指掉了。然而，当他们仔细搜

查汽车时，他们却找不到它。他们发现它从敞开的司机侧窗里掉了下来。

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Thecouplesearchedtheparkinglotandthecarforhours.Nothing.Later,backathome,the

Hannahhassearchedthroughthecarforhours.Nothing.Yearslater,Danielboughthiswifea

muchlargerengagementring.Finally,thismonthKoreymadecontactwithDanielHannah.They

met,andasarewardforreturningthering,shesimplyaskedthatDanielsendheraphotoofthe

momenthesurprisedhiswifewithherlostengagementring.OnMother'sDay,Ashleigh'sson

gaveherthering.Itdidn'tfitandwasmuchsmallerthanherreplacementring,butnoneofthat

mattered.

这对夫妇搜查了停车场和汽车好几个小时。没有什么内容。后来，回到家里，汉娜已经

在车里搜索了好几个小时。没有什么内容。几年后，丹尼尔给妻子买了一枚更大的订婚戒指。

最后，这个月，科瑞和丹尼尔•汉娜取得了联系。他们见面了，作为归还戒指的回报，她只

是要求丹尼尔给她一张照片，这是他给妻子丢失的订婚戒指的那一刻。母亲节那天，阿什利

的儿子把戒指给了她。它不合适，比她的替代戒指要小得多，但这些都不重要。

【解析】

文章讲述了EileenKorey在车修理后发现里面有一枚戒指，但是问了她的女儿和女婿，

以及修理店的员工，他们都说不是自己的。后来她问了车的第一个主人，才知道戒指是他们

的。

续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：一个周末的下午，他们开车去参加一个活动，但当时需要

在路边停下，去自动提款机上取钱。所以可以接着写：丈夫取好钱后，妻子AshleighHannah

挥手让他过来开车，因为动作太大，戒指从手指上滑落。但当时他们没有发现。第二段的开

头是：夫妻两在停车场和车上找了很久。所以可以接着写：他们什么也没有发现。回到家后，

他们又在车上仔细地找了几遍，结果是一样的。后来，他们不得不重新买一个订婚戒指。当

Korey联系他们时，他们才知道原来戒指掉在车里了。见面时，Korey把戒指还给了Daniel,

Daniel十分感激。他回家把戒指拿给妻子，虽然这个戒指比后来买的那个小得多，但是在

Ashleigh看来两个都一样的珍贵。

续写时要注意时态，续写的内容要符合逻辑。范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语

篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，

例如：Ashleigh,showingherhusbandwheretoturn,gesturedwildlywithherlefthandandfeltthe

ringslipoff.中使用了现在分词作状语；Theymet,andasarewardforreturningthering,she

simplyaskedthatDanielsendheraphotoofthemomenthesurprisedhiswifewithherlost

engagementring.中that引导虚拟语气的宾语从句。这些表达的使用使文章色彩纷呈。

第6篇救出小孩

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的

词数应为150左右。

Whenhis13-year-oldsoncamehomelatefromschoollastweek,JohnMorrissettefiguredhe

hadjustgoneon“oneofhisusualwalks”.Itwasn'tuntilthenextdaythatMorrissettefoundout

hisintellectuallydisabledboy,Michael,hadbeenfoundinaWinnipeggarbagebinas

temperaturesdroppedto—15℃.

Morrissettesaidhissonhadbeenbeatenbytwomen,thrownintheDumpsterandleftto

freeze.Hewasfoundafewhourslaterbyawomanwholethimout."Iwasveryangrywiththe

guyswhowoulddothistomyson,“MorrissettesaidinaninterviewThursday.€tYoucanseehe's

aharmlesschild.Hedoesn'ttalkmuch.Hekeepstohimselfandtwomenhavehurthim.,,

Theyoungteenagerwasn'tseriouslyhurt,butMorrissettesaidhe'snotlettinghimwalk

homealoneanymore.Thefather'sfaithinhumanityisalittleshaken.Morrissettesaidhecouldn't

believetherearepeople