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环境保护话题作文策马前途须努力,莫学龙钟虚叹息。目录01佳作赏析03评分标准04学以致用02写作运用RubbishSortingStartswithMe
①Nowadays,
moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof
rubbishsorting.Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentallyfriendly
society.Rubbishsortinghas②madeagreatcontributiontoenvironmental
protection.Atthesametime,
itcanreducerubbishgenerationandrecycle
rubbish.Herearesomesuggestionsforrubbishsorting.
Firstofall③,
wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsortingthrough
booksandtheInternet.Besides,
wecanparticipateinvoluntaryserviceto
helppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second③,
wearesupposedtoputallkindsof
rubbishintodifferentcolouredtrashcans.Third③,
wecanmakeoldclothes
intoshoppingbagsandwasteintoart.Andthemostimportantthingisto
reducetheuseofplasticbags.
④Ifallofustryourbesttosortrubbish,
we’llleadabetterlife.Allofus
candoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentandencourageotherstosorttheir
rubbish.⑤Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.
第一段:重要性和意义第二段:分析做法第三段:表达观点
佳作赏析
①Nowadays,
moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof
rubbishsorting.②
Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentallyfriendly
society.Rubbishsortinghas③
madeagreatcontributiontoenvironmental
protection.Atthesametime,
itcanreducerubbishgenerationandrecycle
rubbish.Herearesomesuggestionsforrubbishsorting.如今,越来越多的人已经意识到...的重要性
写作积累对我们来说,做...很重要Itisimportantforustodosth.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof...为...做出巨大的贡献vmakeagreatcontributiontoreduce减少Firstofall③,
wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsortingthroughbooksandtheInternet.Besides,
wecanparticipatein
voluntaryservicetohelppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second③,
wearesupposedtoputallkindsofrubbishintodifferentcolouredtrashcans.Third③,
wecanmakeoldclothesintoshoppingbagsandwasteintoart.Andthemostimportantthingistoreducetheuseofplasticbags.逻辑顺序短语Firstofall,Tostartwith,What'smore,Inaddition,Lastbutnotleast,Atlast,Finally,Moreover,Furthermore,Besides,Second,Third,
④Ifallofustryourbesttosortrubbish,
we’llleadabetterlife.Allofuscandoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentandencourageotherstosorttheir
rubbish.⑤Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.Ifallofustryourbesttodosth....,wewill...Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon如果我们尽我们最大努力做......我们将会......现在,让我们齐心协力,行动起来。sortrubbish(动词短语)垃圾分类rubbishsorting(名词短语)
写作运用时态一般现在时人称第一人称结构123生态环境现状环保措施呼吁123Pre-writing1While-writing
但近年来,地球上发生了许多灾难,同时很多人破坏环境。Dearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inShenzhen.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedonontheearth.manypeopledidsomethingwrongtotheenvironment.Meanwhile,1
因此,
越来越多的人意识到环境的重要性。我们应该为我们的家园做出贡献。Dearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inShenzhen.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearth.Meanwhile,manypeopledidsomethingwrongtotheenvironment.
moreandmorepeopleenvironment.WemakecontributionstoAsaresult,Therefore,Asaresult,While-writingmoreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceof...makecontributionstoshouldourhomeshoulddosth.besupposedtoneedtodosth.hadbetterdosth.haverealizedtheimportanceofWhile-writing
首先,在日常生活中,节约用水和能源对我们来说很重要。比如,当我们离开房间时应该关灯。Firstofall,Itisimportantforsb.todousForexample,Weturnoffthelightinourdailylife.2Itisimportantforsb.todoturnoffthelightsavewaterandenergysavewaterandenergyaresupposedtowhenweleavetheroom.While-writing
其次,为了减少空气污染,我们应该出行乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行。First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.What’smore,inordertobybus,bybikeonfoot.goout2gooutairpollutioninordertoweorreducehadbetterairpollution,reduceWhile-writing
另外,我们要在扔垃圾前学会把垃圾分类,我们最好少用塑料袋。First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.Second,inordertoreducetheairpollution,we’dbettergooutbybike,bybusoronfoot.Besides,webeforeWeplasticbags.sortouttherubbish2sortouttherubbishplasticbagsneedto
uselearntohadbetternotwethrow
it.
While-writing
最后,我们必须保护野生动物,我们吃他们是不对的。First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.What’smore,inordertoreducetheairpollution,we’dbettergooutbybike,bybusoronfoot.Besides,weshouldlearntosortouttherubbishbeforewethrowit.We’dbetternotuseplasticbags.Lastbutnotleast,wewildanimals.protect2wildanimalsItiswrongofustodosth.mustItiswrongofustodoeatthem.While-writing总而言之,在我看来,毫无疑问的是如果我们尽我们最大努力去保护环境,我们将会过上更好的生活。现在,让我们齐心协力,行动起来!
Let’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.
wewillAllinall,protectenvironmentlead3IfallofustryourbesttoLet’spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon如果我们尽我们最大努力做......我们将会......现在,让我们齐心协力,行动起来。Allinall,inmyopinion,thereisnodoubtthat
④abetterlife.inmyopinion,Ifallofustryourbesttodosth....,wewill...thereisnodoubtthat...thestandardofevaluation评分标准Let’sTryOurBesttoProtecttheEnvironmentDearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inShenzhen.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearthandunusualweatherappearedveryoften.Besidesthebadthingswerecausedbytheterribleenvironment,manypeoplealsodidsomethingwrongtotheenvironment.AsstudentsinShenzhen,weshouldtryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.First,itisimportantforustosavewaterinourdailylife.Weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavetheroom.Second,inordertoreducetheairpollution,we’dbettergooutbybike,bybusoronfoot.Thesewayscanhelpprotecttheenvironment.Third,weshouldlearntosortouttherubbishbeforewethrowit.We’dbetternotuseplasticbags.What’smore,wemustprotectthewildanimals.Itiswrongofustoeatthem.Let’sstartfromdoingsmallthingsandtryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.Ifweallkeepdoingthesethings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stryourbest!
正式写作
学以致用IV.学以致用(一)在6月5日“世界环境日”到来之际,你们社区打算举行义卖活动为绿
化小区环境出一份力。请你根据以下表格提示,用英语写一篇倡议书,呼
吁更多人参与。
学以致用ACommunityCharitySaleTimeontheafternoonofJune1stPlaceatthecommunitygateItemsschoolthings,
toys,
clothes,
etc.Purposetoraisemoneytoplantmoretreesandflowers
学以致用
学以致用
Weplantoholdacharitysaleatthe
suchasschoolthings,
toys,
clothesandbooks.Ofcourse,
ifyouhavespare
time,
wealsoneedsomevolunteersforthisevent.Themoneyweraiseis
usedforplantingmoretreesandflowers.
学以致用
Asweallknowtheenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseand
worsetheseyears.SoIthinkwemustdosomethingtoprotectthe
environment.
Butwhatcanwedo?Firstly,
wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplastic
bagswhenwegoshopping.Ithelpstoprotecttheenvironment.Secondly,
wecanreusetheoldtextbooksaspossibleaswecan.What’smore,
we
shouldalsoneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenweleavethe
classroomsinordertosaveenergy.
Inaword,
ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,
there
willbelesspollutionandourlifewillbebetter.ThereisonlyoneEarth.I
hopeeveryonecanprotectourenvironmentwell.
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