2024届高三4月天域联盟联考英语试题应用文读后续写讲评课件

2024届高三4月天域联盟应用文&读后续写讲评假定你是李华，你校英语报将以最美中国节为主题举办学生征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日，内容包括:1.主要节日习俗;2.节日意义。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。AnAmazingChineseFestival.你的英国交换家庭Chris一家想了解中国的传统节日清明节TombSweepingDay(QingmingFestival)，请你写一封email给他们。内容如下：1.简单介绍该节日;2.告知相关节日活动;3.询问对方是否有类似节日。

DearChris,

Thankyouforyourletter.I’mreallygladtohearthatyouareinterestedinTomb-SweepingDay

andhappytosharewhatIknowwithyou.

Tomb-SweepingDay,alsocalledQingmingFestival,isatraditionalChineseholiday.It’smostlyatimeforpeopletohonortheirancestors.OnApril5,peoplevisittheirancestors’tombs.Activities,suchasspringoutings,havingQingtuanandtreeplantingareotherwaysinmemoryofdeceased

relatives.Alltheseremindusthatweshouldlookintothefutureandembracehope,aswellaswishourancestorsrestinpeace.Ihopethislettercansatisfyyourcuriosity.Isthereasimilarholidayinyourculture?Ifthereis,I’dliketohearaboutit.Yours,LiHua体裁：书信体裁：演讲稿扭曲事实春节/中秋节范文赏析AnAmazingChineseFestivalOneofmyfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestivalsistheMid-AutumnFestival.Itiscelebratedonthe15thdayofthe8thmonthofthelunarcalendarwhenthemoonisatitsfullestandbrightest.

Thisfestivalhasarichhistoryspanningover3,000years.Chinesepeopleworshipedthemoontogivethanksfortheharvestandtoencouragethe“harvest-givinglight"toreturninthecomingyear.Nowadaysthefullmoonisasymboloffamilyreunions.

Familiesgathertoadmirethefullmoonwhileenjoyingtastymooncakeswhoseroundshapeandsweetflavorsymbolizecompletenessandsweetness.TheMid-AutumnFestivalholdsdeepculturalsignificanceinChinesetradition.Itsymbolizesunityandharmonywithinfamilies,muchlikehowthefullmoonbringseveryonetogetherunderitslight.Ihavebeenblessedbymanyactsofkindnessthroughoutmylife.Buttheonethatstandsoutthemostwastheonethathappenedattheblacksmith(铁匠)shopatOldSturbridgeVillage.Whenmysonwaslittle,itwasverycleartomethattherewassomethingdifferentabouthim.Aftercountlesstripstodifferentspecialistsandthecompletionofextensivetesting,adiagnosisofaparticularchromosomal(染色体的)disorderwasmade,Hewasconstantlyinmotionandhadnosenseofdanger,requiringhiscaregiverswatchhiseverymovetopreventhimfromrunningawayorheadingintotraffic.Healsolovedstrangers,thinkingthateveryonewashispotentialbestfriend.Hegreetedeveryonewithahug.However,noonewaswillingtoacceptmyson'swell-intendedembrace,especiallygiventhathelookedmucholderthanhisactualageyetactedmuchyounger.Althoughmysonwasstilltooyoungtorecognizewhenhewasbeingrejected,everyhurtfulword,unkindrefusal,orlookofpitybrokemyheart,Ihadstartedtobeafraidoftakinghimoutinpublic.Oneday,atthevillage,Iwalkedaroundholdingmyson'shand,readytoprotecthimfrombeinghurt.Aswestrolledalong,wepassedbyablacksmithshop.Therhythmicpoundingofthehammerandthesparksthatflewinalldirectionscaughtmyson'sattention.Theprocessofturningseeminglyworthlessmaterialsintovaluableandvisuallystunningpiecesthroughheating,hammering,andforging(锻造)seemedlikemagictohim.Astheblacksmithpausedhisworkandwipedthesweatfromhisbrow,mysoncouldn'tcontainhiscuriosityanymore.Heranstraightovertotheblacksmith,wrappedhisarmsaroundtheman'slegs,andaskedifhecouldhaveatry.Myheartstoppedatthatmoment.Iexpectedthathe,likealmosteveryoneelsethatwehadencountered,wouldpushhimaway,mutteringsomethingaboutthisnotbeingpossible.Mainplot作者“我”有一位身患疾病的儿子。虽然儿子还小感受不到，但我时常担心儿子会遭到他人异样的对待，从而对他幼小的心灵造成伤害。有一天，我们去拜访老斯特布里奇村，儿子主动要求到铁匠铺里去游玩。没有想到，村里的一位善良的铁匠给了儿子温暖的陪伴和关爱，让儿子体验到梦想成真的快乐，也让我感受到人间尚有温暖在。Whathedidnext,though,broughtmetotears.Whenthathourwasup,mysonproudlywalkedaway,withthepieceofironmedal.Whatdidthemando?WhydidIcry?Whatdidmysondo?HowdidIreact?WhatdidItrytoexpress?Whathedidnext,though,broughtmetotears.Insteadofpushingmysonawaylikealmosteveryoneelse,hekneltdownandgentlyreturnedahug.Thatsweetmanthenlookedatmewithakindexpression,andaskedifitwouldbeokayformysontohelphimwithhiswork.Inoddedthroughmytears.Theblacksmithsmiledwarmlyandhandedmysonasmallhammer.Heremainedpatient,answeringmyson’sincessantquestionsandspendingthenexthourallowingmysonto“help”himasheworkedtheforge.Iwatchedastheyhammeredandforgedtogether,witnessinganironbarbeingtransformedintoadazzlingmedal.与原文的情节协同

Whathedidnext,though,broughtmetotears.Insteadofpushingmysonawaylikealmosteveryoneelse,hekneltdownandgentlyreturnedahug.

Thatsweetmanthenlookedatmewithakindexpression,andaskedifitwouldbeokayformysontohelphimwithhiswork.Inoddedthroughmytears.Theblacksmithsmiledwarmlyandhandedmysonasmallhammer.Heremainedpatient,answeringmyson’sincessantquestionsandspendingthenexthourallowingmysonto“help”himasheworkedtheforge.Iwatchedastheyhammeredandforgedtogether,witnessinganironbarbeingtransformedintoadazzlingmedal.与原文的人物形象协同

Whenthathourwasup,mysonproudlywalkedaway,withthepieceofironmed