Unit+8+Literature+Writing+Workshop 高中英语北师大新版（2019）选择性必修第三册

Unit8LiteratureWritingWorkshopAContinuationofaStory

高二英语组

张崇1．___________v.继续→___________adj.

继续的

[kənˌtinju'eiʃən]n.延续，

继续部分2.aboard[ə'bɔ:d]prep.&adv.在（船，飞机，火车）上；

上（船，飞机，火车）3.seaman['si:mən]n.水手，海员，水兵4.comfort['kʌmfət]vt.安慰，抚慰n.舒适感，满足感5.take…forgranted视…为理所当然（而对其不重视）6.emotional[i'məuʃənəl]adj.情感的,敏感的,情绪激动的continuationcontinuouscontinuegoaboard上船(飞机，火车)comfortableadj.舒服的comfortablyadv.舒服地scholar['skɔlə]n.有学问的人;学者poison['pɔizən]n.毒药,毒素,毒物vt.毒害,毒杀forgive[fə'giv]vi.&vt.原谅,宽恕,饶恕fence[fens]vi.击剑n.栅栏,围栏,篱笆handkerchief['hæŋkətʃif]n.手帕noble['nəubəl]adj.高尚的,崇高的,贵族的forgivesbfor(doing)sth原谅某人(做)某事1.Withinhoursofthenews,Helenarrived___________(comfort)herheartbrokenfriend.2.Walkoutofour__________(comfort)zoneandtrynewthings!3.Afterfiveminutesofwaiting,theyfinally_______________(aboard)theship!4.Youcan’ttakeforgrantedthatthey’lllistentoyou.(英译汉)______________________________________________________5.Iwillneverforgiveher______whatshedid.tocomfortcomfortwentaboard你不能把他们听你话当作理所当然。forWhathappenedinthestory“TheLastLeaf”?2Whatmighthappennext?3Whatisimportantincontinuingastory?1.Youaregoingtowriteacontinuationofthestory“TheLastLeaf”.Discussthequestionswithyourpartner.ReadforWriting

2.Readacontinuationof20,000LeaguesUndertheSea.Answerthequesions.1.Wheredidthispartofthestoryhappen?2.Whatdidthenarratormeet?3.WhatdidNedthinkwouldhappentothem?4.Howisthecontinuationconnectedwiththeoriginalstory?

AContinuationof20000LeaquesundertheSea

Wewereaboardthemachinenow,andI

shookwithcoldinthedarkness.Myeyescouldseenothing.Wewerealone.Icouldn’tsaywhereIwas,(norcouldlimagine),Allwasblack,andIwasamazedthatevenaftersomeminutes,myeyeshadnotbeenabletoseeeventhesmallestshape.lcouldhearNedandConseilbreathingquickly.Theywerenervous,too.

Ourprisonwassuddenlylit,andweclosedoureyespainfullyatthelight.(There

camethesoundofaheavydooropening),andtwoseamenappeared.Theyexamineduswithgreatattention,withoutsayingaword.Thentheyshutthedooragainandleft.“Wewilldieinthisprison!”criedNed.“Nonsense!”Isaid.“Wehavesurvivedworsethanthis!”IdidnotcompletelybelievethewordsIsaid,butIknewtheywouldcomfortNedandConseil.

Thedooropenedagain,andthemenreturnedwithwateranddrybiscuits.Hardlyalargemeal,butitmademerealisejusthowhungrylwas.Weateinsilence.“Tomorrow,wetakeyouhome,”saidoneofthemeninadeepvoice.“Butfirstyoumusttellushowyoufoundourmachine”smiled.Iwouldneveragaintakemyhomeforgranted.ReadforWriting

Readacontinuationof20,000LeaguesUndertheSea.Answerthequesions.

1.Wheredidthispartofthestoryhappen?2.Whatdidthenarratormeet?3.WhatdidNedthinkwouldhappentothem?4.Howisthecontinuationconnectedwiththeoriginalstory?Ithappenedinsidethesubmarine.Thenarratormettwoseamenofthesubmarine.Theywoulddie.Itusesthesamecharactersastheoriginalstory,andittellswhathappensnext.4.Write2-3sentencesasthecontinuationof“TheLastLeaf”.UsesimilarexpressionsintheSentenceBuilderthatmakethedescriptionvividandlively.Continuation(2-3sentences)Johnsywaslostinguilt.

Johnsy

and

Sue

sat

behindthewindowgazingatthelastleafthatMr.Behrmanhadpaintedwithtearsinsilence.Thentheylookedateachothersadly.ComposeYourWriting5.Drawastorymapforyourcontinuationof“TheLastLeaf”.Makesureyourcontinuationiscoherentwiththeoriginalstory.WritingHelpIt’simportantto:•understandthesetting,thecharactersandtheplotoftheoriginalstory;•startyourcontinuationwithanewplotbasedonwhathashappened;•includedifferenttypesofdetailslikesensorydetails,actionsandthoughts;•createdialoguesthatsoundrealandnatural;•writethecontinuationinthesametoneandtenseastheoriginalstory.看课本P30为

TheLastLeaf进行续写。

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应

位置作答。HearingwhatSuesaid,Johnsywaslostinguilt.

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.Sincethen,theydevotedtheirwholehearttothecauseofart.

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.MyStoryMapTitleSettingCharactersNewplotThedevelopmentofthestoryEndingThespiritneverdiesathree-storybuildinginGreenwichVillage,afterMr.BehrmanpassedawayJohnsyandSueJohnsyandSueworkedharderinartafterMr.Behrmandied.Theydecidedtogetoninlifeandsharethistouchingstorywithpeople.Withtheircontinuoushardwork,theysuccessfullyheldanartexhibitionoftheirpaintingsandsomeremainingworksfromMr.Behrman.Thelocalnewspaperreportedaboutthis.Somerichmenboughttheirworks.JohnsyandSueraisedacharitytosupportpoorpeoplewithpneumonia.Sharewhatyouwillwriteinclass.

ShowTimeComposeYourWriting

HearingwhatSuesaid,Johnsywaslostinguilt.

Johnsy

and

Sue

sat

behindthewindowgazingatthelastleafthatMr.Behrmanhadpaintedwithtearsinsilence.Thent