高三英语二轮复习读后续写助人类+难忘的父亲节+讲义

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasDale'sthirdSundayvolunteeringattheretirementhome(养老院).Hehadthoughtitwouldbeagoodwaytogiveback.Buttodayhejustfelttired.Whileonashortbreak,Daletookawalkthroughthegarden,Therewerepeoplesittingonbenches,chattingtogether.Awomansatknitting,lookingverypleasedwithherself.Thestrandsofbrightly-coloredyarn(纱线)disappearedquicklythroughherhands.Acrossthecourtyardtherewasamansittingaloneatatablewithachessboard(棋)infrontofhim.Dalewatchedwithcuriosityasthemanstaredatthepieces(子),movedthemanddidthesamefromtheothersideoftheboard.Onhiswayhomeafterthedayhadended,Dalefoundhimselfthinkingabouttheman:Howhewashunched(背的)overindeepthought,playingagameagainsthimself.Howodd,hethought.EachSunday,Dalewouldseethemandoingthesamething.Whileeveryoneelsetalkedwithoneanotherorhappilycarriedon,themanwouldsit,slightlyhunchedover,andscratchhischin.Hiseyesrarelycameoffthechessboard.这是戴尔第三个星期天在养老院做志愿者(养老院).他认为这将是一个很好的回报方式。但今天他只是觉得累了。在一次短暂的休息中，戴尔在花园里散步。有人坐在长椅上，一起聊天。一个女人坐在那里编织，看起来很得意。几股色彩鲜艳的纱线(纱线)很快就从她的手中消失了。在院子的另一边，有一个人独自坐在一张摆着棋盘的桌子旁(棋)在他面前。戴尔好奇地看着那人盯着碎片看(子),移动它们，并从板的另一侧进行同样的操作。一天结束后，在回家的路上，戴尔发现自己在想这个男人：他是怎么驼背的(背的)陷入沉思，和自己玩游戏。真奇怪，他想。每个星期天，戴尔都会看到那个人做同样的事情。当其他人互相交谈或愉快地继续交谈时，这个男人会坐着，微微弯腰，挠他的下巴。他的目光很少离开棋盘。OneSunday,Dalewenttothegardenonhisbreak,expectingtoseethemanathisnormalspot.Buthewasn'tthere.ItwasFather'sDay,andthereweremanyvisitorsattheretirementhome.Theyhadjoyfulgatherings,enjoyingeachother'scompany.Daleshruggedandthoughtthemanmustbebusywithhisfamily.Thatafternoon,Dalewasmoppingthehallwayswhenhehappenedtopassbytheman'sroom.Thedoorwasslightlyopen,andhecouldseethemansittinginachairnexttothewindow,peeringoutatthecourtyard.Daleknockedlightlyandaskedtocomein.Themannodded.Dalesawacollectionofframed(放在框中的)photographsonthebedsidetable.“Arethoseyourchildren?"heasked.“Yes,they'reallgrownandlivefaraway.Theyhavetheirownkidsnow,"hereplied.Dale,notwantingthemantobealoneonFather'sDay,hadanidea.一个星期天，戴尔在休息时去了花园，希望能在他正常的地方看到那个男人。但他不在那里。那天是父亲节，养老院有很多访客。他们欢聚在一起，享受彼此的陪伴。戴尔耸耸肩，心想这个男人一定是在忙于他的家庭。那天下午，戴尔正在打扫走廊时，碰巧路过那个男人的房间。门微微开着，他可以看到那个人坐在窗户旁边的椅子上，凝视着外面的院子。戴尔轻轻地敲了敲门，要求进来。那人点了点头。戴尔看到了一组镶框的(放在框中的)床头柜上的照片。“这些是你的孩子吗？”他问道。“是的，他们都长大了，住在很远的地方。他们现在有了自己的孩子，”他回答。戴尔不想让这个男人在父亲节独自一人，他有了一个主意。续写部分:Paragraph1:Hewentoutsideandgotthechessboardfromthetable.Paragraph2:Dalewasgladthathevolunteered要求:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。五要素分析：I.1.Thestorytookplaceinaretirementhome.2.AnoldmanandDale,avolunteer.原文中其他人和这个人进行了对比：Peoplesatonbenches,.chattingtogether.Awomansatknitting,lookingverypleased.Thestrandsofbrightly-coloredyarndisappearedquicklythroughherhands.Amansatalonewithachessboard.Hewashunchedoverindeepthoughtplayingagameagainsthimself.2.Everyoneelsetalkedwithoneanotherorhappilycarriedon.Themanwouldsit.slightlyhunchedover,andscratchhischin.Hiseyesrarelycameoffthechessboard.3.Thereweremanyvisitors.Theyhadjoyfulgatherings,enjoyingeachother'scompany.Themansatnexttothewindowinhisroom，peeringoutatthecourtyardwithacollectionofframedphoto-graphsonthebedsidetable.养老院里其他人都是开心快乐的而这位老人却是伤心孤独的。老人不开心孤独的原因：Maybethethoughtofhisfamilymadehimhomesick,andthelivelyatmosphereoutsidemadehimfeelevenlonelier.故事线的发展：1.Daleinvitedthemantoplayagameofchess.2.Themanfeltsurprisedandhesitantatfirst.3.Daleplayedchesswiththemansometimes,duringwhichDaletalkedwiththemanandlearnedchessskills.4.ThemanfeltgratefulforDale'scompany,whileDalefeltinspiredbysuchaspecialexperience.Resolution:Dalelearnedthemeaningofhelpingothers.情绪描写高分积累：惊讶：1.Hiseyeswidened,surprisewrittenalloverhisface.2.Histhroattightenedandwordsseemedtofreezeonhistongue.犹豫：Hestaredatthephotographsblanklyinsilence.Hehesitated,hiseyelidsdrooping,andanawkwardsilencefell.感动：Hisvoicevibratedwithexcitement,andhiseyesshone.Hislipstrembled,andtearswelledupinhiseyes.感激：Awarmsmilespreadacrosshisface,hiseyesradiantwithjoywhenhewon.Hiswrinkledfacelitupwithasmile.参考范文Hewentoutsideandgotthechessboardfromthetable.Inacheerfulvoice,Daleinvitedtheoldmantoplayagameofchess.Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedup,eyeswidenedandsurprisewrittenalloverhisface.Yet,insteadofresponding,hejustturnedhiseyesbacktothephotographsinsilence.ThenDaleaskedagainsoftly.Thistime,theoldmanacceptedreluctantlyandbegantomovethepiecesonthechessboard.Daletookhistimewitheverymovetospendmoretimewiththeoldman.Whenthelastmovewasmade,theoldmanwassopleasedthathistime-wrinkledfacelitupwithaglimmerofasmileinhiseyes.“ThankyouforgivingmeaFather'sDay.”Dalewasgladthathevolunteered.Forhim,theexperienceattheretirementhomewasunforgettable.Beforehemettheoldman,hehadonlyconsideredvolunteeringachancetoenrichhislife.Butitwasthatchessgamewiththeoldmanthattouchedhimdeeplyandtaughthimthemeaningofhappiness:Truehappinessliesinone'swhole-hearteddev