大学英语留学英语雅思押题模拟写作预测题作文分析讲解

目录

媒体类....................................................................3

国际类..................................................................12

犯罪类..................................................................18

政府类..................................................................21

工作类..................................................................27

教育类..................................................................32

社会类.................................................................47

环境类...................................................................61

文化类..................................................................70

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媒体类

1.Nowadaysconsumersaresurroundedbycorporateadvertising.Towhatextentdoyou

agreethatconsumersareinfluencedbyadvertisements?Whatmeasuresshouldbetaken

toprotectthem?(Causes&Solutions)

Nowadays,manypeopleareconcernedthatadvertisementsareeverywhere,whichaffects

howtheyperceivetheimportanceofthings.Atthesametime,howeverthereissome

uncertaintyabouttheextentoftheproblem,andhowconsumersmightbeprotected.Thisessay

willexaminetheissuesinanefforttoreachsomeconclusions.

Tobeginwith,theriseincommercialmessagesisasymptomofglobalization,thepowerof

theinternetandthegrowingeconomy.Marketingprofessionalsarguethattheirpublicrelations

campaignsempowerthepublictomakemoreinformeddecisionsabouttheproductstheybuy.

Moreover,modernmediahaveelevatedadvertisingtoanartformwhichmanyconsideran

entertaininganddecorativeenhancementtotheurbanenvironment.

Ontheotherhand,advertisersfrequentlyresorttomisleadingmessagestoboostthesalesof

theirgoods,whichcouldandshouldbecontrolledbygovernmentregulation.Inaddition,

manycommercialmessagesarebroadcastindiscriminately;depictionofalcoholandcigarettes,

forexample,hasanadverseeffectontheimpressionablemindsofyoungpeople,butthisagain

isrestrictedinmanysocieties.Furthermore,incessantbrainwashingbypowerfulbrandscan

havenegativeresults,asinthecaseoftheyoungmanwhosoldhiskidneyforani-Phone,and

parentshaveamajorresponsibilitytocounterexcessivematerialisminthemindsoftheir

children.

Tosummarize,thereisnodoubtthatadvertisingcansometimesbeartistic,andhelpfulto

consumersinlearningaboutandchoosingproducts.Atthesametime,however,marketers

areknowntodistortfacts,andunbridledconsumerismleadstoarangeofsocialproblems.In

thefinalanalysis,therefore,wecanonlyconcludethatpeopleshouldlearntoshutoutthe

noiseofcommercialmessagesandbecomelessmaterialisticforahappierlife.(290words)

*加粗的为discoursemarkers(话语标记语)，可用于提升写作cohesion(连贯性)。

Causes&Solutions思路解析:

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本文结构类似于Causes&Solutions,其中causes改为讨论是否同意题目所言。

1段：改写标题+加粗内容。（1段和4段加粗内容可直接使用）

题目：Nowadaysconsumersaresurroundedbycorporateadvertising.

范文：Nowadays,manypeopleareconcernedthatadvertisementsareeverywhere,which

affectshowtheyperceivetheimportanceofthings.

2段：本段阐述是否同意。主题句（随着全球化发展，广告信息四处可见）；观点一

（让消费者有足够知情权和信息筛选，来挑选自己想要的产品）；观点二（广告成为

一种艺术形式，可以装点城市环境）。

3段：本段回答解决方案。方法一（政府需要对广告内容进行监管）；方法二（带有歧

视、不健康信息的广告应该被管制）；方法三（父母应当教育孩子正确的金钱、物质

观念）。

4段：总结事实+总结解决方法+提升文章主题。总结事实（广告有时候可以帮助消费

者进行选择）；总结解决方法（不负责任广告商提供的信息可能产生社会问题）；提

升文章主题（少看广告，有益身心健康）。

推荐高分词汇/词组：

1.perceivevt.理解，认知vi.感到，感知；认识到

行！］句：Womensmagazinesareoftenperceivedtobesuperficial.

2.marketingprofessionals市场营销方面的专业人士

professionaln.专业人士

彳列句：ImaprofessionalandIhavetoconductmyselfinaprofessionalmanner.

3.publicrelationscampaigns公关活动

4elevatevt.提升；举起；提升…的职位

例句：Theyhopedtoelevatethepositionofwomeninsociety.

5.resortto求助于，诉诸于

例句：Hewouldneverresorttothelawcourtstoresolvehermaritalproblems.

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6.boostthesalesof促进…的俏售

boostvt.增加；促进，提高

例句：Weneedabigwintoboostourconfidence

7.indiscriminatelyadv,不加选择地；任意地

例句：Theyfiredindiscriminatelyintothecrowd.

8.depictionn,描写,叙述

例句：Idisapproveofthedepictionofviolenceontelevision.

9.impressionableadj.（人，尤指年轻人）易受影响的

例句：Thelawisintendedtoprotectyoungandimpressionableviewers.

10.berestrictedin被限制于

11.incessantadj.不停的，持续不断的

彳列句：Thenoiseofbombsandgunswasincessant.

12.materialisticadj.物质享乐主义的；物质至上的

例句：Duringthe1980sBritainbecameaverymaterialisticsociety.

13.distortvt.扭曲；使失真；曲解vi.扭曲；变形

例句：Thesurveymethodscandistortreality.

H.unbridledadj,放肆的；无拘束的

彩！|句：unbridledambition/enthusiasm/lust

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2.Todaythehighsalesofconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnotthe

realneedsofsociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(Agree/Disagree)

Nowadays,thereisawidespreadbeliefthatconstantaggressivesalescommunications

compelpeopletomakeunnecessarypurchases.Atthesametime,however,thereissome

uncertaintyastothemeritsanddemeritsofthisviewpoint.Thisessaywillexaminethe

issueinanefforttoseekaconclusion.

Tobeginwith,thereisnodoubtthateconomicdevelopmentcreatesconsumptionneeds

independentlyofadvertising,oneobviousexamplebeingourmodern-dayrelianceon

technologicaldevices.New-generationsmartphonesareessential,notonlyforbasic

communicationneedsbutalsoforshoppingandbanking,thereforetheseconsumergoodsare

nolongeroptional.Moreover,peopleindevelopingcountriesalwaysaspiretothesame

standardoflivingasthoseindevelopedones,henceforexamplethestrongdemandforprivate

carsinChina.

Ontheotherhand,thecompulsivepowerofadvertisingcanbeseenintheincreasing

importanceofhigh-profilebrands,suchasApple,Rolex,andBentley,whichhaveamajor

impactontheamountofmoneypeoplearewillingtospendonconsumergoods.Inaddition,

advertisementshavecreatedpreviouslynon-existentneeds,suchasawiderangeofpriceybut

questionablebeautycareproducts,usuallyfrontedbyaglamorousmediastartoappealto

people'svanity.Furthermore,perhapsthemostegregiousexampleofunnecessary

consumptionistheaddictiontoonlineshopping,facilitatedbysmartphones,whichhas

actuallybeendiagnosedasamedicalcondition.

Tosummarize,thereisnodoubtthateconomicdevelopmentalonehastheeffectofdriving

upconsumptionneeds.Atthesametime,however,pervasiveadvertisingcanmakepeople

spendmoreandbuywhattheydonotneed.Inthefinalanalysis,therefore,onecanonly

concludethatwhiletheyarenotthesolecause,commercialmessagesundoubtedlycontribute

toexcessiveconsumption.(294words)

Agree/Disagree思路解析：

1段：改写标题+加粗内容。(1段和4段加粗内容可直接使用)

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题目：Todaythehighsalesofconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnotthe

realneedsofsociety.

范文：Nowadays,thereisawidespreadbeliefthatconstantaggressivesales

communicationscompelpeoplet。makeunnecessarypurchases.

2段：本段阐述观点A。主题句（很多消费需求与广告是相区分开来的）；观点一

（有些东西是必需的，比如智能手机）；观点二（人们追求更高生活水平）。

3段：本段阐述观点Bo观点一（广告的重点体现在展现品牌价值，让消费者认为其

值得高价）；观点二（广告让你产生伪需求）；观点三（网购成隐）。

4段：总结观点A+总结观点B+全文总结。总结观点A（经济发展人们需求数量和质量

提高）；总结观点B（过度广告影响人们买不需要的东西）；全文总结（尽管不是唯

一的原因，但广告确实影响人们过度消费）。

推荐高分词汇/词组：

1.compelto强迫

彳列句：Nothingcancompelmetodosuchathing.

2.relianceon依赖，依靠

例句：Youplacetoomuchrelianceonherideasandexpertise.

3.aspireto渴望，希求

彳列句：Forus,itssomethingthatwemayaspiretobutcanneverattain.

4compulsiveadj,令人着迷的，难控制的

compulsiveeating/spending/gambling强迫性进食/消费；上瘾的赌博

5.glamorousadj.迷人的；富有魅力的

彳列句：Thesouthcoastislessglamorousbutfullofcleanandattractivehotels.

6,vanityn.虚荣心；空虚；浮华；无价值的东西

彳列句：Hewantsthejobpurelyforreasonsofvanityandambition.

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1.egregiousadj.惊人的；过分的；恶名昭彰的

例句：Perhapsthemostegregiousexampleofunnecessaryconsumptionistheaddictionto

onlineshopping.

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3.Childrennowadaysspendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevisionandplayingvideo

games.Whataretheeffectsonchildren,families,andsociety?Whatmeasurescanbe

takentosolvetheproblem?（Effects&Solutions）

Inthemodernera,thereisincreasingconcernthatvisualmediaandgamingtechnologies

exertaquestionableinfluenceontheyoungestmembersofsociety.Atthesame,time,

however,thereissomeuncertaintyabouthowthenegativeeffectsofthistrendcanbe

minimized.Thisessaywillreviewtheissuesandseeksomepossiblesolutions.

Tobeginwith,thereisnodoubtthatchildren'sintellectualdevelopmentisthreatenedby

televisionandvideos,whichcaneasilybecomeaharmfuldistractionfromstudies.Moreover,

theadventoftheinternetandvirtualrealityhasintroducedhighlyaddictiveonlinegaming,

whichhasledtojuvenilecrimesandevenmurder.Furthermore,eveneverydaydevicessuch

assmartphoneshaveadverselyaffectedfamilycommunication,andexacerbatedthe

generationgap.

Ontheotherhand,thesolutionstothesesociologicalproblemscanbefoundinthe

technologiesthemselves,sinceallhaveusefulapplications.Televisedlessons,forexample,are

usefuleducationaltools,sincetheycanmakelearningmoreentertaininganddigestiblethan

sometraditionalmaterials.Similarly,thetechnicalknowledgeneededtoplaycomputergames

isanemployableskill,andsmartphoneappsenablefamiliestocommunicatemore,notless,

whenproperlymanaged.

Tosummarize,thereisnodoubtthatuncontrolledaccesstothewronginformation,andany

formofaddictivebehaviour,isdangerous,notonlyforchildren.Atthesametime,however,

allthetechnologiesinquestionhavepotentialsocial,educationalandprofessionalbenefits.In

thefinalanalysis,therefore,onecanonlyconcludethat,withgoodguidancefromschools

andespeciallyfamilies,therisksofnewtechnologycanbeturnedintoopportunities.（265

words）

*加粗的为discoursemarkers（话语标记语），可用于提升写作cohesion（连贯性）。

Effects&Solutions思路解析：

1段：改写标题+概述问题。（1段和4段加粗内容可直接使用）

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题目：Childrennowadaysspendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevisionandplayingvideo

games.

范文：Inthemodernera,thereisincreasingconcernthatvisualmediaandgaming

technologiesexertaquestionableinfluenceontheyoungestmembersofsociety.

2段：本段阐述原因。首先，概述现实情况（电视和电玩影响孩子的学习）；原因一

（网络游戏和虚拟现实容易让人沉迷，分辨不清虚拟和现实，易滋生意外和犯罪）；

原因二（各种智能设备，如智能手机，使家庭链接疏远甚至扩宽了代沟）。

3段：本段阐述解决方法。说明该段落主题句（解铃还须系铃人，可依靠科技解决以

上问题）；方法一（电视直播课）；方法二（游戏知识可以成为可以赚钱的知识，而

使用恰当社交软件也可以增进家庭交流）。

4段：总结观点一+总结观点二+全文总结。总结观点一（不健康信息的全面开放是危

险的，这不仅对小孩有害）；总结观点二（所有的app和科技都可以造福社交、教育

和专业技能）；全文总结（在正确的指导下，科技游戏可以化害为利）。

推荐高分词汇/词组：

1.exertinfluenceon对…施加影响

伤（］句：ThosepowersarehopingthatRussia,whichhaslongbackedSyria,willexertinfluence

onal-Assad.

2.distractionn,注意力分散；消遣；心烦意乱

例句：Inaddition,thedistractiontestfailstoidentifysomechildrenwhohaveahearing

impairment.

3.adventn,到来；出现

例句：Manyerasalsoproclaimedstorytelling^demise:theadventoftheprintingpress,radio,

television,theInternet.

4.virtualreality虚拟现实

例句：Earlyresultsfromtrialssuggestvirtualrealitytherapyisuniquelysuitedtoageneration

raisedonvideogames.

模考盒子旗舰店：10

5.addictiveadj,使人上瘾的

彳列句：Prescriptionpainmedicationsarepotentiallyaddictivebutcanalsobeanimportant

componentofpainmanagement.

6.juvenilecrimes青少年犯罪

例J句：Amongjuvenilecrimes,thecriminaljuvenileshavedifferentobjectiveevaluationon

degreeofdifficultyduringthecriminalprocess.

7.murdern.&vt,&vi,谋杀，凶杀

例句：Asaresult,murderisthesubjectofmanypaintingsbybothMartinezandGraham.

8.exacerbatevt,使加剧;使恶化；激怒

例句：Twoofthefactors,lackofhealthinsuranceandchildhoodpoverty,havebeen

exacerbatedbythedeeprecession.

9.digestibleadj.易消化的；可摘要的

彳列句：Weseta10-yeartimehorizonsothecostcanbedigestibleandaffordable.

模若盒广力翼舰店：口

国际类

4.Manycountriesbelievethatinternationaltourismhasharmfuleffects.Whydothey

thinkso?Whatcanbedonetochangetheirviews?（Causes&Solutions）

Nowadays,thereisawidespreadbeliefthattravelingtoothercountriescanhavenegative

consequences.Atthesametime,however;thereissomeuncertaintyastothereasonsfor

thisview,andhowitmightbeadjusted.Thisessaywillexaminetheissuesinaneffortto

findsomeanswers.

Tobeginwith,thereisnodoubtthateconomicsisamajorfactorininternationalrelations,and

capitalcontrolsareappliedbymanycountriestolimittheamountofmoneywhichflowsout

ofthedomesticeconomytoothersintheformoftouristspending.Inaddition,xenophobiais

afactorinmanypeople'sattitudetoforeignnations,suchthatmanyrefusetoleavetheirown

shoresoutofasenseofnationalloyaltyandmistrustoftheunknown.Furthermore,thereisa

widespreadperceptionthattheruleoflawinmanycountriesisbreakingdown,exposing

travelerstoanunacceptableriskofviolenceandcrime.

Ontheotherhand,manyofthemisgivingsexpressedbyreluctanttouristsareunfounded,and

asthesayinggoes"travelbroadensthemind\Educationalinstitutionsshoulddevelop

exchangeprogramsasacomponentofstudiestoenablestudentstoexperienceothercultures

andincreasetheirunderstandingoftheworld.Moreover,officiallinksbetweentownsand

citiesindifferentcountriescanencouragetheformationofcivicrelationships,language

learning,andotherformsofsocialandculturalexchange.

Tosummarize,thereisnodoubtthatsomeresistancetotourismstemsfromeconomic

competitionandxenophobicignorancebetweennations.Atthesametime,however,

educationalopportunitiesandculturalexchangesareamongthemanybenefitsofinternational

travel.Inthefinalanalysis,therefore,onecanonlyconcludethatthepathtoworldpeace

andprosperityliesingreaterglobalunderstanding.（296words）

*加粗的为discoursemarkers（话语标记语），可用于提升写作cohesion（连贯性）。

Causes&Solutions思路解析：

1段：改写标题+加粗内容。（1段和4段加粗内容可直接使用）

模若盒广力翼舰店：2

题目：Manycountriesbelievethatinternationaltourismhasharmfuleffects.

范文：Nowadays,thereisawidespreadbeliefthattravelingtoothercountriescanhave

negativeconsequences.

2段：本段阐述原因。首先，说明原因一（经济发展影响国际关系发展，很多国家也限

制资本通过旅游的形式外流）；其次，说明原因二（很多人对其他国家有仇外的看法

而不愿意出国）；再有，说明原因三（也有观点认为一些国家的法律制度正在崩塌无

法保障旅客安全）。

3段：本段回答解决方案。该段落主题句（很多疑虑可能是子虚乌有的，而旅行有时候

可以增长见识）；解决方法一（学校的交换项目）；解决方法二（官方的建交与交

往）。

4段：总结事实+总结解决方法+提升文章主题。总结事实（对出国旅游的抗拒可能是

源于经济考虑和仇外）；总结解决方法（但出国旅游也有利于教育和文化交流）；提

升文章主题（需要全球文化互相理解）。

推荐高分词汇/词组：

1.adjustedadj,调整过的,调节了的

彳列句：Therefore,thebenefitofdisplayadsneedstobeadjustedagainstthisadditionalsearch

cost.

2.capitalcontrols资本管制

彳列句：Reduceddemandfromallthelayoffswillonlybeexacerbatedbythecapitalcontrols.

3.domesticeconomy国内经济

句：Andwithitsdomesticeconomyfloundering,Britainneedsalltheexportingpowerit

canmuster.

4.xenophobian.仇外；排外情绪；恐外症

例句：Thisisthatracism,oratleastxenophobia,isadeeplyingrainedhumancharacteristic.

5.nationalloyalty国家忠诚度

模考盒子旗舰店：13

彳列句：Sincethiscountrywasfounded,eachgenerationofAmericanshasbeensummonedto

givetestimonytoitsnationalloyalty.

6.misgivingsn.疑虑,担忧

例句：Inseekingasecondchancefromthepublic,Weinerwillhavetoovercomesomevoters'

misgivings.

7.formationn,形成；构造；编队

例句:Thefactthatsuchcapitalformationrestrictionsexistinthisdayandageisacrime.

8.resistancen.抵抗；反抗；抵抗力

例句：Becauseofthisresistancetochange,manyofthetwo-storeybuildingsareoriginals

fromthe1960s.

9.prosperityn.繁荣，成功

仞i］句：Numerousrivers,oncethesourceofhumanprosperityandrichwildlife,arenow

heavilypolluted.

10.ignorancen.无知，愚昧；不知,不懂

例句：Morepeoplewilllosemoremoneyifthegovernmentmakesignorancethenewmarket

standard.

模考盒子旗舰店：14

5.Developingcountriesrequirehelpofferedbyinternationalorganizationstoensure

healthyandsustainabledevelopment.Somepeoplethinkthatfinancialaidisimportant.

Othersbelievethatpracticalaidandadviceismoreimportant.Discussboththeseviews

andgiveyourownopinion.（Discussion）

Nowadays,awell-establishednetworkofcharitiesprovidingfinancialaidtodeveloping

countriesisviewedbymanyasessentialtothewell-beingofthethird-worldpoor.Atthesame

time,however,thereisabodyofopinionwhichholdsthathands-onsupportismoreeffective

inthelongterm.Thisessaywillreviewtheissuestoseekaconclusion.

Tobeginwith,thecharityindustryhasalonghistoryindevelopedwesterncountries,where

peoplehavebecomeaccustomedtoadvertisingcampaignsraisingmoneyforunderdeveloped

countries.Benevolentfoundationsshipfood,shelterandbasiceducationtocountriesinneed,

protectinghelplesspeoplefromdroughtandfamine.Similarly,aidorganizationsflymedical

teamsintoremotethird-worldcommunitiestovaccinatechildren,fightepidemics,andraise

thesurvivalrateofmothersandbabiesinchildbirth.

Ontheotherhand,however,manypeopleexpressdoubtsabouttheeffectivenessofthe

internationalaidsystem,arguingthatmostofthemoneygoestocharitymanagersandcorrupt

politicians,notthosewhoneedit.Abetteralternative,theybelieve,ishelpingthestruggling

countriestohelpthemselves,bygivingtheminfrastructuresuchasports,roadsandrailwaysto

doso.Inthisway,emergingnationscanbuildtradeandindustryoftheirown,developing

themselvesratherthandependingonhandoutsfromothers.

Tosummarize,thereisnodoubtthatdonatingtocharitymakesrichdonorsfeelbetterwhile

providingsomehelptothird-worldpoor.Ontheotherhand,however,therearegroundsto

believethatmostofthebenefitsfromaidorganizationsendupinthewronghands.Inthefinal

analysis,therefore,onecanonlyconcludethatasetoftoolshasmorelong-termvaluethana

handfulofrice.（283words）

*加粗的为discoursemarkers（话语标记语），可用于提升写作cohesion（连贯性）。

Discussion思路解析：

1段：改写标题+概述双方观点。（1段和4段加粗内容可直接使用）

模考盒子旗舰店：15

题目：Developingcountriesrequirehelpofferedbyinternationalorganizationstoensure

healthyandsustainabledevelopment.Somepeoplethinkthatfinancialaidisimportant.

Othersbelievethatpracticalaidandadviceismoreimpoaiam.

范文：Nowadays,awell-establishednetworkofcharitiesprovidingfinancialaidto

developingcountriesisviewedbymanyasessentialtothewell-beingofthethird-world

poor.Atthesametime,however,thereisabodyofopinionwhichholdsthathands-on

supportismoreeffectiveinthelongterm.

2段：本段阐述观点一。首先，说明该段落主题句（在西方发达国家很常见到对发展

中国家援助捐款广告）；举例一（衣食住行和教育，包括帮助弱势群体）；举例二

（派遣医疗团队）。

3段：本段阐述观点二。说明该段落主题句（善款使用不当，经济帮助无以为继）；

举例（给予基建帮助，在此基础上发展中国家可以利用基建发展自己的经济，自食其

力）。

4段：总结观点一+总结观点二+全文总结。总结观点一（通过捐款帮助有需要的人是

好的）；总结观点二（但也确实有善款使用不当的情况）；全文总结（授人以鱼不如

授人以渔）。

推荐高分词汇/词组：

1.sustainableadj.足可支撑的；可持续的

例句：Theyplayacentralroleinsustainabledevelopmentbysupplyingallourfreshwater,

2.financialaid经济援助；财政补助

行！）句：Byhonoringpost-doctorallevelwomeninsciencewithflexiblefinancialaid,theprize

iscompletelyunique.

3.practicalaid实用性强的援助

彳列句：Scientistsandstudentsalikewillfindthisaverywellresearchedandhighlypractical

aid.

4.hands-onsupport最实际的援助

例句：Theyshouldbeabletoprovidethemosthands-onsupportforyouandyoursystem.

模考盒子旗舰店：16

5.becomeaccustomedto习惯于；对…变得习以为常

伤(］句：However,equalityshouldnotsupplantgoodgraceandconfidenceintherespective

socialroleswe'vebecomeaccustomedto.

6.raisingmoney筹集资金

彳列句：Apartfromtheeliteathletes,themajorityofentrantswereraisingmoneyforvarious

charities.

7.benevolentadj.仁慈的；慈善的；亲切的

例句：TherearelotsofpossiblereasonsfortherecentdecisionatYahoo—somebenevolent

andsomemalevolent.

8.droughtandfamine干旱和饥饿

彳列句：Forallthechallengesofisolation,droughtandfamine,thecountryispeacefuland

sociallycohesive.

9.vaccinatevt,给…注射疫苗

例句：TheNationalPublicHealthServiceforWales(NPHSW)isurgingparentstovaccinate

theirchildren.

10.fightepidemics战胜流行病

例句：Forexample,theimmunesystemwashonedtofightoffepidemicslikemalariaand

cholera,whichproliferatedalongwithurbanization.

11.corruptpoliticians腐败政客们

彳列句：DurbinalsodisputedthenotionthatIllinoisismadeupofcorruptpoliticians.

12.infrastructuren,基础设施；公共建设

例句：TheCorporateMarketsegmentoperatesanICTservicesandofferingend-to-end

solutionsininfrastructureandnetwork-related.

模考盒子旗舰店：17

犯罪类

6.Inmanypartsoftheworldchildrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimes.Why

doyouthinkitisthecase?Howshouldchildrenorteenagersbepunished?（Causes&

Solutions）

Nowadays,thereiswidespreadconcernthattheincidenceofcrimesperpetratedbyminors

isontherise.Atthesametime,however,thereissomeuncertaintyastothecausesofthis

trend,andtheremedialstepsthatcouldbetakentoreverseit.Thisessaywillreviewthe

issueinanefforttoseeksomepossibleanswers.

Tobeginwith,thereisnodoubtthatjuvenilecrimeisontherise,whethercommontheftand

vandalismormoreseriousactssuchasdruguseandviolence.Onepossiblereasonisthe

declineinfamilyvalues,wherebymanychildrenareraisedbyoneparentalone,orevenlive

homelessonthestreetsinsomedevelopingcountries.Otherpotentialcausesincludetherise

ofmaterialism,whichencouragesyoungpeople'sgreedformoneyorbrandedproducts,orthe

violentfantasiesinspiredbyvideogamesandvirtualreality.

Ontheotherhand,astorecourses,theliberaltrendofdiscouragingparentsandschoolsfrom

chastisingunrulychildrenshouldbereversedforthegoodofsociety.Inaddition,sincethere

isaclearcorrelationbetweeneducationandlawfulness,youngpeopleshouldbemadetospend

moretimeontheirstudies,leavinglesstimeavailablefordelinquency.Furthermore,

governmentsshouldtakestepstocensorviolentgamesandglorifiedpresentationsofcriminal

behaviourinfilmandTV.

Tosummarize,thereisnodoubtthatyouthcrimeisontherise,fueledbylaxcontrolsand

harmfulinfluencesinthepublicdomain.Atthesametime,however,theproblemcanbe

mitigatedbystrongerfamilyties,moredisciplinededucationalinstitutions,andlessexposure

tonegativemediacontent.Inthefinalanalysis,therefore,wecanonlyconcludethatthe

solutionliesinareturntomoretraditionalvalues.（292words）

*加粗的为discoursemarkers（话语标记语），可用于提升写作cohesion（连贯性）。

Causes&Solutions思路解析：

1段：改写标题+加粗内容。（1段和4段加粗内容可直接使用）

模若盒广旅舰店：prepbox-ieits,:

题目：Inmanypartsoftheworldchildrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimes.

范文：Nowadays,thereiswidespreadconcernthattheincidenceofcrimesperpetratedby

minorsisontherise.

2段：本段阐述原因。首先，说明该段落主题句（未成年犯罪数量在增加）；其次，说

明原因一（家庭观念的缺失，如单亲家庭与流浪青少年）；再有，说明原因二（物质

主义盛行，如对金钱、名牌的渴望和游戏中暴力因素影响）。

3段：本段回答解决方案。解决方法一（家长和学校对青少年严加管教）；解决方法二

（青少年花更多时间学习以没有时间做恶）；解决方法三（政府对暴力相关的游戏、

美化罪犯的内容进行监管）。

4段：总结事实+总结解决方法+提升文章主题。总结事实（青少年犯罪率增加）；总

结解决方法（加强家庭观念、有纪律的教育、少接触负面内容）；提升文章主题（解

决方法在于遵循更传统的观念）。

推荐高分词汇/词组：

1.incidenceofcrimesperpetratedbyminors未成年人犯罪的发生率

incidencen.发生率

perpetratevi.犯（罪）；做（恶）

minorn,未成年人adj,未成年的

例句：Theincidenceofcrimesperpetratedbyminorsisontherise.

2.juvenilecrime青少年犯罪

juvenileadj.青少年的n.青少年

例句：Hestudiedbothadultandjuvenilecrime.

3.vandalismn.故意毁坏文物的行为；破坏他人财产的行为

彳列句：Themayorpromisedtocrackdownonvandalism.

4.beraisedby被…养育

彳列句：Herparentsdiedwhenshewasababyandshewasraisedbyhergrandparents.

5.virtualreality虚拟现实

模考盒子旗舰店：19

彳列句：Virtualrealitygames,suchasSecondLife,aregamesplayedonacomputer.

6.recoursen,求援，求助

例句：Ifthecompanywon'tpayme,theonlyrecourselefttomeistosuethem.

1.chastisevt,惩罚；严惩;责骂

例句：Shechastisedherselffornotgettingupandbeingmoreactive.

8.unrulyadj,不守规矩的；任性的；难驾驭的

unrulychildren不守规矩的孩子

例句：Herunrulybehaviorcausedchaosinclass.

9.delinquencyn,行为不良，违法犯罪；失职，怠工

例句：Thereisahighrateofjuveniledelinquencyinthisarea.

10.censorvt.审查，检查；检查和删节

彳列句：Theb