高考英语复习第3部分写作基础训练九让写作浑然一体的衔接与过渡及通知市赛课公开课一等奖省名师获奖

学案九让写作浑然一体衔接与过渡及通知1/38衔接与过渡是高考英语书面表示主要评分标准之一，所以，在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下连接词是非常必要。惯用连接(过渡)词主要有：写作利用探究一、表示起始关系过渡词aboveall,tobegin/startwith,firstofall,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto,withthedevelopmentof...等。2/38[高考佳句]①Firstofall，thethemeoftheshowisenvironmentalprotection，whichisofgreatimportanceintoday’ssociety.(·全国Ⅱ，满分作文)

首先，展览主题是环境保护，这在当今社会中主要意义。②Tostartwith，IhavebeenlearningandspeakingMandarinforabout17years.(·四川，满分作文)

首先，我学说普通话已经大约17年了。3/38【即时演练】完成句子1.________________theInternet，computersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.

伴随因特网发展，计算机在人们生活中起着主要作用。2.________________，themoreyoupractise，themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.

总来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。答案1.Withthedevelopmentof

2.Generallyspeaking4/38first(ly)，then，later，intheend，finally，atlast，afterthat，afterwards，sincethen，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。二、表示时间次序过渡词5/38[高考佳句]①Firstly，peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twantto.(·江苏，满分作文)

首先，当被要求做他们不想事情时候人们是可能感到是被迫。②Secondly,I’dliketosharemybookswithothersaswell.(·重庆，满分作文)

其次，我也喜欢与他人分享我书籍。6/38【即时演练】完成短文3.________，Icollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.________Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.________，Isweptandmoppedthefloors.

首先，我把全部书籍、报纸和其它散落在屋子里东西搜集起来放好，然后我扫去全部家俱上灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。答案Firstly；Then；Afterthat7/38三、表示并列关系过渡词and，or，also，aswellas，neither...nor...，notonly...butalso...，either...or...，not...but...等。[高考佳句]①Bydoingso，Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothers,butalsolearntoexpressmyselfclearly.(·浙江，书面表示)

经过这么做，我不但能与其它人分享好观点，而且学会了清楚地表示自己。②Shefinallyearnedrespectofthem，whoeventuallybecameconfidentaswellaswell-behaved.(·广东，满分作文)

她最终赢得了他们尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。8/38【即时演练】翻译句子4.努力学习，你就会升入重点大学。 _______________________________________________________5.游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们坚强意志。 _______________________________________________________答案4.Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.5.Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.9/38四、表示转折关系过渡词but，yet，however，while，otherwise，onthecontrary等。[高考佳句]①However，asaproverbgoes，“Everycoinhastwosides.”(·江苏，满分作文)

然而，正如谚语所说，“每个硬币都有两面”。②Onthecontrary，thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth，sotheyareeagertoexperiencethefuturelifeontheMars.(广东高考满分作文)

相反，这些志愿者说，他们厌倦了地球上生活，所以他们渴望体验未来火星上生活。10/38【即时演练】翻译句子6.然而，使你最诧异是下述新功效。 _______________________________________________________7.相反，智能手机不但占用我们宝贵时间，而且对我们健康造成极大危害。 _______________________________________________________答案6.However，whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction.7.Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.11/38because，as，since，for，thanksto，dueto，asaresultof，so，therefore，asaresult/consequence等。五、表示因果关系过渡词12/38[高考佳句]①Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.(安徽高考满分作文)

真相是每个人都会有事情看上去要变得糟糕时刻，所以你无须过分担心。②Asaconsequence，childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.(福建高考书面表示)

结果，孩子们变得太依赖于父母，以至于他们没有独立思想和创造性想法。13/38【即时演练】翻译句子8.多亏医生及时治疗，他获救了。 _______________________________________________________9.所以，我提议应该给我们更多时间用于体育运动和睡眠。 _______________________________________________________答案8.Thankstothedoctor’stimelytreatment，hewassaved.9.Therefore，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.14/38if，unless，incaseof，as/solongas，onconditionthat等。六、表示条件关系过渡词[高考佳句]①I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.(浙江高考满分作文)

若你们能考虑一下我提议，我将很高兴。②Aslongaswesticktoourdreams，wewillbecomeawinnersoonerorlater.(湖南高考满分作文)

只要坚持梦想，我们迟早会成为赢家。15/38【即时演练】翻译句子10.只要你不气馁，就一定会成功。 _______________________________________________________11.假如我们忽略我们未来，就像图画中这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。 _______________________________________________________答案10.Aslongasyoudon’tloseheart，you’resuretosucceed.11.Ifweneglectourfuture，we’llendupinfailureaswhathappenstothemaninthepicture.16/38what’smore，furthermore，moreover，besides，what’sworse，stillless，tomakemattersworse，worsestill，on(the)onehand...ontheotherhand...，foronething...foranother...等。七、表示递进关系过渡词17/38[高考佳句]①What’smore，I’moutgoingandwarm-hearted.(·陕西，满分作文)

另外，我性格外向且待人热心。②Ononehand，Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents，andontheotherhand，Icangainsomeexperiencefromit，whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.(山东高考满分作文)

首先，我能经过做这么事赚些钱来帮助父母，另首先，我能从中取得一些经验，这会对我未来生活有益。18/38【即时演练】完成句子12.________________，ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.

另外，我们班还组织了各种各样活动来丰富我们业余时间。13.________________，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones，wewilllosethecommunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.

更糟是，假如我们在电话上花费过多时间，我们会失去未来需要交际技能。答案12.Besides/What’smore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore

13.Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse19/38suchas，forexample/instance，take...forexample，thatistosay，asfollows，inotherwords等。八、表示列举事实过渡词[高考佳句]①Theyareofdifferentshapes，suchasdiamonds，butterflies，flowersandbirds.(新课标全国Ⅱ满分作文)

它们形状各异，诸如像钻石、蝴蝶、花、鸟。②Infact，Chinesehasneverstoppedtakingwordsfromotherlanguages，say，“ganbu”or“minzhu”fromJapanese.(江苏高考满分作文)

实际上，汉语从来就没有停顿过从别语言中录入一些单词，比如，日语中“ganbu”或“minzhu”。20/38【即时演练】完成句子14.________________，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.

就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老城市之一。15.________________，ifyouwanttosucceed，youhavetobelieveinyourself.

也就是说，假如你想成功，必须相信自己。答案14.TakeBeijingforexample

15.Thatistosay21/38inmyopinion，inmyview，inmypointofview，asfarasIamconcerned，asforme，personally，Ithink...等。九、表示观点过渡词22/38[高考佳句]①AsfarasIamconcerned，theystandforlove，friendshipandunity.(新课标全国Ⅱ满分作文)

以我看来，他们代表爱、情谊和团结。②Ithinkthepictureconveysamessagethateveryonehashisorheradvantages.(北京高考满分作文)

我认为这幅画传达了这么信息：人人都有自己优点。23/38【即时演练】翻译句子16.就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。 _______________________________________________________17.按照我观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。 _______________________________________________________答案16.AsfarasIamconcerned，Ilovewealth，butIvaluehealthmore.17.Inmyopinion，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.24/38inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral，generallyspeaking等。十、表示总结过渡词25/38[高考佳句]①Inaword，mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.(新课标纲领全国满分作文)

总之，我生活将会愈加丰富多彩。②Allinall，travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.(山东高考满分作文)

总来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新挑战最好选择。26/38【即时演练】完成句子18.________________，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.

总之，一个好市民应该恪守交通规则。19.________________，Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.

总来说，我发觉自行车比摩托车更令人喜欢。答案18.Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup

19.Onthewhole/Ingeneral27/38用方框内过渡词完成下面短文PassageOne单句跟踪演练becauseof，first，second，asaresult，therefore，finally，inadditionInthepasttwentyyearsorso，greatadvanceshavetakenplaceintheworld.1.________，wehaveseenoneofthemostimportantadvancesinagriculture—theGreenRevolution.2.________thisadvancewecannowproducemorefoodwithlessland.3.________，industryhasbeenmademoreandmoreautomatic.4.________，fewerandfewerpeopleareneededtooperatefactoriesandoffices.5._______，28/38toexploretheunknownworld，moreandmoresatelliteshavebeenlaunchedandmoreandmoreastronautshavebeensentintoouterspace.6.________，newproductsofallkindshavebeenproduced.7.________，ourlifehasbecomemoreandmorecomfortable.答案1.First

2.Becauseof

3.Second

4.Therefore5.Inaddition

6.Finally

7.Asaresult29/388.________，onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.9.________，onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.10.________searchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchthecomputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.11.________，itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedon’thavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third，wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.PassageTwosecond，so，asaresult，despite，on(the)onehand，what’sworse，insteadof，inaword，ontheotherhand，asiswell-known30/3812.________，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.13.________，wecanbecheatedeasily.14.________，wecannotseethethingsindetail.15.________，16.________thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping，Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.17.________weshoulddevelopit.答案8.Asiswell-known

9.Ontheonehand10.Insteadof

11.Second

12.Ontheotherhand13.Asaresult

14.What’sworse

15.Inaword16.despite

17.So31/38通知惯用词汇1.________n.通知2.________n.注意3.goona________去观光4.havea________野餐5.givea________做演讲6.havea________contest有一个演讲比赛7.sign________(for...)报名(参加……)8.takean________partin主动参加……答案1.notice/announcement

2.attention

3.tour4.pinic

5.lecture

6.speech

7.up

8.active32/381.段首惯用语：(1)MayIhave/callyourattention，please?(2)Attention，please，everybody!(3)Ihaveanannouncementtomake.(4)Ihavesomethingtotellyou.通知惯用句式33/382.段中惯用语：(1)Therewillbeatalkthisafternoon.(2)TheStudentUnionhasdecidedthat...(3)Weshallhavealectureon...(4)Ithasbeendecidedthatwe’llpayavisitto...3.段尾惯用语：(1)Pleasebethereontimeanddon’tbelate.(2)Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.(3)That’sall.Thankyou.34/38通知(notice)是上级对下级、组织对组员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等时使用一个应用文体，通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。1.口头通知是面对面地把信息传达给对方。这种通知开头应有称呼语，正式场所用Ladiesandgentlemen(女士们、先生们)，有时也能够用Boysandgirls或Comradesandfriends(同志们、朋友们)等。开头还常有提醒听众注意开场白，如“Attention，please.”或“MayIhaveyourattention，please？”或“Ihaveanannouncementtomake.”等；结尾常说“That’sall.Thankyou.”或“Thankyouforlistening.”等，以示礼貌。口头通知中无须说明公布通知日期和公布通知人或单位。通知惯用写