2024届高三英语读后续写Greg认识道treasure的真正含义素材

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thedarksky,filledwithangry,swirlingcloudsreflectedGregRidley'smoodashesatonthestoop（门廊）ofhisbuilding.Hisfather'svoicecametohimagain,firstreadingtheheadmaster'sletter,thenlecturingendlesslyabouthispooreffortsinmaths."IhadtoleaveschoolwhenIwasthirteen.That'sayearyoungerthanyouarenow.IfI'dhadhalfthechancesyouhave.I'd...Andyouwanttoplaybasketball?Thatmustbesomekindofajoke.Nowyoujustgetintoyourroomandhitthosebooks."Itwasbeginningtocool.Soonlargedropsofrainsplashedontohisjeans.Downtheblocktherewasanabandonedhouse.Withoutmuchthought,Gregmadeadashacrossthestreetandenteredaroom.Suddenlyheheardaman'svoicebehindhim."Whatareyoudoinghere?""Whoareyou?"Greghardlyrecognizedhisownvoice."I'mLemonBrown,"cametheanswer.

Hewasanoldman.Itdidn'tseemthathewasdangerous."Youaren'tlookingformytreasure,areyou?"heasked."No.Itisrainingout,"Greganswered,smiling."Youhaveatreasure?""Everymanhasatreasure,"LemonBrownsaid,"Youwanttoseemine?""Ifyouwanttoshowittome,"Greg

shrugged.Theoldmancarefullyuntiedthestrings,andrevealedsomeyellowednewspaperclippings（剪报）。Thenhestartedtellingthestoryofhislife.Hewasafamousbluessingerinthepast.Hiswifediedyoung,andhisonlysonwentabroadtowork."IgavehimthesenewspaperclippingsthattoldhimwhoIwas,andwherehecamefrom.OnetimeIcamehome,therewasalettersayingthathegotkilledinanaccident.Itbrokemyheart.Theysentbacktheseclippings.Thatwasmytreasure,andwhenIgaveittohim,hetreateditjustlikethat,atreasure."

LemonBrownputhisragsinplaceandlookedoutofthewindow.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。"Yougetonoutofhereandgetyourselfhome,"saidLemonBrown.WhenGregwaswalkinginthestreet,thenighthadwarmedandtherainhadstopped.原文中文意译：黑暗的天空中弥漫着愤怒的漩涡云，这反映了格雷格·雷德利的心情，他坐在他建筑的门廊里。他又听到了父亲的声音，先是读了校长的信，然后没完没了地讲他数学学得不好。“我十三岁的时候不得不离开学校。那比你现在小一岁。如果我有你一半的机会的话。我会……你想打篮球吗？那一定是在开玩笑。现在你只要走进房间，看看那些书就行了。”天开始凉了。很快，一大滴雨溅到了他的牛仔裤上。沿着街区往下有一座废弃的房子。格雷格不假思索地冲过街道，走进一个房间。突然，他听到身后有一个人的声音。“你在这里干什么？”“你是谁？”格雷格几乎认不出自己的声音。“我是莱蒙布朗，”回答说。

他是个老人，看起来并不危险。“你不是在找我的宝贝，是吗？”他问道。“不，外面在下雨，”格雷格微笑着回答。“你有宝吗？”“每个人都有一个宝藏，”莱蒙·布朗说，“你想看看我的吗？”“如果你想给我看，”Greg耸耸肩。老人小心翼翼地解开绳子，露出一些发黄的剪报。然后他开始讲述自己的人生故事。他过去是一位著名的蓝调歌手。他的妻子英年早逝，他唯一的儿子出国工作。“我给了他这些剪报，告诉他我是谁，他来自哪里。有一次我回家，有一封信说他在一次事故中丧生。这让我心碎。他们寄回了这些剪报。那是我的宝贝，当我把它给他时，他就这样对待它，一件宝贝。”莱蒙·布朗把抹布放好，望向窗外。主题：亲情。框架：父子冲突---主人公邂逅老人---顿悟treasure含义。故事设计需留意：和老人的邂逅，告诉父亲了吗？不告诉更好写。否则容易内容重复。情节和语言融合：多从原文找可以呼应的细节，如：天气和心情的情景交融；关键词treasure的复现和前后呼应；一些细节词的复现，如basketball,jeans,stoop,lecture等等。官方范文:“Yougetonoutofhereandgetyourselfhome,”saidLemonBrown.Noddinghishead,Gregfollowedtheoldmansilently.Whentheyreachedthefrontdoor,theoldmanlookedoutfirst,sawthestreetwasclearandtoldGregtohurryhome.Gregopenedhisarmsandhuggedtheoldmantightly.“Takecareofthetreasureofyours.”“ThatI’lldo,”saidLemonBrown,thewrinklesabouthiseyessuggestedasmile.ThenGregwalkedintothedarkness,theoldmanwatchinghimfrombehind.WhenGregwaswalkinginthestreet,thenighthadwarmedandtherainhadstopped.Gregdidn’tevenwanttothinkhowlateitwas.HethoughtaheadwhathisfatherwouldsayandwonderedifheshouldtellhimaboutLemonBrown.Hethoughtaboutituntilhereachedhisstoopanddecidedagainstit.LemonBrownwouldbeallrightwithhismemoriesandhistreasure.GregpushedthebuttonoverthebellmarkedRidley,thoughtofthelectureheknewhisfatherwouldgivehim,andsmiled.参考范文1："Yougetonoutofhereandgetyourselfhome,"saidLemonBrown.“I’llbewatchingfromthewindowsoyou’llbeallright,”headded,andwentdownthestairsbehindGreg.Whentheyreachedthefrontdoortheoldmanlookedoutfirst,sawthestreetwasclearandtoldGregtoscootonhome.“Yousureyou’llbeOK?”Gregasked.“Nowdidn’tItellyouIwasgoingtoeastSt.Louisinthemorning?”LemonBrownasked.“Don’tthatsoundOKtoyou?”“Sureitdoes,”Gregsaid.“Sureitdoes.Andyoutakecareofthattreasureofyours.”“ThatI’lldo,”Lemonsaid,thewrinklesaroundhiseyessuggestingasmile.“ThatI’lldo.”WhenGregwaswalkinginthestreet,thenighthadwarmedandtherainhadstopped.Gregdidn’tevenwanttothinkhowlateitwas.HethoughtaheadofwhathisfatherwouldsayandwonderedifheshouldtellhimaboutLemonBrown.Hethoughtaboutituntilhereachedhisstoop,anddecidedagainstit.LemonBrownwouldbeOK,Gregthought,withhismemoriesandhistreasure.GregpushedthebuttonoverthebellmarkedRidley,thoughtofthelectureheknewhisfatherwouldgivehim,andsmiled.参考范文2：“Yougetonoutofhereandgetyourselfhome,"saidLemonBown.

Hearingthis,Gregfrownedandmurmuredin

alowvoice."But…Butmyfather

isangrywithme..."Strangely,hepouredoutallhistroublestotheold

manhemetforthefirsttime:

hisfavortite

basketball---onlyajoke,in

hisfather'seyes

and

hispoorgrades

inmaths.

Listeningsilently,LemonBrown

strokedGreg'sheadandthensaidinagentletune."Youareluckytobetogetherwithyourfather.That's

your

treasure."

Seeingtears

inLemonBrown'seyes,

GregrealizedwithablindingflashwhatLemonBrown

trulymeant."Hethankedtheoldman

andwentout

withouthesitation.WhenGregwaswalkinginthestreet,thenighthadwarmedandtherainhadstopped.

Allthese

puthim

inalightmood.

Hetookadeepbreath

andquickenedhispacetowardshishome.Uponseeinghisfather

waitinganxiously

onthestoop,Greghadalumpinhisthroat,

tearswellingupinhiseyes.Heapproachedhisfather

andapologizedinachokedvoice."Sorry,

Dad.

Iwilldomyutmost

toliveuptoyourexpectations.

Basketball

ismy

treasure

andsoareyou

”.Alittlesurprisedbutgreatlyrelieved,hisfather

smiledandlockedhisson

inatightembrance.

参考范文3"Youget

onoutofhereandgetyourselfhome,"saidLemonBrown.Greyloweredhisheadandmurmured,“Idon’twanttogohome.MyDadwillforcemetostudy."Hearingthis,LemonBrowbent

downandgazedatGrey'seyes,"Hehopesthatyoucanownarosy