首尾呼应的方式

首尾呼应的方式首尾呼应一般指作者先在开头提出文章的中心,然后在结尾时再次强调,照应开头,从而使文章的中心鲜明突出。首尾呼应可以使续写的完整性得到提升。我们可以在文章开头交代背景、描写景物、抒发感情、说明道理等,在文章结尾处再次强调一下,与开头相应和,使文章浑然一体。●例1开头:Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymotherloving,sweet,yetabsentmindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.结尾:Despitemom'sbeingabsentmindedandforgetful,sheisstillakindandnicemom. (浙江2017读后续写) ●例2开头:Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.结尾:NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind. (浙江2018读后续写) ●例3开头:TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallmunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.结尾:Holdingthemoney,somovedwasBernardthathecouldhardlysayaword,buthisbrightsmilingfacespokeforhim.BernardhuggedJohntightly.ThankstoJohn,allthingswentwell.Evenasmallactofkindnesscanmaketheworldbetter. (2020新高考I卷读后续写) ●例4开头:ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.结尾:ThewholeroomwasbathedinahappyMother'sDayatmosphere. (2021新高考1卷读后续写) ●例5开头:GrowingupinEnglandwithaBritishfatherandaChinesemother,I'veenjoyedfoodfrombothcountrieseversinceIwasabletoholdaknifeandforkandchopsticks!结尾:Peoplesaythatoneman'smeatisanotherman'spoison,butIfeelathomewithfoodfrombothmycultures.Tome,there'snothingbetterthanacrossculturalafternoonteaofcup!EnglishbiscuitsandacupofChineseoolongteainafinechinacup!(外研必修二Unit1)●例6开头:Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.结尾:Undoubtedly,itbecamethemostunforgettableHalloweenevenifIstillhadnoideaofwhosepumpkinwasheavieryet. (浙江2021读后续写) ●例7开头:WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning(指定)projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,IsecretlyhopedthathewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldn'tassignmetoworkwiththefiercelypetitiveandextremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.Asfatewouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.结尾:Butformypartner,nothinglikethiscouldhavehappened.Sowhenhethumbedupwithararebigsmile,itsuddenlydawnonmethatweweretobeekindoflifelongfriends.Evenbetter,Ireceivedapreciousgifttheapprovalofapersonwholaterbecamemyfriendforlife.(浙江2022读后续写)●例8开头:Hisparents,likemost,hopedhewouldgotoabigcitytofindateachingjob.Likewise,hisfriendsalllefthishometownforworkinShanghaiorBeijing.ZhangTianfeltdifferently,however.结尾:Hefeelssohappythathefollowedhisheartwhenchoosingwhattodowithhislife,eventhoughitmaynotbewhatothersexpectedofhim. (北师大必修一Unit1) ●例9开头:IusuallystartplanningmytriphometoShanxiweeksbeforeSpringFestival,astrainticketsorflightshavetobebookedasearlyaspossible.Itakegreatcareinchoosinggiftsformyparents.Thisyear,Iboughtabottleofwineformyfatherandabeautifulsweaterformymother.结尾:AsIgetolder,inghomeandbeingwithmyentirefamilyisthemostimportantpartofit.(北师大必修一Unit3)Tips结尾部分的基本功能是将全文引向高潮、突出主题、明示结束。不管使用什么方法，一定要确保结尾自然。读后续写中,使用首尾呼应法写结尾部分时,要特别注意:切勿照搬开头部分的句子,要采用变通手法重述文章的中心思想。如例2,首段中的Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore与尾段中的NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore相呼应，指出作者对此次旅行的感受,同时作者还指出此次旅行将深深地刻在他的脑海中(deeplyengravedinmymind)。同样地,如例5,首段中,作者提到I'veenjoyedfoodfrombothcountries,结尾时,他使用Ifeelathomewithfoodfrombothmycu