河南省2024八年级英语下册Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame？UNIT5写作能力提升练假如近期你所在中学的校刊开辟了英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请你根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。要点提示：1.在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶；2.女孩要离开时，发现树下有一位老乞丐，他看上去很饿；3.女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他；4.乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开；5.你很感动……参考词汇：

乞丐beggar；

感动bemoved［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。交代时间、人物—时间：onacoldmorning人物：agirl;anoldbeggar 介绍事情的经过—wasgoingtoleave;found;hungry;cameupto;saidthanksto;smile介绍我的感受—wasmoved;decided［遣词造句］根据结构图中的要点写出句子。1.

当我正买早餐时，我看见在我前面的女孩买了一些面包和牛奶。WhileIwas

buyingbreakfast

⁠

，Isawagirlinfrontofme

buysomebreadandmilk

⁠.buyingbreakfast

buysomebreadandmilk

123452.

当她要离开时，她发现树下有一个老乞丐。Whenshe

wasgoingtoleave

⁠

，shefound

anoldbeggarunderatree

⁠.wasgoingtoleave

anoldbeggarunderatree

123453.

那个女孩走到他身旁，把她的早餐给了他。Thegirl

cameuptohim

⁠and

gaveherbreakfasttohim

⁠.cameuptohim

gaveherbreakfasttohim

123454.

当那个乞丐向女孩道谢时，她什么也没说，然后微笑着走了。Whenthebeggar

saidthankstothegirl

⁠

，shesaidnothingand

wentawaywithasmile

⁠onherface.saidthankstothegirl

wentawaywithasmile

123455.

我被那个女孩所做的事感动了。I

wasmoved

⁠bywhatthegirldid.wasmoved

12345［巧妙衔接］简述事情时，用一般过去时和过去进行时。这两种时态配合使用可以建立起上下文的逻辑联系。全文按照事情的发展过程来描述，运用连词when或while，使文章过渡自然。［连句成篇］Onacoldmorning，whileIwasbuyingbreakfast，Isawagirlinfrontofmebuysomebreadandmilk.Whenshewasgoingtoleave，shefoundanoldbeggarunderatree.Helookedveryhungry.Thegirlcameuptohimandgaveherbreakfasttohim.Whenthebeggarsaidthankstothegirl，shesaidnothingandwentawaywithasmileonherface.Iwasmovedbywhatthegirldid.Herkindnesstouchedmealot.Idecidedtolearnfromherandbeakindperson.Ishouldhelpthepeopleinneedfromnowon.在你的生活中一定有一些难以忘记的经历，请你根据下面的提示，以“AnUnforgettableExperience”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述一次让你难忘的经历。提示：1.Whenandwheredidithappen？2.Whatwereyoudoingwhenithappened？3.Howdidyoufeelaboutit？AnUnforgettableExperience

Ifyouaskmewhatmyunforgettableexperienceis，Iwilltellyouastoryaboutmeandalittledog.

Ifyouaskmewhatmyunforgettableexperienceis，Iwilltellyouastoryaboutmeandalittledog.

LastSaturdayafternoon，Itookawalkinaparknearby.WhenIwasgoingback，adogwalkedafterme.ItfollowedmeuntilIgottothedoorofmyhouse.WhenIwasopeningthedoor，itwassittingonthegroundandlookingatmesadly，asifitweresaying，

“Igotlost.Couldyoupleasehelpme？”

“Whatapoordog！”Ithought.ThenIletitinandgaveitsomefoodandwater.Afterthat，Iputupanoticeinourneighborhood.

LastSaturdayafternoon，Itookawalkinaparknearby.WhenIwasgoingback，adogwalkedafterme.ItfollowedmeuntilIgottothedoorofmyhouse.WhenIwasopeningthedoor，itwassittingonthegroundandlookingatmesadly，asifitweresaying，

“Igotlost.Couldyoupleasehelpme？”

“Whatapoordog！”Ithought.ThenIletitinandgaveitsomefoodandwater.Afterthat，Iputupanoticeinourneighborhood.

Thenextday，theownerofthedogcametomyhouseandtookitaway.Hethankedmealotbeforeleaving.IwasveryhappybecauseIwasabletogiveothersah