陕西省2024八年级英语下册Unit2I'llhelptocleanupthecityparks写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

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假如你是李华，上周日你和几位同学组建了一支志愿者小队，去一所贫困的乡村学校做志愿活动。请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，介绍你们的志愿活动。时间上周日地点一所贫困的乡村学校人物你和几位同学活动打扫学校，修理桌椅，赠送书籍和玩具……要求：1.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实；3.词数：80左右。

［谋篇布局］厘清文章要素，构建文章结构。引出话题——likevolunteer,because,help,make,happy↓描述活动——setup,cleanup,fixup,giveaway,playgames…↓表达愿望——hope,help,allthetime［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.上周日我和几位同学组建了一支小队，去一所贫困的乡村学校做志愿活动。LastSunday，severalofmyclassmatesandI

setupateamtovolunteer

⁠inapoorvillageschool.setupateamtovolunteer

2.

我们和那些学生一起打扫学校。We

cleaneduptheschool

⁠withthestudents.cleaneduptheschool

3.

我们帮助修理了教室里破损的课桌和椅子。Wehelped

(to)fixupthebrokendesksandchairs

⁠intheclassrooms.(to)fixupthebrokendesksandchairs4.

我们向那些学生赠送了书籍和玩具。We

gaveawaybooksandtoys

⁠tothestudents.gaveawaybooksandtoys

5.为了让他们高兴起来，我们还和他们一起做游戏。Inorderto

cheerthemup

⁠，wealso

played

gameswiththem

⁠.cheerthemup

played

gameswiththem

利用连接词，使句子意思连贯。

本文中，可以使用first，then，afterthat等表顺序的词或短语来介绍我们所做的志愿活动，使文章显得有层次性。［巧妙衔接］

Ilikedoingvolunteerjobsbecausehelpingothersmakesmehappy.［连句成篇］

LastSunday，severalofmyclassmatesandIsetupateamtovolunteerinapoorvillageschool.First，wecleaneduptheschoolwiththestudents.Thenwehelpedfixupthebrokendesksandchairsintheclassrooms.Afterthat，wegaveawaybooksandtoystothestudents.Inordertocheerthemup，wealsoplayedgameswiththem.

Althoughweweretired，wefelthappytohelpthem.Ihopewecanhelpthemallthetime.

帮助他人，快乐自己。张明和他的同学们经常在周末去村里看望空巢老人。假如你是张明的朋友，请根据提供的信息介绍一下上周日他们一起去看望李奶奶时所做的事情。你对他们的做法有何感想？你是否愿意参加类似的活动？请说明理由。2.和李奶奶一起做饭、吃饭；3.陪李奶奶去村里的广场散步，给她讲学校的事。要点提示：1.帮李奶奶打扫院子、洗衣服；

I’mZhangMing’sfriendandIhaveknownthatheandhisclassmatesalwaysgotovillagestodosomevolunteerwork.

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I’mZhangMing’sfriendandIhaveknownthatheandhisclassmatesalwaysgotovillagestodosomevolunteerwork.

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LastSunday，ZhangMingandhisclassmateswenttoseeGrandmaLi.Theyspent

ahappydaywithher.Inthemorning，theyhelpedGrandmaLicleantheyardanddosomewashing.Theyalsohelpedhercookandhadlunchwithher.Afterlunch，theywentforawalkwithGrandmaLionthesquareofthevillage.Theytoldhersomethinginterestingthathappenedatschool.Theywereallhappy.

LastSunday，ZhangMingandhisclassmateswenttoseeGrandmaLi.Theyspent

ahappydaywithher.Inthemorning，theyhelpedGrandmaLicleantheyardanddosomewashing.Theyalsohelpedhercookandhadlunchwithher.Afterlunch，theywentforawalkwithGrandmaLionthesquareofthevillage.Theytoldhersomethinginterestingthathappenedatschool.Theywereallhappy.

Ithinkwhattheyhavedoneismeaningful.Ialsowanttobeavolunteerlikethem.Iwilldosomethingfortheold.Asweknow，helpingothersishelpingourselves.Itcanalsobringhappinesstous

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Ithinkwhattheyhavedoneismeaningful.Ialsowant