适用于新高考新教材天津专版2024届高考英语一轮总复习写作专项提升Step3变魔句-提升描写逼真情境能力课件外研版

写作专项提升变魔句——提升描写逼真情境能力英语情境1感受与心情【魔句1】

听到他竞赛获得一等奖的消息,我们既高兴又激动。On

hearing

the

news

thathefinished

in

first

placeinthecompetition,we

all

felt

delighted

and

excited.The

news

thathewon

first

prizeinthecompetitionmade

us

delighted

and

excited.[语境]听说你要来参加我们为期一周的交流项目,并要发表关于西方艺术的演讲,我很高兴和你分享我的观点。

(1)On

hearing

thatyouarecomingtojoinourone-weekexchangeprogramanddeliveraspeechaboutWesternArt,I'm

very

glad

tosharemyopinionswithyou.(2)The

news

thatyouarecomingtojoinourone-weekexchangeprogramanddeliveraspeechaboutWesternArtmakes

me

very

glad

tosharemyopinionswithyou.【魔句2】

能代表我校学生在这里发言,我感到非常荣幸。It

is

a

great

honourtogive

a

speechhere,as

a

representative

ofallthestudentsofourschool.I

feel

greatly

honoured

to

deliver

a

speechhereon

behalf

ofallthestudentsofourschool.As

a

representative

ofallthestudentsofourschool,it

is

my

honour

to

give

a

speechhere.[语境]能与来自国内外的朋友分享中国的传统文化,我感到很荣幸。(1)It

is

a

great

honourformetosharetraditionalChineseculturewithfriendsathomeandabroad.(2)I

feel

greatly

honouredtosharetraditionalChineseculturewithfriendsathomeandabroad.【魔句3】

不知道该如何跟同学们相处,她感到有些困惑。Shefelt

somehow

at

a

loss,wonderinghowtogetonwithherclassmates.Becauseshedidn'tknowhowtogetalongwithherclassmates,shefelt

sort

of

at

a

loss.Shedidn'tknowhowtogetonwithherclassmates,feeling

kind

of

confused.[语境]对于如何能讲一口流利的普通话,你感到困惑。(1)Youfeel

somehow

at

a

loss,wonderinghowtospeakMandarinfluently.(2)Becauseyoudon'tknowhowtospeakMandarinfluently,youfeel

sort

of

at

a

loss.(3)Youdon'tknowhowtospeakMandarinfluently,feeling

kind

of

confused.【魔句4】

这个小男孩懂得很多,我们对此感到惊讶。Thelittleboyknowssomanythingsthatwefeelsurprised.It

isthatthelittleboyknowssomanythingsthatsurprisesus.Thelittleboywhoknowssomanythingssurprisesus.Whatsurprisesusis

thatthelittleboyknowssomanythings.Thatthelittleboyknowssomanythingssurprisesus.Wearesurprisedthatthelittleboyknowssomanythings.Much

to

our

surprise,thelittleboyknowssomanythings.[语境]令我感到非常高兴的是,一座新体育场已建成,它成了我们学校的地标建筑。

(1)To

my

great

joy,anewstadiumhasbeenputup,whichhasbecomethelandmarkinourschool.(2)Whatmakesmejoyfulis

thatanewstadiumhasbeenputup,whichhasbecomethelandmarkinourschool.(3)It

isthatanewstadiumwhichhasbecomethelandmarkinourschoolhasbeenputupthatmakesmejoyful.【魔句5】

老师的一席话深深地打动了我,我决心更加努力地学习英语。Deeply

moved

bymyteacher'swords,Ihavemade

up

my

mind

tostudyEnglishharder.Deeply

touched

bywhattheteachersaid,I'm

determined

tolearnEnglishevenharder.What

the

teacher

said

left

me

affected,soIwas

determined

tomakemoreeffortstostudyEnglish.It

was

the

teacher's

moving

words

that

made

me

determined

toconcentratemoreonmyEnglishstudy.[语境]他们娴熟的技艺令我惊讶,我决心像他们一样出色。(1)Amazed

athowskillfultheywere,Imade

up

my

mind

tobejustasgoodasthem.(2)Greatly

amazed

attheirskills,Iwas

determined

tobejustasgoodasthem.(3)It

was

their

amazing

skills

that

made

me

determined

tobejustasgoodasthem.情境2时间与地点【魔句6】

会议大约持续了三个小时。Themeetingtook

approximately/roughlythreehours.Themeetinglastedthreehoursmore

or

less.Themeetingended/came

to

an

end

aboutthreehourslater.It

tookthreehoursor

so

to

coverthemeeting.[语境]美术展计划于5月9日上午8点至10点举行,我们学校所有的学生和老师都有望参与。

(1)Theartexhibitionisintendedtotakeplacelasting

from8:00amto10:00amonMay9.Allthestudentsaswellastheteachersofourschoolareexpectedtoattendit.(2)Allthestudentsandtheteachersofourschoolareexpectedtoattendtheartexhibitionwhichwilltakefrom8:00amto10:00amonMay9.【魔句7】

公园是公众休闲娱乐的地方。Aparkisa

place

for

the

public

to

rest

and

enjoy

themselves.Aparkisa

place

where

people

rest

and

relax.Aparkisa

place

where

people

can

have

a

rest

and

have

fun.Aparkisa

public

place

for

relaxation/amusement.[语境]博物馆是一个可以使你了解历史的地方。(1)Themuseumisa

place

where

you

can

learn

about

history.(2)Themuseumisa

place

for

you

to

learn

about

history.【魔句8】

他瞥了一眼地图,然后告诉我们,向前再走大约20英里就是一个村庄。Glancing

at

the

map,heinformed

usthatthenextvillagewasmerely

twenty

miles

away.Heglanced

at

the

mapandtoldusthattherewouldbeavillageless

than

twenty

miles

away.Hetook

a

glance

atthemapandtoldusthatno

more

than

twenty

miles

aheadwasavillage.Having

glanced

atthemap,heinformedusthatthenextvillagewaswithin

twenty

miles.Hecast

a

look

atthemap,tellingusthattherewouldbeless

than

twenty

miles

ahead

of

usbeforewegottoavillage.[语境]向前走不到100米就是我们的图书馆。

(1)Thereisourlibraryless

than

100

metres

away.(2)Ourlibraryisno

more

than

100

metres

ahead.(3)Ourlibraryiswithin

100

metres.【魔句9】

夜晚,学生们到达了这个小村庄。Intheevening,thestudentsgot

to/reached/arrived

atthesmallvillage.It

was

in

the

evening

thatthestudentsreachedthesmallvillage.Thestudentsdid

not

get

tothesmallvillageuntil(itwas)evening.Evening

had

already

fallen

whenthestudentsfound

their

way

tothesmallvillage.[语境](2019·北京卷,书面表达)我们下午到了家,累并快乐着。(1)Wearrived

homeintheafternoon,tiredbutpleased.(2)It

was

in

the

afternoon

thatwearrivedhome,tiredbutpleased.(3)Wedidn'tarrivehomeuntiltheafternoon,tiredbutpleased.【魔句10】

我们盼望的春节马上就要到了。TheSpringFestivalthatwelookforwardtois

approaching.TheSpringFestivalthatwelookforwardtois

drawing

near.Around

the

corner

istheSpringFestivalthatweare

longing

for/dying

for.[语境]我们盼望的这个电视节目马上就要开始了。(1)TheTVprogramthatwelookforwardtois

approaching.(2)TheTVprogramthatwelookforwardtois

drawing

near.(3)Around

the

corner

istheTVprogramthatweare

longing

for/dying

for.【魔句11】

农历正月初一是春节。TheSpringFestivalfalls

onthefirstdayofthefirstmonthinthelunarcalendar.TheSpringFestivaloccurs

onthefirstdayofthefirstmonthinthelunarcalendar.[语境]农历正月十五是元宵节。(1)TheLanternFestivalfalls

onthefifteenthdayofthefirstmonthinthelunarcalendar.(2)TheLanternFestivaloccurs

onthefifteenthdayofthefirstmonthinthelunarcalendar.情境3困难与帮助【魔句12】

我的车坏了。Mycaris

out

of

order.Mycardoesn't

work.There

is

something

wrong

withmycar.Something

is

wrong

withmycar.Something

has

gone

wrongwithmycar.Mycarhas

broken

down.[语境]爸爸的摩托车出故障了,因此他不得不乘公交车去上班。(1)Dad'smotorbikebroke

down,sohehadtogotoworkbybus.(2)Becausehismotorbikedidn't

work,Dadhadtotakeabustowork.(3)Something

was

wrong

withhismotorbike,soDadcoulddonothingbutgotoworkbybus.【魔句13】

我们如何能用更多的方法处理这个问题呢?Whatcanwedo

withtheproblembyusingmoremethods?Howcanwedeal

with/cope

withtheproblemwithmoremethods?Howcanwehandletheprobleminmoreways?Howcanwesolve/resolve/settletheproblembymoremeans?[语境]我以前当志愿者的经历可以帮助我解决这一过程中潜在的问题。

(1)Mypreviousexperienceasavolunteermayhelpmesettlethepotentialproblemsintheprocess.(2)Mypreviousexperienceasavolunteermayhelpmehandle/solve/resolvethepotentialproblemsintheprocess.(3)Mypreviousexperienceasavolunteermayhelpmedeal

with/do

with/cope

withthepotentialproblemsintheprocess.【魔句14】

我们最好利用这次机会来提高我们的英语口语水平。Wehad

better

take(full)advantage

oftheopportunitytoimproveourspokenEnglish.Wemight

as

well

make(full/good)use

oftheopportunitytoimproveourspokenEnglish.[语境]我希望你最好利用这个机会进一步学习中国的传统文化。

(1)Iwishyoumight

as

well

take

advantage

ofthisopportunitytolearntraditionalChineseculturefurther.(2)Iwishyouhad

better

make

full

use

oftheopportunitytolearntraditionalChineseculturefurther.【魔句15】

他现在正处于困境中,我们必须帮他渡过难关。Heis

in

troublenow,andwemusthelp

him

out.Heis

in

difficultynow,andwemusthelphimout.Wemusthelp

him

out

of

the

troubleheissuffering.Heis

faced

with

difficulties.It

is

necessary/essential/a

must

thatwe(should)helphimpullthrough.[语境]它们现在处境危险,我们必须帮助它们。(1)Theyarenowin

danger,andwemusthelp

them

out.(2)Theyare

faced

with

danger.It

is

necessary/essential/a

must

thatwe(should)helpthemout.【魔句16】

对很多人来说,掌握一门外语不是一件容易的事。Formanypeople,tomasteraforeignlanguageis

not

an

easy

thing.It

is

a

difficult

taskformanypeopletomasteraforeignlanguagewell.Manypeoplefind

it

a

hard

job

tobefluentinaforeignlanguage.[语境]对很多人来说,养成一个好习惯不容易。(1)Formanypeople,toformagoodhabitis

not

an

easy

thing.(2)Manypeoplefind

it

a

hard

job

todevelopagoodhabit.【魔句17】

幸运的是,在当地群众的帮助下,他在这次交通事故中幸存了下来。Hewasso

lucky

thathegot

the

help

ofthelocalpeopleandsurvivedthetrafficaccident.Luckily/Fortunately,thelocalpeoplecame

to

his

aidandsavedhislifefromthetrafficaccident.With

the

help

ofthelocalpeople,heluckily

survivedthetrafficaccident.[语境]幸运的是,他及时赶到,帮助我们摆脱了困境。(1)Luckily/Fortunately,hearrivedintimeandhelped

us

out

of

trouble.(2)Wewere

so

lucky

thathistimelyarrivalgot

us

out

of

trouble.情境4原因与结果【魔句18】

由于没有公共汽车,我们只好步行回家。Therewasnobus,sowehadtowalkhome.Astherewasnobus,wehadnochoicebuttowalkhome.There

being

no

bus,wehadtowalkhome.There

being

no

bus,whatwehadtodowastowalkhome.[语境]没有足够的业余时间,他不得不放弃了写作的爱好。(1)There

being

not

enough

spare

time,hehadtogiveupthehobbyofwriting.(2)There

was

not

enough

spare

time,hehadnochoicebuttogiveupthehobbyofwriting.【魔句19】

什么导致了火灾对警察来说是个谜。Whatcausedthefireisa

puzzle

tothepolice.Whatresultedinthefirepuzzlesthepolice.What

puzzlesthepoliceiswhatcontributedtothefire.Thepoliceare

puzzled

aboutwhatledtothefire.[语境]什么时候会发生地震对我们来说还是一个谜。(1)Whenanearthquakewillhappenisa

puzzle

tous.(2)Whenanearthquakewillhappenpuzzlesus.(3)Weare

puzzled

aboutwhenanearthquakewilloccur.【魔句20】

他学习刻苦。因此,他轻松地通过了考试。Heworkedhardathisstudy.As

a

result,hepassedtheexameasily.Hehadbeenhard-workingathisstudy.As

a

consequence,hepassedtheexameasily.As

a

result

ofhishardworkathisstudy,hepassedtheexameasily.Hispassingtheexamwitheaseresulted

fromhishardworkathisstudy.Hishardworkathisstudyresulted

in/led

tohispassingtheexameffortlessly.[语境]我从小生活在北京,因此,我普通话讲得流利。(1)IhavebeenlivinginBeijingsinceIwasborn.As

a

consequence,IcanspeakMandarinfluently.(2)As

a