高三英语二轮写作复习what makes a good writing课件（共19张）

WhatmakesagoodwritingEnjoythefollowingpassages.Hand-writingStructureWhatmakesagoodwriting?OuterbeautyInnerbeautyContentLanguage2.Whatmakesgoodlanguage?(1).Itismyhonortotellyouagoodnews.(2).TheEnglishclubwillholdaEnglishreportmeetingwhatisaboutthestudyingtravelfeel.(3).AreportmeetingwillbeholdbytheEnglishclub.(4).Thereweremanystudentsattendthelearningtrip.(5).What’smore,couldyoupleasegiveusaspeechaboutlearnEnglish?1).Avoidmistakes(6).Notonlywillweshareouropinions,butalsowillappreciatesomebeautifulpictures.

(7).Asweallknow,lastweekwewentonatriptoseveraldifferentplaces.(8).Thelearningtripisbeneficialofourlearning.(9).Lookingforwardtoyourarrive.(10).ProfessorLicomesfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.ProfessorLicomesfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.

ProfessorLiwhocomesfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.

ProfessorLicomingfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.(1).加连词：(2).使用非谓语：deliver2.Useadvancedvocabulary1）晚词优先2）短语优先goodimportantvisitvital;essential;significantpayavisittoaccess,available,appealing,charming,challenging,consequently,essentialperfect;excellent;outstandingvital;essential;significantperfect;excellent;outstandingpayavisittovital;essential;significantperfect;excellent;outstandingTip：平时积累吸引某人appealtosb使用，利用makeuseof;takeadvantageof;makethebestof相信，认为keepsth.inmind;bearsth.inmindholdthefirmbeliefthat…;beconvincedthat…记住某事2.UseadvancedvocabularySuddenlyIthoughtthatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.hadanidea3.Usegoodsentencepatterns(1).Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(2).Becausewearedevotedtoourstudyeveryday,wehavenotimetorelaxourselves.(3).Iamwritingyoualetter.Ihopetogetyoursuggestions.What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Devotedtoourstudyeveryday,wehavenotimetorelaxourselves.I’mwritingyoualetter,hopingtogetyoursuggestions.(4).Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinareportmeeting.Itwillbeheldnextweek.(5).Igotthefirstprizebecauseofyourhelp.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinareportmeeting,whichwillbeheldnextweek.

Icouldn’thavegottenthefirstprize

butforyourhelp.

(6).Wewillholdareportmeetinginthelecturehall.

(7).Wedidnotknowthetruemeaningoftravellinguntilweexperiencedit.

Itwasnotuntilweexperiencedtravellingthatweknewthetruemeaningofit.

Notuntilweexperiencedtravellingdidweknowthetruemeaningofit.

Areportmeeting

willbeheld

inthelecturehall.Summary:（1）非谓语的使用（2）从句的使用（3）特殊句式的使用（4）被动句的使用（5）虚拟语气的使用4.Usegoodlinkingwords:Brainstormrelevantlinkingwords:1.

表示递进：2.表示转折：3.表示因果关系：

4.表示条件关系：5.表示顺序关系：6.换一种方法表述：7.进行举例说明：8.用于陈述事实：9.

对一个话题进行总结：10.其它常用到的副词：whatismore;besidesonthecontrarysince;as;

therefore;asaresultoncondition(that);aslongasaboveall

inotherwords;thatistosayforinstance;suchastotellyouthetruthallinall;inawordotherwise;personallyAsyouknow,ourmonitorisagoodgirl.Shestudiesveryhardsothatsheisgoodatallthesubjects.What’smore,shelikessports.Shetakesanactivepartintheschoolsportsmeetings.Inaddition,sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Inaword,shehassetusagoodexample.

Ourmonitorisagoodgirl.Shestudiesveryhard.Sheisgoodatallthesubjects.Shelikessports.Shetakesanactivepartintheschoolsportsmeetings.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Shehassetusagoodexample.（1）使文章连贯，流畅。Ilikesports.Ilikesports,

suchas

swimmingandplayingbasketball.JackisgoodatEnglish.JackisgoodatEnglish.

Forexample,

hecantalkwithforeignersinEnglishfreely.

（2）引出拓展，充实文章内容。UselinkingwordsAvoidmistakesUseadvancedvocabularyUsegoodsentencepatternsSummaryUsethetipstoimproveyourwriting.DearChristina,Howareyourecently?IamLiMing,fromtheEnglishUnion.Iamwritingtoaskyoutoattendareportmeetingonourlatesteducationaltrip.Wearetoholdthisreportmeetingtogivestudentsanopportunitytoshareourdifferentexperienceswithyouandotherstudents.Asyouknow,lastweekwewentonaneducationaltriptoseveraldifferentplacesinourcountry.Weenjoyedourtripalot.Thismeetingwillbeheldfrom4:00p.mto6:00p.monFridayinthelecturehallofourschoolonthesecon