英语专四历年作文真题

英文写作

2011年专四作文真题：Shouldprivatecarownersbetaxedforpollution?（私家车是否应该交污染税）----关于环

境

Direction：

Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

Shouldprivatecarownersbetaxedforpollution?

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,stateclearlywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithappropriatereasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

写作指南：这是典型的立场观点选择题型。要求考生确立自己的观点，然后进行论证。本文要求学生就

私家车是否应该交污染税”这一话题发表自己的意见。

第一部分：分析现状：私家车越来越多，环境污染日益严重，“污染税”提出的背景，进而提出自己的观点：

私家车应该交污染税。

第二部分：从两方面进行阐述。首先由于私家车造成环境问题，所以私家车有义务交税，为国家环境建设所

用。其次纳税能提高人们的环保意识。

第三部分：进行总结，再次表明自己的观点。

经典范文：Shouldprivatecarownersbetaxedforpollution?

Withthedevelopmentofsociety,manypeoplecanaffordacar.Asthenumberofthecarsisrising,wearefacing

someproblems.Onebigproblemisthepollutioncausedbytheuseofcars.Inordertosolvethisproblem,government

agenciesinsomebigcitiesrecentlysuggestthata“pollutiontax"shouldbeputonprivatecarsinordertocontrolthe

numberofcarsandreducepollutioninthecity.Formypart,Iagreetothisviewpoint,andmyreasonsareasfollows:

Tobeginwith,carscontributetotheenvironmentalpollution.Forexample,alotofbigcitiesinChinaarenow

plaguedbyseriousairpollution.Thenitistheresponsibilityoftheseprivatecarownerstopayforthepollutionand

theyshouldbetaxed.Thepurposeofcollectingenvironmentalpollutiontaxistoraisethefund,andthenutilizethe

taxrevenuelevertoprotectourenvironment.

Secondly,itisagoodwaytoraisepeople'senvironmentalawarenessbyputtingapollutiontaxonprivatecars.If

peoplesufferfromthefinanciallosswhenmakingadecision,theywillthinkmoreabouttheirdecision.Thenthey

willconsidermorewhendecidingtobuyaprivatecar.Consequently,theincreaserateofthenumberoftheprivate

carscanbecontrolled.

Inaword,itisaverygoodandnecessaryattempttousethemeansoftaxationtotreatthepollution.Ofcourse,it

mustbekeptinmindthatallpeople,includingtheprivatecarowners,shouldtrytheirbesttoprotecttheenvironment.

2010年专四作文真题：ShouldCollegeStudentsHireCleaners?

（大学生是否应该雇佣清洁工）一关于大学生的生活独立

Direction：

Itisrecentlyreportedinanewspaperthatsixstudentswhosharedadormatalocaluniversityhiredacleaner

todolaundryandcleaningonceaweek.Andeachofthempaidher60yuanamonth.Thishasledtoaheateddebate

astowhethercollegestudentsshouldhirecleaners.

Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

ShouldCollegeStudentsHireCleaners?

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,stateclearlywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithappropriatereasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

写作指南：这是典型的立场观点选择题型。要求考生确立自己的观点，然后进行论证。

第一部分：短文从一则新闻报道入手，要求考生就这一话题发表意见，由于是考生熟悉的校园话题，且考生

看到题目直觉的反应就是不应该雇佣清洁工，因此首段直接表明观点，对该做法持否定态度。

第二部分：主体部分从两方面进行分析，第一，根据古人“一屋不扫，何以扫天下”的道理展开，说明作为

大学生应该逐渐培养独立意识，不应该连最基本的小事都依赖他人；第二，从金钱角度阐述该现象的恶劣影

响，大学生基本靠父母供养，雇佣清洁工打扫寝室很容易导致校园中产生攀比、炫富等不良现象。

第三部分：结论部分呼吁结束这种做法，并且呼应主体部分的两点原因，号召大学生尽快建立独立意识和良

好的金钱观，让父母对我们的自理能力放心。

经典范文：ShouldCollegeStudentsHireCleaners?

Accordingtoarecentreport,sixuniversitystudentshiredcleanerstocleantheirdormanddotheirlaundryevery

week.Althoughwehavenorighttotellthemwhattodowiththeirmoney,asauniversitystudentmyself,Ifindthis

practiceabsurd.

Forastart,awayfromourparents,itisinuniversitythatwelearntobeindependentadults.Cleaningtheroom

anddoingone'slaundryarethemostbasiclivingskills.Ifwealwaysdependonotherstotakecareofus,howcanwe

survivewhenthereisnoonetohelpus?Howcanwetakeonanyresponsibilitywhenwestepintosociety?

Foranother,thepracticereflectstheirflippantattitudetowardsmoney.Themoneytheypaidforthecleaners

probablycomesfromtheirparents,whomustbeverydepressedoncetheyknowthetruth.Italsosetsaverybad

precedentoncampus.Otherstudentsmayfollowsuittoshowthewealthoftheirfamilies;orworse,theytendtothink

moneycanbuythemanythinginthisworld,whichobviouslyiswrong.

Allinall,Ithinkwemustdoawaywiththispractice.Otherwise,wemayneverappreciatethegoodvalueof

moneyandanindependentwayoflife.Thebetterandsoonerwecantakecareofourselves,themoreproudour

parentswillbe.

2009年专四作文真题：WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?（旅游对环境的影响？）----关于环境

Direction：December5thisInternationalVolunteersDay.Since1985,whentheUnitedNationsannouncedthespecial

day,tensofmillionsofpeoplearoundtheworldhavevolunteeredtohelpthoseinneed.Chinanowhas4.5million

registeredvolunteershowhaveprovidedmorethan4.5billionhoursofvolunteerwork.Whatcanyougainfrom

volunteering?

Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,stateclearlywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithappropriatereasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

写作指南：这是典型的立场观点选择题型。要求考生确立自己的观点，然后进行论证。

本文要求考生就旅游是否会给环境带来不好的影响这•话题发表自己的看法。根据题目要求，文章结构

如下：第一部分：明确表达自己的观点：过度开发旅游对环境会造成不好的影响。

第二部分：从两个方面来论证自己的观点。

第三部分：进行总结：我们应该做什么？

经典范文：WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?

Inrecentyears,tourismhasdevelopedrapidlyinChina.Manypeoplebelievethattourismproducepositiveeffectson

economicgrowthandweshouldtryourbesttopromotetourism.Butwhatthesepeoplefailtoseeisthattourismmay

bringaboutadisastrousimpactonourenvironment.Asforme,I'mfirmlyconvincedthattoomuchtouristsbring

harmtotheenvironment.

Thebadimpactoftourismontheenvironmenthasmainlyexpresseditselfinvariousways.Onewayisthe

processofexploitinganewscenicspot.Inordertoattracttourists,alotofartificialfacilitieshavebeenbuilt,which

havecertainunfavorableeffectsontheenvironment.Thisprocessusuallybreakstheecologicalbalanceofthearea.In

somemountainousplaces,treesarebeingcutdowntobuildhotelsforotherstoseeandexplorethebeautyofthe

mountains.Thenlandslidesandmud-rockflowscomeup.Anotherwaythedevelopmentoftourismhasdamagedthe

environmentoccurswhentouristsgotoscenicspots.Sometouristsdon'thavetheawarenesstoprotectthe

environment,andignorantlythrowtheirgarbagehereandthere.Somepeopleevenkillthelocalwildlifetoeat,which

badlydamagesthebalanceofthenaturalenvironment.

Itiswrongtosacrificetheenvironmentforthegrowthoftourism.Wemustkeepinmindthattoomuchtourists

bringharmtotheenvironment.Weneedtofindabalancebetweensatisfyingtheneedsoftouristsandreducingtoa

minimumthepollutiontheycause.

2008年专四作文真题：TheBenefitsofVolunteering

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（参加志愿活动的好处）——关于大学生和社会

Direction：December5thisInternationalVolunteersDay.Since1985,whentheUnitedNationsannouncedthespecial

day,tensofmillionsofpeoplearoundtheworldhavevolunteeredtohelpthoseinneed.Chinanowhas4.5million

registeredvolunteershowhaveprovidedmorethan4.5billionhoursofvolunteerwork.Whatcanyougainfrom

volunteering?

写作指南：这是指定明确观点型的作文。要求考生以给定的观点作为中心思想（论点）进行论证。

本文要求论述“志愿活动的好处”，主体部分可以着重论述志愿活动对社会的好处，也可以论述志愿活动对志愿

者本人带来的好处，还可以兼顾两方面。构思立意时要从多个角度论述自己的观点，并对所有者材加以整合、

归纳。

以讨论“对志愿者自己的好处”为例，可以讨论如下好处：

第一，在交际、沟通能力方面的好处（包括扩大交际面，与不同的人打交道，协调不同的关系，理解不

同的立场等）。

第二，提高工作能力、增加技能的好处（主要谈对自己知识、技能的提高有什么作用，包括学校知识的

运用，实际能力的提高等，注意与前面的“交际能力”有所区分）。

第三，为志愿者带来成就感，获得必理上的满足（获得尊敬与承认，实现自我价值）。

经典范文：

TheBenefitsofVolunteering

Volunteeringhasgrownintoafashiontheseyears,withvolunteersrangingfromcollegestudentstowhite

collarworkers.ItisreportednowChinahas4.5millionregisteredvolunteershavingprovidedmorethan4.5billion

hoursofvolunteerwork.Whywouldsomanypeopleliketodovolunteerwork?Arethereanybenefitsof

volunteering?

Theanswerisabsolutelyyes.Firstofall,throughvolunteeringwecangainmoreexperiences.Whatever

volunteeringworkwedo,eitherbeingavolunteerteacherforavillageschooloravolunteerworkerinaretiredhouse,

wecantastedifferentlifestylesandbroadenourhorizon.

Secondly,throughvolunteeringwecanacquirethesenseofbeingneeded.Manypeoplefeelfrustratedwith

travailsinlifeandemptywiththecyclingofworkingandresting.Theygraduallybecomenumb,losingthesenseof

beingneeded.Byjoiningthevolunteergroupandofferinghelpvoluntarilytopeoplewhoneedit,wemayfeelhappy

andfulfilledagain.

Thirdly,throughvolunteeringwecanlearnmoregoodqualities.Volunteerworkisteamwork,whichneeds

goodcooperation.Wecanknowpeoplewithdifferentpersonalitiesanddifferentbackgroundjoininginthevolunteer

groupanddevotingtothevolunteerworktogether.Fromourco-volunteerswecanabsorbmanygoodqualitiesthat

couldhelpusbebetterpersons.

Inconclusion,volunteeringisofgreatbenefitinthatwecangainmoreexperiences,acquirethesenseof

beingneededandlearnmoregoodqualities.

2007年专四作文真题：IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?

（交网友）——关于流行文化：网络

Direction：

NowadaystheInternethasbecomepartofpeople'slife,andmillionsofyoungpeoplehavemadefriendsonline.

Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?

Youarebwitehhreepats:

Inthefirstpart,stateclearlywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithappropriatereasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

写作指南：

这是典型的立场观点选择题型。要求考生确立自己的观点，然后进行论证。

本文要求考生就网上交友是否明智发表自L的看法。根据题目要求，文章结构如下：

第一部分：明确表达自己的观点。

第二部分：合理论证自己的观点，要有说服力。

第三部分：就以上部分进行总结。

范文与解析：IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?

（1）Isitwisetomakefriendsonline?（2）People'sviewsaboutthisissuevaryfromonetoanother.（3）Some

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peoplethinkthatitisunwisetomakefriendsonlinewhileothersthinkthatthereisnothingwrongwithonlinefriends.

(4)Inmypointofview,althoughonlinefriendscannotbealwaystrusted,thebenefitsfaroutweightherisks.(5)The

reasonsaremainlyasfollows:

(6)Firstofall,itiseasyandquicktogettoknowpeopleandmakenewfriendsonline.(7)Weknowfriendsare

indispensableinourdailylifebuttheycannotstaywithuswhereverwego.(8)Formanypeople,especiallycollege

freshmen,leavingfriendsandthesecurityofhomeforanewplacewheretheydon'tknowanyonecanbe

overwhelming.(9)WithsomeonlinechattingtoolssuchasQQandMSN,theycantalktopeopletheylikeandfind

peoplewithcommoninterestseasily.(10)Inaddition,onlinefriendscanhelpbroadenourknowledgeaboutdifferent

culturesandcustoms.(11)Chattingwithpeoplefromdifferentplacesandsocialbackgroundsissurelyaneffective

waytounderstandotherculturesanddevelopcross-culturalcommunicationskills.(12)Wecanalsopracticeour

Englishinspeakingandwriting.

(13)Tosumup,makingfriendsonlineisamazing.Intheonlineglobalcommunitywecanenjoyanactivesocial

lifewithrewardingexperience,soitiswisetomakeonlinefriends.

2006年专四作文真题：SavingMoneyisaGoodHabit

(省钱是好习惯)——关于个人生活

Direction：

RecentlyaBeijinginformationcompanydidasurveyofstudentlifeamongmorethan700studentsinBeijing,

Guangzhou,Xi'an,Chengdu,Shanghai,Wuhan,NanjingandShenyang.Theresultshaveshownthat67percentof

studentsthinkthatsavingmoneyisagoodhabitwhiletherestbelievethatusingtomorrow'smoneytodayisbetter.

Whatdoyouthink?

写作指南：这是典型的立场观点选择题型。要求考生确立自己的观点，然后进行论证。

本文要求考生就网上交友是否明智发表自己的看法。根据题目要求，文章结构如下：

第•部分：明确表达自己的观点(总论点)。

第二部分：用几个分论点合理论证自己的总观点，要有说服力。

第三部分：就以上部分进行总结。

范文与解析：SavingMoneyisaGoodHabit

(1)RecentlytheresultofasurveyconductedbyaBeijinginformationcompanyhasshownthatthemajorityof

Chinesestudentsthinkthatsavingmoneyisagoodhabitwhiletherestprefertousetomorrow'smoney.(2)Asis

seentome,theprincipleof“hardworkandthriff,isstillatworkinChina,andIabsolutelybelievethatwewillprofit

morefromsavingmoneythanfromspendingtomorrow'smoney.

(3)Throughsavingmoney,we'Hbebetterpreparedforourlife.(4)Thereisanoldsayingthat“apennysavedis

apennyearned”.(5)Inmodemsociety,lifeissochangeablethatwecan'tpredictwhatwillhappeninthefuture.(6)

Sowe'dbettergetpreparedforunexpectedemergencies.(7)What'smore,psychologicallyspeaking,savingmoney

meanscontrollingmoneyratherthanbeingcontrolledbymoney,anditenablesustobefreerandmoreindependent.

(8)Withthemoneywe'vesaved,wedon'tneedtobetoomuchconcernedabouttheoldageorthemonthly

installmentthatweowetothebank.

OfcourseIdon'tmeanthatwecannotloanmoneytobuyahouseorforsomeenjoyment.WhatI'msayingis

thatwemustthinktwicebeforespendingtomorrow'smoney.(9)Toputitinanutshell,I'magreatbelieverthat

savingmoneyisagoodhabit.

PartOne:

(1)用一项调查'survey”引入要讨论的问题。

(2)用“Asisseentome…”清楚地表明了自己的观点。引用习语“hardworkandthrift”使文章更具说服力。

PartTwo:

(3)具体分析和解释了选择“savingmoney”的原因。

(4)此处弓I用“Apennysavedisapennyearned”恰到好处。

(5)(6)从社会变化难以预测说明节约用钱的必要性。

(7)“What飞more”表达递进关系，使阐述的理由更充分。

(8)阐述了节约用钱的好处。

PartThree:

(13)“Toputitinanutshell”为语言亮点，意为“概括地说”。

2005年专四作文真题：MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestival

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（我对艺术节的看法）——关于校园文化

Direction：

Thestudents,Unionofyouruniversityisplanningtoholdanartsfestivalnextsemester,andtheyareinviting

studentstocontributetheirideasandsuggestionsastohowitshouldbeorganizedorwhatshouldbeincluded.

Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestival

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,stateclearlywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithappropriatereasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

写作指南：此作文题属于自由发挥型。在这类题型中，一般出题的规律是：先提出一个话题，然后可能

会提供一些行的观点，要求考生通过给定的材料做出自己的分析，提出自己的论点，然后进行阐述和论证。

这种题FI对论点不做限制，作者可以自由发挥，只要能证明自己，围绕话题即可。

本文要求考生就大学里的文化艺术节发表自己的看法。根据题目要求，文章结构如下：

第一部分：明确表达自己的观点（总论点）。

第二部分：用几个有说服力的分论点来支撑自己的总论点。

第三部分：对以上部分进行总结，并适当升华主题。

范文：

MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestival

Universityartsfestivalhasalwaysbeenabigoccasiontodisplaystudents,talentinartaswellastocultivate

theirartistictaste.Therefore,tomaketheincomingartsfestivalmorefruitful,Ipersonallythinkitshouldincludetwo

parts:oneistoorganizesomeartactivitiesamongstudentssuchassinging,painting,photography,recitationorshort

playcontests,andtheotheristoinviteallkindsofarttroupestocampustostageexcellentperformancesofballet,

orchestraordramaforourstudents.

Asregardswhyuniversityartsfestivalshouldbeorganizedinthisway,therearemainlytworeasons:to

developstudents'artisticpotentialandtoenhancetheiraestheticability.Byparticipatinginartcontests,studentsnot

onlyhaveagoldenopportunitytoshowtheirspecialgiftforartbutalsoundergosortoftrainingthroughpreparation,

rehearsalandcompetition.Thusthoseactivitiesencouragestudentstogetinvolvedinartactivities,whichisnot

readilyaccessibletotheminnormaltimes.Suchanintimatecontactwithrealartenablesstudentstounderstandart

betterandappreciateitproperly,whichwillrefinetheirartistictasteinthelongrun.

Sincemyideaofartsfestivalintegratestrainingstudents'artisticabilitywithimprovingtheiraesthetictaste,I

believeitwillgoalongwayinarteducation,whichisalsotheultimateaimofuniversityartsfestival.

2004年专四作文真题：WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?

（电话和写信）——关于社会文化

Direction：

Nowadaysyoungpeopletendtophonemoreoftenthanwritetoeachother.So,somesaythatphoneswillkillletter

writing.Whatisyouropinion?

Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,stateclearlywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithappropriatereasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructions

mayresultinalossofmarks.

写作指南：

此作文题属于立场选择型模式。这类题目也可称为“For-Against”模式。在提出话题后，通常从相对的角

度提出两种观点和立场，要求考生从中选出一个作为自己的立场，即二选•、然后论证其正确性。

本文要求考生就大学里的文化艺术节发表自己的看法。根据题目要求，文章结构如下：

第一部分：明确表达自己的观点（总论点）。

第二部分：用几个有说服力的分论点来支撑自己的总论点。

第三部分：对以上部分进行总结，并适当升华主题。

范文与解析：

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WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?

Telephoneissaidtobeoneofthegreatestinventionsoftheworld,whichhasrevolutionizedpeople'swayof

life.Althoughmoreandmorepeoplenowadaystendtophonemorethanwriteletters,Istilldon'tbelievephoneswill

killletterwritinginpeople'sdailycommunication.

Peoplecommunicatefordifferentpurposesandindifferentways.Letters,thoughtraditionalinaway,help

peopleexpresstheirideasinamoreexactway,withoutthecarelesstongueslipsoftelephoneconversations.More

importantly,itislongheldthat44Toseeistobelieve.^^andcommunicationinwrittenformisconsideredtobemore

formalthanthatdoneorally.Therefore,lettersarealwaysthepreferredwayofcommunicationwhenitcomesto

formaloccasionslikejobapplication,nailingdownacontractortravelinginformationconfirmation.Itisnotentirely

groundlesstosaythatlettersarestillindispensablenowadays.

Inaword,lettershavetheiruniquefeaturestosatisfycertaincommunicationpurposesandwilltherefore

neverbereplacedbyphonesinpeople'sdailylife.It'sperhapsmoreappropriatetosaythattheysupplementeach

otherinsteadofreplacingeachother.

2003年专四作文真题：TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood（保持好心情的重要性）----关于身心健康

Direction:

Peopleinmodemsocietyliveunderalotofpressure,fromeducation,career,orfamily.Soitisimportantforthemto

keepagoodmoodunderwhatevercircumstances.

Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,stateclearlywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithappropriatereasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

写作指南：

这是一篇属于给定明确观点型的作文。一般情况下，考题先提出一个话题，并给定了关于这个话题的一种明

确的观点，要求考生以这个给定的观点作为文章的中心思想（论点）进行论证。写这类作文的关键在于是否

能很好地论证这一明确的观点。

范文：

TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood

Withthedevelopmentofmodernscience,technologyandeconomics,ourlivingstandardhasreachedanever

higherlevel.Butmoreandmorepeoplearelivingundergreaterpressurethaneverbefore.Asaconsequence,people

areincreasinglysufferingfromvariousdistortionsbothphysicallyandmentally.Tohelpout,itisimportantthat

everyonekeepagoodmoodtoday.

Thereareseveralreasonsformyargument.First,agoodmoodcancreatehighefficiency.Whenyouwork

withagoodmood,youwillfeelhappyandbewillingtodosomeworkwhichusedtobeboring.Onthecontrary,a

badmoodcanmakeyoupassiveanddothingswithreluctance.Second,agoodmoodisbeneficialtoyourhealth.If

youfailtokeepagoodmood,youwillbefeelingdepressedandfedup,whichisapttocausesomepsychological

diseases.Third,whenyouhaveagoodmood,otherpeoplearoundyouwillbeinfluenced.Thusmoreandmorepeople

willfeelhappytocommunicatewithyou.

Tosumup,keepingagoodmoodisveryimportantbothforyourselfandforthepeoplearoundyou.Ifyou

wanttohaveahappyandsuccessfullife,pleasekeepagoodmoodeveryday.

2002年专四作文真题：TheBestWaytoStayHealthy

（如何保持健康）——关于健康

Direction：

Nowadayspeoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareoftheimportanceofhealth.Andtheyhavedifferentwaystostay

healthy.Forexample,someexerciseeveryday;otherstrytokeepabalanceddiet.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestway

tostayhealthy?

写作指南：

这种考题也可转化为Howt。”结构题,即“howtostayhealthy”。这种考题要求考生首先提出自己认为最好的

保持健康的方式，然后用两到三个理由支持自己的观点。这类考题可作如下结构安排：

第一部分：解释命题，提出解决方案（最好为概括性的方案，以便论述）

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第二部分：论据1+解释/例证

论据2+解释/例证

论据3+解释/例证

第三部分：结论：重申自己观点，提出希望和展望未来

范文：

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