专题04读后续写情绪多样性（句子）教师版

课前检测分析并总结下列句子的基本句型。e.g.Soshallowisthelakethatnofishcanliveinit.句型：So+adj.+部分倒装+that从句。1.Whatsurprisedherwasthatshetookoneofthepillsandtheheadacheslunkaway.句型：___________________________________________________________________________________________2.Tohisgreatexcitement,thedayhelookedforwardtocameatlast!句型：___________________________________________________________________________________________3.Withanger,hisvoicetrembledandarguedwithTom.句型：___________________________________________________________________________________________4.NotuntilIbegantoworkdidIrealizehowmuchtimeIhadwasted.句型：___________________________________________________________________________________________5.ItwaswhenwewerereturninghomethatIrealizedwhatagoodfeelingitwastohavehelpedsomeoneintrouble.句型：___________________________________________________________________________________________6.Haditnotbeenyourgeneroushelp,Icouldn’thavegonethroughthatbitterperiod.句型：___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1.What+情绪v.+sb.+is/was+that从句2.toone’s+n.+句子3.with/without+n.+句子4.否定词置句首：never/bynomeans等+倒装句5.Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他部分6.Haditnotbeenfor+感动的内容,主句虚拟.

课中讲解Sectiononeplexstructure（来源：情绪描写之复杂结构）1.So+情绪adj.+部分倒装+that从句e.g.Soangrywashethathethrewthevaseonthefloor.句式翻译1]这个小女孩感到如此害怕，以至于站在那里一动不动。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Sostruckwithfearwasthelittlegirlthatshestoodrootedtothespot.[句式翻译2]当听到粉丝呼喊自己的名字时，这个歌手如此骄傲，以至于没有抬眼看。。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________句式翻译3]老师对于他这次考试的分数感到如此惊讶，以至于怀疑他是作弊的。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Soastonishedwastheteacherabouthisgradethathedoubtedifhehadcheated.句式翻译4]汤姆如此昏昏欲睡，以至于他快要晕倒了。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：SodrowsywasTomthathewasonthevergetofaint.2.What+情绪v.+sb.+is/was+that从句e.g.Whatsurprisedmewasthattheshyboywaswillingtoaccepthelpfromothers.[句式翻译1]令他感到尴尬的是他老婆当众重重地掴了他一记耳光。________________________________________________________________________________答案:Whatembarrassedhimwasthathiswifeslapped

him

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face.[句式翻译2]令我们感到惊讶的是他20分钟狼吞虎咽吃了20个汉堡。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案:Whatstartleduswasthatheengorged20hamburgersin20minutes.[句式翻译3]令她感到生气的是她的男朋友约会迟到了一个小时。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案:Whatmadeherbloodboilwasthatherboyfriendarrivedonehourlate.[句式翻译4]令我们感到担忧的是他从来没有认真实行他的节食计划。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Whatworrieduswasthathehadneverstrictlyimplementhisdiet.3.with/without+n./toone’s+n.e.g. Withanger,Gilwaswhiteandtrembling.Tomygreatsatisfaction,myhusbandmanagedtogiveupsmoking.[句式翻译1]伴着一声叹息，她往后一靠，闭上了眼睛。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Withalongsigh,sheleanedbackandclosedhereyes.[句式翻译2]老板恼火地挥手让他离开。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Withfury,hebosswavedhimoff.[句式翻译3]使他大为高兴的是，他的小说被接受出版了。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Muchtohisexcitement,hisnovelwasacceptedforpublication.[句式翻译4]使他惊讶的是,他重踩了一下这个女孩的脚。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Tohisastonishment,hestampedonthegirl’sfoot.4.倒装（否定词置句首：never/bynomeans等）e.g.Neverhadhemetsuchanembarrassingthing.[句式翻译1]他从来没想过自己会那么愤怒，猛敲门铃。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Neverhadheimaginedthathecouldbesoseizedwithangerandpoundthedoorbell.[句式翻译2]遇到挫折时，我绝不会再借酒浇愁了。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Whenconfrontedwithsetbacks,bynomeanswillIdrownsadnessinwine.[句式翻译3]他绝不会在别人犯错的时候幸灾乐祸地笑。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Innocasewillhesmirkwhenothersmakeamistake.[句式翻译4]他刚到家就下起了倾盆大雨。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Nosoonerhadhegothomethanitraineddogsandcats.5.Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他部分e.g.ItwasyesterdaythathemetLiPing[句式翻译1]正是Rani的友好和温暖的微笑让我得到了安慰。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：ItwasRani’sfriendlyandwarmsmilethatfortedme.[句式翻译2]正是他的话语让我从自己羞愧感中解脱出来并且感觉到喜悦。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Itwashiswordsthatridmyselffromshameandfilledmewithjoy.[句式翻译3]正是因为他扔掉了烦恼，他才会这么轻松。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Itwasbecausehediscardedtheannoyancethathecouldbesorelieved.[句式翻译4]正是因为盘腿汤姆才进了医院。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：ItwasonaccountofcrossinghislegsthatTomlandedhimselfinhospital.Sectiontwo感悟句式（来源：情绪描写之感悟句式）1.Haditnotbeenfor+感动的内容,Iwouldn’thaveknownwhatwas+道理.e.g.Haditnotbeenformyteacher’shelp,Iwouldn’thavewonthemathpetition.Hadmyteachernotofferedmehelp,Iwouldn’thavewonthemathpetition.[句式翻译1]要不是这次难忘的经历，我本不会学到如此珍贵的一课。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案；Haditnotbeenfortheunforgettableexperience,Iwouldn’thavelearntsuchapreciouslesson.[句式翻译2]要是当时我能够冷静地控制我的情绪，我们本不会吵架。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：HadIcalmlycontrolledmyemotion,wewouldn'thavehadaquarrel.[句式翻译3]要不是你的无私的帮助，我本不能够渡过那个艰难的时期。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Haditnotbeenforyourselflessassistance,Iwouldn’thavegotthroughthetoughtime.[句式翻译4]要是我当时不粗心大意，我本能够避免如此尴尬的时刻。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Haditnotbeenformycarelessness,Icouldhaveavoidedsuchembarrassingmoment.2.对过去进行虚拟.Eventoday,Iamconstantlyremindedoftheexperience,whereIwastaughtthelessonthatitis主题that+启发。e.g.Haditnotbeenformydaughter’skindacttowardsthebagger,Iwouldn’thaveknownwhattruekindnesswas.Eventoday,Iamconstantlyremindedoftheexperience,whereIwastaughtthelessonthatitisofferingothershelpwithouthesitationthatmakesakindheart.[句式改写1]Thelocalshelpedmegothroughallthedifficulties.TheymademerealizethatwhatreallymattersisnotwhatIcangetformyself,buthowwecanallmakeitthroughtogether._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Haditnotbeenforthehelpfromthelocals,Iwouldn’thavegonethroughallthedifficulties.Eventoday,Iamconstantlyremindedoftheexperience,whereIwastaughtthelessonthatitismakingitthroughtogetherthatreallymatters.[句式改写2]Hismotherthankedme,simplybecauseIpraisedthekidaccidentally,afterwhichhegraduallybecameadifferentperson.Itoccurredtomethatsometimes,alittleencouragementwillhelpmakeaconfidentperson._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Haditnotbeenformypraisetothekidaccidentally,theboywouldn’thavebeeadifferentperson.Eventoday,Iamconstantlyremindedoftheexperience,whereIwastaughtthelessonthatitisalittleencouragementthatwillhelpmakeaconfidentperson.[句式改写3]Simplybakedbiscuitswiththechildren,butIlearnedaninvaluablelessonfromit:fixingkids’problemsdoesn’talwaysgivehopefortheireducation;butinstead,findingwhatexcitesthemandthenmakingfulluseoftheexcitementgiveshopefortheireducation._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：HadInotsimplybakedbiscuitswiththechildren,Iwouldn’thavelearnedhowimportantfindingwhatexciteskidsis.Eventoday,Iamconstantlyremindedoftheexperience,whereIwastaughtthelessonthatitistheexcitementthatgiveshopeforchildren’seducation.[句式改写4]Fromthisexperience,Ibegantotrulyknowtheoldman.Ilearntthatwhetheryoungorold,aslongasyouhavepassion,youwillmakeadifference._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Haditbeennotfortheexperience,Iwouldnothavehadthechancetoknowtheoldman.Eventoday,Iamconstantlyremindedoftheexperience,whereIwastaughtthelessonthatwhetheryoungorold,aslongasyouhavepassion,youwillmakeadifference.课后练习补救练习将下列句子按照课中讲解中的句型进行升级。1.Youshouldknowpromiseisn’tshameful.(Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他部分)___________________________________________________________________________________________Itisyouwhoshouldknowpromiseisn’tshameful.2.Arthurwasabitfrightened,andhecontinuedtorushuntilhesawataxi.(with/without+n.)___________________________________________________________________________________________Withfright,Arthercontinuedtorushuntilhesawataxi.3.Theyopenedthesuitcaseandsurprisingly,theyspottedalargesumofmoneyinsideit.(Toone’s+n.)___________________________________________________________________________________________Theyopenedthesuitcaseandtotheirsurprise,theyspottedalargesumofmoneyinsideit.4.Wearedelightedtofindthatthesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.(Toone’s+n.)___________________________________________________________________________________________Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.5.Whatmadeusdepressedwasthatwegotlost.(what+情绪v.+sb.+is/was+that从句)___________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdepressedusisthatwegotlost.6.DadandIfounditwassocutethatwedecidedtochaseit.(So+情绪adj.+部分倒装+that从句)___________________________________________________________________________________________DadandIfoundsocutewastherabbitthatwedecidedtochaseit.7.Heagreed,whichgreatlydisappointedus.(Toone’s+n.)___________________________________________________________________________________________Toourgreatdisappointment,heagreed.8.Wenotonlysawthepicturesquescenery,butalsomanagedtoconsidermom’sscandalsasakindoffun.(否定词置句首：never/bynomeans等)___________________________________________________________________________________________Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,butalsowemanagedtoconsidermom’sscandalsasakindoffun.9.Whatrelieveduswasthatwearrivedatgrandparents’placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.(Toone’s+n.)___________________________________________________________________________________________Toourrelief,wearrivedatgrandparents’placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.10.Ifithadn’tbeenforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere.(倒装)___________________________________________________________________________________________Haditnotbeenforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere.巩固练习翻译下列句子并运用对应的句型。1.出于好奇，我跟着她，发现她在翻垃圾桶。（With+n.）___________________________________________________________________________________________Withcuriosity,Ifollowedherandfoundshewassearchingtherubbishcan.2.是老师的表扬让我成为一个更好的学生。（Itwas…that）___________________________________________________________________________________________Itwastheteacher’spraisethatmademeabetterstudent.3.让他非常开心的是，一架直升机那时飞过头顶。（Toone’s+n.）___________________________________________________________________________________________Tohisgreatjoy,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.4.她如此幸运，不久就出现一块大石头，足够高过树。（So+adj.+部分倒装+that从句）___________________________________________________________________________________________Shewassoluckythatbeforelongabigrockappeared,whichwashighabovethetrees.5.他们再也不会离开彼此。（否定词置句首：never/bynomeans等+倒装句）___________________________________________________________________________________________Neverwouldtheybeawayfromeachother.6.让她开心的是，没等多久她就看到天空中有直升机。（Toone’s+n.）___________________________________________________________________________________________Tohergreatjoy,shedidn'twaitlongbeforeshesawthehelicopterinthesky.7.她是对的，是汤姆叫的直升机，救了她。（Itwas…that）___________________________________________________________________________________________ShewasrightanditwasTomwhocalledthehelicopterandsavedher.8.让我们惊奇的是，途中一个坐落在湖边很好的野营地点进入眼帘。（What+情绪v.+sb.+is/was+that从句）___________________________________________________________________________________________Whatsurpriseduswasthatalongtheway,anicecampingsite,locatedbyalake,cametooureyes.9.是妈妈用惊喜，乐趣和爱填满了我们的童年。_________________________