专题10 书面表达20篇（广州专用）(期末真题+名校模拟) -2023-2024学年八年级英语上学期期末复习查缺补漏冲刺满分（牛津深圳版）

2023-2024学年八年级英语上学期期末复习查缺补漏冲刺满分（牛津深圳版）专题10书面表达20篇（广州专用）期末真题+名校模拟1．（2022上·广东广州·八年级校考期末）学校英语报征稿了！请根据以下要求，写以“MyFavoriteStory”为题写一篇英文短文介绍你课内或课外读过的一个英文故事，内容应包括：注意：词数80个左右，不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。MyFavoriteStory________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2022上·广东广州·八年级校考期末）假设你们班要举办一个英语角，你在同学们之间进行了调查，了解他们对此事的看法。请根据调查结果，用英语写一份调查报告。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计总词数。同学们的态度理由同意（70%）丰富生活，学到更多知识锻炼英语口语不同意（30%）有太多的作业要做，没有时间参加英语角。不能够用英语表达自己的思想，不愿开口讲英语。你的看法自由发挥OurclasswantstoholdanEnglishCorner.Imadeasurveytoseehowmyclassmatesthinkaboutit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2022上·广东广州·八年级广州四十七中校考期末）你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。要求：1.参考词汇：英语戏团Englishdrama；模型制作modelmaking；2.约80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Studentsinourschoolarefreetochoosesomespecialcoursesaccordingtotheirinterest.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2022上·广东广州·八年级校考期末）为了激发学生学习英语的兴趣，你们学校上周举办了“英语周”活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍活动的情况并提出你对下一次英语周的建议。活动名称活动情况英语歌唱比赛·学生感兴趣，积极参加；·歌曲动听，深受欢迎。英语演讲比赛·主题多样：介绍教育交流经验，分享如何提高记忆力方法等等。·……（自行补充）……（自行补充）·……（自行补充）·……（自行补充）你对下一次英语周的建议（1-2点）写作要求：1.包含所有提示信息；2.80-120词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3.不得出现真实的人名、校名。OurEnglishWeekLastweek,therewasanEnglishWeekinourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2022上·广东广州·八年级统考期末）假如你是李华，你发明的“兔形机器人”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请根据下面的思维导图用英文介绍你的发明。RobotRabbit外形特点长长的耳朵，像一只兔子移动迅速，使用太阳能用途可拍照能对话帮助人们探索月球改进计划？改进1？改进2？参考词汇：太阳能solarenergy，探索explore注意：1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Ladiesandgentlemen,Goodmorning!It’smygreatpleasuretobeheretointroducemyinvention.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallaboutmyinvention.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.6．（2022上·广东广州·八年级执信中学校考期末）每年3—5月是学校招生宣传的时候，学校校报向大家征集稿件，向六年级学生介绍多彩的中学校园生活。请你以ColorfulLifeatOurSchool为题介绍一下学校的各种校园活动。内容要点：教育交流活动有机会与德国交换生沟通交流，学习外国文化专家讲座上学期举办提升记忆力的讲座英语周1.英语戏剧表演2.用英语讲中国故事3.请补充你的感受请补充注意：1.词数80左右（开头已给出）2.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息提示词：学期term；专家expert；讲座lectureColorfulLifeatOurSchoolOurschoollifeisreallyinterestingandattractive.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2022上·广东广州·八年级广州市南武中学校考期末）你们班将在下周五举行线上英语日的活动，请你根据以下信息写一份活动计划并号召大家积极参与。EnglishDaySpeakingCoumpetition目的：提高英语口语能力内容：介绍春节传统美食StoryTime目的：了解中国文化内容：用英语讲中国古代故事你的活动？目的：？内容：？注意：1.参考词汇：英语口语（spokenEnglish）；2.词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。TherewillbeanonlineEnglishDaynextFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2022上·广东广州·八年级广州市第五中学校考期末）假如你是李华，你发明的“兔形机器人”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请根据下面的思维导图用英文介绍你的发明。参考词汇：太阳能solarenergy，探索explore；注意：（1）词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Ladiesandgentlemen,Goodmorning!It’smygreatpleasuretobeheretointroducemyinvention.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallaboutmyinvention.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.9．（2022上·广东广州·八年级校考期末）假如你是李华，5月1日你被邀请参加了番禺香江实验学校的英语晚会活动。请你按要求写一篇英文报道，发表在21世纪中学生版TEENS上。内容包括：1、介绍当天活动的安排。2、你参加的一至两项活动及原因。3、你对活动的感受。英语晚会安排表时间活动安排6:30p.m.~7:30p.m.听讲座：如何学好英语（全体参加）7:40p.m.~8:40p.m.观看表演和参加游戏（自由选择）1、英文歌2、英语小故事3、英语游戏注意：1、词数80个左右（开头已经写好，不计入总词数）。2、可适当添加细节，但不能透露个人的任何信息，否则不予评分。OnMay1st,ItookpartinanEnglishpartyinPanyuXiangjiangExperimentalSchool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2022上·广东广州·八年级校考期末）“双减”让同学们有了更多的周末时间，学校微信英语角就“如何让周末更有意义？”的话题展开了讨论。请你根据下图提示，写一篇英语短文。内容要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.词数：80~120。要点提示：

Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimeatweekendsthaneverbefore,buthowtomakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2022上·广东广州·八年级广州市白云区金广实验学校校考期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim记忆力出了问题，写邮件向你征求建议。请你根据他邮件中描述的情况，写一封邮件回复他。字数约80-100词。DearLiHua,Iamhavingtroublewithmymemory.Ihopeyoucangivemesomeadvice.Asyouknow,Ialwayswanttodowellineverysubject.IstudysohardthatIoftenstayuplate.AndIoftenskip(跳过，省略)breakfastinordertosavesometimeformemorizingtextsinthemorning.IspendeveryminuteonmyschoolworkandIdon’twanttospare(抽出)anyminuteforsportsorentertainment.However,nowIfindthatmymemoryisbecomingworseandworse.IoftenforgetwhatIlearninclass.Iamsoworriedaboutthis.WhatshouldIdo?Lookingforwardtoyouradvice.Yourssincerely,Jim________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2023上·广东广州·八年级统考期末）假设你是李华，你们学校的交换生Eric为了方便学习，需要挑选合适的平板，并咨询你的建议。请你根据下面的信息给Eric写一封邮件，向他推荐这款你在网上浏览的HappyPad。注意：1.需包括下图所有要点（“参数”部分除外），并自行补充2个推荐理由；2.词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3.不得透露学校等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearEric,Iwouldliketointroducethispadtoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua13．（2022上·广东广州·八年级广州市第八十六中学校考期末）假如你是来自英国的交换生Mike，你已在广州新华中学学习两周，本周学校正在举行“语文活动周”。请根据下面的信息，给你在英国的朋友Jack写一封电子邮件。向他介绍你在广州学习的经历，并邀请他在网上观看广州新华中学的ChineseWeek晚会。学习经历1.每天上课；学习了一点粤语和粤剧。2.参加语文活动周，如图书展览会，讲故事。3.……（自行补充1-2个语文活动周内容）晚会预告时间：本周五晚上19:00-21:00内容：中国传统舞蹈、诗词大赛注意：1.词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：粵剧CantoneseOpera

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晚会eveningpartyDearJack,MyexchangevisittoGuangzhouXinhuaMiddleSchoolhasgonewell.Ihavealreadybeenherefortwoweeks.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wouldyouliketojoinus?Writebacktomesoon,please!Bestwishes!Yours,Mike14．（2022上·广东广州·八年级二师番禺附属初中校考期末）假设你是李明，本学期你们学校举行了“劳动教育展示会”，同学们展示了各类劳动技能。你的外国朋友杰克对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点适当发挥，通过邮件向他介绍相关内容。TheLaborEducationFairWhenandwherewasitheld?—time—placeWhatdidwedothere?—cookdeliciousfood—designbeautifulclothes...Whathavewelearntfromit?...注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearJack,Howareyouthesedays?YoutoldmeyouwereveryinterestedintheLaborEducationFairatourschool.Letmetellyouaboutitnow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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LiMing15．（2022上·广东广州·八年级统考期末）假如你收到来自英国好友Tom的一封邮件，得知他正准备在学校的InternationalDay给同学们讲述一个中国传统故事，希望得到你的帮助。请依据表格提示给他写一封回信，从以下三个中国古代故事中选择一个推荐给他，根据要点简单介绍故事并写出一个推荐原因。TitleMuLanjoinsthearmyinplaceofherfatherCaoChongweighsanelephantSaiWengandhislosthorseMainCharacters（主要人物）MuLan,MuLan’sfatherCaoCao,CaoChongSaiWeng,SaiWeng’sSonMainplot（主要情节）jointhearmy；dressupas；light；war；findouttheweightlead,…ontoboats；rock；weighbemissing；comebackfalloff；hurt；stayawayfrom；warTheReasonforrecommendation（推荐原因）………………注意：1）词数：80词左右（回信的开头已经给出，不计入词数）；2）不得透漏学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearTom,

IknowyouarealwaysinterestedinChinesecultureandit’smyhonortogiveyoualittlehelpontellingatraditionalstory._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua16．（2022上·广东广州·八年级统考期末）假设你是李明，本学期你们学校举行了“劳动教育展示会”，同学们展示了各类劳动技能。你的外国朋友杰克对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点适当发挥，通过邮件向他介绍相关内容。注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearJack,Howareyouthesedays?YoutoldmeyouwereveryinterestedintheLaborEducationFairatourschool.Letmetellyouaboutitnow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiMing17．（2022上·广东广州·八年级校考期末）来自英国的Eric到你校交流学习，他参加了你们学校上周的“英语周”活动后很兴奋。请你根据以下提示内容，帮助他完成一封家书，向他的父母介绍上周“英语周”的相关情况。要求：1.80-120词（给出部分不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Dearmumanddad,IthasbeentwoweekssinceIlefttheUK.IhaveexperiencedalotinthemiddleschoolinChina.Lastweek,ItookpartintheEnglishWeek.Itgavemeadeepimpression(印象).Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,Eric18．（2022上·广东广州·八年级广州市白云中学校考期末）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给他写封回信，提出你的建议。短文需要包含以下要点。要求：1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearTom,I’mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourmemory._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourimprovement.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua19．（2022上·广东广州·八年级增城中学校考期末）假如你是李华，你学校的英语俱乐部将举办“趣味英语”活动。请写一则英语通告，必须包含以下要点：1.活动时间：星期五下午2:30-5:00；2.活动地点：学校礼堂（hall）；3.活动内容：英语歌唱比赛，请你补充（至少2点）；4.活动意义：请你补充（至少2点）。注意：1.词数80字左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

WanttoshowyourEnglish?CometoourFunnyEnglish!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．（2022上·广东广州·八年级校考期末）假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办英语嘉年华活动，请你根据下面的内容提示，用英语写一篇有关英语嘉年华的通知。词数80左右。内容提示：1.时间：周二到周五2.地点：学校的运动场3.活动：英语戏剧表演，丰富学生的校园生活；书展，有各种有趣的图书；各类英语竞赛，提高学生对英语的兴趣；还有很多有趣的游戏，如crossword，puzzle等。4.可进行适当拓展。EnglishCarnival____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．例文MyFavoriteStoryIlovereadingandIhavereadmanybooks.MyfavoritestoryisCinderella.ThecharactersinthestoryareCinderella,herstepmother,twostepsisters,afairygodmotherandaprince.Thestoryisaboutabeautifulgirl,whowiththehelpofthefairygodmother,wasabletogototheball.There,shefellinlovewiththeprince,gotmarriedandlivedhappilyeverafter.Thisismyfavoritestorybecauseitisinterestinganditteachesustobekindandnottobewickedlikethestepmotherandthetwostepsisters.Therearemanyfascinatingandcolorfulpicturestoointhebook.IadmireCinderellaverymuchforsheisakindandbeautifulgirlwhohadneverdoneanythingbadtoanyone.【详解】[总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的所有要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；介绍书的主要内容时，用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。［写作步骤］第一步，介绍你最喜欢的书名；第二步，介绍书的大致内容；第三步，表达自己喜欢这本书的原因。［亮点词汇］①fallinlovewith喜欢上②withthehelpof在……的帮助下［高分句型］①Thisismyfavoritestorybecauseitisinterestinganditteachesustobekindandnottobewickedlikethestepmotherandthetwostepsisters.

(because引导原因状语从句)②IadmireCinderellaverymuchforsheisakindandbeautifulgirlwhohadneverdoneanythingbadtoanyone.(who引导的定语从句)2．例文OurclasswantstoholdanEnglishCorner.Imadeasurveytoseehowmyclassmatesthinkaboutit.70%ofmyclassmatesthinkitisagoodidea.TheythinkthattheEnglishCornercanmaketheirschoollifemorecolourfulandinteresting.Theycanalsolearnsomethingnew.What’smore,theycanpractisetheiroralEnglishthere.Itcanalsohelpstudentsunderstandforeignculture.However,30%ofmyclassmatesdon’tthinkso.TheysaytheyhavelittletimefortheEnglishCornerbecausetheyhavetoomuchhomeworktodo.SomeofthemarenotgoodatexpressingtheirideasinEnglish,sotheydon’twanttospeakEnglish.Inmyopinion,theEnglishCornerisagoodchancetopractiseourEnglish.Wecanmakemorefriendshere.Besides,wecandevelopourinterestinEnglishbycommunicatinginEnglish.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：考生在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据要求讲述对举办英语角不同人的看法，并发表自己的意见及其理由，适当补充内容，添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图，阐述关于同学们对举办英语角的看法的调查结果；第二步，逐点阐述，从支持举办英语角和不支持举办英语角的不同看法及其理由进行描述。第三步，书写自己的看法及理由。[亮点词汇]①What’smore还有②oralEnglish口语③begoodatdoingsth擅长做某事④goodchance好机会⑤makefriends交朋友⑥Besides除此之外[高分句型]①TheythinkthattheEnglishCornercanmaketheirschoollifemorecolourfulandinteresting.(宾语从句)②TheysaytheyhavelittletimefortheEnglishCornerbecausetheyhavetoomuchhomeworktodo.(原因状语从句)③SomeofthemarenotgoodatexpressingtheirideasinEnglish,sotheydon’twanttospeakEnglish.(结果状语从句)3．

Studentsinourschoolarefreetochoosesomespecialcoursesaccordingtotheirinterest.Itissuchcheerfulnewsbecauseitcanenrichstudents’after-schoollives.

Hereissomeinformationabouteachcourse.Ifyouarekeenonsports,soccercoursewillbeagreatchoice.Notonlycanitmakeyoustrongandhealthy,butalsooffersyouagoodchancetomakefriendsandencourageteamwork.Forthosewhoareinterestedinscience,modelmakingisdefinitelytheirfavorite.Studentscangettoknowmoreaboutscience,whichwillgreatlyarousetheirinterest.IfyouwanttopracticeyourspokenEnglish,youcantakeacourseonEnglishdrama.Whenyouarechallengingdifferentcharacters,youalsolearnhowtoperformthem.

Inmyopinion,Isuggestaddingamusiccourse.Lotsofstudentsaresufferingfromstressofstudy.Itisrelaxingforthemtoplaymusicalinstruments.Hopeeveryonecanenjoythecoursesmentionedabove.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍学校将开设的一些特色课程；第二步，具体阐述学校将要增设的课程，详细介绍课程适合的学生以及课程的目的；第三步，具体阐述你建议增设的课程及理由。[亮点词汇]①enrich使丰富②notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……③encourage鼓励④beinterestedin对……感兴趣⑤spokenEnglish英语口语⑥inmyopinion在我看来⑦sufferfrom遭受[高分句型]①Hereissomeinformationabouteachcourse.（here引导的倒装句）②Ifyouarekeenonsports,soccercoursewillbeagreatchoice.（if引导的条件状语从句）③Notonlycanitmakeyoustrongandhealthy,butalsooffersyouagoodchancetomakefriendsandencourageteamwork.（notonly引导的倒装句）④Forthosewhoareinterestedinscience,modelmakingisdefinitelytheirfavorite.（who引导的定语从句）⑤Studentscangettoknowmoreaboutscience,whichwillgreatlyarousetheirinterest.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）⑥IfyouwanttopracticeyourspokenEnglish,youcantakeacourseonEnglishdrama.（if引导的条件状语从句）⑦Whenyouarechallengingdifferentcharacters,youalsolearnhowtoperformthem.（when引导的时间状语从句）4．例文：OurEnglishWeekLastweek,therewasanEnglishWeekinourschool.TheEnglishsingingcompetitionhadthelargestnumberofparticipants.Itwasagoodchancetoshowyourtalents.Studentsareveryinterestedinitandactivelyparticipateinit.Thesongisbeautifulandpopular.TheEnglishspeechcontestwasalsoachallengingactivity.Ithasavarietyoftopics,suchasintroducingeducationalexchangeexperiences,sharingmethodstoimprovememoryandsoon.ThestudentswererequiredtogiveaspeechinEnglishforfiveminutes.Theytalkedaboutdifferenttopics.Tomreallydidagoodjob,sohewonthefirstplace.Throughthisactivity,IdeeplyunderstoodthecharmofEnglishandtheimportanceoflearningEnglish.Ihopetherewillbesomemoreprogramsinthenextactivitysothatstudentscanshowtheirmoretalents.Ialsohopemorestudentswillpaymoreattentiontotheactivity.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍上周学校举办了英语周活动；第二步，具体介绍英语周的一些具体的活动情况以及学生们的参与情况；第三步，最后介绍自己对以后的活动的希望。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣②avarietyof各种各样的③sothat以便，为了[高分句型]①Tomreallydidagoodjob,sohewonthefirstplace.（so连接的并列句）②Ihopetherewillbesomemoreprogramsinthenextactivitysothatstudentscanshowtheirmoretalents.Ialsohopemorestudentswillpaymoreattentiontotheactivity.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）5．范文：Ladiesandgentlemen,Goodmorning!It’smygreatpleasuretobeheretointroducemyinvention.Ithaslongears,likearabbit.Itcanmovequicklybecauseitisdrivenbysolarenergy.Itcanbeusedtotakephotosandpeoplecantalkwithit.What’smore,itcanhelpexplorethemoon.Thisismyrobotsnake,whichismadebymyselfaloneinmysparetime.Ifitisusedinourlife,Iwillhavetwoimprovements.Iwillsuggesttheengineeruselightironsofhighqualitytomaketheframe.Inaddition,Iwillimprovetheframeworktomakehimmoreflexible.That’sallaboutmyinvention.Ihopeyoulikeit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；第二步，介绍这个发明的情况；第三步，如何改进这个发明。[亮点词汇]①beusedtodosth被用来做某事②takephotos拍照③inmysparetime在我闲暇时间④inaddition另外[高分句型]①Itcanmovequicklybecauseitisdrivenbysolarenergy.（because引导原因状语从句）②Thisismyrobotsnake,whichismadebymyselfaloneinmysparetime.（which引导定语从句）6．例文ColorfulLifeatOurSchoolOurschoollifeisreallyinterestingandattractive.Eachterm,educationalexchangeactivitiesareheldinthecampusinordertoprovidemoreopportunitiesforstudentstocommunicatewithGermanexchangestudentsaswellaslearnaboutforeignculture