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读后续写独自迎战后的收获

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,myfamilymovedtoSeattle,wheremy

parentsstartedtheirnewbusiness一asmallgrocerystoredownstairs

myhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafresh

starttofitintothesophisticatedcitylife.

Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedanexcitingevent,atalentshow

forthelocalfoodbank.Studentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheir

uniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.A

buzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingfor

thebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesireto

participate.However,myself-doubtheldmeback,"Idon'thaveany

specialskillstoshare.5,

Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.Icouldn't

shaketheupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,oneofthemost

populargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpinginthe

grocerystoreafterclass."Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalent

show?”Shegrinned,ctIheardyousingingatune,alongthewayback

home.Ican'thelpfollowingyouhere.^^Gosh,Icouldn'tbelievemy

ears.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittle

talent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeing

favouredbyfortune.

“Youtwo?Thetalentshowfbrthefoodbank?^^Mymumbenttowards

usandherfacelitup."Abigoccasion."Thenalightbulbseemedtogo

inherhead."Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou511bea

perfectmatch.5,Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinking

alike.

EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsingalmosteverysingledayafter

school.Webrainstormed,exchangedideasandrehearsedthe

scene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.

Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacute

stomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.

【表达积累】

l.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafreshstartto

fitintothesophisticatedcitylife.

2.Studentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsin

frontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzof

excitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingforthebig

day.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesireto

participate.However,myself-doubtheldmeback,"Idon'thaveany

specialskillstoshare.”

3.Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.

4.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittle

talent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeing

favouredbyfortune.

5.Thenalightbulbseemedtogoinherhead.

6.Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.

7.Emmacalledthatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotin

anyshapetoperform.

1.作为一个害羞而内向的女孩，我不得不重新开始以适应复杂的城

市生活。

2.鼓励学生在国庆节当天在市政厅向公众展示自己的独特才能。兴

奋的嗡嗡声充斥着学校，每个人都开始为重要的日子做准备。在内

心深处，我内心充满着好奇心和参与欲望的火花。然而，我的自我

怀疑阻止了我，“我没有任何特殊的技能可以分享。

3.时间渐渐过去，才艺表演越来越近。

4.艾玛，这个性极佳和人气爆棚的女孩，承认了我的小才华。由于

艾玛拥有世界上最漂亮的声音，我觉得自己备受命运的青睐。

5.然后她的脑袋里灵光一现。

6.她朝我们眨眨眼，似乎知道我们在想什么。

7.艾玛打电话说她突然肚子疼，无法完成表演。

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Iwascompletelyknockedoutbythenews.

Finallycamethebigmoment.

【参考范文】

Iwascompletelyknockedoutbythenews.WithoutEmma'svoiceto

guideme,Iwoulddefinitelymessupandthiswasnothow

everythingwassupposedtogo!AsIstoodthere,feelingataloss,a

gentletouchonmyshoulderbroughtmebacktoreality.Itwasmy

mom,wearingacomfortingsmile.Afterhavingabriefideaofmy

story,shesaidinafirmtone,"You'veworkedsohard.Youcanmake

itonyourown."Memoriesofcountlessrehearsalcameflooding

back,drowningmyfearsandlosses.Swingingintoaction,Iadjusted

myperformancetoasolo,practicinginnotime.

Finallycamethebigmoment.Takingadeepbreath,Isteppedontothe

stage,envelopedintheglowofthelights.Atfirst,myvoicetrembled

withnervousness,butasthesongprogressed,my

confidencesoared.Ipouredmyemotionsintotheperformance,

lettingmyvoicecarrymyfeelingsintotheair.Thecrowdwatchedin

awe,theirapplauseandcheersechoinginthehall.Facingthe

overwhelmingresponse,IknewthatIhadconqueredmyfears.

Yes,theunexpecteddiscouragementcanbeablessingindisguiseif

wehaveabeliefinourselvesandnevergiveupourdreams.

续写译文

我完全被这个消息震惊了。如果没有艾玛的声音来引导我，我肯定

会搞砸，一切都不应该是这样的！当我站在那里，感到不知所措时，

肩膀上轻轻的触碰让我回到了现实。那是我的妈妈，脸上挂着令人

安慰的微笑。在大致了解了我的故事后，她语气坚定地说：“你已

经很努力了，你自己就能成功