2024年高考英语读后续写精彩句子开头仿写训练10组48例（讲义）（背诵版）

读后续写精彩句子开头仿写训练10组48例（讲义）背诵版

仿写句式一：无灵主语开头_____________________PI

仿写句式二：倒装句开头______________________P2

仿写句式三：对话或独白开头....................................................P2

仿写句式四：介词短语开头....................—…_______________________________P3

仿写句式五：独立主格结构开头..................................................P4

仿写句式六：形容词开头______________________P4

仿写句式七：副词开头___________________P5

仿写句式八：现在分词开头____________________P5

仿写句式九：过去分词开头________________________P6

仿写句式十：动词不定式开头....................................................P7

读后续写实战应用两篇_____________________P7

【重庆市第八中学校2023-2024学年高三上学期10月月考试题】_________________P7

【江苏省决胜新高考2023-2024学年高三上学期10月大联考】___________________P9

仿写句式一：无灵主语开头（没有生命的名词作主语）

【示例】久别重逢让这对夫妻都很开心。

Thereunionafterlongseparationbroughtgreatdelighttothecouple.

仿写1：Hefeltabitsadinsidehim.

翻译：他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。

改写：Aripple/flush/wave/suraeofsadnesswelledupinsidehim.

仿写2：Withtearsstreamingdownherface,hecouldn'tsayaword.

翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。

改写：Wordsfailedher,withtearsstreamingdownherface,

仿写3：Suddenlyshefeltveryexcitedwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.

翻译：突然她看到一个熟悉的身影，内心涌起一阵兴奋.

改写：Suddenlyawaveofhappinessandexcitementseized/tookholdofi^sweptoverherwhen

shecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.

仿写4：（2023年1月浙江读后续写）1wasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.I

noticedaflashofmovement.

翻译：我正要离开这时蜂鸟出现了。一阵儿活动引起了我的注意。

改写：（2023年1月浙江读后续写）Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.A

flashofmovementcaughtmyattention.

仿写5：（2023新高考读后续写）WhenthehostannouncedthatIwonthefirstprize,Ifeltvery

excited.

翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心砰砰跳。

改写：（2023新高考读后续写）WhenthehostannouncedthatIwonthefirstprize,myheartwas

thumping/poundingwithexcitement.

仿写句式二：倒装句开头

【示例】只有这样你才能学好英语。

OnlyinthiswaycanyoulearnEnglishwell.

仿写1：Ayoungmansatbythelakewithabookinhishand.

翻译：湖边坐着一个手里拿着一本书的年轻男孩。

改写：Bythelakesatayoungmanwithabookinhishand.

仿写2：（2020新高考读后续写）Whentheygothome,theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthe

specialbags.

改写：（2020新高考读后续写）Hardlyhadtheygothomewhentheymadealotofpopcornand

putitinthespecialbags.

仿写3：（2021新高考读后续写）Theirmotherneverexpectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarm

gift.

翻译：在任何情况下，他们的母亲也不会想到她的一天会以这样的暖心礼物开始的。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）Undernodrcumstanceshadtheirmotherexpectedherdayto

startwithsuchawarmgift.

仿写4：（2021新高考读后续写）Jennawassoashamedthatsheshedguiltytearswithhead

drooping.

翻译：杰娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）SoashamedwasJerniathatsheshedguiltytearswithhead

drooping.

仿写5：（2022年6月浙江读后续写）Iwillneverforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheywere

givenfood.

翻译：我永远不会忘记他们被给予食物时看我的样子。

改写：（2022年6月浙江读后续写）NeverwillIforqetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheywere

givenfood.

仿写句式三：对话或独白开头

【示例】“太可怕了，”这个年轻人用颤抖的声音回答道。

“Awfiilly,“theyoungmanansweredinatremblingvoice.

仿写1：RachelcalledtoseewhogottherefirstasshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.

翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里去！"瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。

改写："Let'sseewhogetsthereflrit!”Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpast

Jenny.

仿写2：（2017浙江读后续写）Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.PaulshoutedatMacand

toldhimtogetintothecar.

翻译：汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！”保罗对麦克喊道。

改写：（2017浙江读后续写）Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.“Getintothecar."Paul

shoutedatMac.

仿写3：（2021新高考读后续写）Theirfathertoldthemnottopanicandhandedeachofthema

wettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessupquickly.

翻译：“别慌！”爸爸递给每人一个湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）“Don'tpanic!”theirfatherhandedeachofthemawettowel,

helpingthemcleanthemessupquickly.

仿写4：（2021新高考读后续写）Thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptthankinghertwins.

翻译：这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。”

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）“Thankyou,myhoney."thehappiestmotherintheworldkept

repeatingthesewords.

仿写5：（2022新高考读后续写）Theyshoutedenthusiasticallyandcheeredforhim.

翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你真棒！为你自豪！”

改写：（2022新高考读后续写）“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!”they

shoutedenthusiastically.

仿写句式四：介词短语开头

【示例】孩子们高兴地找到了出路。

Indelight,childrenfoundtheirwayout.

仿写1：Theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresultssurprisingly.

翻译：她们好奇地瞪着眼睛看着结果。

改写：Insurprise,theykepttheireyesopentoreadtheresults.

仿写3：Themandidn'tsayawordandpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.

翻译：那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。

改写：Withoutsayingaword,themanpickedJimupoffthemotorbike.

仿写4：（2021新高考读后续写）Soonthekitchenwasfilledwithsweetsmell.

翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.

仿写4：（2022年6月浙江读后续写）Wewererelievedthattheysmiledpolitelybackatmewhen

theysawmysmile.

翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。

改写：（2022年6月浙江读后续写）Toourrelief,theysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysaw

mysmile.

仿写5：（2023新高考读后续写）ItisyourrecognitionandguidancethatIwrotethearticle.

翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。

改写：（2023新高考读后续写）Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn'thavewritten

thisarticle.

仿写句式五：独立主格结构开头

【示例］HershirtcaughtonanaiLshecouldnotmove.

她的衬衫被钉子钩住了，她动弹不得。

仿写1：Ashisfriendswillcometonight,heisbusypreparingthedinner.

翻译：他的朋友今晚要来，他正忙着准备晚餐。

改写：Hisfriendstocometoniqht,heisbusypreparingthedinner.

仿写2：Astherewasnobus,wehadtowalkhome.

翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。

改写：Therebeingnobns,wehadtowalkhome.

仿写3：（2020浙江读后续写）Angeroverwhelminghim,hesmashedhispawsmadlyagainstthe

wirefence,thrustinghissharpclawsatus.

翻译：愤怒压倒了他，他疯狂地用爪子猛击铁丝网，用锋利的爪子向我们刺来。

改写：（2020浙江读后续写）Angeroverwhelminqhim,hesmashedhispawsmadlyagainstthe

wirefence,thrustinghissharpclawsatus.

仿写4：（2020新高考读后续写）SoonBernardreturnedwithanemptybasketandsomecoins

wereinhishand.

翻译：伯纳德很快带着空篮子回来了，手里拿着硬币。

改写：（2020新高考读后续写）Coinsinhand,Bernardsoonreturnedwithanemptybasketand.

仿写5：（2021新高考读后续写）Wheneverythingwassettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promising

tokeeptheirsecret.

翻译：一切安排妥当，爸爸离开厨房，答应保密。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheir

secret.

仿写句式六：形容词开头

【示例】又累又饿，安妮跪了下来。

Tiredandhungry,Annekneltdown.

仿写1：Samwascurioustoknowwhoshewas,sohetiptoedintotheroom.

翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。

改写：Curioustoknowwhoshewas,hetiptoedintotheroom.

仿写2：Bobwasunabletosayawordandwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.

翻译：那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话说不出来，他惊呆了。

改写：Unabletosayaword,Bobwasfrozenbecauseofthehorriblescene.

仿写3：（2016浙江读后续写）Thoughshewasweak,Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuing

searchingforassistance..

翻译：尽管很虚弱，珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。

改写：Weakasshewas,Jennystruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance..

仿写4：（2018年浙江读后续写）Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AsIwas

afraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.

翻译：突然一只兔子从马匹前跳出来。我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声

喊叫来阻止我的马。

改写：（2018年浙江读后续写）Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Afraid

thatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.

仿写5：（2021新高考读后续写）Asshewasspeechlessandhappy,Mumheldthetwinstightly

intoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.

翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噂满了泪水。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）Speechlessandhappy,sheheldthetwinstightlyintoherarms,

withtearswellingupinhereyes.

仿写句式七：副词开头

【示例】悄悄地，他一句话没说离开了。

番可译：Quietly,heleftwithoutsayingaword.

仿写1：Arthurskippedupthestreetjoyfully.

翻译：亚瑟高高兴兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。

改写：Joyfully,Arthurskippedupthestreet.

仿写2：（2016浙江读后续写）Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Soon

theforestbecameverydark.

翻译：但是再也没有直升飞机飞来，天色又晚。黑暗立马笼罩着整个树林。

改写：（2016浙江读后续写）Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdark

again.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.

仿写3：（2020浙江读后续写）Anabsolutedarknessruledthewoodsinseconds.

翻译：顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。

改写：（2020浙江读后续写）Instantly,anabsolutedarknessruledthewoods.

仿写4：（2021新高考读后续写Atonce,thefatherjoinedthetwinsandtheystartedalloveragain.

翻译：爸爸立马加入双胞胎和他们一起开始张罗着。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写immediately,thefatherjoinedthetwinsandtheystartedallover

again.

仿写5：（2021浙江读后续写）IproudlytookoutmyownmoneyandhandedittoDad.

翻译：我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。

改写：（2021浙江读后续写）ProudlyItookoutmyownmoneyandhandedittoDad.

仿写句式八：现在分词开头

【示例】好奇地四处闲逛后，吉米溜进了厨房。

翻译:Wanderingaroundwithcuriosity,Jimslippedintothekitchen.

仿写1：Heslowlywalkedacrossthegrassland,aimedatthelionandshot.

翻译：他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准了狮子后然射击了。

改写：Slowlywalkingacrosstheorassland,heaimedatthelionandshot.

仿写2：（2016浙江读后续写）Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Though

Janefeltdisappointed,Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.

翻译：但是再也没有直升飞机飞来，天色又晚。简感到很失望，不得不一个人再待一个晚上。

改写：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Feelingdisappointed,Jane

hadtostayaloneforanothernight.

仿写3：（2016浙江读后续写）ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Asshefeltrefreshed,she

continuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.

翻译：简醒来的时候天已经亮了。她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。

改写：（2016浙江读后续写）ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Feelingrefreshed,she

continuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.

仿写4：（2021新高考读后续写）Afterlookingatthewellpreparedbreakfast,thethreeexchanged

anunderstandingsmile.

翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）Lookingatthewellpreparedbreakfast,thethreeexchangedan

understandingsmile.

仿写5：（2023新高考读后续写）Heheldmyhandsandsaid'"Congratulations!Youareagood

writer,sokeepwriting.^^

翻译：他握着我的手说，“祝贺呀！你是好作家，继续写下去！”

改写：（2023新高考读后续写）Holdingmyhands,hesaid'"Congratulations!Youareagood

writer,sokeepwriting.^^

仿写句式九：过去分词开头

【示例】问他发生了什么事情，他低下了头。。

番用译：Whenhewasaskedwhathadhappened,heloweredhishead.

仿写1：Ashewassurroundedbyhisgrandchildren,theoldmanfeltjoyful.

翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。

改写：Surroimdedbyhisgrandchildren,theoldmanfeltjoyful.

仿写2：Thegirlwaslostinthought,soshedidn'tnoticetheapproachingdanger.

翻译：那个女孩陷入沉思，因此没有注意到危险正在靠近。

改写：Lostinthought,thegirldidn'tnoticetheapproachingdanger.

仿写3：Ashewastornbysorrowandcompassion,Franklinstoodsilently,weighingwhattosay.

当富兰克林默默地站着，悲伤和同情让他心碎，犹豫着该说些什么。

改写：Tornbysorrowandcompassion,Franklinstoodsilently,weighingwhattosay.

仿写4：（2021新高考读后续写）Fatherwasastonishedandwasrootedonthefloor,staringatthe

scenewitheyebrowfrowning.

翻译：爸爸很吃惊，愣在地上，皱着眉头注视着现场。

改写：（2021新高考读后续写）Astonished,Fatherwasrootedonthefloor,staringatthescene

witheyebrowfrowning.

仿写5：（2022新高考读后续写）Afterhewasencouragedbymywords,Davidlookedatmewith

shiningeyes,withhisbigtoothysmileonhislovelyface.

翻译：受我的鼓励，戴维闪亮的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上挂着大大的笑容。

改写：（2022新高考读后续写）Encouragedbymywords,Davidlookedatmewithshiningeyes,

withhisbigtoothysmileonhislovelyface.

仿写句式十：动词不定式开头（多作目的状语）

【示例】Togetthereontime,wehurriedlydepartedfromhome.

翻译：为了准时到达那里，我们匆忙从家里出发。

仿写1：Iturnedaroundandleftquietlyinordertoavoidembarrassment.

翻译：为了避免尴尬，我转身静静地离开了。

改写：Toavoidembarrassment,Iturnedaroundandleftquietly.

仿写2：Thefirefighterlaiddownhislifeinordertosavethechild.

翻译：为了救那个男孩，消防员献出了生命。

改写：Tosavethechild,thefirefighterlaiddownhislife.

仿写3：Sheslippedintotheroomandshutthedoorsoftlytomeethiscuriosity,.

翻译：为了满足他的好奇心，她溜进了房间并轻轻关上了门。

改写：Tomeethiscuriosity,sheslippedintotheroomandshutthedoorsoftly.

【重庆市第八中学校2023-2024学年高三上学期10月月考试题】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Thereisastoryfrommanyyearsagoofaprimaryschoolteacher.HernamewasRose.

Onthefirstdayofschool,asRoselookedoutoverhernewfifthgradeclass,herattention

wasimmediatelydrawntotwoboys,MarkandCharlie.Markhadahighenergythatfilledthe

room,hisvoiceechoingevenincasualconversations.Helaughedloudestandansweredquestions

withenthusiasmthatwasimpossibletoignore.Charlie,Mark'spartner-in-crime,hadanaughty

grinandatwinkleinhiseyes.Together,theywereperfect.

WhileMarkwouldcommandattentionwithhistales,Charliewouldcommentcleverly,

makingthewholeclassburstintolaughter.Rosecouldalreadytellthatthesetwowouldkeepher

onhertoes.Shesmiledtoherself,though,readyforaneventfulyearahead.Sheknewshehadto

findawaytochanneltheirenergypositively,turningtheirenthusiasmintoadrivingforcefor

learning.

Oneday,Rosehadauniqueassignmentforherstudents.Sheaskedthemtolisteach

classmate'snameontwosheets,leavinggapsbetween.Next,sheinstructedthemtowritedown

thenicestthingtheycouldthinkofforeachstudent.Theassignmentconsumedthewholeperiod.

Astheyleft,eachstudenthandedintheirpapers.

Overtheweekend,Rosewrotedownthenameofeachstudentonaseparatesheetofpaper,

creatingindividuallistsforeverystudent.OnMonday,shehandedoutthelists.Soon,happiness

spreadacrosstheroom.Mark,knownforhisnaughtybehavior,lookedastonished.C4IhadnoideaI

matteredtoanyone,hewhispered,visiblymoved.Besidehim,Charlie,Mark'spartner-in-crime,

saidsimilarly/41neverrealizedothersthoughtsohighlyofme.^^

Nooneevermentionedthoselistsinclassagain.Roseneverfoundoutiftheydiscussedthem

afterclassorwiththeirparents,butitdidn'tmatter.

注意：L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Theatmosphereintheclassroomshifted,especiallyMarkandCharlie.

Onabrightafternoonyearslater,twogentlemenknockedatRose'sdoor,holdingthelists.

【答案】

Theatmosphereintheclassroomshifted,especiallyMarkandCharlie.Markstartedsetting

upstudygroups,andevenvolunteeredtoorganizeschoolevents,wherehewasbusyseeking

opinionsandlookingupforguidance.Charlie,ontheotherhand,emergedasathoughtful

contributorindiscussions,revealinginsightsthatoftenlefttheclassinawe.Theirtransformation

wasevidentnotonlyintheiracademicperformancebutalsointheirinteractions.Themischievous

duo,oncethesourceofrelentlessenergyanddisruption、begantochanneltheirenthusiasminto

constructiveoutlets.Thelisthadservedasamirror,reflectingthepositivequalitiesotherssawin

them,qualitiestheyhadpreviouslybeenunawareof.

Onabrightafternoonyearslater,twogentlemenknockedatRose'sdoor,holdingthelists.

Rose,abitpuzzled,openedthedoortoseetwofamiliarfaces,nowgrownandmatured.Itwas

MarkandCharlie."MissRose:'Markbegan,hisvoicestillholdingthattraceofenergyshe

remembered,"wewantedtothankyoupersonally.^^Hehelduptheagedlist,ed史esfravedbut

wordsstillclear.Charliecontinued,"'Theselistswereaturningpointforus.Knowingwemattered,

andthatwehadvalueinothers5eyeschangedourpaths.^^Seeingtheprofoundimpactasimple

classroomactivityhadleftonthem,Rosesmiled.

【解析】

【分析】本文以两个学生的表现为线索展开，讲述了Rose老师在她的五年级的第一天的课

堂上，Mark和Charlie的活跃表现引起了她的注意，一天，她给学生们布置了一个任务，让

同学们写出他们认为的每一位同学的最好的事情，正是学生们之间的评价改变Mark和

Charlie的人生之路的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“教室里气氛变了，尤其是Mark和Charlie。”可知，第一段可描写在

这次任务之后，Mark和Charlie各自发生了什么变化而导致教室氛围的变化。

②由第二段首句内容“几年后的一个晴朗的下午，两位先生拿着单子敲了罗斯的门。”可知，

第二段可描写Mark和Charlie找Rose老师的目的是什么，他们都做了些什么。

2.续写线索：教室气氛改变——Mark的表现——Charlie的表现——几年后又见老师——表

达感激----Rose老师的感受

3.词汇激活

行为类

①建立，成立：setup/establish/found

②出现：emerge/showup/turnup

③寻找：seek/lookfor/searchfor

情绪类

①迷茫：puzzled/confused/bewildered

②感谢：thank/showgratitude

【点睛】[高分句型l]Markstartedsettingupstudygroups,andevenvolunteeredtoorganize

schoolevents,wherehewasbusyseekingopinionsandlookingupforguidance.（运用了where

引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Theirtransformationwasevidentnotonlyintheiracademicperformancebutalsoin

theirinteractions.（运用了notonly...butalso…连接并列结构）

[高分句型3].Seeingtheprofoundimpactasimpleclassroomactivityhadleftonthem,Rose

smiled.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）

【江苏省决胜新高考2023-2024学年高三上学期10月大联考】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文。

IwaseatingbreakfastathomeinHampshireinMarchthisyear,scrollingthroughsocial

mediaonmyphone,whenastorycaughtmyeye.Itwasaboutanine-year-olddog,Charlie,

dubbed（称为）theloneliestinBritain.HehadbeeninarescuecentreinSomersetformorethan

500days.

Forsomereason,nobodywantedtoadopthim.Iclickedonthelinkandstraightawaythese

huge,sadeyesstaredbackatme.Iwasemotional.Iturnedtomyhusband,Sam,andsaid:"We've

gottohaveHereadthearticleovermyshoulderandfeltexactlythesameway.Wewanted

togiveCharlieahappyhomeandanewleaseoflife.

Overthepastfewyearswehavetriedtoadoptafewdifferentdogs,butwehaven5hadany

luck——wewerenevertopofthelist.SamandIgotusedtofillinginformsandnothearing

anything.We'dalmostgivenuphope.

ButCharlieisanolderdogandwefeltwe'dbesuited——evenolderdogshavealotoflove

lefttooffer.Sowetookourtimewiththeapplication,sentphotographsofourhouseandgarden.

WeexplainedwhyCharliewouldbehappywithus,andthenforgotallaboutit.

AfewdayslaterwereceivedanemailfromBrentKnollanimalcentre,sayingwe'dbeen

shortlisted.Wewerethrilled.TheyaskedustovisitCharlietobeinterviewedandtoseeifheliked

us.

Whenwearrivedweweretakentothestaffroom.We