2024年中考英语书面表达类型模版与能力拔尖（全国）08.祝贺信（原卷版）

备战2024年中考英语书面表达类型模版与能力拔尖必备08祝贺信【真题示例】（2018·北京海淀·统考一模）假如你是李华，在你的帮助下，交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你的真诚祝贺，回忆他比赛时的表现，以及你从他身上学到了什么。提示词语：win，prize，speechcompetition，pronounce，practice提示问题：WhydoyoucongratulateTom?Whatmadehimsuccessfulinthecompetition?Whatcanyoulearnfromhim?【参考范文】DearTom,IamveryhappytoknowthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcompetition,soI’mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourwonderfulperformance.YoudidagoodjobintheChinesespeechcompetition.Youpronouncedreallywellduringyourspeechandyourvoicewasbeautiful.Youspokesofluentlythatweallfeltproudofyou.What’smore,weweresurprisedatyourrichandmeaningfulcontents.Asyourbestfriend,Iknowyoutriedyourbestforthecompetition.Youkeptpracticingyourspeecheverydayinordertomakeitbetter.Iknowitisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup.IhopeIcanbesuccessfullikeyouonedayinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【写作分析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【写作反思】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：tryone’s

best;What’smore,feelproudof；inorderto；giveup；keepontrying.；Itisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup等；so；so···that等连词的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。【必背句式】开头常用句式Itwasexcitingnewsformetolearnof…Pleaseacceptmysincere/hearty/warmcongratulationson…Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…Iwasdelightedtolearnofyoursuccess/achievementsin…Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…结尾常用句式Wishyougoodluck!Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.Mayallgowonderfullyinyournewpost!Mayeveryhappinessbeyours!Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.Everygoodwishtoyouformuchhealth,happiness,andprosperity!【模版示例】模板①Dear______,Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______（祝贺事由）.Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.Youmustbe______.AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.______（所取得的成绩）isquiteexcitingnews!Iknowthisissurelyowingto______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______（被祝贺人的优点）.Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou______（咨询对方何时有空）.Ihope______（表达自己的愿望）.Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_____________,Goodnewstravelsfast!Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat______________.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationstoyour___________.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.Nowyouprovetomeamaturedandwell-rounded________ineveryrespect.Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture___________.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yourssincerely,LiHua模板③Dear_____________,Congratulationsonyour_______.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Iunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Thisnewposition,ontheotherhand,addsanewdimensiontoyourlifeandisboundto________.What’smore,Ialsobelievethat.Mayallgoesbeautifullyinyournewpost!Yourssincerely,LiHua【突破策略】日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。祝贺信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。祝贺信写作分三步走:说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿。在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。Dear_______,(1)Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______.(2)Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson____.(3)Youmustbeveryproudofyour______.(4)AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.(5)_____isquiteexcitingnews!(6)Youarereally__.(7)Iknowthisissurelyowingto___.(8)Itisarewardyoudeserveforyour__.(9)Withyour_____,Iamsurethatyouwillbeasuccessinwhateveryouundertake.(10)Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou____.(11)Ihope.(12)Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.SincerelyYours,LiHua(1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，说出祝贺事由(2)表达祝贺(3)描述对方的心情(4)表达自己的心情(5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩(6)对对方的赞美(7)对方取得成绩的原因(8)对对方取得成绩的肯定，说出被祝贺人的优点(9)被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达对对方的祝福(10)咨询对方的情况和时间(11)表达愿望(12)表达自己真诚的祝福【写作演练】1．假如你是学生李明，请根据提示中所给出的要点，给两个月后升入重点高中的自己写一封信。提示：1.表达衷心祝贺；2.期望全面发展；3.做好未来规划。注意：（1）文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名；（2）100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiMing,Bythetimeyoureadthisletter,youwillbeinhighschool.Howisitgoing?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Takecare,LiMing2．假设你是王林，Carl是你在英国交流学校的好朋友。读下面的报道，然后写一封祝贺信，祝贺Carl在国家长跑比赛中获得的成绩。注意：1.不少于60词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。2.congratulations

n.祝贺SunshineMiddleSchoolboyCarl,14,haswonthefirstplaceinthecountryschools’long-distanceraceyesterday.Hekeptexercisingeverydayinordertoperformwellintherace.Finallyhesucceeded.Theprizeis￡2000forCarl’sschooland￡500forCarl.Hetoldthereportersthathewouldprobablyspendhismoneyonafamilyholiday.DearCarl,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________