新教材适用2024-2025学年高中英语Unit4HistoryandTraditionsSectionⅣ写作指导学案新人教版必修第二册

SectionⅣ写作指导地点描写写作储备阅读P44课文，总结关于描写地点类文章的留意事项。Ⅰ.地点描写的格式1．一个让人惊异的开头；2．详实的主体段落；3．回味无穷的结尾。Ⅱ.地点描写的架构Ⅲ.地点描写的语言特点1．surprising——makethereaderseagertoreadyourwriting(新奇性，令人惊异的)2．usesensorydetails(运用感官性的细微环节)3．giveexamples(给出例子)4．inviting(吸引人的)Ⅳ.地点描写的常用词汇1．belocated/liesin...位于……2．coveranareaof...占地……3．withahistoryof...有……的历史4．datebackto/from...追溯到……5．themostpopulartouristattraction最受欢迎的景点6．placesofinterest名胜7．enjoygreatpopularity深受欢迎8．attractvt.吸引9．featuren．特色10．beworthdoing值得做11．makesb.unwillingtoleave使某人流连忘返Ⅴ.地点描写的常用句型(一)基本信息1．Itislocated/liesin...,withanareaof...2．Itcoversanareaof...，withahistoryof...3．...，locatedin...andcoveringanareaof...,isoneofChina'smostfamousscenicspots.4．Thehistoryof...datesbackto...5．Ithasbecomethemostpopulartouristattractionsince...(二)特色1．Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchas...2．Youcanenjoy...,whichhasahighreputationbothathomeandabroad.3．With...,...is/areattractingmoreandmoretourists.4．Aninterestingfeatureof...is...5．Withitspleasantclimate,richnaturalresourcesandbeautifulscenery,...isoneofChina'smajortouristcities.6．Atripalong...willenableyoutogettoknow...(三)总结陈述1．...iswellworthvisiting.2．...isaplaceyouhavetovisitandtheextraordinaryviewwillmakeyouunwillingtoleave.典例剖析假设你是河源市的李华，你市为吸引国外游客，拟制作英文版河源旅游宣扬手册，并公开征稿。请依据下面信息，用英语写一篇短文应征。1．位于广州的东北方向，离广州约198千米。2．由五个县组成，人口约324万。3．历史悠久，名胜众多；万绿湖(WanluLake)景色美丽；湖水澄澈；鱼类繁多。4．博物馆中有各种恐龙蛋化石(fossil)，吸引了来自全世界的游客。留意：词数80左右。审题谋篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的起先，胜利的一半体裁地点说明文人称第三人称为主时态一般现在时为主框架第一段：总体介绍；其次段：具体介绍其各个方面的特点；第三段：发出邀请Ⅱ.定要点、关键词及动词时态→打造一篇要点全面、用词精确得体、时态多样的极优作文要点一：河源市由五个县组成。(主谓宾结构)ThecityofHeyuanconsistsof5counties.要点二：它大约有3240000人口。(主谓宾结构)Ithasapopulationofabout3,240,000.要点三：河源市有很多名胜。(Therebe句型；placesofinterest)TherearemanyplacesofinterestinHeyuan.要点四：万绿湖是其中一个典型。(主系表结构；oneof...；outstanding)WanluLakeisoneofoutstandingexamples.要点五：湖水澄澈，鱼类繁多。(so...that...；avarietyof)Thewaterthereissocleanthatthereareavarietyoffishesinit.要点六：有很多恐龙蛋化石。(Therebe句型)Therearemanydinosaureggfossils.要点七：它们在当地博物馆中展出。(被动语态；display)Theyaredisplayedinthelocalmuseum.要点八：它们吸引了来自全世界的游客。(主谓宾结构；fromeverycorneroftheworld)Theyattractvisitorsfromeverycorneroftheworld.Ⅲ.词汇、句式升级→创建极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一：用现在分词短语作定语连接要点一和二ThecityofHeyuan,consistingof5counties,hasapopulationofabout3,240,000.升级句式二：用oneexampleofwhich引导定语从句连接要点三和四TherearemanyplacesofinterestinHeyuan,oneexampleofwhichisWanluLake.升级句式三：用倒装句改写要点五Socleanisthewatertherethatthereareavarietyoffishesinit.升级句式四：用句型“Therebe＋n.＋过去分词作定语＋现在分词作结果状语”改写要点六、七和八Therearemanydinosaureggfossilsdisplayedinthelocalmuseum,attractingvisitorsfromeverycorneroftheworld.Ⅳ.组建极优作文→水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉参考范文：Heyuan,withalonghistory,liestothenortheastofGuangzhou,fromwhichitisabout198kilometersaway.ThecityofHeyuan,consistingof5counties,hasapopulationofabout3,240,000.TherearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinHeyuan,oneexampleofwhichisWanluLake,aninvitingtouristdestination.Socleanisthewatertherethatthereareavarietyoffishesinit.Inaddition,therearemanydinosaureggfossilsdisplayedinthelocalmuseum,attractingvisitorsfromeverycorneroftheworld.Whynotgiveitatry?YourtriptoHeyuanissuretobeenjoyableandworthwhile.J即学即练假设你是丽江市某中学的学生李华。你市为吸引国外游客，拟制作英语版丽江古城旅游宣扬手册，并公开征稿。请你依据表格中所给提示信息，用英语写一篇短文应征。景点概况位于云南省西北部，是纳西族人的聚居地特色1.拥有大量土木结构的房屋、鹅卵石道路，以及很多明清时期的石桥和拱门2．宗教壁画和东巴文化历史悠久，风格迥异留意：词数80左右。参考词汇：鹅卵石pebble；拱门archway参考范文：TheOldTownofLijiangTheOldTownofLijiang,locatedinthenorthwestofYunnanProvince,isanancienttownwheretheNaxipeoplelive.Mostofthehousesaremadeofearthandwood.TheroadsinthetownarecoveredwithcolouredpebblesproducedinLijiang,andtherearemanystonebridgesandarchwaysbuiltduringtheMingandQingDynasties.Wanderinginthetown,youcanseemanyreligiouswall-paint