高考英语总复习优化设计Step 2　第一讲　词汇优美4角度

写作专项提升第一讲词汇优美4角度英语2023高考总复习优化设计GAOKAOZONGFUXIYOUHUASHEJI词汇1名词(短语)名词是表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称,属于实词,名词分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好,能显示出深厚的语言功底,更能出众脱俗。[示范1](2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)(一般词)Ontheotherhand,therealsoexistsomeadvantages.(高级词)Ontheotherhand,therealsoexistsomestrong

points.另一方面,也有一些优点。[示范2](2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,写作)(一般词)Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.(高级词)Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovideanopportunityforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.这项活动受到高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且使我们更有凝聚力。高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇:①方法way→approach/means②困难difficulty→challenge/barrier③问题problem→issue④机会chance→opportunity⑤选择choice→alternative⑥责任duty→responsibility⑦影响effect→influence/impact⑧后果result→consequence⑨缺点shortcoming→drawback⑩职业career→profession

优势

advantage→strength/strongpoint

老人oldpeople→theelderly/theaged/theseniorcitizens

青少年youngpeople→youngsters/youths/adolescents

一个表现好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awell-behavedchild

各种各样的图书allkindsofbooks→varietiesofbooks/awiderangeofbooks[对点过关训练]先用所给的词补全句子,然后对该词进行升级1.(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)网络课程打破了时间和空间的限制。

breakthelimitationoftimeandspace.(course)

→

breakthelimitationoftimeandspace.

TheonlinecoursesTheonlinecurriculums2.(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,写作)这场比赛对参赛者的身体和精神都有很大的好处。所以我们都很重视,希望以后能有更多这样的活动。Theracewasofgreatbenefittotheparticipants,physicallyandmentally.

,weallthinkhighlyofit,andexpectmoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.(result)

→Theracewasofgreatbenefittotheparticipants,physicallyandmentally.

,weallthinkhighlyofit,andexpectmoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.

AsaresultAsaconsequence3.传媒对于舆论有很大的影响。Themedia

publicopinion.(effect)

→Themedia

publicopinion.

4.最重要的是,老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人,因为他们在中国备受尊重。Mostimportantly,

thefoodservedonthetablebecausetheyarewellrespectedinChina.(oldpeople)

→Mostimportantly

thefoodservedonthetablebecausetheyarewellrespectedinChina.

hasapowerfuleffectonhasapowerfulimpact/influenceonoldpeopleareusuallythefirsttotastetheold/theelderly/theaged/seniorcitizensareusuallythefirsttotaste5.政府计划为年轻人创造更多的就业机会。Thegovernmentplansto

.(youngpeople)

→Thegovernmentplansto

.

createmorejobsforyoungpeoplecreatemorejobsforyoungsters/youths/adolescents词汇2动词(短语)动词分为及物动词和不及物动词两类,在句子中作谓语和非谓语。及物动词后面接宾语;不及物动词后面不能接宾语。动词或者动词短语恰当灵活的运用,能生动形象地表达主语的动作或者状态,动词用的恰当高级,能为文章增色添彩。[示范1](2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)(一般词)Knowingyouare

interested

inChina,Ibelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.(高级词)Knowingyoutake

a

great

interest

inChina,I’m

firmly

convinced

that/I

firmly

hold

the

belief

thatyoucanlend

a

helping

hand

tosolvethesepuzzles.知道你对中国很感兴趣,我相信你能帮我解决这些难题。[示范2](2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)(一般词)Wewanttocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovel.(高级词)We’d

liketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovel.我们想通过改编经典小说把你们的文化与我们的文化联系在一起。高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇:①知道know→beawareof②感谢thank→appreciate③拥有have→possess④看见see→catchsightof⑤记住remember→keepinmind⑥保持keep→maintain⑦提高improve→promote⑧完成finish→accomplish⑨应该should→besupposedto[对点过关训练]Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Ourclassthought

oftheideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.

2.(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Wesincerelyhopeyoucanhelp

us.

3.Icouldhavewonthegamebutdecided

toletherwin.

4.Thiscouldcauseseriousdamagetothecountry’seconomy.

5.Weneedmoretimetoseehowthingsdevelopbeforewetakeaction.

cameupwith

dousafavor

madeupmymind

giverisetopromoteⅡ.用所给动词的高级词汇补全句子1.更糟的是,食用过多的糖可能会引起健康问题。What’sworse,eatingtoomuchsugar

.(cause)

2.她和丈夫一起买了一小块地,开始自己种植食物。She

withherhusbandandbegangrowingtheirownfoods.(buy)

canleadto/resultin/giverisetohealthproblemspurchasedasmallpieceofland3.所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。Allthevisitors

inthepark.(ask)

4.我们应不遗余力地美化我们的环境,因为它是全人类共有的。

,becauseitissharedbyallthehumanbeings.(tryone’sbest)

5.更重要的是,我们可以提出自己的想法,通过讨论进一步学习。What’smore,we

andlearnmorethroughdiscussion.(thinkof)

wererequestednottothrowlitteraboutWeshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironmentcancomeupwithourownideas词汇3形容词(短语)形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词或者形容词短语的恰当使用会渲染文章的色彩,为文章增加亮点。[示范1](2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)(一般词)Thisfruit-pickingexperienceishelpfultousandteachesustheimportanceofworking.(高级词)Thisfruit-pickingexperienceisbeneficialtousandteachesustheimportanceofworking.这次采摘水果的经历对我们很有益,也教会了我们劳动的重要性。[示范2](一般词)Heisanexcellentscientist,whohasmadeagreatcontributiontoourcountry.(高级词)Heisanoutstandingscientist,whohasmadeagreatcontributiontoourcountry.他是一位杰出的科学家,对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。形容词及形容词短语类写作高级词汇:①有益的good→beneficial②高兴的glad→delighted③激动的excited→thrilled④富裕的rich→wealthy⑤幸运的lucky→fortunate⑥常见的common→universal⑦充足的enough→adequate⑧可用的useable→available⑨困难的difficult→challenging[对点过关训练]Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020·天津卷,书面表达)Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.

2.(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,写作)Astherunningraceisvery

important,wehavetomakefullpreparationsinadvance.

3.Youcanfinddifferent

kinds

ofsweetfoodhere.

4.Youngpeopletodayfaceaverydifficultfutureatwork.

5.Sheseemsanunusuallyclevergirl.

delighted

ofgreatimportance/significance

avarietyof/various

challenging

intelligentⅡ.用所给形容词的高级词汇补全句子1.他的收入满足不了他的家庭需求。Hisincome

.(enough)

2.学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。LearningEnglishwell

.(important)3.清晨早起对这位病人的健康非常有益。Gettingupearlyinthemorning

tothispatient’shealth.(useful)

isnotadequatetohisfamily’sneeds

issignificant/vitaltoyourfutureemployment

isofgreatbenefit

4.她是一位辛勤的老师,她工作非常勤奋。Sheis

andshe

.(hard-working)

5.每天下了班,我都筋疲力尽。Ialways

whenIamoffworkeveryday.(tired)

adiligentteacherisdiligentinherwork

feelexhausted词汇4副词及其他词副词或者副词短语在句子中主要修饰动词或者形容词,往往作状语,写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级用法的副词或者副词短语,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。[示范1](2020·浙江1月卷,写作)(一般词)Inparticular,youarequalifiedenoughandexperiencedinpresentingyourideas,because

ofyourabundantskills.(高级词)Inparticular,youarequalifiedenoughandexperiencedinpresentingyourideas,on

account

of/due

to/owing

to/thanks

toyourabundantskills.尤其是,你有足够的资格和经验来表达你的想法,因为你有丰富的技能。[示范2](2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)(一般词)Inparticular,hewasverypatientthoughsometimesIhadnowaytosolvesomedifficultmathsproblems.(高级词)Inparticular,hewasverypatientthoughonce

in

a

while/occasionally/from

time

to

timeIhadnowaytosolvesomedifficultmathsproblems.尤其是,他很有耐心,尽管有时我无法解决一些数学难题。常见的副词及其他词类写作高级词汇:①经常often→frequently②很少seldom→rarely③只有only→merely④然后then→subsequently/afterwards⑤仔细地carefully→attentively⑥适当地properly→appropriately⑦大约about→approximately/roughly⑧立刻immediately→shortly/rightnow/rightaway⑨当然certainly→definitely/undoubtedly[对点过关训练]Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分1.(2020·江苏卷,书面表达)In

fact,documentariesaboutourcountryareplentifulbothathomeandabroad.

2.(2019·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Iamverydelightedtotellyouthatamusicfestivalwillbeheldinourschool.

3.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Inaddition,IcanexplaintheChinesepaintingsindetailandgivehelptoanyonewhoisinneed.

4.Mostofususepublictransporttogettowork.

5.A

few

days

ago,myfathercalledtoaskmetostudyandlivingconditions!

Actually/Asamatteroffact

morethan

aswellasThemajority

Theotherday1.人生在世总是有苦有甜。Youwillalwayshavethebad

intheworld.(and)

2.第二,你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。Secondly,yousaythatthereisadiscount

.(if)3.下雨了,足球赛因此而延期了。Itrainedand

.(so)

Ⅱ.用所给词的高级词汇补全句子

aswellasthegood

suppose/supposing(that)Ipayinadvancethereforethefootballmatchwaspostponed

4.抓住这个机会,否则你会后悔的。Seizethechance,

.(or)

5.他不仅吸烟,而且还喝酒。Henotonlysmokesbut

.(too)

otherwise/orelseyou’llregretit

drinksaswellⅢ.用高级词汇替换下面考生作文中的加黑部分假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack写电子邮件问你高考后暑假的安排。请根据以下要