2025届高考英语写作专题复习：寓言评论写作讲义素材

根据下面的寓言故事，写一篇评论。Thehare（野兔）andtheturtleOnceaturtlewasmockedbyahareforhershortandslowlegs，however，shedidnotremainsilentanddefendedherselfbythrowingalaughandsayingtothehare，“Youmaybeaveryfastfriend，hare，butI’mmorethansurethatIcanwinarace.”Thehare，surprisedbywhattheturtletoldher，acceptedthechallengewithoutthinkingtwice，sinceshewasverysureshewouldwintheturtlewithhereyesclosed.Then，bothproposedtothefox，thatitwasshewhopointedthewayandthegoal.Dayslater，theexpectedmomentoftheracearrived，andatthesoundofthecountofthree，begantheraceofthesetwocontenders.Theturtledidnotstopwalking，butatherslowpace，shemovedcalmlytowardsthegoal.Thehare，ontheotherhand，ransofastthatshelefttheturtlefarbehind.Turningaroundandnolongerseeingtheturtle，theharecertainlysawhersuccessovertheraceanddecidedtotakeanap.Shortlyafterwards，theharewokeupandsawiftheturtlewasstillmissingfromtherear，butlookingtowardsthegoal，shesawtheturtlewasveryclosetotheend.Finally，theturtlewon.寓言评论就是读者读完寓言的所感所想。这种文章主要以一般过去时介绍故事情节内容，对自己感兴趣的某些地方发表观点，表达自己的想法和感受，并且把故事推荐给他人等。Step1经典模板RecentlyIreadasmallstoryfromAesop’sFableswhosenameis（故事的名字）.Whatthestorytellsusisasfollows.（简要介绍故事的内容）.Havingreadthefable，Irealizethatweshouldnot（不应做的事情）.Instead，weshould（应该怎么做）.Onlybydoingso，canwe（获得的结果）.Step2语言组织一、常用开头语1.I’mdelightedtointroducemyfavoritefable/story/novel/booktoyou，whosetitleis+标题.2.Recently，Ihavereadafable，+标题.3.Thefabletitled+标题isamoral/ironic/fascinatingstory.4.Ittellsusastoryabout+主角，who+非限制性定语从句.5.Inthefable，theauthorwritesabout+主角，who+非限制性定语从句.6.Thefable，+标题，isabout+主角，who+非限制性定语从句.二、主体部分常用表达1.Thepurposeofthefableistotellusthat+宾语从句.2.Thefableisintendedtotellpeoplethat+宾语从句.3.Thefableteachesusalessonthat+从句.4.Thefablefocuseson...5.Theauthormadeitclearthat+宾语从句.6.Thefablewassuccessfulinachievingitspurpose.7.Theauthorachievedhispurposebysth/doingsth.8.Undoubtedly，theauthorhasdoneagoodjobinpresentinghisideas.三、常用的结束语1.AfterIreadthestory，Ihaveabetterunderstandingof...2.Havingreadthestory，IrealizedthatIshould（not）.../Iwasdeeplymovedby...3.Ithinkthestoryisworthreadingbecause...4.Whatimpressesmemostisthat...5.Onthewhole，Ilike/dislikethestorybecause...6.Thefableteachesusalessonthat+从句.7.Iwouldlovetosharethestorywithallofyou.8.Iwouldliketo/Iwillundoubtedlyrecommendittoallofyou.【佳作赏析】I’mdelightedtointroducemyfavoritefabletoyou，whosetitleisThehareandtheturtle.Thefablefocusesonaracebetweenahairandaturtle.Theharelaughedattheturtlesshortlegsandmadesurethatshewouldwintherace.Inthebeginning，theharelefttheturtlefarbehindandtookanapduringtherace.However，whenshewokeup，shewasdesperatetoseetheturtleatthefinishingline.Thefableteachesusalessonthatgoalsareachievedlittlebylittle，withworkandeffort.Althoughwesometimesseemslow，successwillalwayscome.Italsoshowsthatwedonothavetomockpeoplefortheirphysicaldefects，astheymaybebetterinotherrespects.Thisfablehasgreateducationalvalueandiswellworthreading.即时训练根据下面的寓言故事，写一篇评论。AmanfromtheStateofZhengboughtshoesOnceintheStateofZheng，therewasamanwhowantedtobuyapairofshoes.Hemeasuredhisfootandputthefootmeasurementonachair.Thenhesetoutforthemarketinahurry，butforgottobringitalong.Whenhefoundthepairofshoeshewanted，itsuddenlyoccurredtohimthathehadleftthemeasurementathome.Hewenthometogetitrightaway.Whenhereturned，themarkethadclosed，andhedidnotgetnewshoes.Hewasverysad.Someoneasked，“Whydidn’tyoujusttryontheshoeswithyourfeet？”Hereplied，“I’drathertrustthemeasurementthanbelievemyownfeet.”答案Recently，IhavereadastorytitledAmanfromtheStateofZhengboughtshoes.ThemaincharacterofthestoryisamanintheStateofZhengwhooncewantedtobuyapairofshoes.Hewouldrathertrustthemeasurementthanbelievehisownfeet.Thisstorytellsusthatoneshoulddosomethingbasedontherealsituation.Nowadays，peopleusuallyuseth