高考英语复习读后续写练习：父亲的教诲：关于身边的朋友+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习父亲的教诲：关于身边的朋友1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwasabout12,Ihadanenemy,agirlwholikedtopointoutmyshortcomings.Weekbyweek,littlebylittle,herlistgrew:Iwasverythin;Iwasn'tagoodstudent;Italkedtoomuch;Iwastooproud;Ididn'tliketohelpothers;Ididn'tfinishmyhomework;Ididn'tcareforanyoneandsoon.ItriedtohearalltheseaslongasIcould.Atlast,Ibecameveryangry.AndIwastooupsetanddidn'tknowwhattodonext.IfeltIwastheworstgirlintheworld.Lifewashardformeatthattime.Irantomyfatherwithtearsinmyeyesforhelp.4续写原文Helistenedtomequietly,andthenheasked,“Arethethingsshesaidtrueornot?Janet,didn'tyoueverwonderwhatyou'rereallylike?Well,younowhavethatgirl'sopinion.Thatisagoodthing.Goandmakealistofeverythingshesaidandmarkthepointsthataretrue.Paynoattentiontotheotherthingsshesaid.ThatisOK.”ThenIdidasmyfathertoldme.Tomygreatsurprise,Idiscoveredthatabouthalfofthethingsshesaidtomeweretrue.SomeofthemIcouldn'tchange(likebeingverythin),butagoodnumberofthethingsIcould—andsuddenlyIwantedtochange.ForthefirsttimeIgotofairlyclearpictureofmyself.Ineverfeelupsetnow.IbroughtthelistbacktoDaddy.Herefusedtolookatit.Ifeltverysurprised.5段首句Para1：“That's

just

for

you，”he

said.

Para2：Daddy's

advice

has

returned

to

me

at

many

important

moments.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了玛丽向父亲抱怨自己有一个“敌友”，面对玛丽的抱怨，玛丽的父亲并没有说什么，反而是引导自己的女儿自己去发现问题，最后得到教育的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：“That's

just

for

you，”he

said.由第一段首句内容“‘那是给你的，’他说。”可知，第一段可描写父亲建议玛丽要倾听，做她认为正确的事。10续写思路分析Para2：Daddy's

advice

has

returned

to

me

at

many

important

moments.由第二段首句内容“爸爸的建议在许多重要时刻都回响在我耳边。”可知，第二段可描写玛丽对父亲的教诲铭记。11续写思路分析续写线索父亲教诲——接受批评——感谢——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①充满：becrowdedwith/befilledwith/befullof②.充耳不闻：ignore/shutyourears③.指引：direct/guide/pilot/lead情绪类①.生气的：upset/mad/angry②.感激的：appreciative/grateful13续写素材[高分句型1].

Ourworldisfullofpeoplewhothinktheyknowyourduty.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）[高分句型2].Itisyouwholeadmetoamagnificentlife.（运用了强调句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现“That's

just

for

you，”he

said.“Youknowbetterthananyoneelsethetruthaboutyourself.Butyouhavetolearntolisten,notjustcloseyourears,feelingangryandupset.Whensomethingsomeonesaidaboutyouistrue,you'llfinditwillbeofhelptoyou.Ourworldisfullofpeoplewhothinktheyknowyourduty.Don'tshutyourears.Listentothemall,buthearthetruthanddowhatyouknowistherightthing.”16范文呈现Daddy's

advice

has

returned

to

me

at

many

important

moments.Inmylife,I'veneverhadabetterpieceofadvice.Riverspushmetothevastsea;thedawnbringsmebrightmorning;mydeardaddy,youhelpmealot.Itisyouwholeadmetoamagnificentlife.Thankyouforilluminatingmyvoyageoflifewithyourownlightoflife.Andmygratefulsentimentcomesfromthebottomofmyheart.17范文译文“那只是给你的，”他说。“你比任何人都更了解自己的真相。但你必须学会倾听，而不仅仅是闭上耳朵，感到愤怒和沮丧。当有人对你说的话是真的时，你会发现这对你有帮助。我们的世界里到处都是认为自己知道责任的人。不要闭上耳朵。倾听他们所有人的声音，但要听到真相，做你知道是正确的事情。”爸爸的建议在许多重要时刻都回到了我的脑海里。在我的一生中，我从未有过比这更好的建议。河流把我推向浩瀚的大海；黎明给我带