2024年人教版英语中考一轮复习写作指导-健康生活

2024年人教版英语中考一轮复习写作指导

话题9健康生活

话题项目体育健身;个人卫生;疾病医疗;健康饮食;情感情绪;休闲

八年级（上）Unit2Howoftendoyouexercise?

/I年级（上）Unit5Doyouwanttowatchagameshow?

/v年级（上）Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you'llhaveagreattime!

教材链接

八年级（下）Unit1What'sthematter?

九年级Unit9IlikemusicthatIcandanceto.

九年级Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry.

词句技能磨炼

一、短语集锦

1.多做运动________________________________

2.早餐吃得好_________________________________

3.有足够的睡眠________________________________

4.有均衡的饮食习惯________________________________

5.多吃水果和蔬菜________________________________

6.一天刷两次牙________________________________

7.分享问题和快乐________________________________

8.通过听音乐来放松________________________________

9.多与人交流_________________________________

10.熬夜________________________________

11.花太多时间玩电脑游戏_________________________________

12.放弃一些坏习惯________________________________

13.关注，注意________________________________

14.对.有影响________________________________

15.对……有好处/坏处_________________________________

二、句式练习（用所绐句子结构造句）

l.Weweresohappythatweforgot...

2.1amworriedabouttheexamsoIcan't...

3....makesmeknowtheimportanceofhealth.

4.Herealizedthatitwasveryimportantto...byhimself.

5.Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobe...

6.Tobehonest,everychildwantstogetgoodgradesandbetheprideof...

三、合扩升技能训练

1.Healthylifehelpsusgetgoodgrades.Wecanliveahappylife.notonly...butalso…合句）

合:________________________________________________________________________

2.1wasill.Ididn'tknowtheimportanceofhealth.（用not...until合并句子）

合:________________________________________________________________________

3.Peoplepayattentiontochildren'shealththesedays.（用比较级和文章主题扩句）

扩:________________________________________________________________________

4.1hopeeveryonehasahealthybody.（用inshort和inorderto扩句）

扩:.

5.Thesocietyisdeveloping.Also,healthhasbecomethetopicaroundtheworld.（用with作伴随

状语升句）

升:________________________________________________________________________

6.Wecankeepthebalancebetweenstudyandsports.（用onlyinthisway引导的倒装句升句）

升:________________________________________________________________________

四、美句储备

l.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

2.Healthisthefirstwealthinlife.

3.Themusic/moviebringsmebacktotheolddays.

4.Sportsplayanimportantpartinourdailylife.

5.Musiceducationnotonlyenrichesourknowledgebutalsoreducesourpressureandrelaxes

ourselves.

6.Thatencouragesmetoholdonandfighttilltheend.

7.Friendscanmakeourlifemorecolourful,butwemustbecarefultomakefriends,especially

online.

实战演练

当今学生身体状况令人担忧，“肥胖现象严重,吃得好，跑不动,跳不高”成为一种很普遍的

现象，而眼睛近视的学生大约占到三分之二,尤其是很多初三学生，紧张、失眠现象突出。在“双

减”背景下，如何减轻学生的负担，已经成为社会共同聚焦的问题。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,

讲述你的相关经历，说明健康的重要性并给同学们提出合理建议。

要求:词数在80〜120,文中不得出现自己的学校和真实姓名。

【演练技巧】

一、审

审主题

审文体

审人称

审时态

二、歹！1（结构、内容）

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成果精练

及格篇（三档）

Todaymanystudentsareinbadhealth.Theyalwayscan'tsleepwelloreatwell.Theyalways

disliketheirschoollife.Werealizehealthproblemsaresoseriousthatwemusttakemeasuresto

solvethem.

Iheardthatanoldmanlivedverylong.Thescientistsfoundouthehadaneasylife.Andhe

grewmuchfood.Healsoatehealthily.Hewasreallyold,buthekeptworking.Hethoughtthe

secretoflivinglongwastokeepgoodmood.Besides,hekeptdoingsportseveryday.Hethought

itwasgoodforhishealth.

SoIthinkweshouldexercisemore.Maybeweneedtogetupearlyandneverstayuplate.

Theteacheralsosaid,“Mayyoubehappy!”Ofcourse,wecantalkwithourfriendsandtryto

makelifehappier.

Atlast,lefsformgoodhabitsandliveahappylife.

升级篇（四档、五档范例）

Althoughthesocietydevelopsveryrapidly,studentspaylessandlessattentiontotheirhealth.

Forexample,stayinguplateandeatingmuchjunkfoodhavebecomenormalthingsintheirlife.

Thesehabitsmakethebodyevenworse.Asweallknow,nothingismoreimportantthanhealth,

buthowtokeepfit?

Recently,thenewshasreportedtherewastheoldestmanwhohadasecretoflivinglong.The

scientistsfoundthemanlivedasimplelifeandstayedawayfromthecity.Andheatethefoodhe

grewbyhimself.Besides,healsosaid,"Thesecretoflivinglongistokeepgoodmood,have

healthyfoodanddohappythings.^^Whatmad。mesurprisedwasthatheneverstoppedexercising

whetheritwasrainyorsunny.Hearingthat,Itoldmyselfitwastimetopushmyselfhard.

Therefore,inordertostayhealthy,developinggreathabitsisthefirststep.Whynottrybeing

inharmonywithourbody?Bothexercisingregularlyandenoughsleeparebeneficialtoourbody.

Liketheoldsayinggoes,tcLifeneedssports.9,

Mentalhealthisalsoasimportantasphysicalhealth.Lifeisn'talwaysassimpleaswethink.

Sometimesifweareinbadmood,communicatingwithfriendsandtryingtodosomethingwelike

arealsogoodways.Inotherwords,neverforgetthatlifbshouldbelikethesmilingflowersunder

thesunshine!

Allinall,onlyinthesewayscanweliveahealthyandhappylife!Hopefullymoreandmore

peopleareabletokeepthebalancebetweenstudyandsports.

参考答案

【词句技能磨炼】

一、l.doexercise/sportsmore2.haveagoodbreakfast

3.haveenoughsleep4.haveabalancedeatinghabit

5.eatmorefruitandvegetables6.brushteethtwiceaday

7.shareproblemsandhappiness8.relaxbylisteningtomusic

9.communicatewithpeoplemore10.stayuplate

11.spendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames

12.giveupsomebadhabits13.payattentionto

14.makeadifferenceto...15.begood/badfor...

二、l.Weweresohappythatweforgotthetime.

2.1amworriedabouttheexamsoIcan'tsleepatnight.

3.Hisexperiencemakesmeknowtheimportanceofhealth.

4.Herealizedthatitwasveryimportanttodoeverythingbyhimself.

5.Asaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.

6.Tobehonest,everychildwantstoge