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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“We’vegotthis,”myfriendAlexlaughedloudlyaswesteppedoffthelibrarysteps.“Absolutely,we’vegotthis,”Iagreed,performingalittlevictorydanceonthesidewalkoncethelibrarydoorhadclosedbehindus.Wehadbothbeennominated(提名)fortheYouthExcellenceProgram,anhonorandachancealmosteverystudentwascrazyabout.Thatweekend,AlexandIsatinmylivingroom,carefullycompletingtheprogramapplication.Weeachaimedtoshowwehadallqualitiestheprogramvalued:academicexcellence,leadership,communityservice,integrity,andcivicresponsibility.Idetailedmydevotiontochallengingcourses,whileAlexdescribedhisvolunteerworkatthelocalfoodbank.Weleftnostoneunturned,fullyconfidentinourjointsuccess.Thefollowingday,wesubmittedourapplicationstotheteacherhopefully.Weekspassed.Thenoneday,Ireceivedaletterabouttheproject.Irushedoutoftheclassroomandopenedit.Ifeltastabofsadnessrightinmyheart:mynamewasnotonthelist.Atthatverymoment,IsawAlexcamejoggingover,wavinghisletterwithabeamingsmile.Itwasclearhehadnewsthatcontrastedwithmyown.Withouthesitation,Iturnedawaytoavoidhim.Iknewhewaseagertosharehisjoy.Perhaps,heevenhadplannedtocelebratethegoodnewstogetherwithme.ButIjustcouldn’tfaceit:theypickedhimbutrefusedme.Howcouldfatebesounjust?Angeranddespairjustblindedme.IThatafternoon,ontheschoolbus,IsataloneandavoidedeyecontactwithAlex.Whenthebusarrivedatmystreet,Ijustjumpedoff,withoutsayinggoodbyeorsmilingtohim.Ihurriedhome,thrusting(塞)theletterintomymom’shands.Iburiedmyfaceinthecushions,sobbinguncontrollablyaswavesofheartachesweptoverme.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意这篇文章讲述了作者和好友Alex共同申请YouthExcellenceProgram的经历。两人在图书馆外庆祝被提名,满怀信心地一起准备申请材料,展示各自的优势。提交申请后,作者在得知自己未被选中而Alex成功入选时感到失望和愤怒,从而开始避开Alex。在公交车上,作者独自坐着,避免与Alex交流,回家后向母亲展示了令人沮丧的信件,并沉浸在悲伤中。文章通过作者的内心挣扎,展示了友谊在面对失败和成功时的脆弱性,以及作者最终意识到需要克服个人情绪,重建与好友的关系。在原文中,有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础和方向:1.被提名的兴奋:文章开头提到作者和Alex都对被提名感到兴奋,这为续写中可能的失望和对比情绪埋下伏笔。2.共同准备申请:作者和Alex一起精心准备申请材料,这为续写中可能出现的申请结果对比和对友谊的考验提供了背景。3.提交申请的希望:提交申请后满怀希望,这为续写中可能的失望和情绪反应提供了对比。4.收到结果的瞬间:作者在收到结果的瞬间感到悲伤,而Alex则满脸笑容,这为续写中作者的情绪变化和对Alex的反应提供了基础。在续写中,这些伏笔得到了回应:1.失望与对比:作者未被选中而Alex成功,这种对比在续写中被进一步展开,作者的失望和愤怒情绪被详细描述。2.友谊的考验:共同准备申请的友谊在结果揭晓后受到考验,作者的避开行为和内心的挣扎体现了友谊的脆弱性。3.希望与失望的对比:续写中作者的失望与之前提交申请时的希望形成鲜明对比,加深了情感的冲突。4.对Alex的反应:作者对Alex的成功感到无法面对,这种情绪在续写中被详细描绘,并通过母亲的对话得到缓解和反思。总的来说,续写部分紧密地围绕原文中的伏笔展开,通过具体情感的描述和内心挣扎,回应了原文中提出的问题和情感,使得整个故事更加完整和感人。续写纲要:第一段:1.描述作者在得知自己未被选中后的行为和心理变化。2.强调作者如何避免与Alex的交流,以及这种避免行为对作者自身的影响。3.展示作者内心的挣扎和对友谊的反思。第二段:1.叙述母亲与作者的对话,以及母亲如何帮助作者认识到自己的错误。2.描述作者如何开始理解自己的嫉妒和失望并不是Alex的错。3.强调作者决定采取行动,修复与Alex的关系,并重新评估自己对成功和失败的看法。参考答案Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Eachdayatschool,Inavigatedthehallwayswithanewroute,avoidingtheplaceshefrequented.Thesharedexcitementthatonceconnecteduswasreplacedbyapainfulsilence.Alextriedtodosomethingtomendit.Oneday,heevenleftmeanote,tryingtocomfortme.ButIlookedathimcoldly,“Leavemealone.”IknewIwashurtinghim,butthestingofrejectionwastoofresh,andIcouldn’tfindthewordstobridgethegap.Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.Sheremindedmethatsuccessandfailurewerepartsoflife’sjourney.“Youshouldhavecongratulatedyourfriendonthisinsteadoffeelingpitifulforyourself,”shesaidseriously.ItsuddenlystruckmethathowunfairlyItreatedAlex.Seizedbyguilt,Ifollowedmom’sadviceandleftAlexanote,expressingmyfeelings—notasanapology,butasasteptowardshealingandrebuildingourbond.Itwastimetofacemyfearsandembracetherealitythatourfriendshipcouldweatherthisstorm.下水文1第一段:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Theoncevibrantbondwesharedturnedintoanawkwardsilence.Iavoidedhiminthehallways,skippedourstudysessions,andunfollowedhimonsocialmedia.ItwasasifIhadbuiltaninvisiblebarrierbetweenus,onethatseemedimpossibletobreach.Mypridehadtakenover,andIcouldn’tbringmyselftofacetherealitythatmyfriendshipwithAlexwasworthmorethananyrecognitionoraward.Iwastrappedinmyownworldofdisappointment,unabletoseethebiggerpicture.第二段:Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.Shepointedoutthatmybehaviorwaspushingawayafriendwhohadalwaysbeenthereforme.Herwordswerelikeasplashofcoldwater,wakingmeupfrommyself-absorbedtrance.IrealizedthatmyjealousyanddisappointmentwerenotAlex’sfault,andthatIwastheonewhohadletourfriendshipslipaway.Itwasaharshlesson,butonethatIdesperatelyneededtolearn.IknewthenthatIhadtomakeamendswithAlex,torebuildthebridgethatIhadburneddownthroughmyownactions.Itwastimetoletgoofmyego,tocommunicateopenly,andtocherishthetruevalueofourfriendship.下水文2第一段:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Thejoyweoncesharedoverournominationsturnedintoapainfulreminderofmyfailureandhissuccess.Ifoundmyselfretreatingintosolitude,mymindconstantlyreplayingthemomentIopenedthatletter.EachtimeIsawAlex,amixofenvyandregretwouldwashoverme,makingithardtofacehimorevenlookhimintheeye.Ouronceunbreakablefriendshipseemedtobehangingbyathread,threatenedbymyinabilitytocopewithmyowndisappointment.第二段:Finally,Momtalkedwit

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