英语人教PEP版八年级（上册）Unit7+Writing

Unit7Willpeoplehaverobots?WritingLearningaims:1.能够正确使用“will＋do”描述未来的生活，内容包括居住环境、职业情况、出行方式、日常饮食、业余爱好等;2.对未来生活产生正向的情感和憧憬。Lead-inWhatwillthelifebelikeinthefuture?BrainstormingjobstransportationplacetolivethingstohaveFreetimeactivitiesIwillbea/an…Iwillgotoworkby…Iwilllivein…Iwillkeepa/an…Because...Iwill…with...Self-study

3aReadJill’sanswertothequestion.Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.

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jobfreetimeactivitieshousefamilyMylifein20years…WritingTask2Findthestructureofthisarticleandgoodsentencesineachparagraph.

Mylifein20yearsLifeinthefutureisquitedifferentfromnow.In20years,IthinkI’llbeanewspaperreporter.I’llliveinShanghai,becauseIthinkIwillmeetlotsofinterestingpeople,soI’llhavemorefriends.Iwillhavefewerpets,though,because

I’llhavelessfreetime.Andmyapartmentwillbenogoodforpetsbecauseit’llbetoosmall.SoI’llprobablyjustkeepabird.Duringtheweek,I’llwearsmartclothes.Ontheweekend,I’lllooklesssmartbutI’llbemorecomfortable.Inthefuture,peoplewillworkmoresothey’llprobablyhavefewervacations,butIthinkIwilltakeaholidayinHongKongwhenpossible.OnedayI’llevengotoAustralia.

Mylifewillbebetterandbetter.Forthis,Ishouldstudyhard.Mylifein20years

futurejobtranspotationthingstohave(pet,…)placestolive/work

Iwillbea/an…(why)I’llkeep/have….…(why)I’llgo/play…everyday/onceaweek/……(why)I’llwork/live…oneday....(why)

I’llgotoworkby...ending:bodybeginningMylifewillbebetterandbetterinthefuture.Lifewillbe...in20years…freetimeactivityWhatwillyourlifebelikein20years?Youcanaddmoreitems.

Groupwork

jobI’mgoodatwritingstories,soIwillbeawriterin20years.Because….isaninterestingwork.Iwanttoworkwith/meet…,soIwillworkin…homeTherewillbemorepeopleinthefuture,soIwillliveinanapartmentinthecountryside/…transpotationIwillflytomyofficebecauseIwillhavemyownaircraft(飞行器)…petPetsareourgoodfriends.Iwillkeepacutecat/dog…freetimeactivitiesManypeoplewanttotakeatripto…It’sabeautifulplace.Iwillgoto…同桌互批小组推选老师点评Evaluation10min分数档：1.13-15分，全部要点，表达强，行文连贯，书写规范工整，只有2处因使用较高级表达所致的错误2.10-12分，大部分要点，语句较流畅，少量语法错误，可读性较好3.7-9分，大部分要点，语句通顺，有一些语法和词汇错误，整体达到写作目的4.4-6分，只有少量内容要点表达正确，语句不通顺，语言有较多错误5.1-3分，基本或完全没写出内容要点，只写出少数单词、词组或短语；错误较多，不知所云6.0分，与题目无关，无法辨认批改要求：1.先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后根据该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分2.词数少，扣1分，书写太差，涂改过多，格式、标点符号错误太多，以至于影响阅卷的，降低一个档次给分3.句子的整体结构、动词的时态、语态用法错误的每项各扣1分，不重复扣分；单词拼写、标点符号和大小写满4个扣1分，不重复扣分Isitagoodcomposition?Groupwork:自己将来会是什么样子作文题目：Whatwillhappeninthefuture?作文

Intenyears,IthinkIwillbeateacher.I’llteachmiddleschoolstudents.IwanttobeaChineseteacher,becauseIlikeChinese.Iwillbefriendlyandfunny.Iwillbemystudents’friend.I’llopenuptheireyestooutsideworldandbeingagoodinfluenceintheirlives.Asformylife,I’llliveinanapartmentwithmybestfriendsormyparents.Ilikedogsverymuch.But,Idon’thaveadognow,becauseourapartmentistoosmall.So,I’llhavealovelydogatthattime.