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丰富写作内容初三下册书面表达专项复习clearstructure1情景导入，整体感知goodwritingrichlanguagetightlogicbeautifulhandwritingcorrectgrammarcompletecontent

1情景导入，整体感知goodwritingrichlanguageclearstructurecompletecontent

审体裁、人称、时态、要点列审列提纲，构框架扩在主题句或支持句后面添加额外的句子，对文章的内容进行合理恰当的补充说明，使内容更丰富，表达更精准。首句加黑是

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DearMr.Hunt,MyproblemisthatIcan’tgetonwithmyfamily.

Relationsbetweenmyparentshavebecomedifficult.

①Theyfightalot,andIreallydon’tlikeit.

②It’stheonlycommunicationtheyhave.

③Idon’tknowifIshouldsayanythingtothemaboutthis.④Whentheyargue,it’slikeabig,blackcloudhangingoverourhome.Also,myelderbrotherisnotverynicetome.

①HealwaysrefusestoletmewatchmyfavoriteTVshow.

②Insteadhewatcheswhateverhewantsuntillateatnight.

③Idon’tthinkthisisfair.AthomeIalwaysfeellonelyandnervous.Isthatnormal?WhatcanIdo?SadandThirteen.例：选自八年级下册unit4reading2自主探究，观察归纳

书面表达(2020重庆A卷)

国家提出了将劳动教育（LaborEducation)纳入中小学国家课程方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目EnglishWorld就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以“SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinourschool”为题，写一篇短文参赛。参考信息：1.劳动教育的意义（学习生活技能，养成良好习惯......）；2.校内劳动教育建议（开设种植课，组织做蛋糕比赛......）;3......要求：1.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。2自主探究，观察归纳

书面表达(2020重庆A卷)

国家提出了将劳动教育（LaborEducation)纳入中小学国家课程方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目EnglishWorld就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以“SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinourschool”为题，写一篇短文参赛。参考信息：1.劳动教育的意义（学习生活技能，养成良好习惯......）；2.校内劳动教育建议（开设种植课，组织做蛋糕比赛......）;3......要求：1.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。列提纲，构框架Beginning:ThemeaningofLaborEducationBody:AdviceaboutLaborEducationatschoolEnding:Expresshopeandfeeling1.learnsomelifeskills；2.developgoodhabits；1.offersomeplantingcourses；2.holdcakecompetition；3.setupsomeclubs.Iamlookingforwardtotakethecourse.2自主探究，观察归纳WhydostudentsneedtohaveLaborEducationatschool?learnsomeusefullifeskillsdevelopgoodhabitsimportantmeaningfuleducationalBeginningvalueeverythingweown2自主探究，观察归纳

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2自主探究，观察归纳

Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.Theschoolcanoffersomecourses

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。主题句支持句扩写句注意：所有支持句都围绕主题句中心意思展开。所有内容拓展部分也为主题句服务。I’mlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.Ifso,IbelieveIwilldowellinit.ExpresshopeIt’sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.

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2自主探究，观察归纳Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.为启下过渡句，也是本段的主题句。1.段落间的过渡句

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ItisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcanteachususefullifeskillsandcanalsohelpusformgoodhabits.2自主探究，观察归纳通过使用从句、衔接词等，将原本孤立的简单句进行逻辑连接。2.句子间的过渡句

ThereisnodoubtitisimportantandeducationalforustohaveLaborEducation.Becauseitcannotonlyteachususefullifeskills,butalsocanhelpusformgoodhabits.2自主探究，观察归纳▲常用观点类过渡句：1.Recentlywehavehadadiscussionabout...2.Everycoinhastwosides.Ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.3.Inmyview/opinion,...4.Isupposethat.../Iagreethat+句子/Iagreewith.../Idisagreewith...5.It’smyfeelingthatattitudeismoreimportantthanability.6.FromwhereIstand,...7.Istronglybelievethat...8.AsfarasIamconcerned,...9.Tobehonest/Totellthetruth,...2自主探究，观察归纳linkingwords连接词顺序：first,then,next,finally转折：but,however,instead递进：what’smore,besides,inaddition,notonly...butalso并列：aswellas,both…and…因果：because,as,so,therefore对比：while,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand总结：inaword,inbrief,inshort

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