Unit1-写作课-名师课件（一）

letterofsuggestionARTEXHIBITIONPersuasiveWRTINGA

Hi!Longtimenosee!I'mLiHuaandIwanttosaysomethingabouttheexhibition.Ithinkyou'dbetterholditinthelibrary,becauseitisbigenough.Forthekindsofpaintings.Isuggesttheimpressionpanting,causeit'seasytounderstandbutnotthemodernart.However,poeplemaywanttoseemorestyles.Whynotshowdifferentartworkstous?God,I'msohappythatthiseventisgoingtohappensoon!Ican'twaittoseethepaintings!Thisissocool!DearCommitteemembers,IamwritingtomakesomesuggestionswithregardtoholdinganArtExhibitioninthenearfuture.Youmayconsiderholdingtheexhibitioninthelibrary,butwehavealargenumberofstudents,anditmaybecrowdedwhentheyappreciatethosepaintings.ThusIwouldrecommendthatitshouldbeheldattheschoolhallways.Asforthecontents,foronething,wecanexhibitsomemasterpiecesbythefamouspainters.Foranother,ifyoucouldgiveanopportunitytothestudentswhoarefondofartto

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shown,Ibelievetheexhibitionwillbemorethansuccessful.Iwouldappreciateitifmysuggestionswouldbeadopted.Eagerlyawaityourpositiveresponse.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaFORMATWritingvs.CONTENTSSTYLELANGUAGEIDEAPackagingSmellTasteNutritionCookingMaintainYourBankLetterofSuggestionsClarifyintentionIamwritingto/wouldliketomakesomesuggestionsconcerning/regarding...Dearcommittemembers/SirTowhomitmayconcernYoursfaithfullynameIfeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…Iwouldrecommendthat…Youmayconsiderdoing…Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalspractical/useful/helpful.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.MakeproposalsAnticipationThemainconcernsWhattodisplay?Wheretoholdtheexhibition?PossiblethemeoftheexhibitionStudents'ownartworks(19times)Realism(13times)cartoons(4times)

Impressionism(12times)Abstract(2times)ShowustheMasterpieces!(9times)WhyRealism,Impressionism...etc.?AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsgiveapreferenceto...Differentpeoplehavedifferenttastes,sovarietyisimportant.Iconductedasurvey，whichshowsthat...

梁美美(13times)I'mwritingonbehalfofmyfellowstudents.罗泳峰(5

times)LOCATIONtoholdtheexhibitionlibraryhallwaysclassroomsdormitory36times17times3times2timesstadium2timesthelab1time

onlinevirtualexhibition

Thinkoutofthebox!施萌WhyLibrary?››››Quietness(6times)Atmosphere(6times)Space(3times)Safety(1time)Compare：Onlyinthiswaycanweappealtostudents.It’saquietplacewherestudentscouldfocusonthepaintingswithoutbeingdisturbed.Thesiteoftheexhibitioncanbelocatedintheschoollibrary.1nosupportingargumentIt'sbetterthatyouholdanartexhibitionintheschoolhallways.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatitisagoodplacewhichcanattractanumberofstudentstovisit.

2argumentirrelevantandthereforenotconvincingIfeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifweholditinschoolhallways.Foronething,I'mfirmlyconvincedthateverythingisgoodinitsseason.Everystudent(s)have(has)apowertoadmirethebeauty.

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itwillprovideagoodenvironmentforustofeelart,createknowledgeandlearntolive.3ambiguitycausedbyinadequcyinlanguageandlogicAsfarasI'mconcerned,thebestplacetoholdtheexhibitionaretheschoolhallways.Meanwhile（？）,itwillbeachanceforthemtolearnfromeachother（？）.Consequently,theywillhaveapreferencefortheexhibitionheldinthehallways.4specificandmakessenseIwouldchoosetheschoolhallwaystoholdthisexhibition.Thereasonisthatit'sdifficultformoststudentstosqueezesparetimefromtheirbusyscheduletogotoadistantplaceforanartexhibition.However,ifyouholditintheschoolhallwayswherestudentsoftenpass,itwillbemoreconvenientforthemtogetinvolved.罗芷若4Awesome!

Itwouldbeagreatideaifthetheartworksondisplayvaryacrossawiderangeofstyles.FromImpressionismtoSurrealism,artisticstyleisinconstantchangewhiletheuniversalityofartremainsunchanged,andthisistheverythingstudentsshouldgetasenseof.

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timesForonething,...Foranother,...HaveapreferenceforSubjunctivemoodAppealto6times10times12timesSuccessfuluseoftargetlanguageunitsSamples:Foronething,

thelibrarythebestplacetohold(theexhibition)becauseitbe(is)abletoletpeopleenjoyquietly.Foranotherthing,itisreallyagoodchangeforstudentstofeelthecharmofart.Nowadays,teenagershaveapreferenceforsomethingnovel,creativeandoutsidethebox....theartworkscreatedbystudentsmayappealtoalargeraudience.黄冰珊郭昕颖洪一琦郭昕颖Ifthestylesofartwerealloutofdate,Iwouldn'tbeinterestedinvisitingthem.SentenceStructure1.Howtouse“because”?2.“-ing”and“-ed“formsinattributiveclause?PartofSpeech“succeed”,“success”or“successful”?Collocationalarge“deal”,“amount”or“number”ofstudents?CommonProblemsSentenceStructure*Itwouldbemorebeneficialifyouholditin(the)library.Becausethelibraryhasmorespaceaswellasagoodatmosphereofart.*Weareintrerestedintheartworkswhichcreatedbystudents.××√Itwouldbemorebeneficialifyouholditin(the)library,becausethelibraryhasmorespaceaswellasagoodatmosphereofart.Weareintrerestedintheartworkswhicharecreatedbystudents.√Weareintrerestedintheartworks

createdbystudents.√PartofSpeech*Asaconsequently,...

*I'msuretheartexhibitionwillbesucceed.××√Asaconsequence,...orConsequently,...I'msuretheartexhibitionwillbesuccessful.√I'msuretheartexhibitionwillbeahugesucess.√Collocation:quantity

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