九年级英语上册（仁爱版）Unit 1 The Changing World 满分范文必背

试卷第=page88页，共=sectionpages1515页Unit1TheChangingWorld满分范文必背1．某英文报正开展“Ourlifehaschangedforthebetter”征文竞赛，请你投稿，从下表所列的几个方面描述过去和现在美好生活的变化，并谈谈你的感受。InthepastNowLivingconditionsmallhouse,…comfortablehouse,…Leisure(休闲)activityswimintheriverorsea,fewbooks,...swimintheswimmingpool,morebooks,...注意：（1）短文中必须描述表格中所列的内容，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；（3）词数：80—100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。首句：Ourlifehasdevelopedrapidly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Ourlifehasdevelopedrapidly.People’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Inthepast,mostpeoplelivedinsmallhouseswithnoairconditioners.Butnowtheyliveinbighouseswhicharemorecomfortable.Andpeoplenowhavemoreleisureactivities.Before,theyswamonlyintheriverorsea.Nowtheycanplayinthepoolwithwarmwater.Forchildren,theyusedtohavefewbookstoread,buttheycanenjoymorebooksnow.Communicationsarebecomingeasierandquicker,aspeopleusemobilephones,andcomputersinsteadofwritingletters.Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,ourlifeisbecomingbetter.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍过去和现在生活中的变化。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题并根据表格内容介绍人们生活条件及休闲活动的变化；第二步，谈谈自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①airconditioners空调②usedtodosth.过去常常做某事③insteadof代替，而不是[高分句型]①Butnowtheyliveinbighouseswhicharemorecomfortable.（which引导定语从句）2．生活在变化，社会在进步，我们的家乡也越来越好。你学校英语俱乐部本周日将在你的家乡举办“走进秀美乡村一日游”研学活动。请你以“ChangesinMyHometown”为题写一篇英语短文，届时介绍一下你的家乡。内容提示：1.过去几年你家乡的变化；2.你的感想和对未来的展望。写作要求：1.100词左右；2.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；3.不得使用真实姓名和校名。

I’mgladtohearthatastudytriptomyhometownwillbeorganizedthisSunday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:I’mgladtohearthatastudytriptomyhometownwillbeorganizedthisSunday.Thepasttenyearswitnessedgreatchangesinmyhometown.Inthepast,peoplelivedinoldandbrokenhouses.Butnowlinesofbeautifultallbuildingscanbeseeneverywhere.Besides,therearenotonlymoreprivatecarsbutalsowiderstreets.Theenvironmentaroundmyhometownalsotakesonanewlook.Allthesesurprisingchangesbringusmuchconvenienceandcomfort.Peoplearelivingamuchricherandhappierlifethanbefore.Iamproudoftherapiddevelopmentofourcountry.AndIamsurethatmyhometownwillbemoreandmoreliveableinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时；③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，表达对在自己家乡举办研学旅行的开心；第二步，介绍家乡过去和现在的变化对比；第三步，表达自己的感想以及对家乡未来的展望。[亮点词汇]①witnessgreatchanges见证了巨大的变化②takeonanewlook焕然一新③beproudof以……为傲[高分句型]AndIamsurethatmyhometownwillbemoreandmoreliveableinthefuture.（宾语从句）3．请根据提示写一篇题为“ThePopulationProblem”的短文。80词左右。提示：1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家；3.人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重的问题（请举例说明）。ThePopulationProblem________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThePopulationProblemItisreportedthattheworld’spopulationisgrowingfasterandfaster.Thepopulationisoneofthebiggestproblemsintheworldtoday.Chinahasthelargestpopulationwithmorethan1.3billion.It’saboutonefifthoftheworld’spopulation.Thelargepopulationcauseslotsofproblems.Thereislesslivingspaceforeachfamily,anditisdifficultforlotsofpeopletofindjobs.Mostcitiesaremorecrowdedthanbefore,andthetrafficismuchheavier.Naturalenvironmentsarebecomingworseandworse.Ithinkweshouldtakemeasurestocontrolthepopulationgrowth.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一以及中国是人口最多的国家等，并介绍因人口增长带来的一些问题，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。4．为庆祝2024年国庆节的到来，你校英语社团拟举办以“ChinainMyEyes”为题的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下我们亲爱的祖国！Ourgoals(目标)：渴求知识；努力学习；永不放弃；实现梦想。要求：（1）短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；（2）语言表达准确，语义连贯、通顺；（3）文中不要出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；（4）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。相关词汇（高铁：high-speedrailway

新能源汽车：newenergycars）ChinainMyEyesHello,everyone!IamfromChinaandIlikemycountryverymuch.NowI’dliketointroducemycountrytoyou!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ChinainMyEyesHello,everyone!IamfromChinaandIlikemycountryverymuch.NowI’dliketointroducemycountrytoyou!AstheNationalDaycelebrationsdrawnear,Ifindmyselfreflectingonthebeautyanddepthofmynativecountry,China.TheessenceofChina,inmyeyes,isatapestryofrichhistory,vibrantculture,andunwaveringspirit.Inancienttimes,ShenNonginventedtea.AndChinahasmanytraditionalfestivalswithalonghistory,suchastheDragonBoatFestival,theSpringFestival,andsoon.Inmoderntimes,thewideapplicationofhigh-speedrailandnewenergycarshasmadepeople’slifemoreconvenient.WechatPayallowsustoshopwithoutcarryingcash.Weshouldthirstforknowledgeandstudyhard.Atthesametime,inordertorealizeourdreams,weshouldnevergiveup.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，借用“我眼中的中国”来引出下文中对中国的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“传统文化、现代科技和我们的目标”三方面入手，重点介绍我眼中的中国；第三步，书写结束语，号召大家努力学习，实现梦想。[亮点词汇]①drawnear临近②reflectingon反思③essence本质④vibrant充满活力的⑤unwavering坚定不移的⑥thewideapplicationof

……的广泛应用⑦allowsbtodosth允许某人做某事⑧thirstfor渴望⑨atthesametime同时[高分句型]Asthe NationalDaycelebrationsdrawnear,Ifindmyselfreflectingonthebeautyanddepthofmynativecountry,China.（as引导的时间状语从句）5．最近10多年来，中国老百姓的生活发生了巨大的变化。你的奶奶亲眼见证了生活的巨大变化，请根据奶奶的所见所闻，以“Ourlifehaschanged”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：（1）生活环境的改变；（2）人们娱乐方式的变化；（3）交通的变化；（4）……要求：（1）词数：80—120词左右；（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在班级的名称。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OurlifehaschangedOurlifehaschangedgreatlytheseyears.Peopleusedtoliveinsmall,oldhouses.Nowpeopleliveinbig,tallbuildings.Withtheprogressofsociety,nowthefamilyisgettingsmallerandsmaller,generallyonlyoneortwochildren.Inthisway,childrencanenjoyagoodlife.Therearebuses,subwaysandairplaneseverywhere,whichmakestravellingeasier.Therearemanymoreactivitiesinpeople’sfreetime,suchasmountainclimbing,fishingandsoon.Therearemanyhigh-qualityprogramsonTV,suchasBeijingOperaandsomeoldmovies.Inaword,ourlifeisbetterandbetter.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍生活的变化，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍不同方面的变化；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①usedtodo过去常常做某事②inone’sfreetime在某人的空闲时间③suchas例如④inaword总的来说[高分句型]Therearebuses,subwaysandairplaneseverywhere,whichmakestravellingeasier.(which引导的定语从句)6．假设你是学生李辉，你校英文网站拟报道过去二十年你市交通工具的变化以及给人们生活带来的影响。请你以“Changesinthemeansoftransportation”为题写一篇短文向学校英文网站投稿。要点如下：（1）过去二十年你市交通工具的变化；（2）你的感想和对未来交通工具发展的展望。参考词汇：witness见证；solarpower太阳能注意：（1）词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。ChangesinthemeansoftransportationThepasttwentyyearshavewitnessedgreatchangesinthemeansoftransportationinourcity._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ChangesinthemeansoftransportationThepasttwentyyearshavewitnessedgreatchangesinthemeansoftransportationinourcity.Therearenotonlymorebusesandprivatecarsbutalsoplanesandhigh-speedtrains.Allthesesurprisingchangesbringusmuchconvenienceandcomfortable,shorteningthetimeoflong-distancetravel.Inthefuture,therewillbedriverlessflyingbikesandcars,whichcannotonlyrunonlandbutalsoflyintheairatahighspeed.What’smore,theywillrunonsolarpowerinsteadofpetrol.Aboveall,controlledbycomputers,theywillbeeasytooperateforpeopleofallages.Withtherapiddevelopmentinthemeansoftransportation,ourworldisgettingsmallerandsmaller.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接上文，介绍过去二十年家乡交通工具的变化；第二步，阐述对未来交通工具发展的展望；第三步，书写感想。[亮点词汇]①notonly…butalso不仅……而且②What’smore此外③insteadof代替④Aboveall最重要的是[高分句型]Inthefuture,therewillbedriverlessflyingbikesandcars,whichcannotonlyrunonlandbutalsoflyintheairatahighspeed.(therebe句型；which引导的非限制性定语从句)7．随着我们国家的日益强大，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化。假如你是李东，请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你现在的生活和过去相比都发生了哪些变化。提示：要求：1.参考提示信息，选择使用提示词，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯,书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)

LifeNowandThenTheseyears,manypartsofpeople’slifehavechangedalot.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

LifeNowandThen Theseyears,manypartsofpeople’slifehavechangedalot.Iamhappytointroducethedifferencesbetweenpresentandpast.Asforme,therearemanydifferentpartschangedinmylife.First,theeducationbecomesbetter,becausemanynewschoolbuildingsweresetup.Iusedtolearnbylisteningtoteachersintheclassroomonly.Butnow,Istudyonlineandhavelearnedalotofusefulskillsonthecomputers.Ofcourse,Ihavemorecolorfulactivitiesthanbefore.Then,thetransportalsochangedalot.Thehigh-speedtrainsarebecomingfasterandsafer.What’smore,therearemoreandmorenewinventionswhicharehelpfulforpeopletohaveabetterlife,suchasrobots.Lastbutnotleast,moreandmorepeoplepayattentiontoprotectingtheearth.Ibelievethemoretreesweplant,thelesspollutionwewillhave.HowluckyIamtoliveinourcountry!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意“提示信息”和“要求”，选择使用提示词，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，第一段已经给出；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“教育，交通，科技和环境”四方面重点介绍现在生活和过去的对比；第三步，感叹自己现在生活之美好。[亮点词汇]①weresetup被建立②arebecomingfasterandsafer变得更快更安全③haveabetterlife过着更好的生活[高分句型]①Ibelievethemoretreesweplant,thelesspollutionwewillhave.（宾语从句和the+比较级……，the+比较级……）②HowluckyIamtoliveinourcountry!（感叹句）8．时代在改变，我们的生活也在发生着巨大的变化。请你根据下列提示，写一篇关于“ChangesaroundUs”的英语短文。要求：1.80—120词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ChangesaroundUsWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ourliveshavegreatchanges.Wecangetclosetonaturenowandwealsocanplayindooractivities.Alltheseleisureactivitiescanmakeushappyandrelaxed.What’smore,therearemorekindsoftransportationssuchashigh-speedrailwaysandplanes,whichmakesitconvenientforustotravel.Itisalsoeasytobuyticketsonline.Asyoucansee,theroadsarewiderandwider.Therearemoreandmoretreesandthewaterisbecomingcleanerandcleaner.Inaword,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Wefeelveryhappyaboutit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍我们周围的变化，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据导图内容详细介绍我们周围的变化；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①suchas例如②inaword总的来说[高分句型]What’smore,therearemorekindsoftransportationssuchashigh-speedrailwaysandplanes,whichmakesitconvenientforustotravel.(which引导的定语从句)9．随着社会的不断发展和进步，人们的生活方式发生了翻天覆地的变化。请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍一下人们在过去和现在的生活方式发生了哪些变化。具体要求如下：1.包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当增加内容；2.重点谈谈人们在过去和现在生活方式的变化；3.文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChangesofOurLifestyleWiththedevelopmentofourcountryandtechnology,greatchangesofourlifestylehastakenplace.Herearesomechangesinourdailylifefromthepast.Weusedtowriteletterstocommunicate,butnow,wecansimplycallothersorsendtheme-mails.Itisbothfastandconvenient.Inthepast,peoplewenttoschoolbybike,yetnow,weusuallytakethesubwaytoschool.Peoplelistenedtotheradiobefore,butnow,wewouldliketowatchTV.It’sfantastic.Peopleusedtoliveinsmallandbadhouses,butatthemoment,peopleliveintallbuildingsandlivemorecomfortably.Ithinkthechangesbringusamorecomfortableandconvenientlife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：根据思维导图介绍人们在过去和现在的生活方式发生了哪些变化。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示人们的生活发生了很多变化；第二步，根据思维导图详细介绍人们在过去和现在的生活方式发生了哪些变化；第三步，书写结语，介绍自己对变化的看法。[亮点词汇]①withthedevelopmentof随着……的发展②takeplace发生③wouldliketodo想要做某事[高分句型]①①Weusedtowriteletterstocommunicate,butnow,wecansimplycallothersorsendtheme-mails.(but连接的并列句)②Ithinkthechangesbringusamorecomfortableandconvenientlife.(宾语从句)10．提示：中国在近10年之间发生了很大的变化。你的家随着国家的强大也一定发生了很多的改变。请你根据下表提示，以“Changesinmyfamily”为题，写一篇