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课时把关练PartVWriting妙笔生花读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 What’sthebestwaytoexperienceAmerica?Iadviseonestepatatime.Andthat’sexactlywhatIsetouttodoin2006whenItriedtovisitallthefiftystatesinfiftydaysandrunamarathonineachofthemwhilestayingthere. OnawarmdayinSeptember,Idecidedtobeginmytripofrunningfiftymarathons,infiftystates,infiftydayswiththeLewis&ClarkmarathoninSt.Charles,Missouri.Itseemedlikeafittingplacetobegin,becauseitwasthe200thanniversaryoftheLewis&Clarkexpedition(探险). AftervisitingMissouri,myplanwastoheadwestacrossthecountry,stoppingineachstatetovisit,exploreandrunamarathon.Asyoumightimagine,thepreparations,includingtheschedulesandresearch,wereeverybitaschallengingastherunningitself.Duetotheembarrassingtimingofdifferentmarathonsacrossthenation,weweren’talwaysabletofollowastraightlinefromonestatetothenext.Instead,wecouldonlytravelacrossthecountryinacomplex(复杂的)web.Butthatwaswhatmadethetravelsointeresting. Besidesthecomplexweboftravel,thepresenceofmyfamilymademytripmoremeaningful.Mywife,adentist,hadchangedherscheduletojoinme,andourtwochildrenAlexandriaandNicholaswouldbetakingfiftydaysoffschool,sotheycouldtravelwithus.Mymom,aretiredschoolteacher,wouldalsobepartoftheteam.Myfatheralsocamealong.Well,we’refromGreece,whereonefamilymembergoes,andtheotherssoonfollow.Allofthemsupportedmyexpedition. Itmightbeeasytoconcludethatseeingthecountrysoquicklywouldleadtoanunclearimpression,butjusttheoppositewastrue.Iremembereverysinglestateandeverydetailveryclearly,evenonthisveryday,morethanadecadelater.注意:续写词数应为150左右。 Afterwemadecarefulpreparations,myexpeditionplanbeganfinally.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mygoodphysicalqualitywasshownintheexpedition.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步骤一:品读语篇——抓住要点很关键 前文概要 审体裁:记叙文 审时态:一般过去时 审前文大意以及要点 who:theauthor when:inSeptember,2006 where:St.Charles,Missouri what:runningfiftymarathonsinfiftystatesinfiftydays why:stoppingineachstatetovisit,exploreandrunamarathon 第一段:作者计划通过50天去50个州,并在每个州跑一次马拉松长跑,来亲身体验美国。 第二段:在9月份一个暖和的日子开始了体验美国的马拉松计划。 第三段:作者在每个州停下来参观、探索和跑马拉松,但是准备工作,包括日程安排和研究,都和跑步本身一样具有挑战性。 第四段:家人的参与使作者的旅行更有意义,他们都支持作者的探险。 第五段:作者看到这个国家,清楚地记得每一个州和每一个细节,甚至十多年后也不会忘记。步骤二:戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句,高度融合原文,合理想象情节 第一段:根据所给第一句“Afterwemadecarefulpreparations,myexpeditionplanbeganfinally.”及原文情节推测可知,作者要横跨50个州,中间作者和家人势必面临天气方面的种种挑战,此段要围绕此内容展开续写。 第二段:根据所给句子“Mygoodphysicalqualitywasshownintheexpedition.”和原文情节的推测可知,身体健壮是一个原因,但喜欢这次活动的主要原因是得到了家人的支持。步骤三:斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇,生动描述情节话题激活词汇 serious,feeltired,experience,expectation,successfully,drop,become,help,need,find,enjoy,meet,giveup,finish,drive,alongthehighway,flyto,dailymarathonroutine,aftereverymarathon,wetness,changesbecomemoreserious,behealthyandstrong句式翻译 1.我们先从密苏里州开车到科罗拉多州。(主谓)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.我们去那儿要参加博尔德越野马拉松。(介词短语表目的)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.沿着公路,湿度越来越低。(比较级)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.当我们飞往阿拉斯加时,变化变得更加严重了。(主从复合句) ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.我们遇到了一场暴风雪!(comeacross) ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.那对我们的探险很有挑战性。(主系表)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.幸好一家户外服装公司帮了我们,所以我们有了很多暖和的衣服。(主从复合句)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.暖和的衣服我们并没有穿很久。(主谓宾)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.第二天我们就发现自己在夏威夷的炎热地区了。(主谓宾宾补)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.除了每天的马拉松之外,我还喜欢与大人物见面。(enjoydoingsth.)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 11.通过这些名人,我体验了不同的文化。(主谓宾)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 12.虽然每次马拉松后我都觉得很累,但我从未想过要放弃。(although引导让步状语从句)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 13.真正的原因并不是我健康强壮,而是我得到了所有家庭成员的支持。(liein)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 14.在他们的期望下,我成功地在50个州跑完了50场马拉松。(with介词短语)___________________________________________________________________________________________ 步骤四:创造性表达——润色注重细节,句式再造升级 1.将第1句和第2句变为一个简单句___________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.将第4句用独立主格结构改为一个简单句___________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.将第5句用becaughtin改写,且与第6句变为一个复合句___________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.将第7句改写为简单句___________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.将第8句和第9句变为一个复合句___________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.将第11句改为第10句的非限制性定语从句___________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.将第13句用not...but结构改写___________________________________________________________________________________________ 步骤五:高分在即——连句成篇,结构紧凑逻辑衔接Afterwemadecarefulpreparations,myexpeditionplanbeganfinally.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mygoodphysicalqualitywasshownintheexpedition._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________课时把关练PartVWriting参考答案步骤三1.WedrovefromMissouritoColoradofirst.2.WeweregoingtherefortheBoulderBackroadsmarathon.3.Alongthehighwaythewetnessdroppedlowerandlower.4.ThechangesbecamemoreseriouswhenweflewtoAlaska.5.Wecameacrossasnowstorm!6.Thatwaschallengingforourexpedition.7.Thankfully,asanoutdoorclothingcompanyhelpedus,wehadplentyofwarmclothing.8.Wedidn’twearwarmclothesforlong.9.ThenextdaywefoundourselvesinthehotareaofHawaii.10.Apartfromthedailymarathonroutine,Ialsoenjoyedmeetingthegreatpeople.11.Throughthesecelebrities,Iexperienceddifferentcultures.12.AlthoughIfelttiredaftereverymarathon,Ineverthoughtaboutgivingup.13.Therealreasondidn’tlieinthatIwashealthyandstrong;itlayinthatIgainedthesupportfromallmyfamilymembers.14.Withtheirexpectations,Ifinishedthefiftymarathonsinfiftystatessuccessfully.步骤四1.WedrovefromMissouritoColoradofirst,fortheBoulderBackroadsmarathon.2.WeflyingtoAlaska,thechangesbecamemoreserious.3.Wewerecaughtinasnowstorm,whichwaschallengingforourexpedition.4.Thankstothehelpfromanoutdoorclothingcompany,wehadplentyofwarmclothing.5.Wedidn’twearthemforlong,becausethenextdaywefoundourselvesinthehotareaofHawaii.6.Apartfromthedailymarathonroutine,Ialsoenjoyedmeetingthegreatpeople,throughwhomIexperienceddifferentcultures.7.Therealreasonwasnotbeca
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