2025届高考英语一轮复习第三部分写作专题提升篇层级二低档作文升级为五档作文策略告诉你第二讲句式要高级句子要鲜活学案新人教版

PAGE其次讲句式要高级，句子要鲜活句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不行能得高分。精彩句式的合理运用会使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并留意句式的敏捷多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！eq\a\vs4\al(策略一特别句式，风景独好)写作中，假如考生能够运用强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等特别句式，不仅能彰显考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。1．运用强调句①(2025届太原模拟书面表达)Withyourgeneroushelp,IfirmlybelievethatIwilladapttothecollegelifeassoonaspossible.→ItiswithyourgeneroushelpthatIfirmlybelievethatIwilladapttothecollegelifeassoonaspossible.②(2024年全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Ibelievehardworkwillpayoff!→Idobelievehardworkwillpayoff!2．运用倒装句(2024年全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Thegameissosignificantthatitisrequiredthateveryoneshouldbepresentpunctually.→Sosignificantisthegamethatitisrequiredthateveryoneshouldbepresentpunctually.3．运用虚拟语气Ifyoushouldacceptmyapplication,Iwouldsparenoefforttocommitmyselftoyoursatisfaction.→Shouldyouacceptmyapplication,Iwouldsparenoefforttocommitmyselftoyoursatisfaction.4．运用省略句(2025届昆明高三摸底调研书面表达)Whilewetravelalongtheway,wecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryaswellasthenewlooksofthevillagesandtowns.→Whiletravellingalongtheway,wecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryaswellasthenewlooksofthevillagesandtowns.5．it句型①(2024年全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Firstofall,bearitinmindthatyouhadbetterarrivepunctuallyorsometimeearlierthantheappointedtime,whichisofgreatsignificancetoshowyourpoliteness.(it作形式宾语)②(2024年江苏卷书面表达)Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.(it作形式主语)eq\a\vs4\al(策略二三大句式，编排奇妙)1．增加亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用可以特别有效地提升表达档次，在写作中假如我们可以把两个简洁句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。①(2024年全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Everyoneiswelcometowatchthefilm.Ittellsaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.→Everyoneiswelcometowatchthefilm,whichtellsaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.②(2024年浙江卷书面表达)WewillgototheSpringMountainandtherewecanhaveaclimb.→WewillgototheSpringMountain,wherewecanhaveaclimb.③(2024年全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Further,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest.Itwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.→Further,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.2．提升档次的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表达句式。①(2024年全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)IholdthefirmbeliefthatIamtheverypersonforthisjob.(同位语从句)②(2024年全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Itisworthmentioningthatourvolleyballteamwonthechampionshiptwiceinnationalmiddleschoolvolleyballmatches.(主语从句)③(2024年江苏卷书面表达)Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.(同位语从句)④(2024年北京卷书面表达)That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.(表语从句)3．吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写作中，状语从句是常常用到的句型，它的敏捷运用能使作文更具吸引力。①(2024年北京卷书面表达)SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture,IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUniversityisanidealplaceforyou.②(2024年江苏卷书面表达)Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.③(2024年全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Ifyouwanttoapplyformembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsendanemailtopingpong@123.com.④(2024年全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)WhenitcomestowhatIcandotohelp,IbelieveIcanbeanoutstandingtourguideintermsofChinesepaintingexplanation.eq\a\vs4\al(策略三活用非谓，手法老到)1．运用非谓语动词整合简洁句，提升表达档次。写作时，考生可以利用非谓语动词对两个简洁句进行整合，使其成为较高级的表达。①Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishCorner.IwillprovideusstudentswithaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.→Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishCorner,providingusstudentswithaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.(现在分词作状语)②Ifeelquitesorryforthat.Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.→Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.(现在分词作状语)2．运用非谓语动词简化复合句，使语言简练。①Whentheairportiscompletednextyear,itwillhelppromotetourisminthisarea.→Theairporttobecompletednextyearwillhelppromotetourisminthisarea.(不定式作定语)②BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgoodasthem.→Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgoodasthem.(过去分词作状语)eq\a\vs4\al(策略四适时感叹，必要强调)①HowhappyIwastobeoneofthemembersinthiswarmfamily!Thisisoneofthemosttreasuredmomentsinmymemory.成为这个暖和大家庭的一员，我是多么兴奋啊！这是我记忆中最宝贵的时刻之一。②Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandrelieveusoftheheavyschoolwork,butitalsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!这件事不仅使我们亲近自然，摆脱繁重的功课，而且增进了我们之间的友情。多么美妙的时间啊！③Howconsiderateofyoutoremembermybirthday!您真爱护啊！还记得我的生日。eq\a\vs4\al(策略五高级表达，佳作之道)1．Asthesayinggoes...常言道……Justasthesayinggoes，“Onetreedoesn'tmakeaforest.”，oursuccessisbasedoncooperatingwithothers.正如谚语所言：“独木难成林”，我们的胜利是建立在与别人合作的基础上的。2．Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...毋庸置疑……Itgoeswithoutsayingthatnothingismoreimportantthanhealth.毋容置疑，没有什么比健康更重要。3．Thereisnodenyingthat...不行否认……Thereisnodenyingthatitwasmyteacher'sencouragementandhelpthatresultedinmysteadyprogress.不行否认，是老师的激励和帮助让我稳步前进。4．Itisagoodideatodosth.做……是个好办法(2025届重庆调研二书面表达)Itisagoodideatotravelwithagoodfriend，whichwillreduceyourtravellingexpenses.与好挚友一起旅行是个好办法，这能削减旅行的费用。5．Itisavirtueandtraditionforsb.todosth.某人做某事是优良的传统和美德(2025届河南六市联考书面表达)ItisavirtueandtraditionforusChinesepeopletohelpthoseinneed.乐于助人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。6．Itisstronglyrecommendedthat...剧烈建议……Itisstronglyrecommendedthattheschoolshouldgivestudentsmorefreetimetotakepartinsportsactivities.剧烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间去参与体育活动。7．IfIwere...，Iwould...假如我是……我会……(2025届海口调研书面表达)IfIwereyou，Iwouldmakegooduseofmysparetimetohelphimgetridofthisbadhabitstepbystep.假如我是你，我会充分利用业余时间帮助他慢慢地改掉这个坏习惯。8．Isincerelyhopethat...我真诚地希望……(2025届重庆第一次调研书面表达)Wesincerelyhopethatallstudentswillprovideoriginalartworkstocelebratethe60thanniversaryofourschool.为庆祝我校60周年校庆，我们真诚地希望全部的学生供应原著艺术作品。9．Theproblemwith...isthat...……的问题是……Thetruthisthat...事实是……Themostimportantfactoristhat...最重要的因素是……Thisisbecause/why...这是因为/这就是为什么……(2025届陕西质量检测书面表达)Buttheproblemisthatanumberofmiddleschoolstudentsaregrowingincreasinglyaddictedtophones.但是问题是越来越多的中学生沉溺于手机。Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyoudon'thavetoworrysomuch.事实上每个人都有好像诸事不顺的一段时期，因此你没有必要太担忧。10．Iholdtheview/beliefthat...我持……观点/我认为……(2025届新疆第一次检测书面表达)WeholdthefirmbeliefthatthevisitorswillknowmoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureandatthesametimeenjoythebeautyofit.我们坚信游客会了解更多的中国传统文化，与此同时感受中国传统文化的美。‖即学即练‖Ⅰ.佳句输出1.(2024年北京卷书面表达)Whileworking,Irealized__________________．在工作的时候，我意识到在烈日下的田野里工作是多么的辛苦。答案：howharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun2.(2024年北京卷书面表达)Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,____________.之后，你可以去上海，在那里待一个星期。答案：whereyoucouldstayforaweek3．_______________________________，itisalwaysmyfriendswhocheermeup.不管什么时候我不兴奋了，总是我的挚友们让我振作起来。答案：Whenever/NomatterwhenI'munhappy4.(2024年全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)________________________________，thenewstadiumwillbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.建成后，新体育馆将成为我们学校的新地标。答案：Whenbuiltup/setup5.(2024年上海卷书面表达)Parentsusuallyhavesuchhighexpectationsthattheirchildren________________________________them.父母通常有如此高的期望值，以至于孩子觉得很难达到父母的期望。答案：findithardtoliveupto6.(2024年北京卷书面表达)AsfarasI'mconcerned,___________________．在我看来，爱护地球是每个人的责任。答案：itiseveryone'sdutytoprotecttheearth7.(2024年北京卷书面表达)________________________________someonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadapttotheChineselanguageenvironment.明显，网上的一些汉语口语课程有助于你适应汉语环境。答案：Itisobviousthat8.(2024年全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)________________________________________IhavetocanceltheSundaybookstoreappointmentwithyou.特别缺憾我不得不取消我们周日一块儿逛书店的约定。答案：It'sagreatpitythat9.(2024年天津卷书面表达)________________________________________，Ihavemanagedtofindtimetohangoutwithmyfriends.尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和挚友们出去玩。答案：Busythough/asIamwiththelessons10.(2024年全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)OnlywhenyoucometoChina,________________________________________________．只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。答案：canyouexperienceChinesefoodculture11.(2024年全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)__________________________you'dbetterbringsomegifts，suchasabookoraChineseknot.我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中国结。答案：WhatIwanttostressisthat12.(2024年北京卷书面表达)________________________________itisoneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.我建议你申请北京高校的