【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习 话题九 外研版三起

【写作宝典】2023年小升初英语写作专项复习话题九外研版三起话题九：如何描述人物从过去到现在的变化[写作素材]时间飞逝.WuBinbin记录了成长过程中的各种变化。请依据照片帮他完成成长记录册，并仿照范例，结合自身实际，写一写你的变化。可参考图片信息及词汇。第6小题至少写五句哦，假如能多写几句就更好了!书写规范、洁净。Howtimeflies!Ichangedalot.Iwasshortbefore.AndIcouldn'trideabike.NowIamtaller.Ioftengocyclingonweekends.LastweekendI1._____________withmyfriendinthepark.Somuchfun!ThisismyEnglishteacher.Before,shehadlonghair.Butshehasa2.______________now.Sheissobeautiful.Johnismybestfriend.HeisfromtheUSA.Hedidn'tlikespeakingChinesebefore.ButnowhespeaksChinesewell.Helikesdoingkungfu.HethinksChinaisamazing!Lastmonth,myfamilymovedintoanewhouse.Itisbiggerthanmyoldhouse.Wehavesixroomsnow.Therewasnostudybefore.Butnowwehaveone.Before,therewereonlytwo3.____________.Butnowtherearethree.Ilikemynewhome.Howtimeflies!Before,Iwas4.______________.NowIam5._____________.6._______________审题要点：审人称：第一人称审时态：一般过去时一般现在时审要点：用一般过去时描述过去的状况，用一般现在时描述现在的情形。句子数量要求。理思路：开头总起下文→介绍人物的身份、年龄等→Thisismy...He's/She's...yearsoldnow.中间主体部分→介绍他/她过去在学习、工作以及生活方面的相关状况,如从事的职业、工作地点、学习状态等,该题必需介绍图片提示的自己以前和现在的主要变化，外貌特征，爱好爱好，力量等等→...yearsago,he/shewasa/an....He/Sheworked/studiedin/at....He/Shelearnt...BeforeIwas....NowIam....Iliked.....Icould/couldn’t....NowIlike...Ican....结尾总结全文→介绍他/她现阶段的生活状况，如正在学习哪些技能、有哪些爱好爱好等→He/Shedoesn’tworknow.He/Sheworksin/at...nowHe/Sheislearning..He/Shelikes...Ichangedalot.[参考答案及范文]rodeabike2.shorthair3.bedrooms4.:thin5.strong6.Ididn'twearglassesbefore.ButnowIwearthemsometimes.Before,Ilikedsingingverymuch.NowIbegintoplaybadmintonandgoswimming.Ichangedalot.[素材积累]时间:then那时now现在.year(s)ago……年前年龄:twenty二十thirty三十fifty五十sixty六十职业:teacher老师doctor医生nurse护士farmer农夫dancer舞蹈演员policeman警察policewoman女警察driver司机活动:dance跳舞writea