高二下学期期末英语读后续写画的风波：我和妹妹在奶奶家的冲突讲义

202406衢州高二期末阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

MyfourthofJulyvacationbeganwithascream.“Tara!”Ijumped,myeyelidssnappingopen.Irealizedthatmyfour-year-oldsister,Tammy,wasstaringdownatme.Istruggledtopushheroffmeasshebouncedonmylegs,shescreamed,andthenranoutofmyroom.ItwasasifTammyneverdidanythingwrong.IfTammygotangry,Momwouldsayshewastryingtogetherpointacross.WhenTammybrokeaplate,Dadsaidshewasjust“helping”meemptythedishwasher.WhenTammyscribbled(乱涂乱画)

alloverthewall,insteadofscoldingher,myparentschuckledandsaid,“She’sturningintoanartistjustlikeyou,Tara.”WewereflyingtoUtahtovisitmygrandmafortheFourthofJuly.EveryyearIdrawGrandmaapictureforherbirthday,butIsighedasIconsideredaboutwhatpictureIshoulddrawthistime.Whenwewalkedofftheplane,Iwasrelievedtoseethesmilingfaceofmygrandma.Weracedovertoher.“Hi,sweetheart.”GrandmagotdownononekneetohugTammyandthenswungherintheair.Tammyscreamed

with

laughter.ThenGrandmahuggedme.“It’ssogoodtoseeyou

too,

Tara.”Aftersixhoursofflight,Iwasexhausted—sixhoursoflisteningtoTammyscreamwithdelightagainandagainandagain.Iwantedtobealone,soIwentoutsidewithmysketchbookandcoloredpencils.Lookingatthescenery,IfeltinspiredtoworkonGrandma’sdrawing.AsIadmiredtheshadingonthemountainsandtheswirlsofthesunset,Ismiledtomyselfandthought,thisisthebestpictureIhaveevermade.BeforeIfinishedmypicture,Momwascallingmeinsidefordinner.WhenIwalkedbackintotheroom,andmyheartstopped.Tammywaslyingonthebed,scribblingonapieceof

paper.Tammysawmefrozeninthedoorway,shejumpedfromthebed.Sheranovertomeandgrinned.“Idrewyouapicture.”sheshouted.“Out!”Iscreamedangrily,andsheranoutoftheroom.Iranovertothebed.Ipickedupthepaper,anditwasjustasI’dfeared.Mydrawinghadblackscribblesalloverit.

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续写词数应为150个左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IgatheredupthecouragetowalkovertoGrandma.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————文章大意7月4日假期，“我”被4岁妹妹Tammy吵醒。在家里Tammy犯错总是被父母包容。一家人坐飞机去犹他州看望奶奶，“我”每年都会为奶奶画画作生日礼物，这次在欣赏风景时获得灵感开始画画。但在吃饭前，“我”发现Tammy在“我”画的纸上乱涂乱画，“我”很生气。五要素分析人物：“我”、妹妹Tammy、父母和奶奶。时间：7月4日假期，包括飞行途中和到达奶奶家后。地点：从家出发，在飞机上，最后到奶奶家。起因：Tammy总是捣蛋，这次毁了“我”给奶奶画的画。经过：假期旅程、“我”画画、Tammy搞破坏。结果：“我”的画被破坏，“我”很愤怒。几处伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔：父母对Tammy的过度包容。回应：妈妈可能在后续继续偏袒Tammy，也可能理解“我”。伏笔：“我”为奶奶画画。回应：第一段续写中要处理画被破坏后如何向奶奶交代，第二段续写“我”走向奶奶可能是去解释或者重新准备礼物。续写要点第一段情感线：愤怒、委屈，对妈妈和Tammy的不满。故事线：描述妈妈看到被破坏的画后的反应，可能会责备“我”对Tammy发脾气，“我”试图解释但不被理解。第二段情感线：忐忑、愧疚，对奶奶的爱与不知如何面对的纠结。故事线：“我”走向奶奶，可能会鼓起勇气向奶奶说明画被破坏的情况，或者拿出被破坏的画，向奶奶道歉。主旨升华句Loveshouldbefair,notblind,especiallywhendealingwiththeconflictsbetweensiblings.Truepatienceisunderstandingthefeelingsofallchildren,notjustindulgingone.Siblingconflictscanbeatestoffamilyloveandhowwehandlethemrevealsourtruenature.Forgivenessisabridgethatcanconnecttheheartsofsiblingstornapartbymisunderstandings.Inafamily,everychild'sfeelingsarepreciousandshouldberespectedandprotected.写作示范第一篇MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside.Mom'sfacewasfullofanger."Tara,howcouldyoushoutatyoursister?Shejustwantedtogiveyouapresent."Ifeltalumpinmythroat."ButsheruinedmydrawingforGrandma."Ichoked.Momjustshookherhead.Irantomycorner,tearsstreamingdown.

IgatheredupthecouragetowalkovertoGrandma.Iheldthescribbledpapertightly.Withatremblingvoice,ItoldGrandmawhathappened.Grandmasmiledgently,huggedmeandsaid,"Yourloveinthedrawingcan'tbescribbledover,dear."Iburstintotearsinherarms.第二篇MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside.MomscoldedmeforbeingmeantoTammy.ItriedtoexplainthatshehadruinedmyhardworkforGrandma,butMomwouldn'tlisten.TammyhidbehindMom,lookingatmewithasmugface.IwassofrustratedthatIstormedoutoftheroom.

IgatheredupthecouragetowalkovertoGrandma.Ishowedhertheruineddrawingwithtearsinmyeyes.Iapologizedfornothavingaperfectgift.Grandmatookmyhandandsaid,"Sweetheart,themostimportantthingisyourlove.YoucanmakeanotheronewithTammy."Inodded,realizingthetruemeaningoffamily.参考范文：MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside.Tammywassniffling,tearsrollingdownherchubbycheeks.Mom’sgazeshiftedtomypicture,whichIheldwithshakinghands.ShegentlypushedTammyoutoftheroom.Sheshutthedoorandsatdownnexttome,“Tara,”shewhispered,“I’msosorry.Iknowyouworkedhardonthat.Tammyischallengingsometimes.Butyouyellingatherdoesn’tsolveanything.”Itfeltasifadaminsideofmebroke.Isighedandglaredatmymom.Darknessfellquickly.Momlaidoutsomeblanketsintheyardforustositontowatchthefireworks.Tammywasstrangely

quiet,sittingonthegrassandstaringupatthenightsky,andIfelttornhowtopresentthepicturetograndma.Igatheredupt