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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Miloisarescuedog,adoptedby20-year-oldMakaylaSwift.ButMilothebeagleisalsoarescuer.OnemorninginNovember2021,SwiftopenedherfrontdoorinSilverSpring,Maryland,andMilotookoffrunning.Milorantothehouseacrossthestreet.Heseemedunsatisfiedwiththishouse,soherantotheonenextdoor,Swiftonhistail.HestartedscratchingonthefrontdoorandSwiftwasthinking,“Whyisheliterallytryingtobreakintoherhouse?”Shewasembarrassed.Noteveryonewantsastrangedogontheirproperty.ButasshetriedtodragMiloaway,shecouldhearasoundcomingthroughanopenupstairswindow.Itwasavoiceyelling“Help!”Hoursearlier,around4a.m.,85-year-oldSherryStarrhadrisenfromherbed.Allofasudden,standingtherebetweenthetoiletandthetub,sheslipped.Shewentdown-hard-onthetilefloor,andgotstuck.Starrwasscaredofdyingthere.Herbestbet,shedecided,wastolistenforthelettercarrierintheafternoonandscreamlikethedevils.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Forthenextfewhours,Starrpracticedyelling,“Help!Help!Help!”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Notlongafterthecall,rescueworkersarrived.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意米洛是一只被20岁的麦凯拉・斯威夫特收养的救援犬。2021年11月的一个早晨,米洛跑出门,在街对面的房子处停下,又跑到隔壁房子,开始挠前门。斯威夫特试图把它拽走时听到楼上窗户传来“救命!”的呼喊声。原来,85岁的雪莉・斯塔尔几个小时前在浴室滑倒被困,她本打算等下午邮差经过时呼救。五要素分析人物:米洛、麦凯拉・斯威夫特、雪莉・斯塔尔、救援人员。时间:2021年11月的一个早晨(凌晨4点后)。地点:马里兰州银泉市的街区。起因:米洛异常的行为引起注意,雪莉・斯塔尔被困浴室。经过:米洛跑到斯塔尔家门前挠门,斯威夫特听到呼救声。结果:即将等待救援人员到来。几处伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔:斯塔尔计划等邮差经过时呼救。回应:第一段续写斯塔尔不断练习呼救,米洛听到并前来。伏笔:听到了呼救声。回应:第二段续写救援人员到来展开救援。续写要点第一段情感线:斯塔尔的恐惧、焦急,不断练习呼救,希望有人能听到。故事线:描述斯塔尔在被困期间的心理活动和持续呼救的状态,米洛的反应让斯威夫特意识到情况紧急。第二段情感线:看到希望后的安心,斯塔尔和斯威夫特都因救援人员到来而情绪缓解。故事线:救援人员到达后采取的救援行动,斯塔尔最终获救,对米洛和斯威夫特的感激。主旨升华句Sometimes,ourrescuerscomeinthemostunexpectedforms.Adog'sinstinctcanbeapowerfulforceinsavingalife.Intimesofdistress,everylittleactioncanleadtoagreatrescue.Kindnessandvigilance,whetherfromahumanorananimal,canmakeaworldofdifference.Eventhesmallestofcreaturescanbetheheroesweneedinourdarkesthours.写作示范第一篇Forthenextfewhours,Starrpracticedyelling,“Help!Help!Help!”Shetriedtomakehervoiceasloudaspossible,herthroatgettingsore.Shewasdesperate,fearingthatnoonewouldhearher.Meanwhile,Milowaspersistentinscratchingatthedoor.Swiftrealizedsomethingwasterriblywrong.Shecalled911,explainingthesituation.

Notlongafterthecall,rescueworkersarrived.Theyquicklyforcedopenthedoorandrushedupstairs.WhentheyfoundStarr,shewasweakbutconscious.Theycarefullyliftedherontoastretcher.StarrkeptthankingMiloandSwift.ThewholeneighborhoodlaterpraisedMiloforhisheroicact.第二篇Forthenextfewhours,Starrpracticedyelling,“Help!Help!Help!”Everyshoutwasfilledwithherfearandhope.Shewasexhaustedbutdidn'tstop.Milo,outside,barkedloudly,tryingtogetmoreattention.SwiftstayedwithMilo,waitingforanysignofsomeonewhocouldhelp.Finally,shedecidedtocallthelocalemergencynumber.

Notlongafterthecall,rescueworkersarrived.TheyfollowedMilo'sbarksandSwift'sdirections.WhentheyreachedStarr,shewasonthevergeoflosingconsciousness.Therescuersquicklyprovidedfirstaidandcarriedherout.StarrhuggedMilolater,tearsofgratitudeinhereyes.第三篇Forthenextfewhours,Starrpracticedyelling,“Help!Help!Help!”Hervoiceechoedintheemptyhouse,butshehadnoideaifanyonecouldhear.Shethoughtofherfamilyandfriends,prayingforamiracle.Milo'sscratchingbecamemorefrantic.Swiftwasnowcertainthatsomeonewasintroubleinside.Shestartedknockingonneighbors'doorsforhelp.

Notlongafterthecall,rescueworkersarrived.TheybrokedownthedoorandmadetheirwaytoStarr.Shewasinpainbutrelievedtoseethem.Theworkerscarefullymovedher,checkingforinjuries.StarrlatertoldeveryonehowMilowasherangelthatday.Swiftfeltproudofherfurryfriend.参考答案Forthenextfewhours,Starrpracticedyelling,“Help!Help!Help!”Hervoicegrewhoarse,butshedidn'tstop.Everycrywasadesperatepleaforsurvival.Meanwhile,Milo'sbarkingandscratchingintensified.Swift,nowunderstandingthegravityofthesituation,joinedinshoutingforhelp,hopingsomeoneintheneighborhoodwouldhear.Notlongafterthecall,rescueworkersarrived.Theyquicklyassessedthesituationandrushedupstairs.Gently,they

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