Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年九年级全册英语单元写作深度指导（人教版）（原卷版）

Unit7Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度规则★★☆☆☆本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家庭的各种规章制度进行了论述。在本单元话题作文的命题过程中，命题人通常会让你就学校或家庭的某些规章制度谈一谈自己的看法。写作时多用第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时，表达观点时要有理有据，不能偏激。“三步法”写谈论规则、闸述观点类的作文。1．确定主题：引出要谈论的话题；2．谈论规则：具体哪方面的规则；3．阐述观点：赞成或者不赞成。体裁：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文时态：一般现在时人称：以第一人称为主【好词妙语】hearfromsb.收到某人的来信introducesth.tosb.向某人介绍某事Whatimpressedmemostwas...让我印象最深的是·.....firstofall首先inaddition另外Anotherpointworthmentioningisthat...另外值得一提的是···.··beallowedtodosth.被允许做某事beexpectedtodosth.被期盼做某事concentrateon专注于makeprogress取得进步bestrictwithsb.对某人严格【提分佳句】Howarethingsgoingthesedays?最近情况怎么样?Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinourschoolrules.我很高兴地了解到你对我们的校规感兴趣.Letmeintroducesomeoftheschoolrulestoyou.让我给你介绍一些校规.Wehavebenefitedalotfromtheschoolrules,althoughsomeofthemarestrict.我们从这些校规中受益颇多,尽管有些规定很严苛.Wearesupposedtowearschooluniformsinsteadofourownclothesonschooldays.我们上学时应穿校服而非我们自己的服装.Thankstotheseschoolrules,Ihavemademuchprogressinmyschoolwork.多亏了这些校规,我在学业上取得了很大进步.Itcandriveustoconcentrateonourstudies.它可促使我们专注于我们的学习.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.我期盼不久就收到你的来信.【句式积累】谈论规则、阐述观点类作文常用句型：1.Areyouallowedtomakeyourowndecisionsathome？你可以在家里做自己的决定吗2.Teenagersoftenthinktheyshouldbeallowedtopracticetheirhobbiesasmuchastheywant.青少年常常认为应该允许他们尽可能多地练习自己的爱好。3.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtodecideformy-self.我认为应该允许我自己做决定。4.Heneedstospendmoretimeonhishomeworkbecauseitisdifficulttobecomeaprofessionalsportsstar.他需要花更多的时间做作业，因为要成为职业体育明星很难。5.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtomakethischoicemyself.我认为应该允许我自己做出这个选择。6.OnlythenwillIhaveachancetoachievemydream.只有这样，我才有机会实现我的梦想。7.Nomatterhowmanydifficultieswehave,Ibe-lieveallproblemscanbesolvedintheend.无论我们有多少困难，我相信所有问题最终都能解决。8.Mobilephonesshouldbekeptoffduringthemeeting会议期间应关闭手机9.Teenagersundereighteenmustnotbeallowedtosmokeordrink.18岁以下的青少年不得吸烟或饮酒。10.Manyparentsthinkgoingtoschoolmustbeputfirst,soteenagersshouldnotbeencouragedtoworkpart-time.Therearemanyrulesatmyhome/inourschool.许多家长认为上学必须放在第一位，因此不应鼓励青少年从事兼职工作。我家/我们学校有许多规定。11.Wearenotallowedtodo...我们不允许做…12..Wemust/haveto...我们必须…13.Whoeverbreakstheruleswillbepunished.任何违反规则的人都将受到惩罚。14.Everyonemustfollowtherules.每个人都必须遵守规则。15.Iagree/disagree...because...我同意/不同意…因为…16.Ithinkteenagersshouldbeallowedto…我认为应该允许青少年…【万能写作模板】回信模板（关于规则）1.Firstparagraph:Howarethingsgoingthesedays?Letme...(...)Everyschoolhasitsownrulesforstudentstofollow,and①sodoesourschool.2.Thebody:Firstofall,wemust...Thishelpsus...Second,...(...)3.Lastparagraph:Eventhough...Ibenefitalot...Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichruleyoudonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktheruleshouldbechanged.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、完成句子1．当我还是一个整夜哭闹的小宝宝时，妈妈会给我唱歌，陪伴在我身旁。WhenIwasababycryingallnight,mymomtomeandstayedbymyside.2．简很有礼貌，她从不和父母顶嘴。（完成译句）Janeisverypolite,andshenever

tohisparents.3．安妮应该被允许做她自己的决定。（decision）Annieshouldbeallowedto.4．我很痛心，因为这场事故本可以避免。Ifeltsosadbecausetheaccidentcould.5．应该停止工厂在附近的河里排放(dump)化工废料。Factoriesshouldbechemicalwasteintothenearbyrivers.6．黄色可以和蓝色混在一起变成绿色。Yellowbluetobecomegreen.7．信息可以被存储在电脑里面，并可随时提取。Informationinthecomputerandoutatanytime.8．真是令人讨厌的天气！已经下了数天的雨了。weather!It’sbeenrainingforseveraldays.9．汤姆应该远离高脂肪食物。Tomhigh-fatfood.10．我深深地后悔我没有向他说抱歉。IthatIdidn’tsaysorrytohim!二、同义句转化11．Weshouldputeachkindofsourcestogooduseandnotwastethem.(改写句子，句意不变)Eachkindofsourcesshouldputtogooduseandnotbe.12．Smokingisn’tgoodforyourhealth.foryou.13．Theoldmanlivedinaverysmallhouseonhisown.（变为同义句）Theoldmanlivedinahouse.三、改写句子14．Wemustsendthesickmantothehospital.（将主动语态的句子改成被动语态）15．Weshouldteachthesechildrentoswim.(将主动语态的句子改成被动语态)四、短文语境提示填空请用适当的词完成下面的短文，每个空只能填写一个形式正确、意义相符的单词。ManyChinesestudentsthinkAmericanstudentsenjoy16freedomthanthematschool.ButAmericanschoolsalsohavetheir17.Ifthestudentsbreaktherules,theywillgetpunishment(惩罚),too.18thefirstdayofanewterm,128studentsofMortonHighSchoolweresenthomefor19thewrongclothes.Therearealtogether(总共)1,200studentsintheschool.Usuallyonly20students20theschooldressruleeveryday.SotheheadmasterTheresaMayeriksaiditwas21worstnewtermshehadeverseen.AtMortonHighSchool,students’favoriteclothingsuchasbaggy(宽大的)trousers,low­neckedshirtsandtanktops(紧身短背心)arenot22inclassrooms.Somestudentsthinktheyhavetherighttochoose23towear,buttheheadmasterdoesn’tthinkso.“I’dbesupportive(支持的)ifhalftheschoolweresenthome,because99%willgetthemessagethatourschoolareforeducation.”“Freedom”doesnot24“freeofrestrictions(约束)”.Thatistosaythereisnototalfreedomintheworld,no25intheUSAorinChina.学生应当遵守学校的规章制度。请根据以下要点提示，以“SchoolRules”为题，叙述中学生应遵守的一些规章制度，并谈谈你的看法。60词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数)。要点提示：1.在课堂上不乱讲话，要认真听老师讲课，不带食物进教室，保持教室安静、整洁；2.课后要按时完成作业；3.在学校，要穿校服；4.保护学校的一草一木；5.与老师和同学们友好相处。SchoolRulesEveryschoolhasrulesforstudents.Asstudents,wemustobeythem.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________假如Mike是你的好朋友，请你根据表格中的信息写一篇短文介绍一下Mike。年龄：13岁在校时间：早上7:30-下午4:30爱好：阅读、打篮球到校方式：自行车最喜欢的动物：熊猫到校所花的时间：10分钟能力：唱歌、弹吉他家规：必须先做家庭作业，九点半睡觉要求：1.必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3.70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。Hello,everyone!I’dliketointroducemybestfriendMiketoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．“没有规矩，不成方圆”，为了每个孩子的健康成长，每个家庭都会订立规矩。请你根据以下中文提示，以“MyFamilyRules”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求70词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。要点如下：1.你的家庭挺幸福，但是你的父母很严厉。你的家里有很多家规；2.你闲暇时不能在电脑或手机上玩游戏。你必须按时完成作业，还必须帮忙做家务，如整理床铺和卧室，洗碗等；3.因为这些规矩你得以保持健康；4.但是你希望周末能玩一会电脑游戏，放松一下；5.可适当自由发挥。参考词汇：mobilephone手机houseworkn.家务事；thanksto...多亏，由于MyFamilyRulesIhaveahappyfamily,butmyparentsareverystrictwithme.Therearesomanyrulesinmyhome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是李华，在家里你的父母总是对你有很多的要求，有时你是否感到厌烦？你是怎样解决的？请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文。父母的要求每天打扫房间；不能玩手机和电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉……你的看法虽然太严厉，但是理解他们……你的解决方式与父母多交流；为父母做些家务……要求：1.文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容，可以展开思路，适当发挥。2词数60-80词。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________家有家规，校有校纪。请以Schoolrules为题，根据表格内容介绍一下你们学校的规章制度以及你的看法。要求：80词左右；条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。DosDon’ts穿校服上课迟到保持教室干净带手机（mobilephones）上学向老师问好和同学打架……____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2021·湖南株洲·统考中考真题）校报英语版征文，题目为“FollowandGrow(家规促成长)”，你写一篇文章投稿，包括以下内容：(1)两条家规；(2)对你的影响；(3)如何回报你家。注意：(1)词数90左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2020·黑龙江·统考中考真题）假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。家庭安全：小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗；游泳安全：不独自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳；交通安全：过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。提示词：electricity(n.电)注意：1、词数80左右；

2、请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥。DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangWei8．（2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·统考中考真题）假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。写作要点：1.因他的信任而高兴。2.你的看法：(1)遵守规则是重要的；(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。3.告诉他如何做一名遵守规则(obeytherules)的中学生。写作要求：1.不得使用其实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。DearPeter,How’sitgoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________